雅思英語作文批改兼職

1. 日，我在新東方批改網人工改作文，我把慎小嶷在十天突破雅思上的範文給他改，居然只得了5分！！！新東方

這就對了，你把範文直接拷過去，在批改的人看來至少大部分是模板，就憑這一點就沒有過5分的可能～

2. 求批改英語作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person』 indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

3. 有能批改英語作文的app嗎雅思

同學你好！
你可以登錄朗閣寫作一對一批改頁面進行作文提交批改，名師點評專會通過郵箱反饋給你哦。屬
地址http://www.longre.com/topic_2013/zt/ysnh_1015/zuowen.aspx

4. 雅思作文批改

你好，很高興能我解答：
你可以將你的作文發給我們，我們可以為你免費批改作文，還可以為你制定適合你的雅思學習計劃！
在告訴你一個雅思寫作應注意一下幾點：
1、注重寫好文章的框架
我曾經問過我們世紀雅思的外教老師， 外國人看文章最注重的是什麼， 他告訴我說是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 詞彙， 或是論點等。 而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚，我們不能老是採用大三段的形式-開頭，經過， 結尾。我們可以多用用連接詞， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 給考官一目瞭然的感覺。還有我們可以多看看國外的文章， 看看他們的寫作模式， 我當初寫文章的時候， 用的就是我看到一篇國外文章的模式，我覺得可以套用， 我最後介紹給大家。
2、句型的多樣化
如果一篇文章， 從頭到尾， 永遠用的只有一種句型， 那麼這篇文章一定拿不到高分，我們可以適當的改換一下句型， 我給大家一定建議，希望給大家有點幫助。
3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ．主謂句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表結構的句子；Ⅳ. 被動語態（我看到一張帖字說， 不要用被動， 我不這樣認為， 國外的文章， 用被動的也比比皆是。）
4、復雜句型 包括 Ⅰ. 並列句；Ⅱ. 從句（定語，狀語，名詞性，非謂語）
5．詞彙的Variety
說實話做到這點真的很難， 首先你要有龐大的詞彙量，第二你要用的恰當，不出錯誤。我自認做不到這點，所以我用的詞彙有時候會重復。當然大家可以累計一些固定搭配的詞彙，例如：激烈的競爭 fierce competition等
6、多舉EXAMPLE（重要）
大家不要小看這點， 我認為對於寫作基礎不是很好的考生來說， 這點是最重要的。一篇文章如果讓你從頭到尾都在講道理， 你有這么多話要說嗎？而且有時候還不一定說的清楚。那麼這時候你就用例子來表明你的觀點。我認識一個朋友， 可以說她的英語基礎很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我問她怎麼寫的， 她告訴我說就是拚命的舉例子。就這點我也曾問過外教老師， 他曾是IELTS的考官， 他說考官歡迎考生多舉例子。
7、建議：
1）、寫文章最關鍵的就是審題千萬不要出錯誤， 不然就前功盡棄了。
2）例如我積累的句子：
Cultivate independence
Develop a strong sense of responsibility
Enhance social awareness
Build up one』s confidence and offer one』s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity
Widen one』s horizon and sharp one』s character
這些句子比較常用， 而且在口語考試中也可以派上用處。最後給大家介紹一種寫作模式，我覺得很不錯：
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that...... On the other side is the view that...... In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .
There is no denying that ......has many positive effects. To begin with,......Secondly, ...... Finally, ......
However, every coin has its two sides. ......is no exception. Many opponents say that ......
To conclude, .....

祝你取得理想雅思成績！！！
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5. 雅思作文批改（希望是專業人士批改，狠狠批改）

我又無聊來幫別個改雅思了。。。。

1. in present-day big cities..好別扭的用法啊。。。。我不太習慣哈。。貌似沒錯就是了。。

2. daily life就已經有everyday的意思了，所以樓主不用再加個everyday。建議這句用一般進行時，再把daily換成routine。其他可以不變。

3. be allocated to 後面直接加地方，去掉move to。不過我覺得用reallocted好點吧。畢竟這個貌似再說已經存在於市區的工廠。

4. however 有開頭就OK了，不用後面加個though感覺好口語，而且意思重復。

5. have difficulty in doing sth。

6. where=in which place 建議去掉in

7. great though the number 我讀不懂呢。。

8. consist of 貌似是個動詞短語吧。。。

9. citizens of the firms and schools? 額 citizen 是市民啊。後面怎麼所屬於firm 和school了啊，拿workers，teachers，students呢。。。。不要在雅思作文用so on。。好點的用so and the forth。。高級點的etc. 或者to name a few

10. countryside和uptown是指的一個意思么，樓主check下。。我有點懷疑。

11. it does not

12. allow 誰 去修更多路呀？

大概就這些。。不過感覺樓主貌似對好多詞、句的用法都不是很了解，可能是最近才學到的，覺得很不錯，就想在雅思作文里用用。。。所以讀起來有點別扭。。。然後整體上，樓主你偏題了。。。。你完全沒有說companies和factories，就僅僅重點在人身上。。。如：工廠和公司有沒有因為佔地面積過大的問題，而導致了城區給予市民的活動空間和居住空間減少；或者是因為它們的選址，造成了大量雇員不得不在上下班時間大量的湧入這些地區，從而造成交通堵塞呢？然後不要忽略了housing的問題啊。。題目也問題了的。。。

然後樓主你用來支持你觀點的理論好少，而且薄弱。。。希望加強。。

最後祝你考雅思順利。。

6. 求雅思作文批改（小作文而已，100懸賞，跪求老師改作文）

以下希望能幫到你：

The table (or "graph") shows the data about the breakdown of different kinds of Australian people in 1999.

It indicates obviously that the aged took up the least proportion in comparison to all the other types of people. Among them, the single aged people's proportion was 6%, while the couples was about 4%. Thereafter, the single aged had made a dramatic cause in bringing about the impoverishment. The Australian people who remained single, no matter they had child or not, occupies the biggest number in the table (or "graph") , which is about double of the people who were married. What is more ,as it can be told by the table (or "graph"), most of the Australian people were tended to form populous families —— getting marriage, having children, or living together with all the members of the whole family. In conclusion, there was only a few people lived in poverty in that time.

7. 一直說新奇雅思有寫作批改的 具體怎麼弄啊

就是你寫作文，他們那請專業的老師給你改。我弄過一張，感覺還行。老師專改的挺負責挺屬仔細的，邏輯啊，語法啊，內容結構布置啊，連拼寫錯誤都給改出來了。。額。我錯了好多。。丟人。。 從我個人的感覺來說，如果你這4篇都是認真寫的話，收獲還挺大的。

8. 求助~~雅思作文批改

Hardly can the public reach a consensus on the question whether authorities should be economically responsible for the prevention of diseases or the treatment of patients in current society. I would like to compare these two opinions from the following aspects. (第一段你是套模板的，我就不改了，不過以後還是記得要自己寫，因為太容易看出來了）

Recently, huge amount of money has been invested in public health and medical research departments to ensure the delivery of advanced treating techniques and the availability of free medical services. Evidently, this measure has been approved by a large number of people in that they regard it as a kind of resident allowance donated by the governments and a bridge connecting them with authorities. Furthermore, with the prevalence of free medical services and the application of latest medical technologies, an increasing number of citizens are safe from the serious consequences or side effects triggered by some harmful dieases.

However, many clinical experts, sociologists and economists advise the government should concentrate more on the precaution of diseases and strengthening public health. For instance, stopping environment from being contaminated is a good way to rece the insidence of certain diseases. Moreover, the governments should advocate healthy diet and lifestyles , which are much better than the delivery of post-disease medicares

In conclusion, the government should focus more on disease prevension becuase it not only keeps people healthy, but also releases the pressure of medical institutions.

幫你重寫了後面幾段，提幾點意見吧
1 注意選詞和搭配的得體。你最好多看一些通俗的英文材料，學習一下人家的表達。
2 注意語言的簡潔，
3 不要套模板。

9. 雅思作文批改的老師哪裡可以找

我試過環球青藤雅思的寫作批改，是專門的雅思寫作老師來改，可以幫忙回查看寫作情況答，這樣你就可以了解自己在語言表達方面的薄弱處並加以改正。?
另外如果你在學校里有熟識的英語老師，也可以請求他/她的幫忙，吃吃飯聊聊天也是不錯的指導方式。