雅思英語作文詞彙短語
『壹』 求一篇雅思的英語作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文,相信對你有用,你也可以去看看其它的範文。
『貳』 修改英語作文!ielts
我考過兩次雅思,作文第一次7.5,第二次7。你這個作文問題挺多的,語法就有不少毛病,軟體翻譯的?結構也不合理,還跑題,題目是是否應該按照傳統模式建房子,你寫的更多是古代建築的好處和缺點。
先說結構吧。你贊成傳統建築模式的觀點,就應該用大量篇幅寫你為什麼贊成。中間三段應該是前兩段寫傳統建築模式的優點,第三段寫傳統建築模式的一些不足。
開頭寫得不好。我覺得還是應套用模板開頭。
The issue whether we should build our buildings in traditional styles is a complex and controversial one. Some people believe that..., while other people assert that.... As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. (兩個省略號處分別寫兩種觀點)
這段內容還行,但語法太差了。你說了埃及古金字塔的好處,最後還要拐到要求的話題上,說出按古建築模式建房子對現代經濟的影響,即括弧中這句。
It is indisputable that the traditional architecture style and ancient buildings are a civilized symbol for the country .Take Egypt for example,the pyramid is a mystery and precious treasure, symbolizing the witness of ancient Egyptians. In addition ,traditional building structure is not only a symbol but also a platform , on which tourists and local people can communicate with each other. (So, if we build our buidings in traditional styles, more tourists will be attracted to our country, which will greatly increase foreign currency and improve local economy. )
接下來一段應繼續寫傳統建築模式的好處,但可以不用像上面一段那麼多。可以寫很多人喜歡傳統建築的風格,那些建築看起來賞心悅目,建造更多傳統建築物能提高居民的滿意度什麼的。樓主自己寫寫這段吧,當然也可以寫傳統建築其他方面的好處。
這一段該寫缺點了。缺點不宜寫太多,不然豈不是否定自己的觀點了?
On the other hand ,however, some traditional buildings are not tall enough to accommodate many residents as modern skyscrapers are. some people believe that if residents live in morden tall buildings , they can breath fresh air as well as enjoy the comfortable atmosphere .Moreover, it is better to select steel rather than stone to build our buildings for the reason that steel materials can bear a heavier weight of floors and walls.
總算到結尾了。。。。
In conclusion, though traditionally-built architecture has some disadvantages, it plays a great role to reveal local culture and ancient civilization. And I believe that the advantage is well worth the shortage. So we should build our buildings in traditional styles.
樓主這篇作文啊。。。除了字數多,其他真是亂七八糟啊。。。當然我寫的也不完美,大家批判著看。
『叄』 雅思英語作文2篇,要求每篇250字左右。
作文需要好好練習的
『肆』 雅思英語作文的開頭方式都有哪些
雅思抄大作文開頭最實用寫法
Somepeople think that environmental problems are too big for indivials to dealwith. Others, however, think that each indivial should take some actions.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
從這個考題題干中我們可以「提取」的名詞為:environmentalproblem; environment; environmental protection; indivial actions等。接下來我們就可以將這些詞作為主語來創造一個簡單句,用上篇講到的2種句式和思路,比如說我們選擇最後一個片語,然後使用主系表結構,從其影響的角度切入,就有了以下這個「草稿」句:Indivial actions seem insignificant.
『伍』 雅思閱讀寫作技巧,英語作文實在讓我頭疼~希望能夠得到高手指點~
雅思寫作備考是所有雅思考試項目中耗時最多也是最不容易在短期內出效果的,所以大家在備考自己雅思寫作考試的時候,一定要掌握一些雅思寫作備考策略。
雅思寫作備考策略一:積累寫作詞彙的語料庫
備考階段,要有意識地積累特殊的寫作詞彙。
雅思考試理論上要准備8000詞彙,但是寫作的核心詞彙只有幾百個,卻可以應付200多個雅思作文題目,所以我們要扎實地積累自己對於每一個給定話題的語料庫。比如我們寫肥胖問題,需要分析肥胖的原因和危害以及如何減肥,這時候你不但要有觀點,還有懂得遺傳基因、營養過剩、飲食習慣不良、缺乏鍛煉,有氧運動等相關詞彙的英文表達方式。雅思經常考的一些文化類、環保性、犯罪類的題材。我們就應當有針對性的准備文化、環保、犯罪類的詞彙,以建立自己的寫作詞彙語料庫。
雅思寫作備考策略二:積累分支觀點支持句
面對茫茫題海,許多人感到茫然不知所措,全部話題都去准備,不切實際,時間和精力不夠,不全面准備,心中又沒底。這個棘手的問題如何解決?
Martin老師建議是:第一,多積累主題觀點句以及分支觀點的支持句,多多積累和豐富自己對於給定話題的觀點,使觀點從無到有,從有到多,從多到精。第二,善於從不同的話題中找到有共性的通用論據。比如該不該拿小動物做實驗,該不該建動物園,該不該吃它們的肉用他們的皮做衣服,這些問題的論據是可以通用的——動物是人類的好朋友;應該保護瀕臨滅絕的小動物;動物的生存權利不應該被剝奪。比如犯罪類話題——校園暴力、女性犯罪、青少年犯罪、吸毒、賭博,它們的根源,危害和解決途徑都是大同小異的。以上是新~動 態的Martin老師整理的雅思閱讀寫作技巧之備考策略。
『陸』 英語作文,要求使用高級句式,高端詞彙(雅思水平)不要高考範文那種低水平的,限時明天中午,感謝
我依然飛翔
即使翅膀斷了,心也要飛翔。
——題記
無盡的黑夜侵蝕著我那無盡的愁思,周圍是可怕的靜寂,我起身來到窗前。
風很冷,繞過起伏的窗簾,刺透了我麻木的神經,我哆嗦了一下,縮了縮脖子。外面的燈光將整個院子充斥成白晝,半禿的樹在瑟瑟秋風中顫抖,幾片枯黃的樹葉頑強地守著崗位,又終於堅持不住,一頭栽下來,飄然落在冰冷的水泥板上。
我嘆口氣,為那片悄然消逝的生命,更為自己無地自容的成績。我不明白為什麼上帝給人們勝利和歡樂的禮物時,後面總要拴上失敗和苦澀,我總是擺脫不了失敗雙手的侵噬,猶如風雨中哭泣的百合花,淡薄了對陽光的渴望和心中那份持久的傲世之氣。多少次苦苦尋求,又多少次茫然失落,夢猶如雪片漂灑的精靈,心已冷,意迷茫……
深夜的風無力地掀動著俯卧在地面上的枯葉,翻動,再翻動,一直到大樹的根下——那是生育樹葉的一棵樹。我忽然懂得:失去意味著新的獲得,衰落意味著新的開始。一片黃葉枯了,爛了,受侵蝕,受寒凍,當春暖花開時,它將是層層濃蔭中的一片。看到這里,我不覺釋然了。
失敗是成功的因素,沒有它,不會使你耳邊警鍾長鳴,失敗又是生命的重負,長久地背著它,跋涉的腳上會多磨出幾個不應有的血泡。朦朧中我感悟到風雨之後的陽光。「人生自信二百年,會當擊水三千年」!讓灑脫與風雨同行吧。只要青春還在,我就不會悲哀,只要陽光還在,我就不會孤獨,不會停歇,縱使陷身茫茫沙漠,希望的綠洲還在,我心依然飛翔。想到這里,我不禁笑了。
抬頭,不知何時,天上多了幾雙眨動的眼睛,黑暗過後必是黎明,陰霾散盡,依然是彩虹,狂沙淘盡方得金,揚起自信的風帆,迎難而上吧!別因一時的荒蕪而永別了心靈的田野。
帶著微笑出發,即使翅膀斷了,心也要飛翔。
放棄也是一種美麗
與其抱殘守缺,不如選擇果斷放棄。——題記
當我仰望燦爛的星空,用冷靜思索喧囂的人生,用激動開啟思想的大門,我不禁這樣想:有時候,應該學會選擇放棄,因為,放棄也是一種美麗。
抱殘守缺是苛求者臉上醜陋的皺紋,而果斷放棄是學者們臉上淺淺的酒窩。伴隨著臉上甜甜的酒窩,我們應該學會選擇放棄。
有這樣一件事,一位老人在火車行駛的途中,不小心把鞋弄掉了一隻,人們正在為他惋惜,而老人卻果斷地把第二隻鞋從窗口扔了出去。人們在驚詫的同時更加贊賞老人選擇的果斷放棄。
學會選擇放棄吧,不必用殘碎的石頭添補不盡完美的人生大廈。當你遇到一個毫無意義的問題,請選擇放棄……
山之所以成為山,是因為選擇放棄了平坦,水之所以成為水,是因為它選擇了放棄停駐。只有懂得學會選擇放棄的人才明白,山,如何站成一種尊嚴,水,如何淌成一脈智慧。
選擇放棄吧,俄國詩人普希金曾經說過:「我們渴望成功,但在成功的同時,必須有所放棄,讓失去變為可愛。」
有時失去並不是一種悲傷,而有可能就是幸運;有時失去,並不是一種憂愁,而恰恰就是一種歡樂。我們並不排斥執著,但同時也要學會放棄,讓我們學會選擇放棄吧,因為,放棄也是一種美麗。
只有學會選擇放棄,你的前途才會更加光明!
戰勝自己(4)
藍色的蛹,束縛著青春,帶來無限掙扎的傷痛;金色的蝴蝶,翩翩起舞,為您訴說破繭而出的新生的喜悅……
——題記
藍色的蛹
人們說我是一個「不合群」的病孩子,我自己認為也是。我不喜歡嘈雜的人群,我不喜歡別人無意闖進我的生活,我只喜歡靜靜地看著人流,無風吹過的心畔,激不起陣陣的漣漪,惟獨自己孤芳自賞。逐漸地,我為自己編織著藍色的蛹,含淚訴說著青春的傷痛,把自己重重包圍,只有藍色的憂郁陪伴著我……
破繭的掙扎
在藍色的蛹里,暗無天日,我見不著光明,看不到希望。我極力掙扎,孤獨感籠罩著我。我的心蠢蠢欲動了,我渴望破繭後的新生,渴望去外面的世界再次見到新生的太陽。可是我又害怕著畏縮在角落裡。我是如此矛盾,我渴望新生,卻害怕破繭後陽光的刺痛。青春,就是如此的神秘,它引領著人們走向成熟。強烈的新生慾望,使我破繭而出,走向光明……
金色的蝴蝶
破繭新生的蝴蝶,翩翩起舞。我不再孤獨,我的生命中再次點燃了愛和希望的燈盞,我勇敢地奔向藍天,在花叢中飛越,享受著陽光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飛向青春的絢爛……
左手青春,右手年華!青春是破繭而出的新生。沖破青春束縛的我,也如此美麗迷人!
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