雅思範文英語作文

A. 這篇英語作文該如何審題，從哪些方面寫（雅思 英語議論文250字）

這篇屬於only題，就是說含有絕對化詞彙「best」，很明顯，解決環境問題不能只靠增加燃版料價權格。開頭段之後，你只要在主體段的第一段寫：增加價格確實能夠起到解決環境問題的作用，比如可以減少燃料的使用之類。然後在主題第二段寫出，這絕對不是best way（only and the best prescription)，然後再列出你自己的理由，比如僅僅增加燃料價格也會增加公共交通工具的成本，這樣其實是不利於解決環境問題的等等。這篇文章不難寫，話題也不是很大，你只要抓住best這個邏輯漏洞，從正反兩方面簡單論述下就可以了。劍橋8的其中一個test就有考官範文是這篇文章，題目非常接近，劍橋的還多了一個問呢，你可以看看，就知道其實不難了。

B. 改雅思英文作文

The graph （Can you be more specific?)illustrates the number of people at a London railway station from 6am to 10pm. As we can see(刪掉因為重復顯得啰嗦）, the number of people fluctuates over the 16 hours (given period). To be more specific, at 6am the number stands at only 100. (The period 刪掉，重復，多餘)between the 6am to 8am the number experiences the（用a) rapid rise to about 400. But there is a drop in the following (in the next) two hours, reaching the peak at around 180. The number in the following(in the next,其實最好用個別的，重復了) two hour increases fairly constantly from about 180 to around 280. The next two hours（同樣問題） ,the number level off at under 300. From the（this） point forwards,the number experiences a sharp drop ,bottoming out at about 90 at 4 pm. After 4pm,the number rises again ,with the number reaching 370. After that ,there is (a) decrease to about 130 at 8pm. The period between the 8pm to 10pm the(....?) sees the slight increase, but finally the number of people decline(s) from 180 at 9pm to 130 at 10pm.

大部分問題不大，主要是很多話一直重復用 （the number,rises,drop,after that等等)。一直重復用語法上並沒有錯誤，但是會給考官留下你詞彙量不多的印象，而且重復的詞多了考官容易失去興趣。

另外注意你的The和A優點混淆不清。還有The following和the next。
基本上都是習慣上的小問題，注意點就好啦。

希望對你有幫助！加油啊=）

C. 雅思大作文範文：大城市生活是否對健康有害

題目：
Some people think that living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
一些人認為生活在大城市對人們的健康有害。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?
思路分析:
Key: words: living in big cities, health
社會背景： Living in big cities, health
論點： be bad for health
個人觀點：Living in big cities is bad for health
第一段： 社會背景 正向/反向觀點 自己觀點 (1 客觀因素/外因 2 主觀因素/內因)
社會背景：在大城市學習工作 大部分人 處於亞健康狀況
正向觀點：一些人認為——大城市生活導致人們不良的身體狀況。
自己觀點： 我認為這種生活狀態不利於人們的健康主要基於
1 城市的生活環境 2源於社會的各種壓力
Nowadays, a majority of people who work and study in big cities tend to have a sub-health condition. Some people deem that living in metropolises can exert a negative impact on their physical fitness. After serious consideration, I approve that such lifestyle goes against people』s health, in view of urban surroundings and various social pressures.
第二段：論點 論據 例證 結論
論點： 大城市日益惡化的生存狀況——造成——人們健康隱患。
論據： 嚴重的污染——導致——人們患有各種疾病。
例證： 在北京，汽車尾氣排放產生的霧霾引發了人們的呼吸系統的疾病.此外，生活垃圾以及石化的污染物嚴重影響力，人們飲用水的質量，這也是人們產生重大疾病例如癌症的另一根源。
結論：在大城市生活對人們的健康造成的危害是凸顯的.
First and foremost, deteriorating circumstances in conurbations have increased health risks. In other words, escalating environmental pollution has caused prevalent diseases. For instance, smog generated from car emissions has incurred sickness in people』s respiratory system. Besides, household garbage and pollutants from fossil fuels have seriously affected the quality of drinking water, which can lead to serious diseases including cancer. Hence, living in conurbations poses harm to people』s fitness.
第三段： 論點 論據 例證 結論
論點：激烈的競爭以及生存壓力—造成——人們的身心健康的負擔
論據: 現實生活的壓力 ——使得人們—缺乏安全感，生活在危機中——導致人們身心疲憊
例證：在大城市中，很多人為了解決來自生存的壓力，往往超負荷的工作和學習，由此而經常導致一種緊張而焦慮的狀態，無法正常休息與放鬆,導致身體免疫功能下降容易生病。
結論：在大城市的生活狀態——人們生活幸福指數和健康狀況降低。
Secondly, fierce competition and survival pressures in conurbations exert burdens on people』s mental and psychological health. Conspicuously, real-life pressures can deprive them of a sense of security and stability, or even worse, break them down. For example, when living in metropolises, most people tend to work and study overtime, and consequently, to result in a nervous and anxious situation without enough rest and relaxation. Besides, such situation can weaken people』s immune system so that they will easily fall ill. From this point, living in big cities leads to a lower level of happiness and poorer health conditions.
第四段：
讓步段：另一種觀點合理性 however 對此觀點反駁
另一種觀點合理性：
在大城市生活也有利於人們健康，例如 各種娛樂設施以及娛樂場所，有利於人們放鬆身心緩解壓力。
另一種觀點(對此反駁)：
大部分人無法享受這些休閑活動.
原因：
1 由於忙於生計沒有足夠的時間
2 缺乏足夠的金錢。
On the other hand, living in urban areas can contribute to people』s well-being with plenty of recreational facilities and entertainment venues: both are established to help people relax their mind and body and relieve pressures. However, most urban residents have failed to participate those leisure activities because they are financially strained and too occupied with their work.=
第五段：總結觀點 提出建議
總結觀點：日益惡化的生活環境 源於現實生活的各種壓力——危害了人們的健康
In brief, sliding urban living environments and real life pressures have posed detriments to people』s well-being.

D. 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文

可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇，以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升；
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作，有利於更好的發揮自己的特長，從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~

E. 誰提供點雅思寫作的圖表範文。最好中英文結合的。

您好 我是在北京世紀雅思學習的，通過我的學習中老師總結了一些學習方法，希望可以幫助到您：雅思的綜合能力最終體現在寫作上。它要求你的語法功底、詞彙應用、邏輯思維在250個單詞中展現，是雅思考試中花費時間最長、精力最多的一個方面。剛開始的時候，要先對英文寫作有一個總體的了解，特別是基本的東西不要忽視，如大小寫、標點符號、關聯詞、基本結構、開頭結尾段的寫法等。訓練時，可以自己按題目要求先寫，寫完後對照範文，比較兩篇文章的好壞。然後分析文章的用詞、句子結構和邏輯順序，將好的詞彙、句子記下來，作為以後的參考。同時，也要訓練寫作速度。自己寫的時候，盡量把寫大文章得時間控制在35分鍾內、小文章的時間控制在25分鍾內。
重視文章的邏輯結構

雅思作文要想獲得高分其邏輯結構很重要，下面以議論文為例進行一下解釋。雅思議論文的准備首先是邏輯結構。也就是說你必須知道議論文分三部分，每部分有哪些思路(每條思路有哪些句型)，這才是你要重點背誦的。議論文的中間段落是拿高分的重點。一般來講有兩種結構模式：立論和駁論。立論的結構是這樣的：(分論點)……In other words(解釋論證)……For example(舉例論證)……Conversely(強對比論證)……這是三種最基本的論證方法。可以用一種，也可以用兩種或三種。我們要求學生把論證方法標志性的詞彙准備得背誦下來，以方便考官在閱讀的時候抓住你的思路。另外一種是駁論：Some people think that (敵人的觀點)……， because they think(敵人簡單的論據)……However， they are oversimplifying the situation. In fact， (敵人的第一條錯誤)…….In addtion，(敵人的第二條錯誤).Last but not least， (敵人的第三條錯誤)…….反駁的時候說一句話，兩句話還是三句話可以酌情處理。當然掌握了這兩種結構以後，還會有更復雜的變化，不過它們是基礎。接下來要細化的就是駁論和論證方法的思路和句型。對於語言結構我們要求掌握五種基本句型，十四種擴展方式;在這個基礎上有一些議論文慣用的語言，可以讓你多寫一些單詞。最後還要對雅思考試常考的八個話題要比較熟悉，找尋觀點，理解了，背下來，考試就更有把握了。

重視寫作資料的積累

平時的練習的時候建議同學要多思考雅思最常考的話題。如果有比較長的時間復習，大家可以一邊按照題材總結收集素材，一邊從寫句子的基本功入手。每個話題的每道題目，先總結好中文的分論點和分論點的論證。注意，中文一定要簡單，清晰，不要有太多修飾；然後自己每天把其中的幾段寫成英文，最好寫NATIVE SPEAKER幫忙改一下。如此做100個段落以上的積累，英語寫作水平就會有質的提高。

重視中英文作文寫作思路的差異

有很多同學會在有這樣的疑問，中文作文寫的很好，但是英文作文卻總是難以取得高分，歸結起來原因還是在於寫作思路上存在著很大的差異和區別。英文喜歡的是直線思維。不需要太麻煩。所以在結構上可以按照駁論和立論的模式展開，當然還有一種駁一半。因為一種觀點總有合理和不合理的兩面。所以在復雜一點的結構中，可以把這兩個方面都寫出來。而中文的寫作思路恰恰與英文相反，講求更加含蓄的表達，也並非是直線思維，因此也就出現了中文作文優秀但英文作文卻不理想的情況。因此同學們在備考的過程中要注重這種差異，在復習的過程中有意識的訓練自己的英文寫作思路。

重視寫作提速

寫作的速度涉及到三方面的問題，需要同學們給予足夠的重視。一是構思的速度。你需要對雅思最常考的題材比較熟悉。第二，是對句型的熟悉。什麼意思用什麼句型只有通過多寫多練才會有積累才會提高寫作速度。第三是寫單詞的速度，尤其是長單詞。要求在平時練習的時候一定要寫，而不是想，即使這個單詞你會背也一定要寫下來。

巧用寫作模版

關於模板，我曾問過不止一位考官。他們的回答是，模板不是不能用，但是一定要恰當。他們最討厭的模板是there are two sides of every coin...所以沒有萬能模板，你只有把議論文的每部分可能的情況和句型背清楚，然後才能選擇使用。換言之，模板是有的，但是沒有一個萬能模板。寫作是一個長期積累的過程。前不久一個山東的同學告訴我她壓中了雅思的寫作考題，事先也經過了精心地准備，結果得了3.5分。她的問題是她准備的範文有一半以上的單詞在任何一篇文章都是一樣的。大家一定要特別小心不要評價類的准備一篇範文，優缺點的准備一篇，原因建議的准備一篇（而且我本人並不同義這種分類方式）。關聯詞彙如果文章的長度足夠，盡量簡單清晰。所以歸根結底還是要對論述的話題熟悉，你自然就不會寫那麼多廢話了。在網路世紀雅思貼吧有很多的範文 你可以去了解一下！

希望可以幫助到您！

F. 願意活在過去還是活在現代雅思英語作文

人生有味是清歡。呵！何為「清歡」？清歡，遠離喧鬧的城市；遠離貪得無厭的慾望；遠離那些無用的名利，在自己所想的生活里，一個人心如靜水的境界里。這就是我所理解的清歡。我只能盡量的向那方向靠近。
孤獨的人，即使站在喧鬧的人群中，也感受不到十絲毫的快樂，反而更孤獨，其實不是刻意的要迴避繁華，只是覺得熱鬧的城市，安放不下一個寧靜的靈魂。喜歡一個人安靜地坐在陽台上，聽著清新淡雅的音樂，合著柔柔淡淡的思緒，望著天空中千變萬化的流雲，讓心平和。喜歡一個人獨自在溫暖的午後，泡著一杯濃郁的咖啡，看著。。。。。。。
人生有味是飲品，果汁，咖啡，礦泉水，各有各的味道，只不過所飲用的人的感受不同罷了。果汁，細膩而甜美；礦泉水，平淡而有玄機。是的，咖啡從入口的苦澀到心中的溫柔是不用說的，因此我更熱愛咖啡。。。。。。。
也許，是在享受生活；也許，是在逃避現實；也許，是在荒廢時間。。。。。。。喜歡一個人在書店，點著一杯咖啡，拿著一本新買的書，坐在那裡，不知有多少人奇怪的看著我，然而他們對我而言，如同空氣一般。書香混著咖啡的味道。直撲著我的臉，我的生活也就如此，與咖啡一般，黑暗，可是，卻暖和。
人生有味是綻放。只是一種為了名利而綻放，為了虛榮而綻放嗎？如果是這樣，不綻放又如何！我只希望帶著自己的心境，夢想，去穿過那片荊刺，去真實的綻放。
一經歷磨練的花，綻放出來，才是最真實的，即使它已經血肉模糊。。。。。。
有味，也就如此，罷了。。。。。。

G. 我急需一篇雅思口語的動物類英語範文：貓（是我家的寵物，主要寫它的可愛處） 1000字左右

沒時間寫，找了些好多給你。希望對你有幫助。

How to Communicate With Your Cat
Scientists have discovered that cats have developed an elaborate communication system with hundreds of vocalizations to tell humans what they want.[1] They know that we are in charge, so it makes sense for the cat to learn to communicate vocally, and to make sure that we understand what they are saying. Cats can also learn to understand what we want them to do by our repetition of words or actions in a consistent manner.[2] In this way, we are able to communicate with cats in a dialogue that takes time and effort to develop but is very rewarding for both.
[edit] StepsRemember that vocalizing is generally not your cat's preferred mode of communication. A cat's "first language" consists of a complex system of scent, facial expression, complex body language, and touch whereas we humans communicate primarily through sound. Cats soon realize that we don't understand the non-verbal signals they send to each other, so they vocalize in an attempt to communicate in our language. By observing which sounds elicit which actions from us, a cat is always learning how to make requests (or demands).[3]
Listen to your cat. If you watch what your cat is doing when it meows, you may learn to distinguish which meows are associated with which requests (or protests) and eventually know the difference between a "let me out" demand and a "give me food" demand by sound alone.[4] Each cat is different and may have its own variations, but some common meows can include:

Short meow - standard greeting.
Multiple meows - excited greeting.
Mid-pitch meow - plea for something.
Drawn-out mrrroooow - a demand for something.
Low pitch MRRRooooowww - a complaint
High-pitch RRRROWW! - anger or pain.
Chatter (rapid teeth-chattering jaw movements) - excitement, frustration (e.g. when prey is out of reach or escapes)
Chirrup (Also called "chirring", a cross between a meow and a purr with rising inflection) - friendly greeting sound, often used by a mother cat to call to her kittens.
Purr - invites close contact or attention
Watch your cat. Since cats are more "fluent" in body language, certain gestures will accompany vocalizations to reinforce their message.

tail straight up - happy
tail twitching - excited or anxious
slowly blinking eyes - affection, equivalent of "blowing a kiss"

sustained eye contact is interpreted as being assertive or even aggressive and makes cats uncomfortable; slow blinking communicates trust[5]
wet nose "kiss" - an affectionate gesture when the cat taps its wet nose to you
ears back - alarmed or in a very playful mood, also used when sniffing something they want to know more about
rubbing head, flank and tail against a person or animal - greeting ritual
head-butting - friendliness, affection
face sniffing - confirming identity
ears back and flattened - fearful, anxious or VERY playful (be careful here)
licks you - this could be the ULTIMATE sign of affection. If your cat licks you, your cat may consider you to be a part of his/her family, like a mother cleaning her kittens. If you push your cat away when he/she licks you, they may feel hurt and confused. Your kitty loves you! Or this could mean you have something tasty on your hand!
Talk back. As mentioned earlier, cats are always learning how to communicate with us; the more we communicate with them, the faster they'll learn.[6]

Use a slightly raised tone of voice to indicate friendliness and a lowered tone of voice to indicate displeasure or aggression.[7]
Repeat the same word, sleep or bed, each time you go to bed, and eventually your cat will begin to associate the repetitive word sound with your actions, and may even get to the bedroom before you.
Use the word shower consistently each time you are ready to take one, and eventually your cat may beat you to the bathroom and might even curl up in the sink to wait for you (See picture at right).
If you blink slowly when making eye contact with your cat, they will usually respond by coming over to be petted, as it is a very non-threatening gesture.
Be consistent. For example, a cat often "asks" before invading another's space and a common blunder many pet owners make is to say "no" but pet the cat at the same time. This is very confusing to the cat. Instead, a very quick "no" combined with gently but firmly pushing the cat away from you, without showing affection, will let the cat know that their presence is not desired at this time. Most cats will try 2-3 times to invade a person's space, often from different directions. Be patient when saying "no" to them.

You can also develop a "command tone" to use with your cat when they are doing something seriously wrong. Use a voice that comes naturally to you, that you can replicate easily, but that is also distinct from your everyday talking voice. If you use this voice sparingly, but seriously, then your cat will learn to associate the voice with the idea that they are being naughty.
Another easy "no" command that cats all understand is a quick, sharp, hiss or "spit" sound as is made by their own kind when they themselves say "no".

[edit] TipsTreat your cat with love and respect and they will become a very happy and loving companion and friend. Talk to them softly and watch how they listen. They might respond with a meow or other sound.
With patience cats can be trained to respond to commands, much the same as dogs. You can even teach your cat to shake your hand.
Siamese & Maine Coon cats have been observed to be especially "talkative", while long-haired cats tend to be on the quieter side.[8] But of course, there are always exceptions!

[edit] WarningsThis is not, by any means, a complete list of cat gestures and vocalizations. The feline communication system is surprisingly complex and extends beyond the scope of this article. Consult the sources below for more details, and always pay attention to your cat - every one is different.
Urinating, spraying and maddening (depositing feces in a prominent spot) are often a cat's attempt to mark territory that it feels is being threatened.[9] It may also be an indication of urinary tract or bladder infection, or other serious health issue. If this is a problem, the cat may need to be treated, neutered or spayed, or separated from other cats. Consult your vet.
Urinating or defecating outside or near the litter box usually means the litter box needs cleaning. Clean the litter box on a regular basis.
Never yell at or physically discipline a cat. This only frightens and angers them, and is counterproctive.

H. 英語作文，要求使用高級句式，高端詞彙（雅思水平）不要高考範文那種低水平的，限時明天中午，感謝

我依然飛翔

即使翅膀斷了，心也要飛翔。
——題記
無盡的黑夜侵蝕著我那無盡的愁思，周圍是可怕的靜寂，我起身來到窗前。
風很冷，繞過起伏的窗簾，刺透了我麻木的神經，我哆嗦了一下，縮了縮脖子。外面的燈光將整個院子充斥成白晝，半禿的樹在瑟瑟秋風中顫抖，幾片枯黃的樹葉頑強地守著崗位，又終於堅持不住，一頭栽下來，飄然落在冰冷的水泥板上。
我嘆口氣，為那片悄然消逝的生命，更為自己無地自容的成績。我不明白為什麼上帝給人們勝利和歡樂的禮物時，後面總要拴上失敗和苦澀，我總是擺脫不了失敗雙手的侵噬，猶如風雨中哭泣的百合花，淡薄了對陽光的渴望和心中那份持久的傲世之氣。多少次苦苦尋求，又多少次茫然失落，夢猶如雪片漂灑的精靈，心已冷，意迷茫……
深夜的風無力地掀動著俯卧在地面上的枯葉，翻動，再翻動，一直到大樹的根下——那是生育樹葉的一棵樹。我忽然懂得：失去意味著新的獲得，衰落意味著新的開始。一片黃葉枯了，爛了，受侵蝕，受寒凍，當春暖花開時，它將是層層濃蔭中的一片。看到這里，我不覺釋然了。
失敗是成功的因素，沒有它，不會使你耳邊警鍾長鳴，失敗又是生命的重負，長久地背著它，跋涉的腳上會多磨出幾個不應有的血泡。朦朧中我感悟到風雨之後的陽光。「人生自信二百年，會當擊水三千年」！讓灑脫與風雨同行吧。只要青春還在，我就不會悲哀，只要陽光還在，我就不會孤獨，不會停歇，縱使陷身茫茫沙漠，希望的綠洲還在，我心依然飛翔。想到這里，我不禁笑了。
抬頭，不知何時，天上多了幾雙眨動的眼睛，黑暗過後必是黎明，陰霾散盡，依然是彩虹，狂沙淘盡方得金，揚起自信的風帆，迎難而上吧！別因一時的荒蕪而永別了心靈的田野。
帶著微笑出發，即使翅膀斷了，心也要飛翔。
放棄也是一種美麗
與其抱殘守缺，不如選擇果斷放棄。——題記
當我仰望燦爛的星空，用冷靜思索喧囂的人生，用激動開啟思想的大門，我不禁這樣想：有時候，應該學會選擇放棄，因為，放棄也是一種美麗。
抱殘守缺是苛求者臉上醜陋的皺紋，而果斷放棄是學者們臉上淺淺的酒窩。伴隨著臉上甜甜的酒窩，我們應該學會選擇放棄。
有這樣一件事，一位老人在火車行駛的途中，不小心把鞋弄掉了一隻，人們正在為他惋惜，而老人卻果斷地把第二隻鞋從窗口扔了出去。人們在驚詫的同時更加贊賞老人選擇的果斷放棄。
學會選擇放棄吧，不必用殘碎的石頭添補不盡完美的人生大廈。當你遇到一個毫無意義的問題，請選擇放棄……
山之所以成為山,是因為選擇放棄了平坦，水之所以成為水，是因為它選擇了放棄停駐。只有懂得學會選擇放棄的人才明白，山，如何站成一種尊嚴，水，如何淌成一脈智慧。
選擇放棄吧，俄國詩人普希金曾經說過：「我們渴望成功，但在成功的同時，必須有所放棄，讓失去變為可愛。」
有時失去並不是一種悲傷，而有可能就是幸運；有時失去，並不是一種憂愁，而恰恰就是一種歡樂。我們並不排斥執著，但同時也要學會放棄，讓我們學會選擇放棄吧，因為，放棄也是一種美麗。
只有學會選擇放棄，你的前途才會更加光明！
戰勝自己（4）
藍色的蛹，束縛著青春，帶來無限掙扎的傷痛；金色的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞，為您訴說破繭而出的新生的喜悅……
——題記
藍色的蛹
人們說我是一個「不合群」的病孩子，我自己認為也是。我不喜歡嘈雜的人群，我不喜歡別人無意闖進我的生活，我只喜歡靜靜地看著人流，無風吹過的心畔，激不起陣陣的漣漪，惟獨自己孤芳自賞。逐漸地，我為自己編織著藍色的蛹，含淚訴說著青春的傷痛，把自己重重包圍，只有藍色的憂郁陪伴著我……
破繭的掙扎
在藍色的蛹里，暗無天日，我見不著光明，看不到希望。我極力掙扎，孤獨感籠罩著我。我的心蠢蠢欲動了，我渴望破繭後的新生，渴望去外面的世界再次見到新生的太陽。可是我又害怕著畏縮在角落裡。我是如此矛盾，我渴望新生，卻害怕破繭後陽光的刺痛。青春，就是如此的神秘，它引領著人們走向成熟。強烈的新生慾望，使我破繭而出，走向光明……
金色的蝴蝶
破繭新生的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞。我不再孤獨，我的生命中再次點燃了愛和希望的燈盞，我勇敢地奔向藍天，在花叢中飛越，享受著陽光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飛向青春的絢爛……
左手青春，右手年華！青春是破繭而出的新生。沖破青春束縛的我，也如此美麗迷人！