雅思英語作文高級的開頭
Ⅰ 雅思大作文有常用的開頭可以分享嗎
開頭其實很好解決。常用的開頭有改寫題目,引用諺語,直抒觀點..., 更多知識點可以報班學習一下,北京新東方的雅思系列課程就很不錯。
Ⅱ 雅思大作文如何寫好開頭段
雅思寫作如何在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要保證質量。在雅思大作文中,很多同學只注重主體段的練習和論點論據的提煉,很少有精力關注開頭段。作為文章給考官的第一印象,其實雅思作文的開頭段更為重要。如何寫好開頭段,雅思小編為大家詳解。
大作文開頭技巧:
1) 拋棄冗長模板
"使用模板,一律四分"的說法或許有些誇張,但也在一定程度上反映了考官對於模板的深惡痛絕。其實模板套句並不是不能用,而是要運用靈活,不留痕跡。在很多文章中,開頭結尾的兩個復雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡單句和基礎語法錯誤的映襯下格外醒目,這種稍微有些英語知識的人都會識破的小聰明,更不可能逃過考官的眼睛。
建議學生們積累一些簡單實用的基本套句,如:
我們的生活已離不開…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我們隨處都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成為一個不斷增長的趨勢。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越來越多的人選擇…/傾向於認為…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已經不再罕見
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人們開始意識到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在幾十年前,…很少有人會想像到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 開頭具體化
具體化的開頭是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特點,即 "要讓考官覺得你這個開頭是完全針對題目寫出來的",要做到這一點,就必須緊緊圍繞話題展開。比如下面這道題目:
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(開頭段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(開頭段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(開頭段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
開頭段一為典型的模板式開頭,廢話多,與話題關系小,毫無疑問會引起考官的反感。開頭段二雖然也使用了模板句, 但運用較靈活,不足之處是背景句沒有緊扣話題,雖然談到科技影響生活但沒有具體到'relationship'。開頭段三語言雖簡單但緊緊圍繞話題'relationships'展開,靈活的使用了一些簡短的小套句,而這樣具體化的開頭最受考官青睞。
3) 簡單即是美
雅思作文考的不是文學修養而是學術寫作能力,即如何運用語言有效的表達觀點證明觀點,因此,簡單明了的開頭會給考官留下效率高的好印象,而且簡單的開頭段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也節省了時間。
例:
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最後,寫作重在練習,所謂熟能生巧,開頭段的構思亦是一樣。
Ⅲ 雅思寫作好的開頭怎麼寫
雅思大作文開頭要素一: Restatement of the Topic
大作文的題目都會給出相關情景或話題,在首段中應先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。
方法一 : 改寫。即按照題目所給的內容,用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍,千萬不能抄襲。
注意 :改一兩個詞不算改寫,一定要將整個表達方式改掉。
方法二:自己展開。即根據題目所談到的話題內容適當展開,簡單談談目前社會中的情況怎樣。
注意: 不要談的太多,更加不能偏題,與題目話題毫不相干。
雅思大作文開頭要素二: Express Your Opinion
大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等,因此必須與之相對應的在首段中表明你的觀點。
方法一:中立觀點(即辯證表達)。即可以說某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點又有人同意又有人不同意等等。
說明: 比較好的表達如:I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
不要說:some people agree while others don'nt agree.這可不是中立地表達自己的觀點。
所謂中立,其實是辯證的關系!老外看問題比較辯證,一般不會一棍子打死。
方法二:一邊倒觀點。即直截了當的說贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點等等。
方法三:不表觀點。即不在首段明確的表達自己的觀點,但必須有引出下文之類話來作銜接。
說明: 方法一在考試中用的最多;方法二適中;方法三用的比較少(不表觀點,但必須表明要先分析一下,在最後一段表明觀點)。
雅思大作文開頭要素三: No Excessive Background
大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可,不要寫過多不相乾的展開內容,更不要將理由(即主體段的分論點)寫進去,否則主體段就沒內容寫了。
Ⅳ 雅思大作文開頭如何寫
1、釋義核心名詞
對核心名詞進行解釋,這種方法既能顯的你非常專業,又能突出自己的觀點,非常值得一學。
我們以劍8 Test1為大家做例子:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官範文這么說:
A child’s ecation has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
It has always included就是對child’s ecation的一個最好釋義,這種句型和方法可以套用在很多話題中,但需要烤鴨們提前對話題進行一個思考才行。
2、表明立場承上啟下
開頭部分最重要的一個作用之一就是承上啟下,所以最好是能夠在第一段就明確表明自己的觀點,但是不要一上來就【我支持XXX】,還是需要由一個類似於討論句的句子進行總結,然後引出自己的觀點。
我們以2015年10月31日的雅思真題來為大家進行一次解釋:
題目
Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
這道題說有的人覺得藝術職業應該由國家來撥款,另一部分人說搞藝術應該自己設法獲得經濟上的支持,並要求你討論這兩種觀點。
我們來看範文的開頭:
The realization of basic human needs such as enough clothing and food makes it necessary for a more advanced spiritual enjoyment from art. For those who devote themselves to creating aesthetic works and pleasure, I think they should be supported by both government and other resources.
這段開頭的最後一個I think直接就引出了作者的觀點,而前一句則是鋪墊陳述,因為衣食是基本需求,而藝術則讓人獲得更多的精神愉悅,【所以】,【我認為……】這種引出方式會更加自然,烤鴨們不妨學習一下。
另一個版本是:
Visual and auditory arts play a key role in ecation and entertainment, making these fields integral aspects of our society among all ages. Nevertheless, there is a controversial division about whether these areas ought to receive, or if they are even deserving of, any public funds.
我們看到這個版本,就是針對art這個話題進行了一次討論。先說了藝術在教育和娛樂領域扮演了非常重要的角色,但是一直以來,藝術是否值得擁有public funds(也就是題目中的should be financially supported by government)還是一個比較有爭議的話題。
這一段相較於上一段用詞更加復雜,但是我們看見的是通過了對話題的討論來方便其最後引出自己的觀點。因為是否能夠擁有public funds是很有爭議的,所以在下文中,作者就要來表達自己的觀點了,這也是一種十分不錯的引出方式
雅思大作文開頭如何寫?小編就說到這里了,更多關於雅思考試報名入口,雅思報名時間,成績查詢,報名費用,准考證列印入口及時間等問題,小編會及時更新。希望各位考生都能進入自己的理想院校。希望大家能認真備考,取得好成績。
Ⅳ 雅思大作文最精彩開頭匯總
大作文的類型:
1. 單邊支持,反對探討雙方
2. 陳述利弊
3. 半支持,半反對
4. 分析解決
5. 多重選擇
構成:引言段 + 主體段 + 結論段
1.引言段
組成:開頭句(Opening sentence)+ 中心論點
步驟:引入話題,同義轉述,再根據寫作任務表達中心論點。
A. Opening sentence 五種方法:
(一)引人入勝
思路:用一個比較有趣的話題先吊起考官的胃口,並吸引他們往下看
題目1:Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and indiviality.
範文:
The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wearschool uniforms will affect their personality and indiviality is of greatinterest to many people.備選:
Be of great concern for many parents——引起父母的關注Be of great importance to many scientists——對科學家來說至關重要Be of great significance to both A and B——對於A 和 B 都是非常重要的
題目2:人類如何定義和追求幸福,這樣的問題引起公眾廣泛的爭議。
範文:
The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness isa matter of much contention among the general public .
備選:The question of _____________ has been widely debate in the world ofpolitics.
(二)力排眾議
思路:先駁斥大眾的某個普遍但卻錯誤的觀念,指出其與現實不符,然後提出自己的想法或正確想法,並在主體段列舉各種理由、證據以及活生生和例子來論證。
套路:Although it is + 副詞 + 過去分詞 + that…,this is...
題目1:The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.
範文1:Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy life style and proper condect are no longer to young people's needs today, this is actually not the case.
題目2:越來越少人照看年老的親屬,而是把他們送到專業人士那邊去。
範文2:
Although many people subscribe to the belief that their oldrelatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact acommon misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, it is theyounger family members who should really be responsible for looking after theseold people ring the rest of their lives.
釋義:
①普遍認為…,但事實並非如下。
Although it is commonly believed that ?, this is actually not thecase.
②許多人認同這樣的觀點…,但事實上這卻是一種我們需要去澄清的普遍錯誤觀念。
Although many people subscribe to the belief that ..., this is infact a common misconception that we need to clear up.
③大眾觀念認為?.,但是現實狀況卻遠比這種觀念復雜得多。
Although conventional wisdom has it that?., the reality of thesituation is often far more complicated than that.
釋義:subscribe to 訂閱、同意、預訂 conventional wisdom 大眾觀念
(三)放眼世界
思路:從「時間」或「地點」的跨度著手,比如:過去怎麼樣?
題目1: Some people support the development in agriculture, such as farminginstry and the scientific creation of new types of fruit and vegetables.Others oppose this development. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
範文:
Recent decades havewitnessed a major transformation in agricultural development, where instrialtechnologies are being employed and new varieties of crops are being created.Yet , opponents of this development have raised a number of difficult questions.From my opinion of views, this is a really complicated matter, and we needfurther investigations to understand the bigger picture.
備選:Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of
釋義:understand the bigger picture 了解事物的全貌
題目2:With divorce rates and family break downs increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close they used to be.
範文2:
Divorce and family breakdownwere virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however , almost half of allmarriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance betweenfamily members in modern society.
(四)兼收並蓄
題目:誰該為修路付費,個人還是政府?
範文:
Somepeople hold the opinion that the government should make more investments isexpanding and improving road systems, whereas others who are not so convincedpresent the counterargument that it is the responsibility of the growing numberof private car users to deal with the huge costs. In my opinion, both sides ofthe argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get tothe root of this controversy.
(五)異軍突起
題目1:談個人科技的發展與貧富差異.
範文1:
With the huge expansion of high technologies available toindivials, it is sometimes argued that economic and cultural gaps between therich and poor are being further widened.
題目2:淡大型超市和商場的急劇擴張..
範文 2:
With the unprecedented explosion of large supermarkets and shoppingmalls, a lot of small local shops have quietly disappeared while the remainingones are struggling for hopeless survival.
釋義:unprecedented explosion 前所未有的爆發
範文 3:
With the continuous and graal evolution of mass media, manyserious crimes are now described in greater detail on newspapers, televisionand the Internet, raising considerable public concern over personal safety andsocial stability.
範文 4:
With the mass extinction of endangered and rare species, manycountries have taken harsh measures against illegal hunting, unregulatedmping of instrial waste and rampant destruction of their natural habitatsby human developers.
Ⅵ 雅思大作文開頭怎麼寫能拿高分
雅思大作文開頭怎麼寫能拿高分?對於雅思大作文的開頭,大家寫起來都較為固定和模板化,而這些模板往往不光詞彙簡單,句型結構也不夠復雜,因此很難從考官那裡取得高分。那麼雅思作文怎麼寫能拿高分呢?
比如,請看下面這道考試的原題:
With the development of computer technology, more and more people are working and studying at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
根據通常的雅思寫作模板,作文的開頭由三個部分構成,即「改寫題目或背景+雙邊觀點+我個人認為或這篇文章的觀點」。
雅思寫作答案中最常見的內容結構為:近來越來越多的人在家裡工作和學習。一方面,有人認為這給人們的生活帶來積極影響。另一方面,有人認為,它對我們的生活是不利的。最後,這篇文章不僅討論了雙邊的觀點,並且也給出了「我自己」的觀點。
這樣的內容和結構,往往很難把雅思文章寫得受到考官的認可。不僅詞彙並無良好的表現,句式結構也過分簡單。在現實的考試中,這樣的開頭往往決定了寫作5.5分的命運。
其實,好的文章不僅體現在文章結構上,用詞和表達都應當有所斟酌,這里給大家介紹兩則片語的表達,幫助大家取得寫作的高分。
pale into insignificance
Pale 這個單詞大家肯定都認識,是形容詞,意為蒼白的。但是大家可能還不知道這個單詞也可以做動詞,表示變得蒼白的,如果再加上 insignificance,就表示:變得不重要。
當這個片語連接 when set against something(與......相比),就能夠表達出一個很好的句式結構。
其准確的用法和應用如下:
名詞A+pale into insignificance when set against +名詞B。意為:與B相比,A微不足道
具體舉個例子:
The shortcomings of computer technology pale into insignificance when set against the great benefits it brings to us - convenience in daily life and office work, and cost saving.
日常生活中和辦公室工作的方便以及成本的節約是電腦科技帶給我們的好處,與此相比,電腦科技的缺點微不足道。
這樣的表達是不是高大上了?有時,也可以在原本的句式結構上,進行一定程度的調整,讓句式看起來更高級。
比如,使用 compared to + 名詞 替換 when set against +名詞 結構。當然,compared to +名詞 可以放置於句首,在這個句子結構之上個性化寫出自己的句式。那麼,下面我們再看另一個句式結構的表達。
Much ink has been spilled about + 名詞
Ink 指墨水,spill 指潑灑,這個句式的字面意思指把筆墨潑灑在某物上。當然,其引申的意思就不止於此了,意為對某事展開了討論,可以用於替代常用的模板句式 there is a debate about something。
再舉個例子:
Much ink has been spilled about the impact of computer technology on daily life since the application has been popular in the community.
自從電腦科技在社會中廣泛應用,它對日常生活的影響引起了廣泛的爭論。
這樣的寫法是不是顯得誠意滿滿呢?那麼,高分開頭究竟該如何寫呢?其實,我們可以把兩個句式結構融合在一起,就可以得到一個高大上的開頭了。如下:
Much ink has been spilled about the impact of computer technology on daily life since the application has been popular in the community.
In fact, the shortcomings of computer technology pale into insignificance when set against the great benefits it brings to us - convenience in daily life and office work, and cost saving.
在第二個句子開頭處的 in fact,表達突出和強調。在這個開頭中,首句表達文章所討論的問題,類似於之前的背景改寫。第二句是強調好處大於缺點,所以給出了文章的觀點。雖然僅有兩句,但是已經給出一個開頭應該介紹的內容:文章的話題加文章觀點。而且,文章的句式是不是也並不顯得簡單,反而高大上呢?那麼,根據所講的句式結構,同學們可以自行練習以下兩個問題:
Q1
Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Much ink has been spilled about the merits and demerits of cultural diversity e to the escalating trend of traveling abroad.
In fact, the shortcomings of multiculturalism pale into significance when set against the great benefits of it.
Q2
Some people think that increasing the number of police officers on the street is the only effective way to rece crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Much ink has been spilled about training substantial police forces in the hope of improving the security of the general public e to the soaring proportion of crimes, while solving this problem is likely to need more than a simple rise in the number of police officers.
是否注意到,第二個問題的開頭不僅僅有教過的句式,還插入了 in the hope of 。事實上,這些都可以自由組合和發揮。根據題目的具體意義所表達的合適通順的開頭,才是文章最好的開始。
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Ⅶ 雅思寫作大作文開頭段應該怎麼寫
寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素一:現象句
雅思寫作考題中會出現一個社會現象,考生的任務就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫,重述這個社會現象。 E.g.1
Nowadays we are procing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help rece the amount of rubbish proced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family proces a large amount of waste every week.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——套句+同義詞替換:more and more= a large amount of E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——
主被動之間的轉換:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同義詞的替換:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying 。
個人覺得,自己看書不如找老師點撥一下,可以省很大的力氣,愛預科老師點撥專業,雅思也有很多年的經驗了。
Ⅷ 雅思 作文 開頭段
ielts essay 的寫法,第一段5-6句.
第一句,HOOK(在你要寫的中心的基礎上,去找一個更高的話題來專寫.比如:你要寫工屬作年齡變化,可以寫社會的變化)
第二句--倒數第二句,用來連接HOOK和你的TOPIC SENTENSE.社會怎麼怎麼變,然後導致...總之就是從大到小.最後扯到你的TS.
最後一句,就是TS.這句是你全文的中心.不要寫得太復雜,用簡單,又明了的句子,讓別人一看就懂.可以用IT開頭的強調句.
最後一句,不一定要用連接詞,外國人的習慣,最後一句就是TS.如果要用的話可以AS THE RESULT,然後TS.
Ⅸ 雅思英語作文的開頭方式都有哪些
雅思抄大作文開頭最實用寫法
Somepeople think that environmental problems are too big for indivials to dealwith. Others, however, think that each indivial should take some actions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
從這個考題題干中我們可以「提取」的名詞為:environmentalproblem; environment; environmental protection; indivial actions等。接下來我們就可以將這些詞作為主語來創造一個簡單句,用上篇講到的2種句式和思路,比如說我們選擇最後一個片語,然後使用主系表結構,從其影響的角度切入,就有了以下這個「草稿」句:Indivial actions seem insignificant.
Ⅹ 雅思作文的開頭結尾怎麼寫
雅思寫作對於雅思備考的同學來講都是一個不小的難點。俗話說「萬事開頭難」想要寫出一篇好的文章。寫好開頭段是很重要的。那麼雅思寫作開頭段怎麼寫呢?下面小編給大家分享關於雅思寫作開頭段的相關內容,希望可以幫到正在雅思備考的同學。
雅思寫作開頭段怎麼寫要素之一: Restatement of the Topic
(雅思寫作大作文的題目都會給出相關情景或話題,在首段中應先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。)
方法一:改寫。即按照雅思寫作題目所給的內容,用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍,千萬不能抄襲。但改一兩個詞不算改寫,一定要將整個表達方式改掉。
方法二:自己展開。即根據雅思寫作題目所談到的話題內容適當展開,簡單談談目前社會中的情況怎樣。但不要談得太多,更不能偏題。這需要大量的雅思寫作輔導,大家在私底下要勤加練習。
雅思寫作開頭段怎麼寫要素之二:Express Your Opinion (雅思寫作大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you
agree or disagree 或 what do you think
等,因此必須與之相對應地在首段中表明你的觀點。)
方法一:中立觀點。可以說某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點有人同意又有人不同意等等。較好的表達如I
partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
方法二:一邊倒觀點。即直截了當地說贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點。
方法三:不表達觀點。即不在首段明確地表達自己的觀點,但必須要先分析一下,在末尾一段表明觀點。
方法一在雅思寫作考試中用得比較多;方法二適中;方法三用得比較少。
雅思寫作開頭段怎麼寫要素之三:No Excessive Background
(雅思寫作大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可,不要寫過多不相乾的展開內容,更不要將理由寫進去,否則主體段便沒內容寫了。)