雅思英語寫敘述的開頭
雅思大作文開頭要素一： Restatement of the Topic
大作文的題目都會給出相關情景或話題，在首段中應先對題目中的情景或話題進行展開。
方法一 : 改寫。即按照題目所給的內容，用不同的表達方法重新寫一遍，千萬不能抄襲。
注意 ：改一兩個詞不算改寫，一定要將整個表達方式改掉。
方法二：自己展開。即根據題目所談到的話題內容適當展開，簡單談談目前社會中的情況怎樣。
注意： 不要談的太多，更加不能偏題，與題目話題毫不相干。
雅思大作文開頭要素二： Express Your Opinion
大作文的題目中一般會問你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等，因此必須與之相對應的在首段中表明你的觀點。
方法一：中立觀點(即辯證表達)。即可以說某種做法既有好又有壞;對某種觀點又有人同意又有人不同意等等。
說明： 比較好的表達如：I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
不要說：some people agree while others don'nt agree.這可不是中立地表達自己的觀點。
所謂中立，其實是辯證的關系!老外看問題比較辯證，一般不會一棍子打死。
方法二：一邊倒觀點。即直截了當的說贊成某個觀點或不贊成某個觀點等等。
方法三：不表觀點。即不在首段明確的表達自己的觀點，但必須有引出下文之類話來作銜接。
說明： 方法一在考試中用的最多;方法二適中;方法三用的比較少(不表觀點，但必須表明要先分析一下，在最後一段表明觀點)。
雅思大作文開頭要素三： No Excessive Background
大作文首段中只要涵蓋以上兩要素即可，不要寫過多不相乾的展開內容，更不要將理由(即主體段的分論點)寫進去，否則主體段就沒內容寫了。
B. 雅思英語作文的開頭方式都有哪些
雅思抄大作文開頭最實用寫法
Somepeople think that environmental problems are too big for indivials to dealwith. Others, however, think that each indivial should take some actions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
從這個考題題干中我們可以「提取」的名詞為：environmentalproblem; environment; environmental protection; indivial actions等。接下來我們就可以將這些詞作為主語來創造一個簡單句，用上篇講到的2種句式和思路，比如說我們選擇最後一個片語，然後使用主系表結構，從其影響的角度切入，就有了以下這個「草稿」句：Indivial actions seem insignificant.
C. 雅思寫作7+的開頭段到底應該怎麼寫
教雅思寫作這么多年，經歷了所謂的「模版時代」再到「擺脫模板時代」，雅思寫作無論是判分標准還是難度上與過去相比的確有很大的變化，當然最直接的就是「分數是越來越難拿」。不誇張地講，有相當大比例的烤鴨們寫作幾次奮力屠鴨還是停止在5.5分。經過對大量學員試卷或作業批改分析，目前還是很多學員對所謂「高分模板」有強烈的依賴感。誠然，「高分句型」固然不錯，但並不是說將它們隨意用在邏輯上根本行不通的作文段落中去!除此之外，我還發現中國的烤鴨們在雅思寫作時依然秉承著很多過去的雅思寫作模式，例如：開頭段(intro)一般至少寫三句話(背景，轉述題目和個人觀點)同時很多學生認為雅思寫作的開頭段字數控制在50個左右，也就是說開頭段的長度超過主體段(main
body)。事實上是這樣嗎，今天喜哥來給大家說說7+雅思開頭段的那點事兒。每個人的情況不同，也可以登錄文都國際教育官網進行一對一的咨詢。
首先，開頭段至少寫三句話的這種說法本身就是對學生灌輸性的錯誤。西方國家的寫作對開頭段實際上沒有明確的規定，很多隻要你把你的個人觀點表示清晰即可。
For example：
Some people believe young alts should undertake unpaid work to
help people in the community. Do you think it will bring more drawbacks
to the community and young alts than benefits?
一看就是典型的「利弊題」，既然是問做「unpaid work」的利與弊，為了人生觀和個人價值觀，以及弘揚「正能量」肯定會選擇「利大於弊」。那麼既然態度這么鮮明，開頭段不如直接了當一些，給考官眼前一亮的感覺。
Intro：
I definitely subscribe to the notion that young people should do
voluntary or unpaid work to give a hand to the people in the community,
because this practice will bring about twofold bonus.
一句話表明態度就好，尤其是definitely一詞表明態度的堅定。
其次，我對雅思考生常提到的開頭段不要多於50個字或不要超過主體段的長度說法感到很是驚訝，如果是老師提到的，那麼這也太中國式的本本主義了甚至是誤人子弟。好的雅思作文開頭段在西方是沒有對長短或字數要求。再說一次，只要把你要說的觀點說清楚就好了。當然不要啰嗦。
For example：
Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries
or indivials to tackle. We have arrived at a point in time where the
only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
環保類的作文一直是雅思寫作中的重頭戲，本篇就是一個典型雅思辯論類。由於題目中出現了絕對詞「only」，我相信烤鴨們已看出這是一邊倒式文章，OK，那麼開頭段就一定在「50」字以內嗎?
Intro：
Environmental problems have reached such proportions that people
feel international organizations must be set up to intervene in world
affairs to resolve these problems. Whether this will resolve the problem
which is very unlikely as international organizations are just an
extension of human behavior. That is, if human conflicts cannot be
resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the
international level. Nevertheless, international organizations do
attract attention to the growing problem of pollution and the
destruction of the environment. However, although I respect the aims of
the international community to resolve the issue of environmental
pollution and support their cause, I do not believe it is the best or
only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of
what is needed in a global initiative.
這樣的一個近135個字數的開頭段，思路清晰，觀點明確整篇下來照樣可以拿到7.5分以上。
D. 如何寫好雅思寫作開頭段
俗話說「一天之計在於晨，一年之計在於春」。雅思寫作的開頭段也有相同的道理，寫好開頭段對寫作整體的得分有舉足輕重的作用。下面根據自己多年的教學經驗，給出了寫好雅思作文開頭的幾個簡單方法：
很多國內的考生受到寫中文作文或者傳統英語教學的影響，寫一篇文章的開頭段時總是想要盡力抓住考官的眼球，不停地擺弄自己還不成熟的詞彙和句型，結果非但沒有得到想要的分數，反被考官倒打一耙。那麼我們要如何在最短的時間內，以最簡單以及最能得分的方式寫出好的作文開頭段呢?
其實我們可以把雅思寫作題目中的提問方式分成四個大類：觀點類(opinion essay)、討論類(discussion essay)、優劣勢類(advantage and disadvantage essay)和報告類(report)。每一種提問方式的題目都有自己不同的開頭段寫作方法。
Part 1 Opinion Essay
觀察觀點類題目的特徵，我們不難發現，此類題型的特徵是題目有且只有一個觀點。而題目要求我們回答的是「同意」或「不同意」的觀點。所以只要確定好自己的觀點，開頭段就可以寫出來。例如：
Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.
Do you agree or disagree?
如果，我們選擇同意此觀點，可以根據「背景句+直接轉述題目+個人觀點」的公式。
These days,it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.(背景句)But some people argue that leading an urban life would proce negative influences on people』s health.(直接轉述題目)Personally,I agree with this idea.(個人觀點)
如果選擇不同意題目觀點，則可以用「although」的讓步狀語從句進行改寫，得到：
These days,it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.(背景句)Although some people argue that leading an urban life would proce negative influences on people』s health,(although+直接轉述題目)personally,I do not agree with this idea.(個人觀點)
Part 2 Discussion Essay
觀察討論類的題目，可以發現，這樣的題目會有兩個觀點，並且題目要求「討論雙方觀點」和「給出自己的觀點」。這樣的題目中，其實只用在開頭段中寫出背景句和轉述雙方觀點就好了，至於個人的觀點，可以放到personal idea的段落中。如：
Some people think citizens should be responsible for their own health costs.Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
這個題目的開頭段就可以寫為：
People in some countries are paying an increasing amount of money for seeing a doctor,even for a minor illness.(背景句)But,still,some people assert that indivials themselves are supposed to pay for such fees.(一方觀點)However,other people disagree and suggest that it is the government』s responsibility to undertake the health costs for its citizens.(另一方觀點)
Part 3 Advantages&Disadvantage Essay
優劣勢的題目，一般而言都會給出一個現象或者是趨勢，這又剛好和我們開頭段中的「背景句」吻合了，所以在優劣勢文章的開頭段的時候就沒有必要再寫背景句了，直接轉述題目就可以了。但是要表達出自己的「優大於劣」或者「劣大於優」的觀點，只需要用一句話就搞定了。如：
Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores.
Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
開頭段可以寫為：
These days,it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores.Although some problems would occur as this trend continues,I believe such development brings more benefits.
Part 4 Report
其實report最簡單，因為通常題目和優劣勢文章一樣，會給出一個現象或趨勢，所以開頭段的組成部分就只有改寫題目。如：
In many parts of the world,children and teenagers are committing more crimes.
Why is this happening?
What are the possible solutions to solve this problem?
開頭段可以寫為：
These days,it is common to see that the rate of youth crime has been increasing dramatically all over the globe and it is a most worrying issue of modern society.
E. 雅思寫作怎麼開頭
您好!關於如何提高寫作開頭為大家介紹一些方法，開頭篇很多同學寫開頭都陷入了一種典型的模板化趨勢，我們先來看一道2012年的真題：
Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each
town.
While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can
obtain
information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own
opinion.
拿到這個題目，不少烤鴨筆下的開頭是這樣的：
Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet
at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each
town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free
libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since
people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in
favor of the former view.
不知道有沒有同學「躺槍」，寫這種開頭的同學，分數絕對不可能高於5.5，整個開頭幾乎可以說是在「自殺」，除了套模板，就是照搬原題，考官拿到這種開頭是絕對不會有好印象的。
那真正好的開頭是什麼樣子的呢?好的開頭又好在哪兒呢?我們一起來研究一篇劍8的TEST1中劍橋考官的給出的範文，先來看一下題目：
Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good
members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn
this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官範文的開頭是這樣的：
A child』s ecation has never been about learning information and basic
skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good
members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents
alone.
從這篇考官範文的開頭，我們不難看出，它並沒有模式化的「社會背景引入---提出正方觀點---再提出反方觀點---最後陳述自己觀點」，而是只作了兩件事
一：給核心名詞下定義。
在本文中，即是給child』s ecation下了個定義，談了一下在作者看來，child』s ecation是什麼樣的。
二：表明觀點或立場。
在本文中，即闡明孩子的教育問題不僅僅只關乎家長。 所以，好的開頭可以「無模板，但有邏輯。」
翻翻劍橋雅思考官的範文，我們會發現很多考官在開頭段都只幹了兩件事：下定義+
表明觀點，或者是引出背景+表明觀點，甚至很多考官只幹了一件事，即引出背景，僅此而已。
F. 雅思寫作小作文備考：開頭段應該如何寫
在雅思寫作的小作文部分里，往往我們可以採納「老三段」式的寫法，以不變應萬變，不論是線圖，柱圖，表格，餅圖，亦或是流程圖，我們都可以採用此種方式完成雅思小作文的寫作。
那麼老三段式的經典寫法中，強調著第一段「開門見山」介紹出本文討論內容，即改寫題目。將必要內容進行改寫，這樣可以獲得高分效應。
第二段「豐實的內容」盡量多地將圖表中的信息表達明確，不時的需要我們之前總結的常用表達(敬請參見前幾篇文章關於雅思作文經典表達介紹文章)。第三段也就是文章的最後一段，對全文進行一個總結概括即可。
本文將著眼於介紹雅思作文開頭段的常用高頻高分表達，希望對同學們准備雅思有所幫助。也請同學們積極准備!
五分表達：
The chart depicts (that)…該圖呈現出…
The chart shows (that)…
The figures/statistics show (that)…
The diagram reveals …
The chart illustrates (that)…
六分表達：
The graph provides some interesting data regarding…該圖為我們提供了有關…有趣數據。
The graph describes the trend of …這個圖描述了…的趨勢
As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the chart/diagram/chart/table…如圖所示…
According to the chart …根據這些表格…
As is shown in the table…如圖所示…
This table shows the changing proportion of A and B from … to …該表格描述了…年到…年之間A與B的比例關系。
This graph,presented in the chart,shows the general trend in…該圖呈現了…總的趨勢。
As can be seen from the graph, the two graphs show the flutuation of…如圖所示，兩條曲線描述了…的波動情況。
高分表達：
From the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that…從圖表中我們可以很清楚的看到…
The chart shows the changes in the number of …over the period from…to…該表格描述了在…年到…年之間…數量的變化。
G. 怎麼寫雅思寫作小作文開頭段
以下四復種方法可以成功改寫雅思小製作文一切開頭段，但要注意的是並不是所有的方法可以同時使用，要培養考生自身的靈活性，根據所需來運用技法。
一篇文章，開頭段非常重要，古話說：好的開頭，成功的一半。雅思小作文寫作也是一樣的，所以本篇內容將會具體指導大家怎樣圓滿地，不留任何漏洞地完成小作文開頭段的創作。
最為簡單快速的開頭改寫，因為這種方法不需要考生動腦子，方便易學，省去了絞盡腦汁用中式英語替換文章詞句的麻煩。
雅思小作文開頭段的寫作技巧分成4種：
1， 同義詞的替換及多餘詞彙刪除
2， 遇到量詞、變化、原因、時間等詞(quantity, number,amount, change, reason,
cause,time)變化為狀語從句形式(howmany, how much, how….change, why,when);避免組合名詞帶來的不規范
3， 組合圖表造成的題目過長、過復雜，可以拆分為the 1stchart，the 2nd chart
4， 用圖表中的title替換題目內容(圖表中沒有title時不適用)
H. 怎樣才能寫出好的雅思作文開頭
雅思寫作如何在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要保證質量。在雅思大作文中，很多同學只注重主體段的練習和論點論據的提煉，很少有精力關注開頭段。作為文章給考官的第一印象，其實雅思作文的開頭段更為重要。如何寫好開頭段，雅思小編為大家詳解。
大作文開頭技巧：
1) 拋棄冗長模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的說法或許有些誇張，但也在一定程度上反映了考官對於模板的深惡痛絕。其實模板套句並不是不能用，而是要運用靈活，不留痕跡。在很多文章中，開頭結尾的兩個復雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡單句和基礎語法錯誤的映襯下格外醒目，這種稍微有些英語知識的人都會識破的小聰明，更不可能逃過考官的眼睛。
建議學生們積累一些簡單實用的基本套句，如：
我們的生活已離不開…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我們隨處都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成為一個不斷增長的趨勢。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越來越多的人選擇…/傾向於認為…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已經不再罕見
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人們開始意識到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在幾十年前，…很少有人會想像到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 開頭具體化
具體化的開頭是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特點，即 "要讓考官覺得你這個開頭是完全針對題目寫出來的"，要做到這一點，就必須緊緊圍繞話題展開。比如下面這道題目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(開頭段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(開頭段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(開頭段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
開頭段一為典型的模板式開頭，廢話多，與話題關系小，毫無疑問會引起考官的反感。開頭段二雖然也使用了模板句， 但運用較靈活，不足之處是背景句沒有緊扣話題，雖然談到科技影響生活但沒有具體到'relationship'。開頭段三語言雖簡單但緊緊圍繞話題'relationships'展開，靈活的使用了一些簡短的小套句，而這樣具體化的開頭最受考官青睞。
3) 簡單即是美
雅思作文考的不是文學修養而是學術寫作能力，即如何運用語言有效的表達觀點證明觀點，因此，簡單明了的開頭會給考官留下效率高的好印象，而且簡單的開頭段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也節省了時間。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最後，寫作重在練習，所謂熟能生巧，開頭段的構思亦是一樣。
以上就是雅思大作文開頭段怎樣寫才能出彩的詳細內容，在了解之後，雅思考生要多多參考學習，定能節節高升。
I. 雅思大作文如何寫好開頭段
雅思寫作如何在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要保證質量。在雅思大作文中，很多同學只注重主體段的練習和論點論據的提煉，很少有精力關注開頭段。作為文章給考官的第一印象，其實雅思作文的開頭段更為重要。如何寫好開頭段，雅思小編為大家詳解。
大作文開頭技巧：
1) 拋棄冗長模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的說法或許有些誇張，但也在一定程度上反映了考官對於模板的深惡痛絕。其實模板套句並不是不能用，而是要運用靈活，不留痕跡。在很多文章中，開頭結尾的兩個復雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡單句和基礎語法錯誤的映襯下格外醒目，這種稍微有些英語知識的人都會識破的小聰明，更不可能逃過考官的眼睛。
建議學生們積累一些簡單實用的基本套句，如：
我們的生活已離不開…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我們隨處都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成為一個不斷增長的趨勢。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越來越多的人選擇…/傾向於認為…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已經不再罕見
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人們開始意識到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在幾十年前，…很少有人會想像到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 開頭具體化
具體化的開頭是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特點，即 "要讓考官覺得你這個開頭是完全針對題目寫出來的"，要做到這一點，就必須緊緊圍繞話題展開。比如下面這道題目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(開頭段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(開頭段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(開頭段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
開頭段一為典型的模板式開頭，廢話多，與話題關系小，毫無疑問會引起考官的反感。開頭段二雖然也使用了模板句， 但運用較靈活，不足之處是背景句沒有緊扣話題，雖然談到科技影響生活但沒有具體到'relationship'。開頭段三語言雖簡單但緊緊圍繞話題'relationships'展開，靈活的使用了一些簡短的小套句，而這樣具體化的開頭最受考官青睞。
3) 簡單即是美
雅思作文考的不是文學修養而是學術寫作能力，即如何運用語言有效的表達觀點證明觀點，因此，簡單明了的開頭會給考官留下效率高的好印象，而且簡單的開頭段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也節省了時間。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最後，寫作重在練習，所謂熟能生巧，開頭段的構思亦是一樣。