英语四级提出问题作文

1. 英语四级作文的问题

1.你的作文没有什么明显标志吧
2.你的作文没有大段摘抄什么地方的东西吧
3.你的第一张答题卡有没有错误

如果你确信这些没问题，每个单项都有个最低分数，低于他还是按最低分计算。应该什么地方出问题了吧。

2. 大学英语四级作文题目总结

英语四级作文题目1∶ On Card Slave

卡奴是指一个人使用大量的现金卡、信用卡，但负担不出缴款金额或是以卡养卡、以债养帐等方式，一直在还利息钱的人。

1. 目前出现许多年轻人变成卡奴现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议作文范文∶On Card Slave

As people change the patterns of consumption, it is common for people to have several cards. Then Card slave is coined.Card slave refers to people who can only pay the minimum balance on their credit card debt every month.Many youngsters fall under the so-called card- slave category.

The reason behind card slaves varies.The fierce competition among banks, Chinese or foreign,encourages them tolurecustomers to hold morecredit cards.Unfortunately,some card holders, especillyoungsters with large shopping addictions and smallsalaries, have outstanding credit card debts and graally became card slaves after reaching their credit card limit on luxury items.Due to their meager salaries,they always live on theedge of bankruptcy.

In my opinion,people should manage their financial affis.First, only choose the credit cards that suit you the most.Secondly,manage yourcards properly.Get some good tips from internet and follow them. Thirdly increase income and avoid excessive expenses.These tips will helpyoukeep away from the danger of becoming acard slave.

英语四级作文题目2∶ Free Admission to Parks

1. 越来越多的公园免费开放，目的是什么 2. 也会带来一些问题 3. 你的看法【范文】

Free Admission to Parks

To encourage people to go outside and relax, a mounting number of parks offer free admission now.People benefit from it especially ring these tough economic times. With free entry,more people will have the opportunity for affordable vacations for families, taking pleasure in the natural landscape.

Fresh air and landscapes in parks are good for people.However,too many people flocking into parks might not be so good for the parks.

For example,some visitors leave their garbage behind, which may cause environmental polltion.And peoples barbeques and stamping willalso bring damage to the grassland and other greeneries in parks.

As auniversity student, Im in favor of free admission to parks.Free entry to parks not only saves peoples expenditure,but also makes things fairer people like the poor and students can go to parks frequently as well.On the other hand, visitors should be informed to preserve the environment while enjoying the beauty of the nature.

英语四级作文题目3∶ The Internet

1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 2. 有人却认为网络让青少年沉迷 ，影响学习 3. 我的看法【范文】The Internet

In the era of information and technology,the Internet plays an important role in our society.However,peoples opinions arestill divided on this point.Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has alot of advantages.Firsty,information searching is nolonger a toughjob with the help of all inds of searchengines.Secondly,wecancontact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and YahooMessenger.

Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that its disadvantages are numerous.In the first place,using the Internet costs considerable time,money and energy,especially for those with poor self-control.In the second place, increasingyoung people areinlged inonline games and unhealthy information, which are extremely harmful to their development.

In my opinion, its pros outweigh the cons.The past twenty years have witnessed thefast development of theInternet along with the national economy.A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet.

英语四级作文题目4∶ Group Purchasing

1.现在团购很流行

2. 团购有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3. 我的建议作文范文∶ Group Purchasing

In recent years,a new type of online shopping is rapidly gaining popularity group purchasing, which was originally introced from foreign countries but is now widely accepted all over China.People can buy not only goods,but alsoall kinds of services on group purchasing sites.

Group purchasing is very convenient, and saves people alot ofmoney.But italso has some problems. Since group purchasing is nothing more than another form of online shopping, the nature of it is no dfferent from other online shopping pattens.Problemsthat exist in online shopping also can be found in group purchasing, like deceptive advertisements or poor after-sale services.

In my opinion, we should treat group purchasing as a way of shopping and nothing more.We must be carefulnot to buy something we dont need only to fllow the fashion.

3. 有关英语四级的作文字数的问题

或许会扣一点吧!那要看批你的卷子的老师是怎么想的了,说不定他(她回)觉得你写得不答错,还会加一点吧.但也许他也怕烦,没心思看你写的东西.这要看你的造化了.下次最好不要写太多,因为参加四级考试的人实在太多了.或许老师看四级作文就像看高考语文作文一样吧,看个开头,看个结尾,当中略微看一下.我不多说了,祝你这次顺利吧!

4. 英语四级作文中问题 高手进

英语写作万能公式
开头万能公式：
1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
写作绝招
结尾万能公式：
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作绝招
写作的“七项基本原则”：
一、 长 短 句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主 题 句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、 短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
六、 多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、 挑战极限原则
既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！
写作绝招
文章主体段落三大杀手锏：
一、举实例
思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！
Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast
更多句型：
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点
（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
这个对 compare and contrast 题型很有用
三、换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语：
in more difficult language, in simpler

5. 英语四级作文问题

不会的，一般情况下四级的作文大家都背一些模板，然后再套一些自己的句子，有亮点就会有加分的。

6. 英语四级作文求指导

这位同学，希望你不要介意，我也不跟你兜圈子，这样的文章实在难拿高分。

一篇论文，主要评分点就在于论证，表达，语法等三个方面。

首先你的论证很不足。一篇100多字的文章，前面花了一半的篇幅提出问题，而后面论证的内容才一半不到，首先就扣分。

其次是表达，全篇几乎没什么难的单词和句式。

最要命的是语法。其实语法如果没问题并不见得高分（因为论证和表达的好坏高下立见），但如果语法不过关的话，就像拍照里的噪点过多或者看着一个很脏的地面，会非常难受并且直接影响得分。

标题就有语法错误，go
to school是固定搭配，你后面也说go
to school,这里却省了to,
可能是你不小心吧。如果有标题的话，直接抄就是了啊

第一句话里也有好几处语法错误。可能你太想写复杂句了，所以用力过了头。

Obviously,
we can find the picture shows a boy (who has an iphone)
asks his mother that why is he going to school if his iphone
already knows everything.

1，
逻辑上的错误，Obviously好无由来，莫名其妙

定冠词错误。你是想说，现在很容易见到这样的画面是吗？可是就像你boy也用a
一样，picture刚出来，也不可能特指啊。

从句引导词错误，在ask
his mother中后面that,
why都是引导词，引导宾语从句，显然留下一个why就够了,that
是多余的。另外，shows则少了一个引导词
（that), 不然find和shows谓语动词打架了。

中国学生写英语作文很容易出现谓语动词打架的情况，最常见的便是there
be 句式。

如：there
are two girls standing by the washing machine,
但基于中文习惯，刚开始不少人会直接写成there
are two girls stand by the washing machine.

宾语从句的语序错误。特殊疑问句做宾语从句时，要调整顺序为陈述句。如;
what has he done? 整句作宾语时则要说成：he
teacher asks what he has done. 所以， why后面的语序要调整成：asks
his mother why he is going to school...

多个谓语动词。抛开你从句里的动词不看，你这里还有三个动词在打架
（find, show,
ask)。（要牢记一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，如果是一个主句带几个从句，那就是主句只能有一个谓语，然后几个从句，几个谓语动词）

暂且不管表达的好坏，单就谓语动词而言，第一句可以修改成：

Obviously,
we can find the picture that shows a boy who has an iphone asking his
mother why he is going to school if his iphone already knows
everything.

7. 关于英语四级写作问题

四级作文只有一篇，一般是议论文，120词左右~
四级的写作套路就是三段式
第一段提出观点（是什么）
第二段分析原因（为什么）
第三段措施和展望（怎么做）

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2008年12月大学英语四级考试流程

12月20日

8：50---9：00试音时间

9：00---9：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷

9：10取下耳机，开始作文考试

9：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册(但9：40才允许开始做)

9：40---9：55做快速阅读

9：55---10：00收答题卡一(即作文和快速阅读)

9：55---10：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试

10：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音

听力结束后完成剩余考项。

11：20全部考试结束。

作文分数占总分的15%，也就是106.5分，在这部分你要达到63.9分为及格。答题时间为30分钟。
2.快速阅读占总分的10%，即71分，在这部分你要达到42.6分为及格分。题号为1-10题，答题时间为15分钟。
3.听力部分占总分的35%，即248.5分，在这部分的及格分为149.1分。题号为11-35题，答题时间为35分钟。
4.是一篇篇章词汇理解和两篇传统的阅读理解，总分数为177.5分。在这部分你要达到106.5分为及格分。题好为36-66。答题时间为25分钟。
5.是完形填空（极大可能考这个），占总分的10%，即71分，在这部分你要达到42.6分及格。题号67-86，答题时间为15分钟。
6.翻译，汉译英并且需译部分只是一般的短句翻译。占总分的5%，即35.5分，在这部分你要达到21.3分为及格，题号为87-91，答题时间是5分钟。

8. 急求一篇关于行人闯红灯的四级英语作文，分为提出问题---分析问题---解决问题三部分，十分感谢！

"Chinese" to cross the road, the biggest reason is that our way of distribution and the semaphore set "rude".
In Spain, the fork of the pedestrian way to over motor vehicles. According to the relevant traffic laws and regulations, in the intersection, as long as the pedestrians are given a clear gestures or a foot to pedestrian crossing through intent, one motor vehicle must be stopped to wait for pedestrians to pass. But if have the right will have responsibility, where pedestrians in the crosswalk to cross the road or ignored the traffic light, will be fined. Is the so-called "culture has no rival, system have advantages and disadvantages", a good system, does not have high quality guarantee, is the premise of high quality. "Chinese" crossing the road can not blindly blame "quality ?
China favours in the setting of traffic light motor vehicles, domestic to this phenomenon is more prominent. Right turn vehicles is not affected by light control, too much kerb radius turn right lead to vehicle speed is too high; Both directions of right turn vehicles may force through the same crosswalk, occupy the pedestrian passage of time, lead to the pedestrian and the conflict of right turn vehicles, pedestrians in the signal within the stipulated time finish crossing the street, then forced through a red light or stranded in the middle of the road. Pedestrians and vehicles turning conflicts may cause the pedestrian crossing ring green light time rather than cross the street more dangerous strange phenomenon ring the red light.

9. 英语四级考试一般会出什么题目的作文

下面主要从三个方面介绍一下四级写作的命题特点，即题材，体裁和命题形式。
1. 题材
四级写作的话题，具有很强的实用性和时事性，涉及校园生活、现代科技、社会问题以及对他们的简单理由分析、方案提出。
校园话题：校园浪费、学生会主席竞选、名校校园旅游、选择课程或教师等;
社会问题：当代妇女、淡水资源紧缺、环境、交通、住房、假冒伪劣商品等;
现代科技：电脑之类的现代科技发明等。
2. 体裁
从体裁上讲，写作部分考察的形式有议论文、说明文、记叙描述文和书信演讲类情景应用文。
1)议论文主要分为提纲式议论文和标题式议论文两类。
提纲式议论文根据题材可分为正反观点对比类型和原因现象解释类型。如2006年12月真题就属于正反观点对比类型：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会;
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会;
3. 你的看法。
而2007年12月的真题却属于原因现象解释型的议论文。
1. 各大学开设了各种各样的选修课
2. 学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课
3. 以你自己为例…
标题式议论文的主要特点是论证说理，通常以某一名言警句或谚语为题目，要求考生们对其客观真理性加以阐述和论证。如1997年1月真题：
Practice makes perfect
2)说明文主要可以分为阐述主题型、利弊分析型、解决问题型:
阐述主题型的如1991年1月真题：
Bicycles----An Important Means of Transport in China.
1. 为什么自行车在中国这样普及。
2. 和汽车比较。
3. 自行车在中国的前途。
利弊分析型的如1998年1月真题：
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities.
1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?
2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。
解决问题型的如2001年1月真题：
How to Succeed in a Job Interview?
1. 面试在求职过程中的作用
2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是. . .
3)应用文写作主要包括演讲词，导游解说词、求职求学信、投诉信和公告通知等(2004年6月的导游词，2005年1月的竞选演说词)。
3. 命题形式
四级作文的命题形式是六种：中英文提纲式、情景式、图表式、段首句式、关键词式及标题式。在所有这六种形式中，提纲式所占比例最高，在80%以上;其次是情景式，2003年6月开始，情景作文大量出现，命题人设定一个情景，让学生用所学的英语去处理一件假定的事情。(如2003年6月的车祸见证书，2003年9月的同学生病)，图表式作文只考过两次(1991年6月 Changes in People's Diet 和 2002年6月Student Use of Computers)。
考生们应在平素的练习中针对每一种体裁和形式作相应的练习以便熟悉各种命题的写作套路和方法。下面以2006年6月大学英语四级考试的作文为例，从审题、段落、句式和选词四个方面探讨英语四级作文的写作方法。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students Selecting their Lecturers. You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师;
2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素;
3. 学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题。
[范文]
On Students Selecting their Lecturers
With the remarkable reform of higher ecation, students in some universities are entitled to choose their lecturers for certain designated courses for the flexibility and efficiency of their learning practice. This move has been welcomed by some students and has become the focus of students' and teachers' concern as well.
Obviously, there are some factors that students take into consideration when choosing lecturers. First and foremost, the teacher should have a diverse academic background and excel at what he or she teaches. It is because a learned teacher can give students much knowledge in a specific field, help them widen their horizon and at the same time cultivate their potential. Moreover, quite a few students think it is essential that the teacher is humorous and passionate in teaching. The reason is that students will learn quickly and thoroughly when the class is enjoyable and when they are motivated to learn. In addition, a teacher who gives students high marks in exams and papers is preferred.
Students' free choosing of lecturers may have many advantages, such as encouraging students to take an active part in classes and promoting lecturers to improve their teaching quality. Good as selecting lecturers is, it also gives rise to many problems. For one thing, the management of classes may be in a disorder. Some teachers can be so warmly welcomed that the number of the students in his class may be too large while other courses may have few participants. For another thing, schools might end up with lecturers who teach interesting classes and give high scores without much real content. Therefore further attention should be paid to this phenomenon.
解析：
1) 审题。
2006年6月作文的题材是考查校园话题--学生选择任课教师及其利弊分析;就体裁来说是经常考到的提纲式论说文，它要求考生们根据给出的题目(on the topic of students selecting lecturers)和提纲(1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师;2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素;3. 学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题)，确定文章的中心思想，然后分段展开论述，表达提纲的主旨。
2) 段落安排。
提纲式论说文仍然符合四级写作的布局要求三段式作文，提纲可以看作是分段点，即：第一段写第一点，第二段写第二点，第三段完成第三点。第一段是引言段，引出现在大学中存在的现象――有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程任课老师，描述现状，引出主题。With the remarkable reform of higher ecation, students in some universities are entitled to choose their lecturers for certain designated courses for the flexibility and efficiency of their learning practice.
第二段是主体段，解释学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素，即他们选择什么样的老师和为什么做出这样的选择。根据前面提到的段落写作技巧，第一句话是这一段的主题句，可以对中文提纲进行翻译，并且稍加改动，如Obviously, there are some factors that students take into consideration when choosing lecturers. 然后列举出几个较有代表性的理由，注意一定要在列举的几条理由前面加上表示层次关系的连接词来使文章思路清晰，逻辑层次清楚。如：First and foremost, the teacher should have a diverse academic background and excel at what he or she teaches. It is because…, 接着阐述其它理由，如：Moreover, quite a few students think it is essential that the teacher is humorous and passionate in teaching.
第三段是结尾段，讨论"学生选择老师"这样一个校园话题的好处以及可能产生的问题。先写益处，如Students' free choosing of lecturers may have many advantages, such as…, 然后话题转折提出弊端 Good as selecting lecturers is, it also gives rise to many problems. For one thing …最后一句是结论句Therefore further attention should be paid to this phenomenon
3) 句型变换。
全文长短句交错，句型富于变化。采用以简单句为基础，同时配以复杂句，如定语从句a teacher who gives students high marks…，主语从句 It is essential that… 倒装句Good as selecting lectures is… 分词结构 when choosing lecturers…
4) 词汇运用。
全文用词准确、规范，丰富，如"选择"可以用choose 和 select;使用一些精彩的固定搭配，使文章增色不少，如 end up with, give rise to; 巧用过渡词，使文章衔接自然、紧凑，如first and foremost, moreover, in addition, as, therefore，for one thing等。