自助旅行英語四級作文

❶ 用天助自助者為題目寫一篇英語作文。4級水平就好。給分。

Confucius said," Since the age of 15 , I have devoted myself to learning; since 30,I have
been well established; since 40, I have understood many things and have no longer been
confused;since 50, I have known my heavent_sent ty; since 60, I have been able to
distinguish right and wrong in other people/s words; since 70, I have been able to do what
I intend freely without breaking the rules.
The average life expectancy at the Spring and Autumn Periods and Warring States Periods
was,according to some research,about 19 years. Confucius lived 72 to 73 years, a rare god
of longevity indeed. It was even hard for those with power and leisure to reach such an
age.Therefore, Confucius could be very well learned, far from what an ordinary people could
expect at his times.
The latest statistics in 2001 shows that the world life expectancy is 62.27 with the
Japanese taking the lead to be 79.66 while China gaining a position surpassing all
developing countries by its 69.98. However, the Chinese have not yet reached the age to do
what they intend freely without breaking the rules. Thus, rules are hard not to be broken.
Calculated in the terms Confucius set for us in learning,those of us who have been
learning English for ten years still have a long way to go before reaching the time to be
established. To have no confusion, one has to spent 25 years. To turly understand the
purpose of English learning, one has to do it for 35 years. It takes 45 years if one wants
to distinguish right and wrong in other people/s words, and 55 years to manipulate English
language freely without breaking the rules.
回答者： 一劍平cqu - 經理 四級 5-3 11:02 分類上升達人排行榜
用戶名 動態 上周上升
溪邊影行 7165
qsmm 5175
彭雲杉 4825
六月飛雷 4430
mimoadia 4180
更多>>

訂閱該問題

您想在自己的網站上展示網路「知道」上的問答嗎？來獲取免費代碼吧！
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
如要投訴或提出意見建議，請到
網路知道投訴吧反饋。

&;2009 Bai

❷ 英語四級作文範文（兩篇）

Credit Cards
Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards， otherwise known as 「plastic money」， are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to 「buy now， pay later」， and many see this as an advantage.
But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need， and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest， which exacerbates the problems for these people.
However， used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people』s lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled， they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.

❸ 求一篇以旅行為話題的英語作文

Self-Ecation
.But,.Thatistoecateourselves.
Ihavehadsuchexperience.WhenIfinishreadingagoodbook,whichisinformativeandexciting,.,oncewritteninbooks,,willrevealtruthandphilosophy.WhenIsucceedorfad,getpraisedorcriticized,happyorsad, ,"WhatwasI?WhatwillIhe?"Atthistime,.Iamhavingadialoguewithmyself,withmyconscience.Withoutmyknowingit,Iamecatingmyself.
Soyoucanseebyself-ecation..myself.ThenImakedecisionsaecording]fincharacter,behavior,virtueandmanner.
Self-,.,heissuretobeonecutaboveothers. 自我教育
教育在人生中起著重要作用，但是真正的教育是從自我教育開始的。這就是自己教育自己。
我有過這樣的經歷。當我讀完一本信息廣、令人激動的書時，我會陷入沉思，有所啟迪。生活中的常人瑣事，一寫進書中，經過仔細閱讀思考，則揭示出真情與哲理。無論是獲得成功還是失敗，表揚還是批評，幸福還是悲傷，我都能在書中找到一面好的鏡子來對照和指導自己。我不由地想：「我過去怎樣?將來會怎樣?」此時我的心胸開闊，是一個真正的我。我和自己、和我的良心對話。不知不覺中，我在教育自己。
由此可以看到，我所謂的自我教育就是在心中思考和辯論。在思考和辯論的過程中進行自我反思和評價。然後做出決定，控制自己的思想和行動，以便提高自己的品格、行為、德行和風度。
自我教育是使人思想崇高、增長才能和智力、完善自我的有效途徑。如果一個人不斷地接受教育和自我教育，他一定比別人技高一籌。

❹ 請英語高手幫我點評我的這篇英語四級作文。（語法和用詞）萬分感謝

不要老用nowadays 感覺很傻。並且不要寫這么又長又不通順的話 一句話包含了兩個意思 就拆成兩句話寫。

可以這樣寫。
Currently, more and more college students chooses to travel on their own rather than travel packed by traveling agency.This is because they want time to relax.

第二段以一句話 改成被動語句。
Freedom would be released if the self-traveling has been chosen.

第二句話
The travelers can manage the touring time arbitrarily without any consideration on time limit.

不要寫at last， 就Thus, more time will be given for people to take photos and enjoy the scenery.(這句話接在第二句後面 都是講的時間 並且這個是沒有時間限制的一個結果。真是 邏輯真混亂)

然後再Moreover, travelers can buy stuffs without the orientation imposed by the travelling agency.This will maximize the benefit of the travellers.不要老是they.... 而且這句話一點都不通順

As to me可以刪了. 一看就是很不專業的用法。 什麼As known to all啊 這些詞語 在寫作盡量不要用 看著很低級。

直接 However， I prefer... 不要it, this都要好點。。 pleasure改成happiness

差不多這些。 寫作還是要注意一個邏輯。 當然語言是慢慢訓練過來的 大學了 寫作要擺脫中學老師教的那種思維 還有那些弱智般的詞彙。

❺ 大學英語作文:難忘的一次旅行(100——120個字)

有獎勵
大學英語作文:難忘的一次旅行(100——120個字)
我來答有獎勵
匿名用戶
成為第NaN位粉絲
My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.
At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.

❻ 英語作文自助游

自助旅遊 Self-help Traveling
Today, as our economy develops fast, people live a much better life than before, they start to pay attention the chase fun. When people have holiday, they will choose to travel, most people will give money to the organization, while some people choose to self-help traveling. Self-help traveling can save a lot of money, people can save the money which is given to the tour guide. What』s more, self-help traveling can bring people a lot of fun. People can visit the site as long as they want, sometimes they can find the interesting things in the small place. While the tour guide will always take people to the commercial place. Self-help traveling is becoming more and more popular now.

❼ 關於旅遊的英語作文 120字左右

I like travelling. If I have enough money and have limited time, I would join a tour group to go places. This can save time and planning. A good tour agency will plan and take care of the whole tour. I don't like tour guide that brings us to buy things at stipulated shop. If I have the time, I would prefer to go travelling on my own in a man-packed trip. If I go on a man-packed trip, I would try to look for a friend to go with me. Going in pair, would be safer and in case, one of us got sick, the other is able to take care of the other.If I go on a man-packed trip, I usually spend more time on historical sites.
Anyone care to join me in my next man-packed trip to Tibet?