雅思英語作文我的老師

1. 老師幫我改下雅思作文~~~

1 some people think schools should only teach students academic knowledge. Others think they should also teach students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sending children to school is a common phenomenon for parents, especially /for those in /a competed/competitive society. Ecation, the main aim of schools, is necessary for students because it allows you to get/get access to high degrees and /well-paid jobs. Some indivials think/maintain that schooling only refers to academic knowledge. By contrast, others maintain/insist that書面語加上that ecation in school is not only /to teach knowledge but also /to teach/develop judgment. I would like/口語化 to support the latter view. I am supportive of the latter point of view.

2 Environmental problems should be solved with international efforts instead of the effort of one or a few countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Various kinds of pollution are raising countless environmental problems. Since the 20th century, there has been much dispute/debate over which is a better solution for the environmental issues, a worldwide cooperation or some independent endeavors to cope with the problems (government should resolve problems with international effort) 不要用原文，換句話說用自己的話 rather than the awareness of few indivials and the helps of few countries. I totally disagree /with 哪個？this point of view.

3 The life expectancy is longer in many countries. However, there is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
With the sustainable development advancing at a staggering rate, people』s life qualities /has improve/d a lot/substantially. Young people always meet??? their long life expectancy but ignore those elderly people who /are lack of /public concerns. In this essay, I will discuss this situation and find solutions to cornbat???.

有進步。第一段盡量寫得豐滿點，結構可以是背景+雙方觀點轉述（你的話）+你的立場觀點。注意用詞，最好要少用口語化詞彙，多用書面語。盡量在第一段就展現你的長句和較高級詞彙。

還有不懂，hi我，繼續加油!

2. 雅思作文(我可愛的老師)

我「可愛」的老師
我們學校里有一群「可愛」的老師，現在我們就去看看吧！
（1）考試瞎扣分。
真可謂：考考考，老師的法寶，分分分，學生的命根！你瞧，這道題是這樣的：請將每節車廂里所裝的貨物按從重到輕的順序排列（其實就是比大小）（12分，整道題就只有12分！！！~）我就錯了後面兩道題又不是錯在中間，按道理來說應該只扣後面兩道題的分，可老師卻把整道題的12分都扣光了，你們說說看，現在的老師真是越來越不懂扣分的「藝術」了！
（2）嚴厲
現在的老師真是老虎的屁股----摸不得！稍有不慎，就會被罰「三篇作文」「抄課文五篇」「數學題100道」「跑操場10圈」……。老師為了教好學生真是不擇手段，什麼事做得出來，對學生們「狠下毒手」搞的學生們個個叫苦連天，連大氣都不敢出，只要考試分數沒到老師心中的分數線，老師就一個電話打到家長手裡，這樣學生就免不了一陣「暴風雨」的考驗啦！~真是「嚴師出高徒」呀！
（3）拖堂
「丁零零……」只聽見一陣清脆的下課鈴，把我們這些搖搖欲睡的學生都打興奮了，可老師卻視而不見，還在黑板上奮筆疾書，急的我們團團轉眼看就要熬到下課了，「丁零零……一陣上課鈴又猶如晴天霹靂，把我們給打暈了，連廁所都不能上，水都不能喝，況且這也不科學呀！
看！現在的老師多「可愛」！

3. 考雅思我們考場那個監考老師全講英語的,怎麼回事

我考了4次雅思了，其中三次都是中國老師監考，只有一次是外國考官監考。
但是有一點可以肯定的是，不管是什麼國家的，在考試過程中只說英文，是不允許說中文的。
所以親~這是正常的！

4. 求求求求懂雅思的好心的老師幫我細批一下這篇小作文 100分懸賞 加100分附加

The table illustrates the figure on how much consumer spend on different aspects in five SEPARATED countries in 2002.

The expenditure on food/drink/tobacco takes up 32.14% of total (expenditure) in TURKEY. But,while that makes up about 15.77%. As for the other four countries ,all of their figure IS between rough 30% to 15%.

9% of total expenditure is distributed into clothing/footwear in Italy . However, that OCCUPIES only 5.4% in Span. The figure for the rest three countries ,similarly,STANDS at around 6%.

Turkish spend 4.35% of their total expenditure on leisure/ecation ,which is followed by that of Sweden (3.22%) , Italy(3.20%) and Ireland (2.21%). The figure for Span only REPRESENTS 1.98%
此文已拜讀，總體不錯，細節略有不足。大寫之處已經改過，僅供參考！

5. 老師這是我的雅思大作文 剛才那個地方打不了這么多字 求指點！多謝老師

有些語法錯誤，比如第二段serve應為serving；第三段倒數第二段course應加復數而最後一行內not only後面要倒容裝，but後就不必倒裝；第四段there are 應另起一句；最後一段第一行much應該為many.
整體論述與用詞都比較平穩，算不得出彩，得分應在5.5-6之間，算是中等分數，雅思寫作與口語兩項一向不易得高分
僅供參考~

6. 我在環球上雅思的時候老師總會說大作文利弊類要寫essay map，可是什麼是essay map啊。

essay map的意思是指作文提綱吧，至於小作文大約多久沒考過流程圖，這個就不知道了

7. 「我的英文名字是奧斯卡，是我初中的雅思老師起的」如何翻譯急！！！

My name is Oscar, which is given by my ielts teacher in my junior high.

8. 求解雅思考試為什麼平時我的英語能力很強作文在班裡當範文念口語都是被老師表揚，結果考出來的分數及其的

你是哪幾個部分極其的低，如果聽力閱讀寫作口語都低那肯定是你自己英語實力的問題。
你平時作文肯定沒有時間限制，還可以查詞查句子，寫出來再好碰上考雅思也沒用。
口語。。你是被外教誇獎么？不是的話，中國老師誇你口語好有什麼用。
作文口語都是很主觀的，不是實力很強的話是不能肯定拿到高分的。
有疑問給我留言。

請採納，謝謝

9. 老師幫我改下雅思作文，謝謝~~

6 All the new buildings in cities and towns should be built in the traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countless buildings are built in modern society with the/a significant progress of architecture. A host of traditional buildings are razed focally/with force ?? by government. Some people maintain that modern buildings should be constructed in style like those demolished buildings. (While new buildings replace old buildings. )??I oppose this point of view.

7 The proction and transportation of food has been greatly changed by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today, food instry has /been totally transformed by technological innovations. Mass proction and flexible transportation depend on those new technolog/ies. I hold the opinion that it has both advantages and disadvantages in these/this process.

8 The government should stop putting money in self-defense and use the money to improve public facilities and help the poor people instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Crimes /rates are take up frequently/soaring recently. (Criminals search holes/leaks of public facilities in order to commit crimes for profits.)/chinglish Some people think government should not spending/spend heavily on self-defense but /should focus on facilities which are not improved/underdeveloped and /help those people who live in poverty. I agree with this point of view.

有很大進步，但用大詞一定要有十足把握再用，多看看這個詞在字典上是怎麼用的，多准備些常用的形容詞和副詞，了解清楚其具體用法，在不同場合下都可以用，還是要注意小細節啊。