雅思英語作文兩代關系

Ⅰ 100分懸賞，求大家幫我看看兩篇雅思英語作文，一篇修改前，一篇修改後

看了你的文章,我終於明白你為什麼在分以下了.

分析一下你的優勢和劣勢:
你的優勢:1, 能夠清楚理解題目含義 ; 2, 有一定的邏輯性和良好的思維能力.
3,有一定單詞量和英文基礎.

你的不足: 1, 應該重點練習並熟悉英文的語句結構,和詞彙用法.雖然你有一定的單詞量,但是你對他們的用法還不夠熟練. 例如:你首段的第一句,就是一個沒有主語的重句.還有第二段第一句中的"reap",用在這里不太恰當,因為"reap"的獲得是作為努力的成果而獲得的,用在這里似乎詞不達意.
2, 覺得你的寫作方式很原創,一看就知道是你寫的.呵呵.因為我個人覺得你的好多話都是你個人臨場發揮的.我的建議是你平時能夠多讀一些文章,熟悉各種詞彙和語句的用法,再把你認為經典的收藏為己用.這樣久而久之,你的寫作自然就有突破.
3, 論證段的語句不要太復雜,盡量簡單清晰.如果太復會有很做作的感覺,反而會對論點起到反作用.我看了你的那篇被改過的文章,就好很多.看起來比較順暢,可讀性強,不蹩腳,得6分綽綽有餘.你可以將其與你寫的進行對比,然後用心去體會他們之間的差別和不同,逐漸改變你的寫作習慣.

總之, 寫作是練出來的,即使像樓上兩位仁兄辛苦的替你改完,不知道對你寫作的真正作用會有多大呢,至少我看不到它的效果,(聲明:詞話絕無冒犯他們的意思). 另外送你一句話,切忌繁冗復雜,崇尚簡單明快.因為你想要的畢竟只是 6分而已 - 希望你能取得真經 :)

Ⅱ 雅思中介紹好朋友的英語作文

A good friend is one who can help you when you are in trouble. A good friend is one who can laugh with you and cry with you together. A good friends is one who can say no when you do wrong. A good friend is one who can help you in many ways, such as working, studying, life and so on. Everyone needs good friends. With good friends, our life becomes happier and we can live longer.

Ⅲ 求一篇雅思的英語作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文，相信對你有用，你也可以去看看其它的範文。

Ⅳ 雅思英語作文

建議抄首先可以參加襲北外雅思培訓班，上完課後要整理筆記，總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具體寫法以及常用的語言結構。

考前50~60天，練習句子翻譯考前40天，練習觀點和詞彙：挑選各個專題的話題若干，每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作；

考前30天：以熟練為主，完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作（每兩天一篇）。

考前20天：挑選三種文體的代表作，請老師批改並面授點評，看看問題所在，有針對性提高和改正。

考前15天：限時寫作，每天一到兩篇，提高寫作的感覺和速度。

Ⅳ 幫忙改下雅思英語作文啊~急!

感覺很多語病。
很多句子讀起來都怪怪的。而且「Although
each
nutshell
has
concave
and
convex
sides,it
would
be
wrong
to
say
that
fast
foods
are
completely
useless
to
humankind」翻譯過來變成雖然事物有好回有壞，但答是說快餐對人完全沒用是不對的。應該去掉although.

Ⅵ 英語作文帶翻譯當代人與上一代人的不同

Friendship and love with human social life is indispensable to the divine power, but both have distinction to have connection again, in the life of their position. Friendship and love, there is a difference between the two.
First of all, love and friendship are two different kinds of emotions. Friendship is open, with open, and comprehensive relations, this relationship with peace and deep color. But love is closed.
Secondly, the foundation of friendship and love is not identical also, friendship is the basis of trust, but it has not ruled out by the theory values, may. Love is the foundation, often entangled in friendship to love, not only have ideal, have interest of temper, character and so on various aspects of special requirements
Third, the pillar of love and friendship. Friendship is filled with "understanding", no matter how deep friendship, don't exist yisiyihao's desire. But love is heart, is deep and thorough collision, the psychological emotional resonance both sincere.
Fourth, love and friendship with different mood, friendship, love, "enough" is filled with "lacking sense." Further, friendship, love, and the two means that two people's world.
Therefore, we love and friendship relationship in processing to note: seriously, sincere friendship towards love
友誼和愛與人類社會生活不可或缺的神力,但都有區別又有聯系,在他們的立場的生活。友誼和愛,兩者是有區別的。
首先,愛和友誼是兩種不同的情緒。友誼是開放的,開放的、全面的關系,這種關系與和平和深顏色。但愛是關閉的。
其次,友誼和愛的基礎也不相同,友誼的基礎是信任,但是它沒有排除的理論價值,。愛是基礎,經常糾纏在友誼的愛,不僅有理想,有興趣的脾氣、性格等各方面的特殊要求
第三,愛情和友情的支柱。友誼充滿了「理解」,無論多麼深厚的友誼,不存在一絲一毫的願望。但愛是心,是更加深入和透徹的碰撞,真誠的心理情感共鳴。
第四,與不同的心情愛和友誼,友誼,愛情,「足夠」充滿了「缺乏感。「此外,友誼,愛情,和兩個意味著兩個人的世界。
因此,我們愛和友誼關系處理注意事項:對愛情認真,真誠的友誼

Ⅶ 雅思英語作文2篇，要求每篇250字左右。

作文需要好好練習的

Ⅷ 考研英語作文（二）和雅思作文，差別大么

大了去了，二者屬於不同的考試體系，有不同的側重點，但是如果你雅思作文可以保證高分的話，估計這個水平做考研作文二也可以拿高分。
可以找到歷年真題看看到底考研英語作文二是讓你做什麼。