英語四級寫作因果
⑴ 關於英語四級 作文
這是我考四六級的法寶,我用這些句子至少可以拿分的作文,希望可以幫你忙吧!祝考試順利!
結尾萬能公式
1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最後終於冒出個「總而言之」之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果讀者很難「顯而見之」,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說「如此結論」是結尾最沒用的廢話,那麼「如此建議」應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎麼想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
寫作的「七項基本原則」
一、 長短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、 主題句原則
國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊塗!不知所雲!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原則
領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用於兩點的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用於兩點的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!
六、 多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯)
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎麼辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前後的句子又先後關系或者並列關系。比如說:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者並列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點,然後轉入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然後我主動搭訕,然後我們去咖啡廳,然後我們認識了,然後我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序,先什麼,後什麼,所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + haveever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
張老師是我曾經遇到最仁慈的教師。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V
Nothing is more important than to receive ecation.
沒有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎麼強調...的重要性也不為過。)
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我們再怎麼強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否認的...)
There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否認的,我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)
It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫無疑問的...)
There is no doubt that our ecational system leaves something to be desired.
毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的優點是...)
An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (proce) any pollution.
使用太陽能的優點是它不會製造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。
九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子 (如此...以致於...)
So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
時間是如此珍貴,我們經不起浪費它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V~~~ (雖然...)
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不}
雖然我們的國家富有,我們的生活品質絕對令人不滿意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more+ Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈進步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我們書讀愈多,我們愈有學問。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借著...,..能夠..)
例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借著做運動,我們能夠始終保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受詞)+ to + V (..使..能夠..)
例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我們絕對不能...)
例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。
十五、It is time + S + 過去式 (該是...的時候了)
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
該是有關當局採取適當的措施來解決交通問題的時候了。
十六、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)
例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
違反交通規定的人應該受處罰。
十七、There is no one but ~~~ (沒有人不...)
例句:There is no one but longs to go to college.
沒有人不渴望上大學。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不...)
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考試迫在眉睫,我不得不放棄做運動。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子 (明顯的)
It is apparent that + 句子 (顯然的)
It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)
例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 時間,S + 現在完成式.(過去...年來,...一直...)
For the past 2 years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 過去兩年來,我一直忙著准備考試。
二十二、Since + S + 過去式,S + 現在完成式。
例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自從他上高中,他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)
例句:It pays to help others.
幫助別人是值得的。
二十四、be based on (以...為基礎)
例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遺餘力的)
例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我們應該不遺餘力的美化我們的環境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (讓...明白...事)
例句:We should bring home to people the valueof working hard.
我們應該讓人們明白努力的價值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~ (與...息息相關)
例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做運動與健康息息相關。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (養成...的習慣)
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我們應該養成早睡早起的習慣。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因為...)
例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因為他的鼓勵,我終於實現我的夢想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多麼...!)
例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守諾言是多麼重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不滿意)
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ (對...有很大的影響)
例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。
三十三、do good to (對...有益),do harm to (對...有害)
例句:Reading does good to our mind.讀書對心靈有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ (對...造成一大威脅)
例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染對我們的生存造成一大威脅。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best (盡全力去...)
例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我們應盡全力去達成我們的人生目標。
⑵ 求高人幫我解決下英語四級的一些作文模板句子
寫作模板:
四六級寫作基本句式
以下是短文寫作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式,每組句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根據自己的情況選擇其中的1-2個,做到能夠熟練正確地仿寫或套用。
1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people』s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life
註:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
2.表示好處
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
辯論式議論文
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 觀點1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 觀點2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 論據1.
More importantly, 論據2.
Most important of all, 論據3.
In summary, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.
或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 論據1.
For another, 論據2.
Last but not the least, 論據3.
To conclude, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.
或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點). Some people are of the view that 觀點1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 論據1.
Furthermore, 論據2.
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 論據3.
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點.
As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.
或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
圖表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一個原因). More importantly, …(第二個原因). Most important of all, …(第三個原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括弧里的使用於那些不太好的變化趨勢).
提綱式作文
1. 對立觀點式
A.有人認為X 是好事,贊成X, 為什麼?
B. 有人認為X 是壞事, 反對X,為什麼?
C.我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一個例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。
2. 批駁觀點式
A.一個錯誤觀點。
B. 我不同意。
Many people argue that 錯誤觀點。By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。
There might be some element of truth in these people』s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3. 社會問題(現象)式
A.一個社會問題或者現象。
B. 產生的原因
C.對社會和我們生活的影響
D. 如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)
E. 前景的預測。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
英語四六級寫作絕招
開頭萬能公式
1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,「我沒有記住名言,怎麼辦?尤其是英語名言?」,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒准將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:
A proberb says, 「 You are only young once.」 (適用於已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用於自編名言)
更多經典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 開頭萬能公式二:數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.
看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty:根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth:根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
結尾萬能公式
1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最後終於冒出個「總而言之」之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果讀者很難「顯而見之」,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說「如此結論」是結尾最沒用的廢話,那麼「如此建議」應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎麼想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
寫作的「七項基本原則」
一、 長短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、 主題句原則
國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊塗!不知所雲!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原則
領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用於兩點的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用於兩點的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!
四、 短語優先原則
寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎麼辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.
這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更准確。
五、 多實少虛原則
原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room
老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room
所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!
六、 多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯)
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎麼辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前後的句子又先後關系或者並列關系。比如說:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者並列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點,然後轉入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然後我主動搭訕,然後我們去咖啡廳,然後我們認識了,然後我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序,先什麼,後什麼,所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話裡面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don』t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那麼我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢恢宏)
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑戰極限原則
既然是挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是並非不可攀!
原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鍾的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!
文章主體段落三大殺手鐧
一、舉實例
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發現二者的相同點(through comparison)和不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。
實際就是重復重復再重復!下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
四六級寫作常見句型
(1)用於描寫漫畫、圖表的常用句型
①As the graph depicts , …
②From the cartoon /picture , we can see that …
③According to the statistics shown in the first /second graph ,
④The table shows / indicates / reveals that …
⑤It can be seen /concluded from the picture / table / figures that …
(2)用於句首提出論題或現象的句型
①Recently , …has become the focus of the society .
②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life .
③Nowadays there is a growing concern for …
④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life .
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of …
⑦It is only ring the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that …
⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes …
⑨In recent years , there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face .
(3)用於比較、闡述不同觀點的常用句型
①Some people like / prefer …, while others are / feel inclined to …
②There are different opinions among people as to … Some believe … whole hold …
③Some people claim that … is superior to … Others , however , disagree with it .
④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim …
⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion .
⑥On the one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel …
⑦Some people argue that … Others , in contrast , believe that …
⑧Although more and more people come to believe … there are still others who insist that …
⑨On the contrary , there are people in favor of …
⑩There are some people who hold different opinions about …
(4)用於陳述個人觀點/想法的常用句型
①My own experience tells me that …
②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to …
③As for my own idea about … I believe …
④As far as I am concerned , I plan to …
⑤Personally , I prefer …
⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that …
⑦But for me , I would rather …
⑧My own point of view is that …
⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that …
⑩As regards me , I tend to choose …
(5)用於書信寫作的常用句型
①Thank you for your letter of …
②It is a pleasure for me invite you on behalf of … to accept …
③Thanks so much for your letter , which arrived …
④I am writing to you with reference to …
⑤I am writing to you in connection with …
⑥I would be grateful if you could / would …
⑦I would like to know some information on …
⑧It will be appreciated if you can / could …
⑨I would also like to know if you can / could …
⑩I look forward to hearing from you .
(6)用於結尾的常用句型
①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that …
②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that …
③It is high time that something was done about …
④From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that …
⑤Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that …
⑥Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that …
⑦It is clear , therefore , that …
⑧All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to …
⑨It is essential that effective measure be taken to …
⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that …
⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is …
⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one …
⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to …
⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that …
⒂ Only in this way / in so doing , can be really …
⑶ 請問該如何鍛煉英語四級的寫作能力呢平常多做些漢譯英的題可以嗎
(一)用「寫長法」訓練
「寫長法」,即:針對學生學外語多年而不會運用的困境,通過大量的語言輸入,以設計激發學生表達真情實意和寫作沖動的任務為教學目的,在一定的學習階段,順應外語學習的規律,通過調節作文長度要求,逐步加大寫作量,促使學生沖破外語學習的極限,由此增強學習成就感,提高自信心,將外語知識加速打造成外語運用能力。該方法強調「從短到長」、「集腋成裘」,自然而然地我們就可以寫出長句子、長文章。從中我們可以看出語言輸入的重要性。
(二)重視日常積累
多積累一些精彩的詞、短語和句子,是提高英文寫作能力的重要內容。積累一個詞,並不是只記住表面的意思,而是要深入了解其使用語境,弄清其引申的含義。比如,The picture fired my imagination。這句話中的fire一詞,原本是個名詞,但這里可以接賓語,很明顯做動詞。根據其基本意思,我們可以猜出此處的意思是「點燃、燃起」,意思相當於stimulate。我們從這一點可以看出fire比stimulate要好很多,因為fire一詞可以在讀者心中引發無窮的想像,非常形象。
對於一些精彩的句子,應該熟讀並模仿,在寫作中如果能用上,立刻使文章增色不少。這里所說的精彩的句子,並不是指很生僻的句子,而是一些比較新穎、生動的句子。比如:The year of 1997 witnessed the return of Hong Kong tothe arms of motherland。同樣的意思,如果我們寫成這樣:In 1997,Hong Kongreturned to the alms of motherland,文采就差很遠。
(三)多用過渡詞語
作文中要多運用過渡詞,增加句子的邏輯性。恰當運用過渡詞可以使文章結構緊湊,過渡自然,避免脫節現象。時間上的銜接詞有「then、as time goesby、day after day、graally、finally」等,表因果關系的有「as a result、because of、thanks to」等。
(四)背誦經典範文
對於語言的輸入,主要靠平時的積累。平時學習的過程中,建議背誦新概念第二、三、四冊。如果時問不是很充裕,強烈建議背誦第三冊的後30篇,要真正達到滾瓜爛熟的程度。如果到了考前,那就需要快速突擊了。這時候就需要背誦大量的範文。有些同學天天寫,寫作水平還是不見提高,所以光靠自己寫是不行的,如果沒有什麼參照,思想越挖越空,最後就沒什麼可寫了。只有通過積累,模仿別人的優秀文章,才可以獲得寫作的高分。模仿要注意兩點:其一,要有可以模仿的文章;其二,要理解文章,理解句子結構、段落結構和用詞。通過不斷的模仿,語法錯誤會越來越少,句子結構能力會越來越強,用詞能力大大增強。
⑷ 如何達到大學英語四級考試的寫作要求
英語四級考試作文的評分依據是:文章切題,條理清楚語言准確和字數符合要求,所謂切題就是要求考生緊扣文章大綱;條理則要求考生詞彙、語法運用不出錯誤;四級作文的字數要求一般是不少於120字。要在30分鍾的時間內,達到這些要求,沒有一套行之有效的方法顯然是不行的。在這里,我們為大家提供四級寫作的一般技巧。
一、審題
1.審體裁(議論文,說明文,描述文)
審題就是要審作文的題材和體裁。因為什麼樣的體裁就會用什麼樣的題材去寫。那麼體裁包括那些呢?它包括議論文,說明文和描述文。從近些年看,四級作文不是單一的體裁,而是幾種體裁的糅合體。例如:
Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Trying to Be A Good University Student。
You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
做合格大學生的必要性
做合格大學生的必備條件(可以從德智體方面談)
很多人說這種類型的作文是議論文。這是片面的,因為,
第一段要求寫「„必要性」,則是議論文;
第二段要求寫「„必備條件」,則要求寫說明文;
第三段要求寫「„這樣做」,則要求寫描述文。所以在大多數情形下,四級作文是三種體裁的糅合體。
2.確定相應的寫作方法
我們審題的目的就是根據不同體裁確定不同的寫作方法。通過審題,我們可以看出四級作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段為議論體,第二段為說明體,第三段為描述體。而各種文體又有不同的寫作方式:議論文:要有論點和論據,而且往往從正反兩方面來論述。例如上面第一段的思路是:做合格大學生,會怎麼樣(這是從正面論述);不能做合格的大學生,又會怎麼樣(從反面論述);所以我們要做合格的大學生(結論)。說明文:可以從幾方面來說明一個問題,可以從德智體三方面來說明合格大學生的必要性。描述文:以「人」為中心描述一個「做」的過程。與上兩段相比,本段的主語多為人稱代詞,他要與第二段相呼應進行描述。
二、確定主題句
審完題後,接下來就是如何寫的問題。第一步就是確定主題句,主題句既能保證你不跑題,又能幫助你制定寫作思路。而寫主題句最保險的方法就是直接翻譯中文提綱,如上述之段主題句為:
It is very necessary to be a good university student。(議論體的主題句) There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student。(說明體的主題句)
What I will do in the future is the following。(描述體的主題句)
三、組織段落
確定主題句後,接下來的工作就是展開論述。許多考生真正犯難的也是這一步。最基本的解決辦法是擴大詞彙量,豐富自己的語法存儲。在寫作時,語法和詞彙都是最基本的。然而,組織段落的能力也是尤為重要的(接下來的連貫與銜接部分,我們更為詳細的為大家講解)。行文時,不只是提供一些information,還要學會運用一些examples, personal experiences, comparisons, descriptions等等,只有這樣,才不會覺得無話可「寫」。
四、連貫與銜接
1.列舉法
列舉的模式通常是
主題句
----example 1
----example 2
----example 3
列舉時常用for example, for instance, such as, like,thus, take„as an example, to illustrate 等詞語。
Nonverbal communication, or "body language," is communication by facial expressions, head or eye movements, hand signals, and body postures. It can be just as important to understanding as words are. Misunderstandings are often amusing but sometimes serious ones can arise between people from different culture if they misinterpret nonverbal signals. Take for example, the differences in meaning of gesture are very common in the United States: a circle made with the thumb and index finger. To an American, it means that everything is Ok. To a Japanese, it means that you are talking about money. In France, it means that something is worthless, and in Greece, it is an obscene gesture. Therefore, an American could unknowingly offend a Greek by using that particular hand signal。
2.分類法
一般是在主題句之後,依次羅列段落指示詞所表達的幾個部分或幾個方面。然後,選用豐富的事例對所羅列的各個部分或各個方面進行具體地說明或解釋。
There are three basic kinds of materials that can be found in any good library。
First, there are books on all subjects, both in English and in many other languages. These books are organized according to subject, title, and author in a central file canned the card catalog. Books can generally be checked out of the library and taken home for a period of two to four weeks。
Second, there are reference works, which include encyclopedias, dictionaries, bibliography, atlases, etc., and which generally must be used in the library itself。
Third, there are periodicals- magazines, newspapers, pamphlets-which are filed
alphabetically in racks, or which have been filmed to conserve space. Like reference works, periodicals cannot usually be removed from the library. 分類時常用:most of all, next,moreover, in addition,besides,furthermore,to begin with,to start with,first of all,first,second,third„
3. 因果關系
在段落一開頭,就用主題句點明其因果關系,然後選用有關材料,客觀的羅列某些原因或結果,以闡述中心思想。
Growing numbers of well-to-do Americans are making the decision to move abroad. They find it impossible in America to walk the streets at night without fear of being raped, mugged, or murdered, nor do they see a way to escape the poisonous air of the cities. They maintain that even American food has become increasingly dangerous to eat. Last but not least, they insist that they are sick of the pace of American life, a pace that leaves no time for relaxation or pleasure。
因果關系常用語匯:
because of, so, owing to, thanks to, thus, as a result of, hence, for this reason, consequently, is caused by, lead to, result in
4.比較法
主題句必須明確表明所要比較的對象和所要比較的范圍,實際上就是羅列兩個或兩個以上比較對象的相同點。
Learning English is like building a house. Laying a solid foundation is the first and most important step. In other words, you should read and speak English every day. Memorizing new words and phrases is also helpful. Like building a house, learning English takes some time。
So don』t be impatient. Remember, Rome wasn』t built in a day。
常用語匯:at the same time, similar to, accordingly, both, show a degree of similarity, similarly, the same as, and„ too, in the same way, in a like manner
5.舉例法
列舉事實或舉出實例來說明中心思想, 是簡單易行、具有說服力的寫作方法。
Communicating with other people by telephone is very convenient,
especially when you have something urgent. For example, if one of your family members is seriously
ill at night, and you don』t know how to deal with it and where to find a doctor, what can you do? A telephone is the answer. Dial 120 and you will get services from the hospital very soon。
⑸ 英語四級作文要求寫信,沒有用這種體裁,問題有多嚴重
同學你好,洛陽大華雅思提醒您英語四級考試作文的評分依據是:文章切題,條理清楚語言准確和字數符合要求,所謂切題就是要求考生緊扣文章大綱;條理則要求考生詞彙、語法運用不出錯誤;四級作文的字數要求一般是不少於120字。要在30分鍾的時間內,達到這些要求,沒有一套行之有效的方法顯然是不行的。在這里,我們為大家提供四級寫作的一般技巧。一、審題1.審體裁(議論文,說明文,描述文)審題就是要審作文的題材和體裁。因為什麼樣的體裁就會用什麼樣的題材去寫。那麼體裁包括那些呢?它包括議論文,說明文和描述文。從近些年看,四級作文不是單一的體裁,而是幾種體裁的糅合體。例如:Directions:Forthispart,versityStudent。ne(giveninChinese)below:做合格大學生的必要性做合格大學生的必備條件(可以從德智體方面談)很多人說這種類型的作文是議論文。這是片面的,因為,第一段要求寫「„必要性」,則是議論文;第二段要求寫「„必備條件」,則要求寫說明文;第三段要求寫「„這樣做」,則要求寫描述文。所以在大多數情形下,四級作文是三種體裁的糅合體。2.確定相應的寫作方法我們審題的目的就是根據不同體裁確定不同的寫作方法。通過審題,我們可以看出四級作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段為議論體,第二段為說明體,第三段為描述體。而各種文體又有不同的寫作方式:議論文:要有論點和論據,而且往往從正反兩方面來論述。例如上面第一段的思路是:做合格大學生,會怎麼樣(這是從正面論述);不能做合格的大學生,又會怎麼樣(從反面論述);所以我們要做合格的大學生(結論)。說明文:可以從幾方面來說明一個問題,可以從德智體三方面來說明合格大學生的必要性。描述文:以「人」為中心描述一個「做」的過程。與上兩段相比,本段的主語多為人稱代詞,他要與第二段相呼應進行描述。二、確定主題句審完題後,接下來就是如何寫的問題。第一步就是確定主題句,主題句既能保證你不跑題,又能幫助你制定寫作思路。而寫主題句最保險的方法就是直接翻譯中文提綱,如上述之段主題句為:。(議論體的主題句)。(說明體的主題句)。(描述體的主題句)三、組織段落確定主題句後,接下來的工作就是論述。許多考生真正犯難的也是這一步。最基本的解決法是擴大詞彙量,豐富自己的語法存儲。在寫作時,語法和詞彙都是最基本的。然而,組織段落的能力也是尤為重要的(接下來的連貫與銜接部分,我們更為詳細的為大家講解)。行文時,不只是提供一些information,還要學會運用一些examples,personalexperiences,comparisons,descriptions等等,只有這樣,才不會覺得無話可「寫」。四、連貫與銜接1.列舉法列舉的模式通常是主題句----example1----example2----example3列舉時常用forexample,forinstance,suchas,like,thus,take„asanexample,toillustrate等詞語。Nonverbalcommunication,or"bodylanguage,",headoreyemovements,handsignals,andbodypostures...Takeforexample,:.ToanAmerican,itmeansthateverythingisOk.ToaJapanese,.InFrance,,andinGreece,itisanobscenegesture.Therefore,。2.分類法一般是在主題句之後,依次羅列段落指示詞所表達的幾個部分或幾個方面。然後,選用豐富的事例對所羅列的各個部分或各個方面進行具體地說明或解釋。。First,therearebooksonallsubjects,.,title,.fourweeks。Second,therearereferenceworks,whichincludeencyclopedias,dictionaries,bibliography,atlases,etc.,。Third,thereareperiodicals-magazines,newspapers,pamphlets-,.Likereferenceworks,.分類時常用:mostofall,next,moreover,inaddition,besides,furthermore,tobeginwith,tostartwith,firstofall,first,second,third„3.因果關系在段落一開頭,就用主題句點明其因果關系,然後選用有關材料,客觀的羅列某些原因或結果,以闡述中心思想。Growingnumbersofwell-to-.raped,mugged,ormurdered,..Lastbutnotleast,,。因果關系常用語匯:becauseof,so,owingto,thanksto,thus,asaresultof,hence,forthisreason,consequently,iscausedby,leadto,resultin4.比較法主題句必須明確表明所要比較的對象和所要比較的范圍,實際上就是羅列兩個或兩個以上比較對象的相同點。..Inotherwords,..Likebuildingahouse,learningEnglishtakessometime。Sodon』tbeimpatient.Remember,Romewasn』tbuiltinaday。常用語匯:atthesametime,similarto,accordingly,both,showadegreeofsimilarity,similarly,thesameas,and„too,inthesameway,inalikemanner5.舉例法列舉事實或舉出實例來說明中心思想,是簡單易行、具有說服力的寫作方法。,.Forexample,,andyoudon』,whatcanyoudo?Atelephoneistheanswer.。
⑹ 英語四級作文中問題 高手進
英語寫作萬能公式
開頭萬能公式:
1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,「我沒有記住名言,怎麼辦?尤其是英語名言?」,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒准將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:
A proberb says, 「 You are only young once.」 (適用於已記住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用於自編名言)
更多經典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2. 開頭萬能公式二:數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.
看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
Honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,大學生向老師請假的理由當中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,85%的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
Youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,在某個大學,學生的課余時間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
寫作絕招
結尾萬能公式:
1. 結尾萬能公式一:如此結論
說完了,畢竟要歸納一番,相信各位都有這樣的經歷,領導長篇大論,到最後終於冒出個「總而言之」之類的話,我們馬上停止開小差,等待領導說結束語。也就是說,開頭很好,也必然要有一個精彩的結尾,讓讀者眼前一亮,這樣,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果讀者很難「顯而見之」,但說無妨,就當讀者的眼光太淺罷了!
更多過渡短語:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 結尾萬能公式二:如此建議
如果說「如此結論」是結尾最沒用的廢話,那麼「如此建議」應該是最有價值的廢話了,因為這里雖然也是廢話,但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典,因為考官本來經常考這個句型,而如果我們自己寫出來,你說考官會怎麼想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
寫作絕招
寫作的「七項基本原則」:
一、 長 短 句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。
二、 主 題 句原則
國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成「群龍無首」之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊塗!不知所雲!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一 二 三原則
領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的「標簽」來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用於兩點的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用於兩點的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!
四、 短語優先原則
寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那麼你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎麼辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it.
這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更准確。
五、 多實少虛原則
原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room
老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room
所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!
六、 多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯)
都希望寫下很長的句子,像個老外似的,可就是怕寫錯,怎麼辦,最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前後的句子又先後關系或者並列關系。比如說:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者並列的,我們可以用一個超級句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優點,然後轉入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時候,只要在要點之前先來點廢話,注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然後我主動搭訕,然後我們去咖啡廳,然後我們認識了,然後我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先後順序,先什麼,後什麼,所以然後這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先後或因果關系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話裡面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don』t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除後不影響整個句子的構成;定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞並且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過於此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那麼我希望你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢恢宏)
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑戰極限原則
既然十挑戰極限,必然是比較難的,但是並非不可攀!
原理:在學生的文章中,很少發現諸如獨立主格的句子,其實也很簡單,只要花上5分鍾的時間看看就可以領會,它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出這樣的句子,不得高分才怪!
寫作絕招
文章主體段落三大殺手鐧:
一、舉實例
思維短路,舉實例!提出一個觀點,舉實例!提出一個方案,舉實例!而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無法繼續文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫完一個要點,比較與之相似的;又寫完一個要點,再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒有同樣的指紋,沒有相同的樹葉,文章亦同,只有通過比較,你才會發現二者的相同點
(through comparison)和不同點(through contrast)。下面是一些短語:
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
這個對 compare and contrast 題型很有用
三、換言之
沒話說了,可以換一句話再說,讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說,是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點。
實際就是重復重復再重復!下面的句子實際上就三個字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語:
in more difficult language, in simpler
⑺ 2014年運用因果關系的英語四級作文範文
Why Do We Learn English
我們為何學英語
As the society is developing fast and China has joined the WTO,English is becoming a 「bridge」 of communication between China and the world outside.With the wide use of the Internet,it is necessary for people to learn English.Now,besides the native speakers,the number of people studying and using English is larger and larger in the world.English has become a real world language.As a middle school student,we learn English not only for the need of going to a high school and finding a job in the future,but also for the developing of our country.
The Advantage of Bicycle Riding
騎單車的好處
⑻ 關於英語四級寫作問題
四級作文只有一篇,一般是議論文,120詞左右~
四級的寫作套路就是三段式
第一段提出觀點(是什麼)
第二段分析原因(為什麼)
第三段措施和展望(怎麼做)
附
2008年12月大學英語四級考試流程
12月20日
8:50---9:00試音時間
9:00---9:10播放考場指令,發放作文考卷
9:10取下耳機,開始作文考試
9:35發放含有快速閱讀的試題冊(但9:40才允許開始做)
9:40---9:55做快速閱讀
9:55---10:00收答題卡一(即作文和快速閱讀)
9:55---10:00重新戴上耳機,試音尋台,准備聽力考試
10:00開始聽力考試,電台開始放音
聽力結束後完成剩餘考項。
11:20全部考試結束。
作文分數占總分的15%,也就是106.5分,在這部分你要達到63.9分為及格。答題時間為30分鍾。
2.快速閱讀占總分的10%,即71分,在這部分你要達到42.6分為及格分。題號為1-10題,答題時間為15分鍾。
3.聽力部分佔總分的35%,即248.5分,在這部分的及格分為149.1分。題號為11-35題,答題時間為35分鍾。
4.是一篇篇章詞彙理解和兩篇傳統的閱讀理解,總分數為177.5分。在這部分你要達到106.5分為及格分。題好為36-66。答題時間為25分鍾。
5.是完形填空(極大可能考這個),占總分的10%,即71分,在這部分你要達到42.6分及格。題號67-86,答題時間為15分鍾。
6.翻譯,漢譯英並且需譯部分只是一般的短句翻譯。占總分的5%,即35.5分,在這部分你要達到21.3分為及格,題號為87-91,答題時間是5分鍾。