長春高老師雅思英語作文
A. 雅思英語作文問題
故事是這樣的
以前在各大學校里都流傳著這么一個恐怖故事
說是A校有不幹凈的東西 每當十五的時候 學校門口的魯迅像的眼睛就會動
所有教學樓都會停電
樓梯會從原來的13階變成14階
實驗室的水龍頭放出來的水會變成紅色
還有1樓盡頭的那個廁所只要有人進去了就再也出不來了
於是 一群不信邪的孩子們約好15那天去探險
晚上12點 他們准時來到了那所學校的門口
魯迅像的眼睛望著左邊 他們記下了 生怕出來的時候記不得有沒有動過
他們來到了教室 打開開關 咦 不是亮著的么？
「騙人。」一個男孩發出抱怨
「再看看吧。」
來到了樓梯口 「1 2 3...13沒錯阿 是13階阿？」
孩子們有點懷疑傳說的真實性了
於是他們又來到了實驗室 水龍頭打開了 白花花的水流了出來
「真沒勁阿 我們白來了！」
剛開始的刺激感都消去了一半。
最後 他們來到了那個廁所
女孩子雖然口上說不相信 可是還是不敢進去
於是讓剛剛很拽地說不怕的小C進去
看了表 1點整
2分鍾後 男生出來了
「切 都是騙人的」
孩子們不歡而散。
出門時 一個看門人發現了他們 喝斥他們怎麼可以那麼晚還在學校逗留。孩子們撒腿就跑
小B特地注意了一下門口的石像 沒錯 眼睛還是朝左看得
「騙人的」他嘀咕了一聲
「喂 小B么？小C昨天晚上和你們一起出去玩 怎麼還沒回來？」第二天早上 小C的媽媽打電話過來詢問。
小C也沒有去學校上課
孩子們隱約感到不對了
於是 他們將晚上的探險之事告訴了老師和家長
大家在大人的陪同下回到了那個學校。
「什麼？ 我們的魯迅像的眼睛一直是朝右看的阿。」校長聽了孩子們的敘述 不可思議的說。
「可是我們昨天來的時候是朝左看的阿」
出門一看 果然 是朝右看得...
「可是昨天的確有電阿」
「昨天我們這里全區停電...你們怎麼開得燈？」
「還有樓梯！」孩子們迅速跑到樓梯口
「1 2 3...12？」
「我們的樓梯一直是12階的。」
「不可能！！！」
「還有實驗室」一個孩子提醒道
「對 實驗室」
一行人來到實驗室 就在昨天他們開過的那個水龍頭下 有一攤暗紅色的痕跡。
「是血跡。」
「那...小C昨天還去過那個廁所...」大家都感到了一陣莫名的恐懼
「走 我們去看看」校長也意識到了事情的嚴重性
...
推開門...
小C的屍體赫然出現在大家的眼前
因為驚恐而睜大的雙眼
被割斷的喉管血淋淋的
內臟散落在已經幹掉的水池裡...
「阿...」小C的媽媽當場昏了過去
幾個老師馬上沖出去嘔吐...
小B也被嚇得目瞪口呆
在他暈過去的前一秒鍾
他瞥見小C的手錶
指針停在了1點...
就是小C進去的那個時候...
順便說一下 他們去探險的那天晚上 並沒有門衛...
將此貼轉向5個以上的論壇不會魔鬼纏身且能實現一個願望 。
不回帖者晚上凌晨過後往往......
對不起，我很不情願，但是......請各位原諒！
B. 雅思英語作文
建議抄首先可以參加襲北外雅思培訓班，上完課後要整理筆記，總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具體寫法以及常用的語言結構。
考前50~60天，練習句子翻譯考前40天，練習觀點和詞彙：挑選各個專題的話題若干，每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作；
考前30天：以熟練為主，完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作（每兩天一篇）。
考前20天：挑選三種文體的代表作，請老師批改並面授點評，看看問題所在，有針對性提高和改正。
考前15天：限時寫作，每天一到兩篇，提高寫作的感覺和速度。
C. 雅思中介紹好朋友的英語作文
A good friend is one who can help you when you are in trouble. A good friend is one who can laugh with you and cry with you together. A good friends is one who can say no when you do wrong. A good friend is one who can help you in many ways, such as working, studying, life and so on. Everyone needs good friends. With good friends, our life becomes happier and we can live longer.
D. 請英語高手改一篇雅思英語作文謝謝啦
找專業的吧~ 新奇雅思有寫作批改卡，我買了兩張，我覺得還不錯。老師改的都很認真很負責，我覺得很有用處，我寫作考了7的，加油！
E. 求雅思英語作文
If you wanna talk about playground legends, the conversation begins right there. Demetrius "Hook" Mitchell is the legend. You can hear all the stories in the world, but you'll never believe it until you see it. He's done inhuman stuff, unreal stuff.
was by far the best player to come out of Oakland. Demetrius Hook Mitchell is the Bay's most notorious legend. Every cat with at least minimal knowledge of playground ball has a Hook Mitchell story. The tales of his leaping ability are common place. Jumping over cars, bikes and people wasn't no thing to Hook. Before his descent into narcotics hell, Hook was nothing but heavenly. If he'd just kept his head straight, he'd be in the league right now, dominating.
Unfortunately, Hook lives in a prison cell now and in other folks' memories.
Several NBA stars who also grew up in Oakland, including Gary Payton, Jason Kidd, Antonio Davis, Drew Gooden, and Brian Shaw, all of whom played with Mitchell on the streets, and were astonished by his skills, but were unable to help him avoid his sorry fate. They describe his unstable home life and the longing for community that drove him to the streets. Mitchell himself is shown playing prison league games, and is surprisingly still able to play above the rim.
His story, like others, was written on courts between the West and East Bay.
F. 請英文老師看雅思的作文，thanks
1 I personally think that having a break between university graation and working life is better as the indivial is more mature.
2 Anyway, you get all your points in pros and cons addressed. However, the points should be organised in such a way it is more coherence and easier to read and understood by the reader/marker.
3 One point, I do not understand is, are you asking the student to co-habitate ring the one year break to become housewife?
4 stimulated to work or travel, may be motivated to work or travel is better
5 you had use words like stimulated, subsequently, meanwhile, consequently. I think you used for the sake of using and end up they just do not fit into the sentences.
6 adopt themselvies, write, for personal maintenance
7 you tried to write as much as possible, but your sentence structure is 'broken'. You must write in such a way that when the reader reads it, it is 'smooth' and coherent. This is especially in paragraph, ' In other hand,......『 I find this paragraph very messy.
Final coment； I am not sure what level you are writing at? CET8? or English teacher standard? If yes, your standard is below par.
G. 求一篇雅思的英語作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文，相信對你有用，你也可以去看看其它的範文。
H. 長春市教英語作文最好的老師哪有
1.當老師不一定要讀類學校.
2.如果是應屆畢
業生,最好先當老師.如果先去做回別的再去當老師就成了答往屆畢業生,這在教育部門的政策上是有局限性的.
3.不一定要一樣,但是最好要一樣.因為以後評職稱的時候你所教專業和
你的文憑上的專業要對口.舉個例子:比如某教師讀大學讀的是中文,後來他做了歷史老師,
那麼,他就要再修一個歷史文憑才可以具備教歷史的資格這在評職稱的時候很重要.
你說的工理專業去教數學應該
是可以的.只要你
能勝任教學,學校會聘你的.
以上是我做教師的一點經驗之談,希望能給你以啟示!
I. 100分懸賞，求大家幫我看看兩篇雅思英語作文，一篇修改前，一篇修改後
看了你的文章,我終於明白你為什麼在分以下了.
分析一下你的優勢和劣勢:
你的優勢:1, 能夠清楚理解題目含義 ; 2, 有一定的邏輯性和良好的思維能力.
3,有一定單詞量和英文基礎.
你的不足: 1, 應該重點練習並熟悉英文的語句結構,和詞彙用法.雖然你有一定的單詞量,但是你對他們的用法還不夠熟練. 例如:你首段的第一句,就是一個沒有主語的重句.還有第二段第一句中的"reap",用在這里不太恰當,因為"reap"的獲得是作為努力的成果而獲得的,用在這里似乎詞不達意.
2, 覺得你的寫作方式很原創,一看就知道是你寫的.呵呵.因為我個人覺得你的好多話都是你個人臨場發揮的.我的建議是你平時能夠多讀一些文章,熟悉各種詞彙和語句的用法,再把你認為經典的收藏為己用.這樣久而久之,你的寫作自然就有突破.
3, 論證段的語句不要太復雜,盡量簡單清晰.如果太復會有很做作的感覺,反而會對論點起到反作用.我看了你的那篇被改過的文章,就好很多.看起來比較順暢,可讀性強,不蹩腳,得6分綽綽有餘.你可以將其與你寫的進行對比,然後用心去體會他們之間的差別和不同,逐漸改變你的寫作習慣.
總之, 寫作是練出來的,即使像樓上兩位仁兄辛苦的替你改完,不知道對你寫作的真正作用會有多大呢,至少我看不到它的效果,(聲明:詞話絕無冒犯他們的意思). 另外送你一句話,切忌繁冗復雜,崇尚簡單明快.因為你想要的畢竟只是 6分而已 - 希望你能取得真經 :)