雅思英語大作文的段落第一句
① 雅思大作文首段怎麼寫
比如這道題目:
越來越多的公司領導是老年人,你覺得好還是不好?
運用因果邏輯轉述題目所構成的開頭段為:
因為老年人經驗比較豐富,越來越多的公司領導是老年人。然而我反對這種觀點,並認為年輕人比較合適。
這種開頭方式有兩個好處:首先可以擺脫套句嫌疑,其次很容易在考場上想到開頭段的內容,節省開篇時間。
每個人的情況不同,也可以登錄文都國際教育官網進行一對一的咨詢。
當然,並不是所有題目都適合用因果關系來開頭,比如題目:
科學家和遊客都喜歡去偏遠的地方,你覺得好還是不好?
由於題目涉及到兩個主題,因此很難用一個原因解釋清楚,這種時候就可以採用第二種開頭方式:轉折方式,也就是盡管+但是。盡管後面接的是考生自己陳述的內容,但是後面接原題的改寫。我們試一下上面這道題:
開頭段:
盡管偏遠的自然環境充滿危險,但是科學家和遊客依然喜歡去這些地方。然而我反對這種行為。
再試一道題:
很多人覺得住在大城市對身體健康有害,你同意與否。
開頭段:
盡管大城市生活比較便捷,但還是有很多人覺得住在大城市對身體健康有害,我贊成這個觀點。
要注意背景句後一定要加上自己的觀點,直接表達同意與否,不需要再次陳述一遍題目。有些同學詞彙量不夠無法轉述題目,再次陳述題目就會有抄襲的嫌疑。
以上的題目都是陳述單一現象或觀點,雅思大作文還有一種題目是直接給出對比的雙方,比如這道題:
有些人覺得老年人更適合當領導,而有些人覺得年輕人更適合,你同意哪一種觀點?
這時候開頭段可以寫成:
盡管老年人比較固執,但是仍然有人認為老年人更適合當領導。我反對這種觀點並認為年輕人更適合這個角色。
這種開頭段可以在背景句中闡述一方觀點,在觀點句中闡述另一方觀點。
這里要注意,在雅思議論文中,如果題目中出現了雙方觀點,那麼無論你自己的觀點是什麼,你的行文中一定要涵蓋對雙方觀點的陳述。
當然,開頭段的寫作方式不僅僅「因為+所以」以及「盡管+但是」兩種方式。只要合乎邏輯,不抄襲題目,不用套句,怎樣的開頭段都可以。不過如果你還不會寫開頭段,這兩種方式是最容易上手並節省時間的,不妨試一試吧!
② 雅思寫作大作文開頭段應該怎麼寫
關於雅來思寫作大作文開源頭段應該怎麼寫的問題,首先要明白開頭也就是引言段的重要性。
1、俗話說,萬事開頭難。引言段可先通過對background 的描寫來引出話題。
2、總結歸納Background的寫作,認為應該從內容同句型上同時做到補充。下面先介紹下擴充背景句的方法:
1). 追根溯源法。即從題目給出的話題中找出這個現象產生的原因來擴展背景句。這種方法適合大多數的話題,考生要盡量在考前做練習,這樣在考試就可以得心應手了。
2). 重述法。即對關於這個話題的當前現狀的重述。
③ 雅思寫作大作文開頭段應該怎麼寫
寫好雅思大作文開頭段要素一:現象句
雅思寫作考題中會出現一個社會現象,考生的任務就是在自己文章的第一句話將之改寫,重述這個社會現象。 E.g.1
Nowadays we are procing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help rece the amount of rubbish proced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family proces a large amount of waste every week.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——套句+同義詞替換:more and more= a large amount of E.g.2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.
寫好雅思大作文開頭段總結——
主被動之間的轉換:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同義詞的替換:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven E.g.3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying 。
個人覺得,自己看書不如找老師點撥一下,可以省很大的力氣,愛預科老師點撥專業,雅思也有很多年的經驗了。
④ 跪求一個萬能的雅思大作文的開頭和結尾。
我來寫個吧
In the present age, ..... are playing significant roles in our lives(如果第一句寫社會背景想要介紹下不好的現象也可以這樣寫 In the present age, the issue of... is increasingly disturbing). But in the meantime, whether...(這個地方寫要辯論回的話題,改寫答下題目好了)has sparked much debate. Some people argue that.... while many other consider that... Personally, I am in favor of the former(前者) / the latter(後者)view.
結尾:
In summary, I would concede that...m even though..., Overall, I am convinced that... should...
⑤ 雅思大作文如何寫好開頭段
雅思寫作如何在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要保證質量。在雅思大作文中,很多同學只注重主體段的練習和論點論據的提煉,很少有精力關注開頭段。作為文章給考官的第一印象,其實雅思作文的開頭段更為重要。如何寫好開頭段,雅思小編為大家詳解。
大作文開頭技巧:
1) 拋棄冗長模板
"使用模板,一律四分"的說法或許有些誇張,但也在一定程度上反映了考官對於模板的深惡痛絕。其實模板套句並不是不能用,而是要運用靈活,不留痕跡。在很多文章中,開頭結尾的兩個復雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡單句和基礎語法錯誤的映襯下格外醒目,這種稍微有些英語知識的人都會識破的小聰明,更不可能逃過考官的眼睛。
建議學生們積累一些簡單實用的基本套句,如:
我們的生活已離不開…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我們隨處都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成為一個不斷增長的趨勢。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。
越來越多的人選擇…/傾向於認為…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。
…已經不再罕見
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。
人們開始意識到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。
在幾十年前,…很少有人會想像到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly e to the use of Internet)。
2) 開頭具體化
具體化的開頭是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特點,即 "要讓考官覺得你這個開頭是完全針對題目寫出來的",要做到這一點,就必須緊緊圍繞話題展開。比如下面這道題目:
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(開頭段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different indivials can hold various opinions e to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。
(開頭段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。
(開頭段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。
開頭段一為典型的模板式開頭,廢話多,與話題關系小,毫無疑問會引起考官的反感。開頭段二雖然也使用了模板句, 但運用較靈活,不足之處是背景句沒有緊扣話題,雖然談到科技影響生活但沒有具體到'relationship'。開頭段三語言雖簡單但緊緊圍繞話題'relationships'展開,靈活的使用了一些簡短的小套句,而這樣具體化的開頭最受考官青睞。
3) 簡單即是美
雅思作文考的不是文學修養而是學術寫作能力,即如何運用語言有效的表達觀點證明觀點,因此,簡單明了的開頭會給考官留下效率高的好印象,而且簡單的開頭段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也節省了時間。
例:
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最後,寫作重在練習,所謂熟能生巧,開頭段的構思亦是一樣。
⑥ 請問雅思小作文 和大作文 分別 大概寫到答題紙什麼位置 才夠字數。謝謝
你好,很高興為您解答:
寫作考試,時間也是60分鍾。題目有兩道, 易格在線雅思第一道是看圖說明(A類)或者書信(G類),要求150字,20分鍾;第二道是議論文或說明文(議論為主),要求250字,40分鍾。時間是合在一起的,最後一起收。最好在發卷子後先寫大作文(250字的),因為占的分值大,最後剩下的時間寫小作文。
寫作為一張8開寫作。
關於寫到答題紙什麼位置,這個要看考生的自己的寫字習慣了;但是一定要寫夠字數!
送你一個:(部分的)
英漢段落結構對比
由於英語和漢語的思維模式不同,人們寫作時,段落的結構組織、內容安排、語義層次發展等方面都會表現出很大的差異。其中最主要的差異是—在段落發展方面英語採用直線性思維,而漢語呈現出螺旋型思維模式。
漢語段落的語義發展是螺旋型的,也就是說,一個段落針對一個意思或幾個意思進行闡述,而這種闡述是順著思想自然發展的,如螺旋形式向前運動。在漢語段落中,主題句可有可無,段落的中心思想由讀者來體會。一個段落里包括的內容較多,甚至有的內容和段落中心思想沒有密切的關系,比如作者突發的感想。由於漢語文章的許多段落沒有主題句,一段里包括的內容觀點就沒有什麼限制了。在寫作過程中,作者對中心思想的發展是通過不斷重復來實現的。在一個段落中,前面已談論過的內容,後面還會提到,或強調,或藉以引出新的內容,所以說是螺旋式的。下面的例段就是典型的漢語段落:
偉大的精神方能造就偉大的人。 古往今來,凡成就一番事業者,無不有著巨大的精神力量作後盾。偉大的精神造就偉大的事業。 對一個人是這樣,對一個社會也是如此。不可想像,一個沒有精神追求的人可以成就一番事業。精神有著神奇的作用。它一旦被人民群眾所掌握就會變成巨大的物質力量。同時它也有之不可小視的銷蝕作用。 這些年,在社會政治生活中出現的忽視精神文明建設的傾向,在忽視精神的正效應的同時,無形中也助長了精神的負效應。 目前社會現實中一些人政治信念的淡漠,道德支柱的傾斜,價值追求的扭曲,精神世界的蒼白,行為方式的變態,日常生活中種種不文明,不道德的行為,社會上屢禁不止的腐敗現象,我們已經嘗夠了苦果。
在這一段例文中,「偉大的精神方能造就偉大的人」可以說是主題句。但是只有接下來第二句是直接說明這一點。而第三句馬上轉到精神與事業的關系方面:「偉大的精神造就偉大的事業」。接下的第四句「對一個人是這樣,對一個社會也是如此」使讀者期待作者從個人和社會兩方面來說明這一點。但接下來的三句作者只說明對個人的作用,而沒有對社會作用的說明。第八句又引出新的觀點「同時它也有著不可小視的銷蝕作用」。整個段落涉及到四個內容:
(1) 偉大的精神造就偉大的人。
(2) 偉大的精神造就偉大的事業。
(3) 精神有著神奇的力量。
(4) 同時精神也有著不可小視的銷蝕作用。
與漢語段落相對比,英語段落呈線性發展,也就是說,段落的內容是循著一條直線發展的。典型的英文段落是由三部分組成的:
(1)主題句(Topic sentence)
原則上講,每個段落只應涉及一個主題,而主題句是一段中最重要的句子。它確定段落的中心思想,是對段落內容的高度概括。主題句可以幫助讀者迅速准確地掌握段落的內容。
在英文段落寫作中,作者首先要確定自己要闡述的觀點,並用一個句子表達出自己的觀點 — 這就是英文段落的主題句。主題句通常放在段落的開頭(開門見山不跑題),而段落的其他內容應以主題句為基礎,並以細節來支持主題句中所闡述的中心思想。
主題句通常是一個觀點opinion,而不是一個事實fact。
Computers can be used to send e-mail. F
Computers can save a large amount of data. F
People can use computers to do complicated calculation. F
Computers can make many jobs easier for people. O
主題句的形成過程:事實(根據邏輯)分類結論(即主題句)
例:我們的教室
A 地上沒有垃圾
B 有很多電燈
C 有兩台空調機
D 有三扇大窗子
E 有多媒體教學設施
F 桌椅一塵不染
可以分3組:A& F; B& D; C&E
結論:This is a very clean classroom.
This classroom is very bright.
This classroom is well equipped.
(2) 支持句(Supporting sentences)
確定了主題句後,就要用支持句來支持和說明主題句。也就是說,寫作者利用具體的證據(-細節),以說明、描寫、論證或闡述等方式來支持主導思想,使讀者能正確地理解和獲取寫作者所企圖表達的信息。寫好支持句的關鍵在於緊扣主題、層次分明。(層層漸進,按邏輯順序排列)
在通常情況下,一個段落具有若干個支持句,每個支持句都具有一定的信息,以支持主題句。支持句就是用來向讀者提供事實、數據、實例、原因以及個人的親身經歷等信息,以便幫助讀者更好地理解作者所闡述的中心思想。支持句一定要包括具體的、足夠的信息,只有這樣,段落的主題才會清晰地呈現在讀者面前。
(3) 總結句(Summary sentence)
a. 重述中心思想 ( Restating the main idea )
作者可以轉換詞彙重述主題句中的中心思想。這一做法能夠起到強調的作用,而且還可以提醒讀者段落的主題,尤其是在一個較長的段落中。但是以這種方式結束段落時,一定不要把主題句重抄一遍。
b. 概括段落要點 ( Summarizing the main points )
有時候,主題句沒有詳細地論述段落的要點,因為作者會在支持句中對它們詳加討論。那麼,在總結句中概括段落要點就能夠幫助讀者清晰地掌握段落的內容。
c. 最後闡述最重要的論點 ( Putting the most important point last )
有時候,一個段落會討論某個論點的幾個方面,那麼作者可以把最重要的一點放在最後,以便使段落達到高潮,這樣會使整個段落自然結尾。
d. 以推論結束段落 ( Drawing an inference )
在詳細闡述自己的觀點後,作者可以採用推論來結束段落。
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⑦ 雅思大作文最精彩開頭匯總
大作文的類型:
1. 單邊支持,反對探討雙方
2. 陳述利弊
3. 半支持,半反對
4. 分析解決
5. 多重選擇
構成:引言段 + 主體段 + 結論段
1.引言段
組成:開頭句(Opening sentence)+ 中心論點
步驟:引入話題,同義轉述,再根據寫作任務表達中心論點。
A. Opening sentence 五種方法:
(一)引人入勝
思路:用一個比較有趣的話題先吊起考官的胃口,並吸引他們往下看
題目1:Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and indiviality.
範文:
The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wearschool uniforms will affect their personality and indiviality is of greatinterest to many people.備選:
Be of great concern for many parents——引起父母的關注Be of great importance to many scientists——對科學家來說至關重要Be of great significance to both A and B——對於A 和 B 都是非常重要的
題目2:人類如何定義和追求幸福,這樣的問題引起公眾廣泛的爭議。
範文:
The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness isa matter of much contention among the general public .
備選:The question of _____________ has been widely debate in the world ofpolitics.
(二)力排眾議
思路:先駁斥大眾的某個普遍但卻錯誤的觀念,指出其與現實不符,然後提出自己的想法或正確想法,並在主體段列舉各種理由、證據以及活生生和例子來論證。
套路:Although it is + 副詞 + 過去分詞 + that…,this is...
題目1:The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.
範文1:Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy life style and proper condect are no longer to young people's needs today, this is actually not the case.
題目2:越來越少人照看年老的親屬,而是把他們送到專業人士那邊去。
範文2:
Although many people subscribe to the belief that their oldrelatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact acommon misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, it is theyounger family members who should really be responsible for looking after theseold people ring the rest of their lives.
釋義:
①普遍認為…,但事實並非如下。
Although it is commonly believed that ?, this is actually not thecase.
②許多人認同這樣的觀點…,但事實上這卻是一種我們需要去澄清的普遍錯誤觀念。
Although many people subscribe to the belief that ..., this is infact a common misconception that we need to clear up.
③大眾觀念認為?.,但是現實狀況卻遠比這種觀念復雜得多。
Although conventional wisdom has it that?., the reality of thesituation is often far more complicated than that.
釋義:subscribe to 訂閱、同意、預訂 conventional wisdom 大眾觀念
(三)放眼世界
思路:從「時間」或「地點」的跨度著手,比如:過去怎麼樣?
題目1: Some people support the development in agriculture, such as farminginstry and the scientific creation of new types of fruit and vegetables.Others oppose this development. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
範文:
Recent decades havewitnessed a major transformation in agricultural development, where instrialtechnologies are being employed and new varieties of crops are being created.Yet , opponents of this development have raised a number of difficult questions.From my opinion of views, this is a really complicated matter, and we needfurther investigations to understand the bigger picture.
備選:Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of
釋義:understand the bigger picture 了解事物的全貌
題目2:With divorce rates and family break downs increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close they used to be.
範文2:
Divorce and family breakdownwere virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however , almost half of allmarriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance betweenfamily members in modern society.
(四)兼收並蓄
題目:誰該為修路付費,個人還是政府?
範文:
Somepeople hold the opinion that the government should make more investments isexpanding and improving road systems, whereas others who are not so convincedpresent the counterargument that it is the responsibility of the growing numberof private car users to deal with the huge costs. In my opinion, both sides ofthe argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get tothe root of this controversy.
(五)異軍突起
題目1:談個人科技的發展與貧富差異.
範文1:
With the huge expansion of high technologies available toindivials, it is sometimes argued that economic and cultural gaps between therich and poor are being further widened.
題目2:淡大型超市和商場的急劇擴張..
範文 2:
With the unprecedented explosion of large supermarkets and shoppingmalls, a lot of small local shops have quietly disappeared while the remainingones are struggling for hopeless survival.
釋義:unprecedented explosion 前所未有的爆發
範文 3:
With the continuous and graal evolution of mass media, manyserious crimes are now described in greater detail on newspapers, televisionand the Internet, raising considerable public concern over personal safety andsocial stability.
範文 4:
With the mass extinction of endangered and rare species, manycountries have taken harsh measures against illegal hunting, unregulatedmping of instrial waste and rampant destruction of their natural habitatsby human developers.