雅思教師的英語作文

❶ 雅思介紹家鄉的英語作文

已發到你的郵箱去了,大約800 至900詞,希望會沒有問題,若是滿意的話,請不要忘了採納和加懸賞哦? 祝你學業進步!

❷ 雅思英語作文2篇，要求每篇250字左右。

作文需要好好練習的

❸ 雅思英語作文

建議首先可以參加培訓班，上完課後要整理筆記，總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具回體寫法以及常用答的語言結構。

考前50~60天，練習句子翻譯考前40天，練習觀點和詞彙：挑選各個專題的話題若干，每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作；

考前30天：以熟練為主，完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作（每兩天一篇）。

考前20天：挑選三種文體的代表作，請老師批改並面授點評，看看問題所在，有針對性提高和改正。

考前15天：限時寫作，每天一到兩篇，提高寫作的感覺和速度。

❹ 雅思英語作文

建議抄首先可以參加襲北外雅思培訓班，上完課後要整理筆記，總結開頭-主體段落-結論的具體寫法以及常用的語言結構。

考前50~60天，練習句子翻譯考前40天，練習觀點和詞彙：挑選各個專題的話題若干，每天訓練觀點和詞彙構思+段落寫作；

考前30天：以熟練為主，完成寫作訓練。結合上課教授的寫作方法和思路+每天構思得來的觀點——不限時寫作（每兩天一篇）。

考前20天：挑選三種文體的代表作，請老師批改並面授點評，看看問題所在，有針對性提高和改正。

考前15天：限時寫作，每天一到兩篇，提高寫作的感覺和速度。

❺ 一個英語作文雅思的求一篇範文

可以從個人發展和社會發展角度去探討。
個人有權利追求更好的工作環境和待遇，以及在此專過程中自己水平的更屬大提升；
這些有技術的高層次人才在發達國家工作，有利於更好的發揮自己的特長，從而帶動全社會乃至全人類的發展和進步。
雅思還是要自己多寫多練啦~~

❻ 修改英語作文！ielts

我考過兩次雅思，作文第一次7.5，第二次7。你這個作文問題挺多的，語法就有不少毛病，軟體翻譯的？結構也不合理，還跑題，題目是是否應該按照傳統模式建房子，你寫的更多是古代建築的好處和缺點。

先說結構吧。你贊成傳統建築模式的觀點，就應該用大量篇幅寫你為什麼贊成。中間三段應該是前兩段寫傳統建築模式的優點，第三段寫傳統建築模式的一些不足。

開頭寫得不好。我覺得還是應套用模板開頭。
The issue whether we should build our buildings in traditional styles is a complex and controversial one. Some people believe that..., while other people assert that.... As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. （兩個省略號處分別寫兩種觀點）

這段內容還行，但語法太差了。你說了埃及古金字塔的好處，最後還要拐到要求的話題上，說出按古建築模式建房子對現代經濟的影響，即括弧中這句。
It is indisputable that the traditional architecture style and ancient buildings are a civilized symbol for the country .Take Egypt for example,the pyramid is a mystery and precious treasure, symbolizing the witness of ancient Egyptians. In addition ,traditional building structure is not only a symbol but also a platform , on which tourists and local people can communicate with each other. (So, if we build our buidings in traditional styles, more tourists will be attracted to our country, which will greatly increase foreign currency and improve local economy. )

接下來一段應繼續寫傳統建築模式的好處，但可以不用像上面一段那麼多。可以寫很多人喜歡傳統建築的風格，那些建築看起來賞心悅目，建造更多傳統建築物能提高居民的滿意度什麼的。樓主自己寫寫這段吧，當然也可以寫傳統建築其他方面的好處。

這一段該寫缺點了。缺點不宜寫太多，不然豈不是否定自己的觀點了？
On the other hand ,however, some traditional buildings are not tall enough to accommodate many residents as modern skyscrapers are. some people believe that if residents live in morden tall buildings , they can breath fresh air as well as enjoy the comfortable atmosphere .Moreover, it is better to select steel rather than stone to build our buildings for the reason that steel materials can bear a heavier weight of floors and walls.

總算到結尾了。。。。
In conclusion, though traditionally-built architecture has some disadvantages, it plays a great role to reveal local culture and ancient civilization. And I believe that the advantage is well worth the shortage. So we should build our buildings in traditional styles.

樓主這篇作文啊。。。除了字數多，其他真是亂七八糟啊。。。當然我寫的也不完美，大家批判著看。

❼ 求一篇雅思的英語作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government』s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials』 sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

這是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文範文，相信對你有用，你也可以去看看其它的範文。

❽ 如果雅思老師幫忙改英語作文語法錯誤算老師幫我完成的作業嘛

不算的。這種情況下，老師只是起到一個幫你糾正錯誤、改正作文的作用，但作文本身還是你自己獨立完成的，老師並沒有參與到寫作文的過程中，所以不能說是「老師幫你完成的作業」。