四級英語作文自己觀點

Ⅰ 我自己寫了一篇四級英語作文，希望大神給我修改一下,或對我的思路提出一些建議

The disposable plastic bags have widely applied because（ 去掉OF語法錯誤） it's convinience.Neveretheless,it( result in plenty of可改高級片語) issues owing to this condition （as well.可改）
First and foremost,this plastic bags will damage our health if we frequently use it,because it contains various of materials that was capable of doing harm to our body.Additionally,the disposable plastic bags is easily broken down and might destroy we just bought. (去掉the）Last but not least,(it would result in the pollution of environment and the most painful to us is that witness plenty of disposable plastic bags in street.)可改強調，更高級片語
By and largre, I am strongly convinced that cannot emphasized（ too mush of 可改）limiting （the use of ）可改disposable plastic bags.Not only can benefit our healthy,but it would defend nature and make the society more harmonious.
修改的不多，但是分數能提高四分左右
你的文章基本定型，只能通過改一些邊邊角角。多用些高級單詞和高級句式吧，看起來真的很像高一的學生作文。

Ⅱ 英語作文:對英語四級的看法

In most schools and colleges the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
The most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. Examinations do not motivate a student to seek more knowledge, but to restrict his reading; they do not enable him to study consistently throughout the semester, but to ince cramming ring exam week.

Ⅲ 急求英語作文：請談談大學英語四級的優點與不足

Examination questions is more and more difficult!容 Test and really will is more and more little! No speaking test, the stuttering can get card! In short this card became more and more little!

At present is a little advantage also look not to come out!

In doing this to the card society does not really can't!

Conclusion is an examination of well! Do not take an examination of how the whole! Deal with!

Ⅳ 四級英語作文有哪些套路

縱使四級作文千萬變，「三段式」寫作無需變
無論是傳統的三條中文提綱式作文，還是2011年12月那樣給一句名人名言要求闡釋，或者是2013年6月的漫畫作文，都可以用「三段式」作文來解決。
所謂「三段式」作文，第一段最關鍵要開篇點明自己的觀點。
如果是名人名言，可以轉述名人名言的意思，並結合這一意思，找出一個論點;如果是漫畫、圖片、圖表作文，簡單1-2句話對漫畫描述後，一定不忘從漫畫中給出一些看法和與實際生活相關聯的現象、問題、爭議點。圍繞當年題干中一長串的「Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, 「Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I』ve done it hundreds of times。」名人名言，最核心地表達出「要想獲得成功，必須要有毅力。」 這句話就可以用「To achieve things successfully, a strong will is essential。」來對原句更簡單的闡釋，切忌照抄。緊接著，用一些自己熟悉的例子來展開論證即可。
第二段要圍繞自己的觀點進行有意義地展開。
展開方式有以下幾種：
1. 舉例論證
舉例論證時，結合你自身的例子是最容易有話說的論證方式。
2. 引用論證
引用論證就是可以用來自書籍Once I read a book,…;There is an old saying …「俗話說……」;或者中外名人曾說過。
3. 道理論證
道理論證即用日常生活中所有人都熟悉的一些話語來論證。一般主要從對引起某現象的原因略述一二。
分享一個可用的模板：
What has brought about this effect? I believe there are three main reasons. To begin with, ____________________ (原因一). It is believed that ____________________(進一步稍加說明). In addition, ____________________(原因二). Finally, ____________________。(再次總結原因。)
最後，結尾段再次重申觀點 + 問題解決方法;避免某一現象的措施;向學校(the school)，機構( XX administration)，政府(the government)，每個人(every citizen / every indivial)發出呼籲( I appeal to…)，給出建議(My suggestion is that …)
漫畫、圖表近年常考，常用句型來支招
圖表類：
1) As is shown in the table, ________________。(正如表格顯示)
2) This is a chart which demonstrates / depicts / illustrates ________________。(這一表格展示)
3) Obvious from the graph is that ________________. (很顯然從圖中得出)
4) It must be pointed out that + 圖中明顯特徵(必須指出)
5) It is worth mentioning that + 圖中明顯特徵(值得一提)
漫畫類：
1) Today I saw an interesting cartoon, in which ________________. (輕松、活潑，真實感帶入，意思為：今天我看到了一幅有趣的漫畫，其中……)
2) As is vividly depicted in the drawing above, ________________。(嚴肅、准確、客觀描述，意思為：正如圖中形象描繪出……)
3) The picture / cartoon / drawings talking about …(擬人化，意思為：圖中談論了……)
4) The cartoon describes an interesting phenomenon。(總起句，意思為：漫畫描述了有一個有趣的現象)注意：這種封閉式提法後面，一定還要有一句結合圖片細節的話。
考前准備要充分，細節功夫勿輕心
作為考前沖刺的最後一發「磨刀粉」，溫馨提示大家考前一定要備好准考證、2B鉛筆、橡皮擦、好用的簽字筆、收音機等考場必備物品。尤其是好用的簽字筆這一條，直接關繫到作文字跡是否清晰、漂亮!考場上，作文要想拿高分，一定要注意的細節就是：一要字跡清晰漂亮，二要語法、拼寫錯誤少。

Ⅳ 一篇觀點不同的四級英語作文

Sky Lantern is also called sky lanterns, commonly known as Wishing Lamp, also known as sky lanterns pray. Han is an ancient craft, do military purposes in ancient times. Put lanterns more modern use as a blessing. Hand writing greeting men and women desire, a symbol of harvest success, happiness every year. Usually in the Lantern Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and other major festivals cast.
According to legend, the Five Dynasties (AD 907 ~ 960) when there is a Xin Qiniang, Fujian fight with her husband when she had beaten with bamboo strips square frame, paste paper, made the headlights, put burning turpentine on the chassis, lights into the sky by hot air, is used as a military liaison signal. This turpentine lights, lanterns in Sichuan said. This shape lantern like Zhuge Liang hat, hence the name.
Another argument is that according to legend invented by Zhuge Liang of the Three Kingdoms. At that time, Zhuge Liang was under siege in Pingyang, unable to send troops out of the city for help. Ming considered quasi-wind direction, will be made of paper floating lanterns, the department's help message, then turned out of danger, then later on call this lantern for the lanterns.

Ⅵ 四級英語作文 看圖寫作 描述圖像，並且寫出自己的觀點和建議。

十面霾伏

三年級  |  寫景  |  345字

早上醒來，外面是天昏地暗，灰濛蒙的。一看錶，是六點零兩分，我有點納悶。都六點多了，外面怎麼還那麼黑。對了，昨天天氣預報說今天有霧霾。我從小到大還沒見過霧霾呢，真想見識見識！我和媽媽吃過早飯，整理好東西後，出發了。我和媽媽都小心翼翼的靠著路邊走，大約近兩米處的地方都看不清事物。這如煙籠罩的世界使車輛難行，使人舉步維艱，不辨南北。 據媽媽所說這是因為汽車尾氣排放，工業製造污染等對大自然的破壞。我似懂非懂的點了點頭，媽媽又告訴我霧霾天影響交通，容易出事故，它是一種災害天氣，對農作物的生長有害，同時也對人類的身體健康構成了威脅。 我們通過這煙霧繚繞的世界，終於到達了目的地—學校。下課後我們都認為霧霾天氣很好玩兒，可誰又知道他的壞處？動手保護大自然，盡量少出現霧騰騰的霧霾天氣，讓我們一起行動吧！

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本文小作者向我們描述了霧霾的天氣，文章的語句通順，句意流暢，敘寫較為生動，文章的語言的表達能力較好。文章的不足之處在於雖有中心主題，但表達不夠充分有力，言而不實，空而無力。

Ⅶ 求對追求時尚的看法的英語四級作文 120字

My View on Following the Fashion
Nowadays more and more young people prefer to follow the fashion. On this phenomenon, different people have different views. It is held that one should follow the fashion so as not to be despised or considered eccentric. But it is also held that one should have one's own judgment.
Those who hold the first opinion think that society is progressing and one should adapt oneself to the constant change. In their opinion, if everyone always sticks to the old fashion, there won't be any change and naturally there won't be progress. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that one shouldn't follow the fashion without discrimination and one should have one's own judgment and characteristics.
As for me, I agree with the latter opinion. Admittedly, one should be flexible and adapt himself to the situation, but this is not to say that one should follow the fashion without discrimination because the fashion may not be beneficial.We should consider whether the fashion is favorable or unfavorable. Moreover, one should have one's own characteristics. If everyone follows the same fashion, there will not be variety and the whole society will be monotonous.

我對趕時髦的看法
現在越來越多的年輕人喜歡趕時髦，對於這一現象，不同的人有不同的看法。有人認為為了不被輕視或被認為古怪應該趕時髦，但是也有人認為應該有自己的判斷。
那些持第一種觀點的人認為社會在進步應該使自己適應不斷的變化。他們認為如果人人總是堅持舊的方式，就不會有變化，自然也就不會有進步。比較起來，持第二種觀點的人認為不應該不加辨別地趕時髦，應該有自己的判斷和特點。
就我看采，我同意後者的意見。誠然，人應該靈活以適應形勢，但是這並不是說應該不加辨別地趕時髦，因為它也許沒有益處，我們應該考慮它是有利還是不利，而且，應該有自己的特點。如果人人都趕同樣妁時髦，就不會有變化，整個社會就單調如二。

Ⅷ 自己對愛情或親情的看法的四級英語作文

As we all know,there is a famous sentence "Ilove you not because of who you are,but because of who I am when I am you. No man or woman is worth your tears and one who is won＇ make you cry" Though love is so beautiful, in my opinion campus love is not so good .
For example: First of all, some loves just take advantage of it to kill time ,We know colleage life is so free ,some colleages have nothing to do ,what they have just much leisure time ,so they take it to pass time .Secondly colleage students are so young ,they neither have fully psychologically mature nor able to assume responsibility .Thirdly ,these people will addicated to it ,there are so many old saying like "love me love my dog""love is blind""fault are sick when love is thin" and so on.
I think compus love is not available in college ,what we can do ought to be study hard ,in that case we can have a brillant future.

Ⅸ 求觀點論述型英語四級作文範文

範文來自《2010年6月英語四級作文考前預測範文》

預測作文（一）
My View on Double BA Degree

1. 現在大學生讀雙學位的現象很常見
2. 我對這一現象的看法

【範文】
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【點評】
首段直接點題，說明現象；第二段分述三個優點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是「雖然可能帶來負面的後果，但總體上是有益的」；第三段呼應第二段，得出結論。
範文首段提出大學生讀雙學位這一普遍現象；第二段分三點進行論述，其中前兩點是優點，即學生會更加勤奮，並且有利於他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最後一點是解釋可能帶來的學費問題並不嚴重；第三段下結論，呼應第二段。
第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示「大有希望」；第三段末句中的compel sb．to do sth．表示「迫使某人做某事」。

Ⅹ 四級英語作文幾個題目 尋幾個觀點！急

1 必要性：中國現來在發展自很快，人口老齡化嚴重
問題：中國已經開始重視，但無論是基礎設施還是人的素養都不足
方法：自己：從身邊多關懷老年人 政府：加大投入，增加福利等等

2 引入：最近社會上***的食品安全事件成為了熱議的話題
問題： 政府監督不到位，有些商家良心不足，技術缺陷。。。
方法： 自己：注意食品衛生，在購買食用時多注意 政府：強化監管，加大食品衛生查處力度

3. 引入：近些年各類選秀節目受到很多青少年追捧（可列舉）
正方：選秀能夠幫助一些人圓夢， 偶像讓人有目標，讓青少年知道努力了就能有所成就
反方： 影響青少年學習的主業，浪費時間 選秀或追星可能花費父母的大量錢財。。。

挑自己語言能夠表達的寫吧。四級作文基本上和高考差不多吧，字跡端正點就比較容易高分。