高考英語寫作範文6篇
1. 高考英語模範作文 （5-10篇）
給你一篇接近滿分的作文
要求：120字左右
1.談論看電視的好處與弊端
2.談談你自己的觀點
Currently,there is no denying that television,to a certain extent, has played a significant part in our life. As is shown according to the reserach,a quantity of people regard it as amusement,most of whom are children.Nevertheless,beyond doubt,not only does watching TV have pros but cons as well.
For one thing, a mount of people can learn a lot from television which, to a certain degree,has a significant impact on our life.In addition,not merely can we get some information ,but also we can enrich our spare time.More importantly,we could also
bring us imagination as well as know the social condition by means of watching TV .
For another,It is universally acknowledged that every coin has two sides and watching TV is no exception ,for the reason that certain people ,exspecially children,are fond of watching TV day and night,which is bad for their eyes seriously.Besides,those who watch TV frequently may become near-sighted.Last but not the least,if you watch TV frequently,it will stop us from
building up.
As far as I am concerned,I am exceeding for the opinion that watching TV is a good way to have fun e to the reason that it could brings us some amusement and information.But for it,we couldn't have got such a good many of knowledge as well as have a good time.
2. 誰有高考英語作文六大類型的範文！（帶翻譯）
高考英語滿分作文-租房
假設你是李華，你的英國筆友將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．詞數：100左右：
2．參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以『which，』引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。
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譯:
我很高興收到你的信，我很高興地聽到你會去中國且在我們這里學習中文的消息。我已經找到了寓所。在芳草街，不遠處就是我們的中文學校。乘坐11號巴士就可以到達，前一站就是中文學校。寓所是在三樓,有3個房間，其中一個是卧室，其他兩個衛生間和廚房。有一張床，一個沙發和一個辦公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也許這房子不如你的願望，但我會盡我所能，滿足您的需求。如果還不夠，給我寫信，我會尋找另外一個更好的地方。
希望你能很快來到這里！
就到這里啦！
此致，
李華
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 說起來容易做起來難。
4.Where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫釐，謬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 穩扎穩打無往而不勝。
7.A fall into the pit，a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 實踐出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無德之美猶如沒有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
11.More hasty，less speed. 欲速則不達。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，學到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 閃光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始於足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而後行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 偉業非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所見略同。
18.well begun，half done. 好的開始等於成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 眾口難調。
20.Out of sight，out of mind. 眼不見，心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事實勝於雄辯。
22.Call back white and white back. 顛倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有輕重緩急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 壞事傳千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真情。
26.live not to eat，but eat to live. 活著不是為了吃飯，吃飯為了活著。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行動勝過語言。
28.East or west，home is the best. 金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能當飯吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth，a needy age. 少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。
35.As the tree，so the fruit. 種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn，to learnistobetterlive.活著為了學習，學習為了更好的活著
3. 誰能幫我找10篇高中英語作文範文
1.Facts About Ingredients List
The ingredient list is like a recipe - it tells you what is in the food. You can tell a lot about a food just by looking at the ingredients. Ingredients must be listed in descending order by weight. So, the first ingredient in the list is present in the highest amount, followed by the second, then the third and so on.
Let』s look at the ingredient list on a loaf of bread as as example. Ingredients : High protein flour, water, granulated cane sugar, vegetable shortening, baker』s yeast, salt, soy flour, dough conditioners, vitamin C, calcium, iron, calcium propionate.
High protein flour is the first ingredient listed so it is present in the greatest amount, followed by water, sugar, and vegetable shortening. Vitamin C, calcium and iron have also been added. Quite often, sugar, fat and sodium can appear in different forms e.g. sugar may appear as dextrose, maltose, and sucrose; fat may appear as ghee, lard, vegetable oil, and shortening; while salt may appear as sodium bicarbonate, baking powder and MSG.
2.如何交朋友(How to Make Friends)
Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends?
First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.
Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don』t agree someone, please discuss with him.
Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend』s interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.
3.你相信有人有特異功能嗎?(Do You Believe There Are Persons with Supernatural Power?)
It is said that there are persons who have supernatural power, such as someone who can see things next door through the wall, see gas pipes underground and the organs in a human body, someone who is able to get things out of a covered bottle by his will, and someone who is capable of reading with his palm.
Although there are quite a lot of phenomena in the world which seem inexplicable and quite a number of things which we don't under stand, I don't think there are persons with supernatural power. Those so-called supermen may be only persons who wish themselves to be supermen and therefore become supermen in their own imagination. Then they will show wonders through magic tricks. I don't believe it because no scientific experiments have proved its truthfulness yet, and I have never seen any person who has supernatural power. As the proverh goes, seeing is believing. Perhaps I'll believe it when I meet someone who will show me his supernatural power. With the development of science, the question whether there are persons with real supernatural power will become clear.
4.A Meaningful Activity
In order to improve the quality of the students, our school has now started an activity called"Build Civilised Classes and a Harmonious Campus".The topic is to get rid of bad habits and meet civilization.
Bad habits do exist. Some students throw rabbish and plastic bags everywhere or spit in public. Some boy students wear long hair. Others are even addicted to smoking and drinking. We require that students break away from these bad habits .We urge the students to wear their school uniforms and be polite to others.
During the activity, we'll have picture shows, competitions of classrooms and dormitories decoration.
5.
依靠自己(Depend on Yourself)
Depend on yourself" is what nature says to every man. Parents can help you. Teachers can help you. Others still can help you. But all these people only help you to help yourself.
There have been many great men in history. Many of them were very poor in childhood, and had no uncles, aunts or friends to help them. Schools were few and not very good. They could not depend on them for ecation. They saw how it was, and set to work with their strength to know something. They worked their own way till they became well-known. One of the most famous teachers in England used to tell his pupils, "1 cannot make worthy men of you, but I can help you make men of yourselves."
Some young men don』t try their best to make themselves valuable to human beings. They can not gain achievements unless they see their weakness and change their course. They are nothing now, and will be nothing as long as they live, unless they accept the advice of their parents and teachers, and depend on their own efforts.
6. the selection of universities
Nowdays many students send up thier minds about going into which college for diffent aids.
In my minds, we should select college according to both of intresting and the needs of social life.And thus they will have a righter choice about going into which college.
When we talk the selection of universities , the first thing we always think about is what can your parents do for you after you graate from the university you chose , so this kind of question usually boring us a lot , and the more earthy question is the school we chose will not be we preferred . in my opinion , chosing a favorite is more important than one you dislike . what your goal is makes you will be in the future . what is a university for ? a job ? or a dream you want to fulfil . there were so many people they lost their dreams when they gave up the things they were chasing ! do not make yourself repentent.
7.
Chinese New Year or Spring Festival is the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is sometimes called the "Lunar New Year" by English speakers. The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first month (Chinese: 正月; pinyin: zhēng yuè) in the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th; this day is called Lantern Festival. Chinese New Year's Eve is known as chú xī. It literally means "Year-pass Eve".
Chinese New Year is the longest and most important festivity in the Lunar Calendar. The origin of Chinese New Year is itself centuries old and gains significance because of several myths and traditions. Ancient Chinese New Year is a reflection on how the people behaved and what they believed in the most.
8.
Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends? joozone.com
First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.
Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.
When you don』t agree someone, please discuss with him.
Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend』s interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.
9.學校組織體育活動的好處壞處
Apparently, most schools often organize sports activities, such as football games, races and etc. However, people have different views about these sports activities.
Most teachers hold the opinion that sports activities are good to the health of the students and can rece the possibility of illness. There's a saying which can express their reason-life lies in motion. And they also believe that ring those activities, the students can develop the spirit of hard work and cooperation, and as a result, they will be more active in their lessons.
On the contrary, most students argue that these games are completely a waste of time. If they can use the time learning their subjects instead of playing football, they'll make great progress in their lessons. What's more, they feel very tired after these activities, which has a bad effect on their learning efficiency.
From my perspective, sports activities should be supported. We can shorten the time of these activities so that they may not affect our lessons. Although we may feel tired after these games, we can learn to relax ourselves by listening to music or something else. And then we'll surely become energetic again. In conclusion, health is our foundation to work. And the only way to keep fit is to take exercise.
10.How to Rece Stress
Directions: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Rece Stress.to-day basis, stress may result from the small things: taking an exam, waiting in line, and having too many things to do in a limited time.
We all need stress to add flavor, challenge, and opportunity to life, but too much stress can seriously affect our physical and mental well-being, It reces the body』s immunity and harms the brain, If the stress lasts a long time, it may cause physical illness, insomnia, headaches, backaches, ulcers, high blood pressure-even heart disease.
When stress does occur, it』s important to recognize and deal with it. There ore some methods we can try. A large number of physical activities can rece onxiety. Shoring our stress with others can be enormously helpful. Making time for fun such os listening to music may be good medicine. Sometimes even crying is on efficient way to releose stress.
4. 高考英語作文模板常考範文
（1）
2005年10月12日，舉世矚目的神舟六號載人飛船成功發射；10月18日，飛船順利返航，舉國上下為之歡呼雀躍，世界各國媒體給予了極大的關注。請就此事寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的高興和驕傲之情。
1. 字數100左右。
2. 可適當增加細節，使內容連貫。
3. 生詞提示：
載人的adj. manned發射 v. / n. launch
神舟六號 Shenzhou VI航空 n. aviation
（2）
某英文報社正在舉辦有關「英雄」問題的討論話題，請你根據以下提示用英文寫一篇100詞左右的文章以便寄到該報社參加討論。
1. 英雄（見義勇為的人）具有什麼樣的品質？
2. 為什麼現在英雄越來越少？
如果讓你選擇，你願意做英雄還是普通人？
（3）
假如你叫李華，你和筆友Jane互寄了全家的合影。Jane看了合影後來信問為什麼你沒有兄弟姐妹。請用英語寫封100字左右的回信說明情況。內容包括以下幾點：
原因
1．中國人口增長過快；
2．二十世紀八十年代開始實行計劃生育；
3．大部分中國家庭是獨生子女。
看法
1．能受到好的教育；父母關愛更多；
2．孤獨、自私，生活能力差；建議多交朋友。
注意：1．可適當增加細節使行文連貫；
2．字數100左右；
3．開頭已給出，不計人總字數；
4．參考詞彙；計劃生育family program獨生子女the only child
（4）
請以「Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit」 為題寫一篇80—100單詞的短文。提示如下：
1．報紙是重要傳媒。看報能獲得國內外最新消息……
2．報紙能豐富我們的生活，上面有……
3．對我們學英語的人來說，看類似《中國日報》這樣的英文報紙，……
（5）
目前，越來越多的中學生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓班或請家教。對於這一現象，存在兩種不同觀點。請你根據下表提示，以Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?為題，寫一篇短文，反映表中內容，並簡要闡述自己的觀點。
有些人認為有必要
另一些人認為沒有必要
跟老師學比自己學好
可以鞏固課堂所學內容
可以學到更多的東西
容易養成依賴習慣
學生需要時間休息
許多培訓班和家教以贏利為目的
要求：（1）層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達靈活，但不要逐字逐句翻譯；
（2）詞數：120 詞左右（文章開頭已給出， 不計入總詞數）；
（3）參考詞彙：鞏固strengthen vt.
(6)
「神六」返回以後，人們就「普通人去太空旅遊」的話題展開了熱烈討論。請你根據下列提示以 「The advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel」為題寫一片英語短文，簡要地談談你的觀點。
太空旅遊的利
太空旅遊的弊
1、提供人類居住的新場所。
2、給人類提供新能源。
3、幫助人們更好地了解宇宙。
4、太空研究對其他領域有好處。
1、花費太大。
2、人類住在其它行星上的想法不切實際。
3、太空旅遊有危險。
注意事項：1、短文必須包括所列內容。
2、不要逐字逐句翻譯。
3、詞數110 左右。
(7)
周筆暢宣布退出「超女」演唱會的巡演，重返校園。對此你和同學們展開了激烈的討論。一部分同學不贊成「超女」重返學校。認為這是對她的一次鍛煉，可以獲得更多的演出機會，而且可以更早地實現當歌星的夢想。但也有一部分同學贊同「超女」的做法。認為學校的學習比演出更重要，這樣可以使聲樂基礎更加牢固，而且，頻繁的演出也是一件很勞累的事情。如果你是她，你會選擇退出還是留下？說明你的理由。
注意：
1. 詞數：100左右；
2. 參考詞彙：過多的excessive；
3. 內容要點可用不同方式表達；
4. 對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
(8)
2004年雅典奧運會使中國令世人矚目，中國運動員創造了新的奧運會金牌記錄。獲金牌的運動員除了得到政府獎金20萬元以外，還會從地方得到更多的獎勵。對此，社會各界反響不一。
贊 成
不 贊 成
1．運動員為國爭了光
2．運動員付出了許多辛苦和汗水
3．獎金有利於中國體育後備力量的培養
1．運動員是國家培養出來的，為國爭光理所當然
2．得到大量獎金後，有些隊員就會退役
3．一些企業趁機炒作，從中獲取廣告效應
請你就此現象進行簡單闡述，並提出自己的一些看法或建議。（120詞左右）
提示詞彙：獎金bonus
(9)
你班同學參加了「二十一世紀中學生英文報」組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：城市寧日是否可以豢養寵物（狗和貓）。請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社投稿，介紹討論情況，並說明自己的觀點和建議。
反對飼養寵物的同學認為
支持飼養寵物的同學認為
1、造成環境污染
2、吵鬧聲，甚至傷人
1、安慰孤寡老師
2、人與動物和諧相處，增添生活樂趣
注意：
1、信的開頭已為你寫好
2、詞數100左右
(10)
近期，中學聘請外教之風愈演愈烈，請你結合下表對其利弊發表自己的觀點。
好處
1. 提高學校的知名度。
2. 提高學習英語的興趣，口語表達能力增強。
3. 更好地了解外國文化。
弊端
1. 花費高。
2. 一些外國人難以適應我國的生活方式，甚至擔心自己的安全。
3. 外國人不了解中國學生的特點。
自己的觀點
一切需要靠自己
注意：1. 詞數：100左右2. 短文應包括表中所有要點
3. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫4. 開頭及結尾已給出
參考範文
(1)
China』s second manned spaceship Shenzhou VI was launched success fully on October 12, 2005 and returned to the earth on October 18. The six-day space trip is a great success to China and draws (to itself) the attention of the media from all over the world. The Chinese people feel very pleased and cheer for that. As a student as well as a Chinese, I feel not only happy but also proud of this great achievement made in aviation. I strongly believe that the development of China』s aviation and future will be better and better. As far as I am concerned, now I must work hard so that I can make a contribution to our great nation.
(2)
Society Calls for Heroes
In my opinion, it is not so easy to be a hero. First, a hero must be brave. When he sees someone do a bad deed, he must be brave enough to catch him or to stop him. Secondly, he must be strong enough; otherwise instead of catching the criminal, he himself will be beaten to death. There are fewer heroes now for several reasons. I think the most important reason is that people don』t want to mind other people』s business because they think it will do them no good. But I think it will do them no good. But I think society calls for heroes. Fighting against crimes is not just the job of the police. It』s the ty of every citizen.
(3)
Dear Jane,
Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.
As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family programme---- one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better ecation. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every the only child like me should learn to make more friends.
Hope that we write more often.
Best wishes!
(4)
Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit
Newspapers are important media. They can provide all kinds of latest news from both at home and abroad, which can help us understand the world better.
Newspapers can also make our life rich. In newspapers, we can read stories about a variety of people, find weather reports, introctions to new books, advertisements on traveling, and so on.
As English learners, reading newspapers in English, such as 「China Daily」, is one of the best ways to improve our English. There are many words, phrases and structures for us to learn, and what』s more, we can acquire abundant knowledge of history, culture and society.
(5)
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it』s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more, Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What』s more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it』s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.
(6)
The Advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel
There are several advantages of space travel. First of all, it could provide man with new places to live in and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research does good to other research fields.
However, space travel also has some disadvantages. It uses up too much money which could be spent in other ways. What』s more, the idea of man living on other planets is unrealistic. Space travel could be dangerous, too.
In a word, though there are the disadvantages, I think space travel is a good thing. It is important for man to explore and learn about the universe.
(7)
My Choice
If I were a "Super girl", I would go on with my studies rather than touring performance. Anyway, learning at school is more important to one』s life experience. We all know that knowledge is power, so with more knowledge, I shall surely become more successful, which means a brighter future for me. At the same time the excessive amount of work ring the tour is hard. My company doesn』t seem to care about my future development. All of this made me feel terrible, physically and mentally. Nevertheless, I』d rather return for further studies and obtain a sound foundation for my future. I think I shall become a singer — a real singer.
(8)
China has become a shock to the world in Olympic Games 2004, so the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of ￥200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. Some say the players have own the honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. What』s more, it will benefit the training of future players. Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. Besides, it』s said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their procts. I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not money but the spirits of the Olympic Games.
(9)
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.
Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comforts from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary the other students are against the idea. In their opinion if too many people keep pets at home, it's bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
I like animals, so I don't think it's bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment.
(10)
Several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in China, many people would gather around and stared at him or her as if they were watching a rare animal.
However, it』s not uncommon to meet some foreigners even in middle schools now. There』s no doubt that schools will be better known. What』s more, it』s good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures. Meanwhile, their oral English will be improved a lot. On the other hand, some foreigners, though well paid, find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry about their safety. The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students. As a result, many students can』t benefit from them.
5. 誰給我提供幾篇高考英語作文範文
英語作文的基本要求：
首先，一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對這三個標准分別加以說明。
1、統一性
一個段落內的各個句子必須從屬於一個中心，任何游離於中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。再看一個例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進一步交待和充實，就不能構成一個完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什麼是「a mind in turmoil」（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什麼它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。因此，要達到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性（coherence）
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A．按時間先後排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段從「rose」（起床）寫起，然後是吃早餐（「not to miss breakfast」, 「closing at nine o'clock」），然後是「close to noon」，一直寫到這一天結束（「By nine——」）。
B. 按位置遠近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠及近，從遠處（「from a distance」）寫起，然後「get closer」，再到（「ten feet away」），最後是「inside the pagoda」……當然，按位置遠近來寫不等於都是由遠及近。根據需要，也可以由近及遠，由表及裡等等。
C. 按邏輯關系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性順序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達能力，它的重要性與職業，身份有關，從「not need much skill」或「of little importance」到「more important」，最後是「most important」。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然後通過5個 」perhaps」加以例證。
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什麼兩只貓會被搞混。然後對兩者進行比較，末句才下結論。
2）、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字並找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉換詞語（transitional words or phrases），另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段（linking devices）。前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.後者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有詞彙105個，所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞彙量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且對於學生在半個小時內寫120個詞也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的」it」之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現許多重復的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences．
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：
1、不必要的改變時態，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改變單復數，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改變人稱，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態，人稱以及數的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
英語作文的書寫格式
英文書寫應符合書寫規范，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱。書寫應做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧。
寫英文字母要掌握正確筆順。如字母i，應該先寫下面的部分，然後再打點。有的學生卻按寫漢字的習慣從上到下寫，寫快了，就會把點和下面的十筆連在量起，顯得十分別扭。字形t應為兩筆。不少人卻將兩筆合成一筆，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，難以辨認。另外，把r寫成v，把q寫成把g，把k寫成h等等，都是中學生書寫中常見的毛病。
不少人在四線三格的練習紙上書寫尚有規矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求書寫，但在白紙或橫線紙上書寫，卻顯得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下，或一律寫成同一高度，占上中兩格的字母與佔中下兩格的字母完全沒有高低之別。這些現象都要防止。
另外，書寫時還要注意詞與詞之間要保持一定的距離，不能緊靠在一起。字母之間的連寫也應該按照習慣，不能隨意亂來。
在一篇字數有限的作文里，我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行，則必須以音節為單位進行，如revolution這個詞，依照音節移行的原則可以按re-，revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。在移行時，我們還應特別注意以下幾點:
1. 單音節詞不能移行，即使是字母較多的單音節詞，如through等也不能例外。
2．縮略詞如Mr.，Dr.等不能和後面的名字拆開移行。
縮略的專用名詞如U．K.，U．S．A等也不能拆開移行。
3．時間、量度及貨幣單位應視為一個整體；不能分開移行。如；
11：00P.M.應寫在一行內，不能將11：00和P．M．分開移行；寫38℃時，不能將38和℃分開移行。
4．由「年、月、日」表示的日期，如果必須分開移行只能將「月、日」與「年」分開。如January 6，1980不能將January和6分開移行，但可以把January 6，和1980分成兩行。
5．含雙寫輔音字母的單詞，在移行時要將輔音字母拆開。如better可拆成better，necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果雙寫輔音字母屬於詞根，後面又加了後綴，就不能將兩個輔音字母拆開。如drill加上-ing後構成了drilling，就不可以將它拆成成dril-ling，而只能拆為drilling。
例文：
1.寵物：
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.」
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn』t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物：
Elizabeth Bennet （伊麗莎白）
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she graally comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy』s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二個女兒和最聰明和機智，伊麗莎白是自豪感和偏見的主演和其中一個在英國文學的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的質量是numerous—she是可愛的，聰明，並且，在對話定義的小說，她一樣精采地交談象任何人。 她的誠實、美德和活潑的機智使她在胡話之上起來，並且彌漫她的壞行為類跳起和經常惡意的社會。 然而，她的伶俐的口舌和傾向經常做倉促評斷帶領她迷路; 自豪感和偏見本質上是故事她(和她真實的愛， Darcy)怎樣克服他們自己的個人failings—to發現浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊麗莎白必須不僅應付一個絕望的母親，一個遙遠的父親，二非常表現的更加年輕的兄弟姐妹，並且幾位勢利，對抗的女性，她必須也克服Darcy她自己的錯誤印象，最初帶領她拒絕他的求婚。 而她駕駛家族和社會動亂，她魅力是充足保持他感興趣，幸運地。 當她逐漸來認可Darcy』s字元的貴族，她體會她對他的最初的偏見錯誤。
6. 高考英語作文
2010年高考英語作文萬能模板系列
一、英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I』m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I』m pleased to hear that you』re coming to China for a visit.
I』m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
結尾部分：
With best wishes.
I』m looking forward to your reply.
I』d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口頭通知常見寫作模板
演講及開場白部分：
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分：
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we』ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don』t be late.
結束語部分：
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you』ll have a nice time here.
That』s all. Thank you.
四、圖表作文寫作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點 . This means that as (進一步說明).
We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一 . After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化， the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). /It is high time that we (發出倡議).
五、圖畫類寫作模板：1.開頭
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.銜接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.結尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
一，英語書信的常見寫作模板
開頭部分：
如何高興收到你的來信了。
讓我告訴你一些有關活動。
我很高興收到你的4月9日的信。
我很高興地聽到你要來中國進行訪問。
我寫信來感謝你的幫助我在美國逗留期間，你。
結尾部分：
有了良好的祝願。
我期待著您的答復。
我很感激，如果你能回答剛才。
二，口頭通知常見寫作模板
呼語及開場白部分：
女士們，先生們，我把你的注意力，好嗎？我有一個要發布的消息。
正文部分：
所有的老師和學生都必須參加的。
請把你的筆記本電腦和做筆記。
請仔細聽，我們將有一個小組的討論。
請准時，不遲到。
結束語部分：
請大家踴躍參加它。
大家都在歡迎出席。
我希望你有一個很好的時間在這里。
這樣就好了。謝謝。
三，議論文模板
1。正反觀點式議論文模板
導入：
第1段：最近我們已經討論了關於是否應... （導入話題）
我們的意見分歧就這一議題。（觀點有分歧）
正文：
第2段：大部分學生都予以支持。（正方觀點）
在這里，其中的原因。第一...第二...最後...（列出2〜3個贊成的理由）
第3段：但是，其他人則強烈反對。 （反方觀點）
他們的理由如下。在第一個地方...更重要的是...此外...（列出2〜3個反對的理由）
結論：
第4段：個人而言，超重的優點的缺點，因為我們會做弊大於利，所以我支持它。（個人觀點）
2。「甲或者乙」類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：有些人的看法，一個是優於B在許多方面。另一些人則認為，B是好多了。就個人而言，我寧願A，因為我覺得有更多的優勢。
正文：
第2段：有，為什麼我喜歡甲的原因很多，最主要的原因是...另一個原因是，...（贊同甲的原因）
第3段：當然，B也有一定程度的優勢... （列出1〜2個乙的優勢）
結論：
第4段：但如果所有這些因素考慮，甲比乙更從什麼上面的討論，我們可以得出這樣的結論...（得出結論）
3。觀點論述類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：提出一種現象或某個決定作為議論的話題
作為一名學生，我強烈贊成這一決定。 （亮明自己的觀點是贊成還是反對）
這可能會列出的理由如下。 （過渡句，承上啟下）
正文：
第2段：首先...其次...除了...（列出2〜3個贊成或反對的理由）
結論：
第3段：最後，我相信... （照應第1段，構成「總 - 分 - 總」結構）
4。「如何」類議論文模板：
導入：
第1段：提出一種現象或某種困難作為議論的話題
正文：
第2段：許多方法可以幫助解決這一嚴重問題，但下面可能是最有效的。首先...另一種方法來解決問題是...最後...（列出2〜3個解決此類問題的辦法）
結論：
第3段：這是不是最好的，但只有2 / 3，我們可以採取的措施。但是，應該指出，我們應採取行動，...（強調解決此類問題的根本方法）
四，圖表作文寫作模板
圖表給了我們一個整體的圖表主題圖片。首先我們看到的是，圖表最大特點。這意味著，作為（進一步說明）。
我們可以看到從給定的統計數據，圖表細節一。動詞後，安泰細節一中的第一個變化，是動詞- ED鏡頭+幅度+時間（緊跟著的變化）。這些數字也告訴我們，圖表細節二。在專欄中，我們可以看到，占（進一步描述）。
從這些數字來看，我們可以得出這樣的結論（結論）。這樣做的原因，據我所知是（給出原因）。 /現在是時候，我們（發出倡議）。
五，圖畫類寫作模板：1。開頭
看看這個picture. /圖為/從這張圖片，我們可以see... /由於在picture...顯示/正如圖片中看到that... ...
2。銜接句
提醒大家都知道，... /由於眾所周知,.../眾所周知that... /在我看來,.../據我所知,.../這景象我的東西在我的日常生活。
3。結尾句
在conclusion... /在brief... /在whole... /在short... /在word... /一般speaking... /正如已經指出...
7. 求高考英語作文範文10篇！
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8. 求15篇高考英語作文
範文：Mrs Wilson ,
I』m going out shopping , and won』t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o』clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn』t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10）全國卷 (2)
假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽（speech contest），希望附近大學的外籍教師Smith 女生來做評委。請參照以下通知給她寫一封信。
英語演講比賽
主題：人與自然
時間：6月15日下午2：---5：
地點：501教室
參賽選手：10名
聯系人：李華（電話44876655）
範文： Dear Ms. Smith ,
I』m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students』 Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I』m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic 「Man and Nature」. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I』m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11） 全國卷 (3)
假定你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據學校規定，你需要書面預約，請按下列的要求寫一封信：1.本人簡介 2.求助內容 3.約定時間 4.你的聯系方式（Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678）
範文： Dear Sir ,
I』m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I』m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I』m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假設你正在參加全省中學生演講比賽，請你針對有些父母經常翻開孩子的日記或書包這一現象，寫一篇演講稿，陳述你的觀點。 內容包括：1.認為同學們不必為此煩惱 2.希望能夠體諒父母的苦衷 3.建議與父母進行交流溝通
範文： Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there』s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we』d like to trust them .If you don』t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假設你將參加某英文雜志開展的一次徵文活動，內容要求你在電視，手機和網路三者中，放棄其中的一個並陳述理由。請你以「which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?」 為題，寫一篇短文。
範文： Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there』re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文報社開設了一個專欄：experience . 本期話題是如何解決學習中遇到的困難。請你以「my approach to difficulties in learning」 為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談自己的一些做法。
範文： My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假設你參加所在年級的英文寫作比賽，請按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文：
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
範文： The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假設你和幾位同學成了一個英語俱樂部，開展了為期2個月的活動。現在，你將代表俱樂部在課堂上進行經驗交流，請寫一份英語發言稿。1.簡要描述俱樂部開展的一項與英語有關的活動 2. 談談你們開展活動的收獲。
範文：
Boys and girls ,
Today I』ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That』s all. Thank you.
11) 陝西卷 （9）
假定你是李華，在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上，你看到以下內容。 請你根據博客內容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。
I』m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
寫作要點：1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陳述自己的理由 3.提出至少2條建議。
範文： Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends』 advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 （10）
假設你是某中學新老師李紅，請給你的朋友張華寫封信，告訴他你第一天上課的情景，主要內容如下：1.描述一件課堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介紹你處理該事的方式 3.談談你的感想
範文：
Dear zhuanghua ,
It』s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named 「mother」 for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I』m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
10)陝西卷 （11）
假定你是李華，你們學校和一所美國學校簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年裡，你們的英語老師是來自這所學校的Sue Wood 。 不久前她返回美國任教。請根據要求寫封電子郵件。1.對她表達感謝之意 2.介紹她離開後自己和班級發生的事情 3.希望了解她的近況
範文：
Dear Sue ,
I』m LiHua ,one of your students in China .It』s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The three you planted yourself is growing well ,and the whole class decided to name it Sue wood . Will you come back to see Sue wood ?
How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
Liu Hua
09)陝西卷 （12）
假定你是李華，在一個英文網路論壇上，你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發帖（post）尋求幫助。請根據以下內容，寫作要點和要求回帖。
Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08
Hi, everyone , I』m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn .But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old . What should I do ?
寫作要點：1.告訴Grown-up 要理解母親 2.給Grown-up 提出解決問題的具體建議
範文： Hi, Grown-up ,
As a student of your age , I understand your situation . The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers . However , it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother』s feelings . Here are a few suggestions . First , it』s advisable to talk more with your mom . I am sure that talks must help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things . Second , you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a 「grown-up」, it』s even better to share more of the housework , such as cleaning ,washing and cooking .
Hope my idea will work out .
11）江西卷 （13）
假設你是星光中學的李華，將參加主題為「Let』s ride bicycles」的英語演講比賽活動。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內容：1.目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞問題 2.騎自行車的益處，如節能環保，有利健康等 3. 參考詞彙 low-carbon life energy saving
範文：
Good morning , everyone ,
I』m Li Hua from Xing Guang Middle school . The topic of my speech is 「Let』s ride bicycle」 .
As is known to all, with the improvement of people』s living standards , cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life .However , they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams .
How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned , riding bicycles is a good solution .For one thing, bicycles don』t need any petrol and they are energy –saving . For another , bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won』t give off waste gas .What』s more , riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .
Therefore, let』s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles . Come on and join us !
Thank you!
11)天津卷 （14）
假設你程光中學學生會主席李華。你校將於6月26日接待來自美國的某中學的訪問團。你受學校委託，負責安排其在天津的活動。請根據提示，給美國的領隊Smith 先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動安排並簡要說明理由，最後徵求對方的意見。 1.上午與我校學生座談（如校園文化，文化差異）2.中午與我校同學共進午餐（餃子，面條等） 3.下午和我校學生游覽海河。
範文： Dear Mr. Smith ,
I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.
In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste mplings ,noodles and other Chinese foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the HaiHe river .
How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian jing
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
10)天津卷 （15）
假設你晨光高中的李華。你校擬選拔一些優秀學生，利用暑假到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據提示寫給校評選組一封申請信：1.對此活動的認識（如對本人，學生和社會的益處）2.個人優勢（如性格，獨立生活能力，語言能力等） 3.你的計劃（如怎樣輔導等）
範文： Dear Sir/Madam ,
I』m lihua from class one ,senior two . I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English ring the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I』m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need . Besides ,I 『ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on .
I』d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
9. 高中寒假英語作文6篇字數120
1.Pollution:
With the development of economy,especially the development od the auto instry,we have more and more pollutions of different kinds. Air pollution,water pollution,soil pollution and noise pollution are all destroying our human life,although modern instry has brought us the comfortable life that we all want.It is really difficult for us to choose whether we need modern life or pollution.It depends on everybody in the world.
2.Mr.Smith is our English teacher who is very strict with us and strict in his teaching as well.But he is really so famous in our school that nearly everybody konws him and loves him.It seems that he is superior to the other teachers in teaching,and everybody enjoys attending his lectures.Also,he always appears in different social activities and plays an important role in it.Meanwhile,he cares more about his students than about himself.He shows great concern to the kids,no matter the kids are in his class or not.It is said that he seldom goes back to his hometown to visit his parents,although it is only 30 minutes' drive.If you have some troubles in your mind or in your study, just go up to him,you will be satisfied with his help.And sometimes,he would lend or give some money to the students who are poor.And for that,he has given up smoking for a long time.We are all moved when we heard that someone had put some cigarettes secretly in his drawer.Now you can see,how famous and great Mr.Smith is!
3.I enjoyed my winter holiday very much,for it was a happy,but busy one. During the winter holiday,we all celebrated the China Spring Festival.It was the tradition that we spent much time visiting friends and relatives with lots of daily-used gifts.Most of the children,perhaps were the most enjoyable, eating mplings,playing fire-works,watching TV programmes specially made for the Spring Festival's Eve and getting Yearly-Best-Wishing money from the old generation and so on. I was so happy that I never got sleepy ring the peak moment.And I went to a traditional fair(gathering) to watch the shows with my best friends.We had a good time there.Now,the winter holiday is coming to its end.I have to take time to do my homework.But,I also look forward the next Spring Festival's coming.
4.WINTER VACATION 計劃
The winter vacation of this year is coming.Certainly enough,we are going to have a happy,but busy holiday of 25 days.In the winter vacation,first of all,I want to have a gathering with my classmates and friends to relax ourselves. and Secondly,I am going to read several books that I am very interested in.Thirdly, I have to follow my parents to visit some of my relatives ring the Spring Festival.That's the tradition of China.You cannot avoid it.Finally,I decide to download some pieces of music into my MP3 so that I can appreciate it in my spare time later.I think I will have a very rich winter vacation.Really enjoy it！
5.Because I have realized that friendship can play an important part in our life and work,I have made lots of friends with my classmats and teachers.We help each other and love each other. And I think I can get enjoyment, comfort and support from them,especially when I have some difficult problems.I treasure the friendship very much,and I regard the friendship as one part of my life.I wish I will never forget this social relation with my classmates and teachers.Perhaps,it is the start of my social life.Everybody knows,a far relative is nothing more than a close neighbour.I think my friends are my intimate neighbours both in the society and in my heart as well
6.ON THE WAY TO SCHOOL:
My school is quite close to my house.So I always walk to school by myself.I don't need anybody's care,for I think I have already grown up.During my walk,I can appreciate the street scenery,such as flowers,grasses,modern buildings and all kinds of people as well.I am very proud that I am watching the city 's growing and developing.Sometimes,I can give some help to those who are old and poor,even I can give some help to those who are strange in this city. ,when I am walking in the street,You know, I take the time to recite some articles.So,when I get home,I almost finish my oral homework.I should say I enjoy walking.