四级英语作文自己观点

Ⅰ 我自己写了一篇四级英语作文，希望大神给我修改一下,或对我的思路提出一些建议

The disposable plastic bags have widely applied because（ 去掉OF语法错误） it's convinience.Neveretheless,it( result in plenty of可改高级词组) issues owing to this condition （as well.可改）
First and foremost,this plastic bags will damage our health if we frequently use it,because it contains various of materials that was capable of doing harm to our body.Additionally,the disposable plastic bags is easily broken down and might destroy we just bought. (去掉the）Last but not least,(it would result in the pollution of environment and the most painful to us is that witness plenty of disposable plastic bags in street.)可改强调，更高级词组
By and largre, I am strongly convinced that cannot emphasized（ too mush of 可改）limiting （the use of ）可改disposable plastic bags.Not only can benefit our healthy,but it would defend nature and make the society more harmonious.
修改的不多，但是分数能提高四分左右
你的文章基本定型，只能通过改一些边边角角。多用些高级单词和高级句式吧，看起来真的很像高一的学生作文。

Ⅱ 英语作文:对英语四级的看法

In most schools and colleges the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
The most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. Examinations do not motivate a student to seek more knowledge, but to restrict his reading; they do not enable him to study consistently throughout the semester, but to ince cramming ring exam week.

Ⅲ 急求英语作文：请谈谈大学英语四级的优点与不足

Examination questions is more and more difficult!容 Test and really will is more and more little! No speaking test, the stuttering can get card! In short this card became more and more little!

At present is a little advantage also look not to come out!

In doing this to the card society does not really can't!

Conclusion is an examination of well! Do not take an examination of how the whole! Deal with!

Ⅳ 四级英语作文有哪些套路

纵使四级作文千万变，“三段式”写作无需变
无论是传统的三条中文提纲式作文，还是2011年12月那样给一句名人名言要求阐释，或者是2013年6月的漫画作文，都可以用“三段式”作文来解决。
所谓“三段式”作文，第一段最关键要开篇点明自己的观点。
如果是名人名言，可以转述名人名言的意思，并结合这一意思，找出一个论点;如果是漫画、图片、图表作文，简单1-2句话对漫画描述后，一定不忘从漫画中给出一些看法和与实际生活相关联的现象、问题、争议点。围绕当年题干中一长串的“Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times。”名人名言，最核心地表达出“要想获得成功，必须要有毅力。” 这句话就可以用“To achieve things successfully, a strong will is essential。”来对原句更简单的阐释，切忌照抄。紧接着，用一些自己熟悉的例子来展开论证即可。
第二段要围绕自己的观点进行有意义地展开。
展开方式有以下几种：
1. 举例论证
举例论证时，结合你自身的例子是最容易有话说的论证方式。
2. 引用论证
引用论证就是可以用来自书籍Once I read a book,…;There is an old saying …“俗话说……”;或者中外名人曾说过。
3. 道理论证
道理论证即用日常生活中所有人都熟悉的一些话语来论证。一般主要从对引起某现象的原因略述一二。
分享一个可用的模板：
What has brought about this effect? I believe there are three main reasons. To begin with, ____________________ (原因一). It is believed that ____________________(进一步稍加说明). In addition, ____________________(原因二). Finally, ____________________。(再次总结原因。)
最后，结尾段再次重申观点 + 问题解决方法;避免某一现象的措施;向学校(the school)，机构( XX administration)，政府(the government)，每个人(every citizen / every indivial)发出呼吁( I appeal to…)，给出建议(My suggestion is that …)
漫画、图表近年常考，常用句型来支招
图表类：
1) As is shown in the table, ________________。(正如表格显示)
2) This is a chart which demonstrates / depicts / illustrates ________________。(这一表格展示)
3) Obvious from the graph is that ________________. (很显然从图中得出)
4) It must be pointed out that + 图中明显特征(必须指出)
5) It is worth mentioning that + 图中明显特征(值得一提)
漫画类：
1) Today I saw an interesting cartoon, in which ________________. (轻松、活泼，真实感带入，意思为：今天我看到了一幅有趣的漫画，其中……)
2) As is vividly depicted in the drawing above, ________________。(严肃、准确、客观描述，意思为：正如图中形象描绘出……)
3) The picture / cartoon / drawings talking about …(拟人化，意思为：图中谈论了……)
4) The cartoon describes an interesting phenomenon。(总起句，意思为：漫画描述了有一个有趣的现象)注意：这种封闭式提法后面，一定还要有一句结合图片细节的话。
考前准备要充分，细节功夫勿轻心
作为考前冲刺的最后一发“磨刀粉”，温馨提示大家考前一定要备好准考证、2B铅笔、橡皮擦、好用的签字笔、收音机等考场必备物品。尤其是好用的签字笔这一条，直接关系到作文字迹是否清晰、漂亮!考场上，作文要想拿高分，一定要注意的细节就是：一要字迹清晰漂亮，二要语法、拼写错误少。

Ⅳ 一篇观点不同的四级英语作文

Sky Lantern is also called sky lanterns, commonly known as Wishing Lamp, also known as sky lanterns pray. Han is an ancient craft, do military purposes in ancient times. Put lanterns more modern use as a blessing. Hand writing greeting men and women desire, a symbol of harvest success, happiness every year. Usually in the Lantern Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and other major festivals cast.
According to legend, the Five Dynasties (AD 907 ~ 960) when there is a Xin Qiniang, Fujian fight with her husband when she had beaten with bamboo strips square frame, paste paper, made the headlights, put burning turpentine on the chassis, lights into the sky by hot air, is used as a military liaison signal. This turpentine lights, lanterns in Sichuan said. This shape lantern like Zhuge Liang hat, hence the name.
Another argument is that according to legend invented by Zhuge Liang of the Three Kingdoms. At that time, Zhuge Liang was under siege in Pingyang, unable to send troops out of the city for help. Ming considered quasi-wind direction, will be made of paper floating lanterns, the department's help message, then turned out of danger, then later on call this lantern for the lanterns.

Ⅵ 四级英语作文 看图写作 描述图像，并且写出自己的观点和建议。

十面霾伏

三年级  |  写景  |  345字

早上醒来，外面是天昏地暗，灰蒙蒙的。一看表，是六点零两分，我有点纳闷。都六点多了，外面怎么还那么黑。对了，昨天天气预报说今天有雾霾。我从小到大还没见过雾霾呢，真想见识见识！我和妈妈吃过早饭，整理好东西后，出发了。我和妈妈都小心翼翼的靠着路边走，大约近两米处的地方都看不清事物。这如烟笼罩的世界使车辆难行，使人举步维艰，不辨南北。 据妈妈所说这是因为汽车尾气排放，工业制造污染等对大自然的破坏。我似懂非懂的点了点头，妈妈又告诉我雾霾天影响交通，容易出事故，它是一种灾害天气，对农作物的生长有害，同时也对人类的身体健康构成了威胁。 我们通过这烟雾缭绕的世界，终于到达了目的地—学校。下课后我们都认为雾霾天气很好玩儿，可谁又知道他的坏处？动手保护大自然，尽量少出现雾腾腾的雾霾天气，让我们一起行动吧！

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名师点评

本文小作者向我们描述了雾霾的天气，文章的语句通顺，句意流畅，叙写较为生动，文章的语言的表达能力较好。文章的不足之处在于虽有中心主题，但表达不够充分有力，言而不实，空而无力。

Ⅶ 求对追求时尚的看法的英语四级作文 120字

My View on Following the Fashion
Nowadays more and more young people prefer to follow the fashion. On this phenomenon, different people have different views. It is held that one should follow the fashion so as not to be despised or considered eccentric. But it is also held that one should have one's own judgment.
Those who hold the first opinion think that society is progressing and one should adapt oneself to the constant change. In their opinion, if everyone always sticks to the old fashion, there won't be any change and naturally there won't be progress. In contrast, those who hold the second view think that one shouldn't follow the fashion without discrimination and one should have one's own judgment and characteristics.
As for me, I agree with the latter opinion. Admittedly, one should be flexible and adapt himself to the situation, but this is not to say that one should follow the fashion without discrimination because the fashion may not be beneficial.We should consider whether the fashion is favorable or unfavorable. Moreover, one should have one's own characteristics. If everyone follows the same fashion, there will not be variety and the whole society will be monotonous.

我对赶时髦的看法
现在越来越多的年轻人喜欢赶时髦，对于这一现象，不同的人有不同的看法。有人认为为了不被轻视或被认为古怪应该赶时髦，但是也有人认为应该有自己的判断。
那些持第一种观点的人认为社会在进步应该使自己适应不断的变化。他们认为如果人人总是坚持旧的方式，就不会有变化，自然也就不会有进步。比较起来，持第二种观点的人认为不应该不加辨别地赶时髦，应该有自己的判断和特点。
就我看采，我同意后者的意见。诚然，人应该灵活以适应形势，但是这并不是说应该不加辨别地赶时髦，因为它也许没有益处，我们应该考虑它是有利还是不利，而且，应该有自己的特点。如果人人都赶同样妁时髦，就不会有变化，整个社会就单调如二。

Ⅷ 自己对爱情或亲情的看法的四级英语作文

As we all know,there is a famous sentence "Ilove you not because of who you are,but because of who I am when I am you. No man or woman is worth your tears and one who is won＇ make you cry" Though love is so beautiful, in my opinion campus love is not so good .
For example: First of all, some loves just take advantage of it to kill time ,We know colleage life is so free ,some colleages have nothing to do ,what they have just much leisure time ,so they take it to pass time .Secondly colleage students are so young ,they neither have fully psychologically mature nor able to assume responsibility .Thirdly ,these people will addicated to it ,there are so many old saying like "love me love my dog""love is blind""fault are sick when love is thin" and so on.
I think compus love is not available in college ,what we can do ought to be study hard ,in that case we can have a brillant future.

Ⅸ 求观点论述型英语四级作文范文

范文来自《2010年6月英语四级作文考前预测范文》

预测作文（一）
My View on Double BA Degree

1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见
2. 我对这一现象的看法

【范文】
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【点评】
首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述三个优点，其中首句为让步状语从句，意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果，但总体上是有益的”；第三段呼应第二段，得出结论。
范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象；第二段分三点进行论述，其中前两点是优点，即学生会更加勤奋，并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作，最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重；第三段下结论，呼应第二段。
第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”；第三段末句中的compel sb．to do sth．表示“迫使某人做某事”。

Ⅹ 四级英语作文几个题目 寻几个观点！急

1 必要性：中国现来在发展自很快，人口老龄化严重
问题：中国已经开始重视，但无论是基础设施还是人的素养都不足
方法：自己：从身边多关怀老年人 政府：加大投入，增加福利等等

2 引入：最近社会上***的食品安全事件成为了热议的话题
问题： 政府监督不到位，有些商家良心不足，技术缺陷。。。
方法： 自己：注意食品卫生，在购买食用时多注意 政府：强化监管，加大食品卫生查处力度

3. 引入：近些年各类选秀节目受到很多青少年追捧（可列举）
正方：选秀能够帮助一些人圆梦， 偶像让人有目标，让青少年知道努力了就能有所成就
反方： 影响青少年学习的主业，浪费时间 选秀或追星可能花费父母的大量钱财。。。

挑自己语言能够表达的写吧。四级作文基本上和高考差不多吧，字迹端正点就比较容易高分。