改革開放英語雅思作文

⑴ 誰能幫我改下英語雅思作文啊

第一篇大作文漏來洞比較源多。中式英語太多，表達的意思非常含糊。
雖然我不是考官，但是就我來看，這樣的文章可能達不到5分的要求。
詞彙比較單一，作者對長句的把握還有待考量。
你的第一句話就讓人比較失望。As you know這類的詞句出現在議論文里是大忌。
詞性的把握也不是很到位。還望繼續練習。
這只是個人觀點，若有失水準，還望見諒。

⑵ 求一篇英語雅思作文

一、雅思大作文開頭：
開頭要短小;要有立場和觀點;避免模板。
如： the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文結構：
一個paragraph一個idea;避免過多examples, esp personal examples.;段落間的平衡
三、雅思大作文語言：
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use 「a mix of longer and short sentences」
以上從開頭、結構、語言等三個方面對雅思大作文的寫作技巧進行了簡單的總結，建議考生們可以根據以上建議，並通過針對性的練習來逐步掌握雅思大作文的寫作技巧，從而在雅思作文考試中取得更好的成績。

⑶ 雅思英語作文2篇，要求每篇250字左右。

作文需要好好練習的

⑷ 雅思英語作文

建議抄首先可以參加襲北外雅思培訓班，上完課後要整理筆記，總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具體寫法以及常用的語言結構。

考前50~60天，練習句子翻譯考前40天，練習觀點和詞彙：挑選各個專題的話題若干，每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作；

考前30天：以熟練為主，完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作（每兩天一篇）。

考前20天：挑選三種文體的代表作，請老師批改並面授點評，看看問題所在，有針對性提高和改正。

考前15天：限時寫作，每天一到兩篇，提高寫作的感覺和速度。

⑸ 急求一篇大學（雅思）英語作文！280字左右的！

Technology emerged as soon as human race came into this world and began to fight for surviving. In the early stage, technology served as the implements for human beings to conquer the nature. In the process of struggling against all the menaces of the nature, our ancestors have generalized and accumulated all sorts of experience, and also created a series of technology in order to help the descendents to adapt the environment. This circumstance has been continued until the technology that accumulated by human race are powerful enough to overcome most of the threats of the nature. Then the twofold use of technology began to appear. On the one hand, the technology has made the dominators possible to strive for convenient and luxurious life. On the other hand, the governors also use it to quash the rebellions and exploit their people, even sometime, to fight with other nations. With the advent of the Instrial Revolution, technology began to contribute to the majority of human beings. The great improvement of modern technology has eventually increased the efficiency of people』 life, and also makes it possible for most indivials to possess a large amount of leisure time.
In today's rapid changing society, it is hard to allege that the increasing of people's efficiency and hence enable most of people have more leisure time are the primary goal of technological advancement. As is so often pointed out, modern technology make the relationship between people become more impersonal and aloof. The early initiative handicraft has been replaced by assembly line of machinery, and the works' jobs are always unutterably boring. The bargaining between people also gives its ways to the high efficient trade in the supermarket. So, spectacles above are the primary goal of the modern technology, it bound to raise many persons' unsatisfactory.

⑹ 改雅思英文作文

The graph （Can you be more specific?)illustrates the number of people at a London railway station from 6am to 10pm. As we can see(刪掉因為重復顯得啰嗦）, the number of people fluctuates over the 16 hours (given period). To be more specific, at 6am the number stands at only 100. (The period 刪掉，重復，多餘)between the 6am to 8am the number experiences the（用a) rapid rise to about 400. But there is a drop in the following (in the next) two hours, reaching the peak at around 180. The number in the following(in the next,其實最好用個別的，重復了) two hour increases fairly constantly from about 180 to around 280. The next two hours（同樣問題） ,the number level off at under 300. From the（this） point forwards,the number experiences a sharp drop ,bottoming out at about 90 at 4 pm. After 4pm,the number rises again ,with the number reaching 370. After that ,there is (a) decrease to about 130 at 8pm. The period between the 8pm to 10pm the(....?) sees the slight increase, but finally the number of people decline(s) from 180 at 9pm to 130 at 10pm.

大部分問題不大，主要是很多話一直重復用 （the number,rises,drop,after that等等)。一直重復用語法上並沒有錯誤，但是會給考官留下你詞彙量不多的印象，而且重復的詞多了考官容易失去興趣。

另外注意你的The和A優點混淆不清。還有The following和the next。
基本上都是習慣上的小問題，注意點就好啦。

希望對你有幫助！加油啊=）

⑺ 求一篇雅思的英語作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文，相信對你有用，你也可以去看看其它的範文。

⑻ 高中英語作文關於改革開放的變化

自己改動一下就行了
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http://www.rrting.com/English/yyxw/這里有近千篇英語作文，希望能幫到你，好就要給分喔,未來幾年寫作文都不用怕了

⑼ 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文

可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇，以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升；
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作，有利於更好的發揮自己的特長，從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~