英语四级作文成功的定义
以四级作文为例,本人不敢具体押说考大学生找工作的问题还是低碳生活问题,但是万变不离其宗,今年考试题目不管什么,但是写作的思路是固定的。
一、观点对比型文章
比如说四级2009年已经考了两次观点对比型文章,所以本人认为靠这种问题的可能性不是很大,但是即使考到也没什么可以担心的,因为写作的思路是确定的。
下面我们以下面的题目为例,来讲解观点对比型文章的写法。
养宠物。有些人认为养宠物很好,有些人认为养宠物不好,你的观点是什么?
本文共分三段。
第一段(3—4句话)
第一句话:提出主题
比如:
1. Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern.
2. Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.
第二句话:翻译第一个提纲
比如:a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life.
第三第四句话具体说明原委,为什么养宠物好
比如:
1. first, keeping pets can rece the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone.
2. in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home.
第二段(3—4句话)
第一句话:过渡语
比如:although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable.
第二句话:翻译第二个提纲
比如:they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned.
第三第四句话:说明原委,为什么养宠物不好。
比如:
1. On one hand, they will give rise to serious pollution, which exists not only at their onwers’family but also the public places.
2. On the other hand. Not only will they be responsible for some injuries to the innocent children but also lead to some terrible noise which can be horrible at night.
第三段(3—4句话)
第一句话翻译第三个提纲:
比如:Personally, I insist that keeping pets is a two-edged weapon which can be used for good or evil.
第二句话具体论述:
比如:I intend to stand on the side that pets is our friends, without them. We would witness a gloomy future.
第三句话总结:
In conclusion , it is high time we poured attention into the phenomenon—feeding pets.
这样,一篇观点对比性文章就写出来了。不管主题是什么,只需要变换一下中心词罢了。
二、解决问题型作文
同样,写成三段,分别是提出问题,分析问题,解决问题。
第一段(2—3句话)
第一句话:提出主题
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious problem. Fake advertisements have become a concern of the public.
第二和第三句话:举例或数据列举
Although there are countless illustrations arround us,the following one is sufficient. Not only on TV but also on newspapers can we find dozens of bad ads which are cheating the consumers.
第二段(4—5句话)
第一句话:翻译提纲二(一般说一个东西的危害性是什么?)
Fake advertisements definitely have led to some consequences.
第二句—第五句:具体危害
First and foremost, indivials may buy some bad food and drink. It is really unfavorable for their health. Besides, some old people like to buy medicine,Sometimes, which are harmful. Last but not least, the enterprise of fake advertisements can earn much illegal money. It will cause serious problems in government and the society.
第三段(3—4句话)
第一句话翻译提纲三(一般是如何解决问题)
To alleviate this problem, we are hoped to take effective measures.
第二句三句话写如何具体如何解决
On the one hand, the government must control a multitude of advertisement in media, and find out fake advertisement in them. On the other hand, people ought to learn how to identify fake advertisement. So fake enterprises cannot earn profits from indivials anymore.
第四句话总结
Only in this way can we have a harmonious life.
综上,我们可以看出,写作不是准备某个具体的题目考什么的。主要注意写作的结构,以及语法单词的正确性。谢谢同学们,预祝大家四级考试成功。
2. 英语四级作文题审错了
作文是否跑题,是考生最为关注的问题之一。
由于考场上精神紧张、时间紧迫、题目中有些单词看得过于匆忙甚至不认识单词,再加上近几年四六级作文的命题变得越来越难,考生很容易跑题、偏题。而根据作文的评分标准,一旦跑题,作文的分数肯定不会高。
如何审题,成为考生迫切需要解决的问题!
一、审题"123成功模式"
面对四六级考试写作部分越来越捉摸不定的作文主题,笔者结合在新东方任教的一线经历和对考生面对考题的心理反应的了解,总结了"作文审题123成功模式"。按照这三个步骤来确定作文的主题,进而确定作文的基本写作思路,以确保作文的主题限定在一定的范围之内,不会离题千里,甚至万里。
(1)1个宗旨
一个经典的四六级作文主题,应该能够给考生"带来一定的启发,起到一定的教育意义"。而这种启发和教育意义,也就是我所说的作文的"宗旨"。其实,任何一个作文的题目,或者是启发考生去"弘扬、践行某种积极的价值观、品质",抑或是启发考生去"规避、解决某种负面的现象,用正确和积极的方式进行取代"。如果考生能够从这个"宗旨"的角度、站在命题人的立场来思考作文的题目、提炼文章的主旨,多半不会跑题。
作文的宗旨,也即作文的命题最高精神,或者说是作文主题带给考生的启发意义,一般建议在作文的最后一段点出,也即我们所说的"点题"。文章最后一段重申和强调作文主题,使阅卷老师非常轻松地找到文章的主旨,判断考生是否"切题",给阅卷老师节省了时间,自然会得到一些额外的"好感分"。
(2)2个范围
任何一个作文题目,如果能够成为一个"可以让人探讨的话题",势必需要"事关人"或者"事关物",也许不要"事关重大",但是必须是有话可说的。
"人"或"物",就是四六级作文的两个命题范围:
关于"人"的文章,一般涉及"个人成长成功、心态、哲理话题、价值观、品质、习惯"等"较为抽象"的话题。这种话题重在强调人的"内在品质",强调"积极意义、教育价值",命题旨在教育考生"做一个什么样的人"。诸如2011年12月的四级 a strong will (强大的意志)、2011年12月六级 a full preparation (充分的准备)、2012年12月六级 trust (信任)、2013年6月六级 smile (微笑)等,都是与"人"有关的话题。因此,与人有关的"成长类、心态类和哲理类话题"是第一个命题的范围。
关于"物"的文章,一般涉及"社会事务、社会现象"等较为"具体、实在"的话题。这种话题重在强调"社会事件和现象",旨在考察考生的"观察问题、分析问题、解决问题"的实质能力。诸如2012年6月的四级考试"excessive package of procts"(商品过度包装)、2012年12月四级考试ecation pays (教育的回报)以及2013年6月六级的地球资源与人类的需求和贪婪,考察的都是关于"物"的实在现象。
(3)3种属性
所谓"属性",说的是作文的话题的"性别"--作文的话题是正面的、负面的还是中性的?确定了作文的"属性",加上作文考察的"范围",对整个文章的展开会有重大的作用。
正如数学概念中的"坐标轴",有"原点、负面和正面"三个概念。作文的主题,也同样可以分为"中性话题、负面话题和正面话题"三类。
通常而言,"负面、消极话题"需要在作文的二、三段阐述这个负面话题产生的原因、危害弊端和解决的措施策略;"中性一般话题"需要阐述这个话题或现象产生的原因,并且适当发表个人见解看法;而遇到"正面、积极"话题,则尽量论述这个话题的意义、重要性和价值以及这个话题对考生带来的启发。
以上就是英语四级作文防跑题秘籍的全部内容,希望对大家有所帮助。
3. 英语四级作文怎么准备
多背点范文,开关结尾什么的
下面是我个人认为比较好的范文
希望可以帮助到你
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX
It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).
Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through.
No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注释:
1:XX的第一个优点
2:支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点
5:举例证明优点二
6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities). If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe. Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one's ambitions). With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
(I)说明原因型模块(2)
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1).
The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
The impact of Television
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are inlge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover, (the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies). Especially when (the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.
The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second,(4). The third reason, actually, is (5).The significance for (6)。
Therefore, (7).
注释:
(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措
(2)归纳现状
(3)第一个原因
(4)第二个原因
(5)第三个原因
(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
Pollution
Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows.
the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).
Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it's high time that more effective measures should be taken. Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to rece litter and waste. let's make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).
(I)说明原因型模块(4)
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解决方法
Pollution of environment
These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the instrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).
To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future
明天六月我也要考四级了。一起加油吧
4. 求一篇坚持是成功的基础的英语四级作文。。
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5. 最简短的英语四级作文
we want to complete tasks efficiently and effectively,it is necessary for people to work with each other. In modern society,the spirit of team work has been attached much importance to.
It is generally believed that cooperation is of great vital to the final success of a team.Without cooperation,a person is unable to succeed,especially in this increasingly interdependent society.By cooperation,strengths of each member of a group can be integrated so that the goal can be achieved easily.
To sum up,it is significant for people to cooperate with others.Only when we work together,can the ultimate success be achieved from which each indivial can benefit a lot.
6. 工作中的成功用什么来衡量英语四级作文
英语四级作文范文:用考试来衡量学生的成绩,供大家学习参考
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1)大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩;
2)考生可能带来的副作用;
3)我对考试的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.
To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.
In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
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1.It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)
2.Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)
3.Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)
4.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)5.With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)
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8. 英语四级作文是什么样的
我感觉没有必要背.我考试时就没有背也过拉.
呵呵
不过你想背的话,最好是找议论文专,考试基属本上都是写议论文,而且议论文是最好写的。固定的格式就是三段。
第一段
,提出问题
第二段,分析问题,解决问题
第三段,结尾得出结论
英语中有好多的固定句型,尤其是对于开头或者是结尾都可以利用。
并且记得要用一些
连接词
,fist,second、、、
还有,what's
more,
in
my
opinion
,besides
.and
so
on
.等等一些
固定短语
。这样作文就可以得高分了。
不用担心,四级不难。有高中得水平就可以过。
请记得考试时要有
时间观念
,还要练一下听力。
马到成功!
9. 有关出名和成功之间的关系英语四级作文
自2005 年6月考试起,四、六级考试成绩将采用满分为 710 分的计分体制,不设及格线;
考试由内四部分构成容:听力理解、阅读理解、综合测试和写作测试。听力理解部分的比例 35% ,其中听力对话占 15% ,听力短文占 20% 。阅读理解部分比例为 35% ,其中仔细阅读部分(careful reading )占 25% ,快速阅读部分(fast reading )占 10% 。综合测试比例为 15% ,完型填空或改错,占 10% ;短句问答或翻译,占 5% 。写作能力测试部分比例为 15%。
写作占总分的15%,也就是108分,一般只要正常写,别跑题,字体还行的话,八十分左右还是可以的
10. 成功应该具备什么品质英语四级作文
Although honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor are all worthwhile characteristics, I feel the most important one in life to have is sensitivity. A sensitive person is aware of him/herself and the way their actions affect others. A sensitive person knows the place of honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor.
Honesty is not always the best policy. There is such a thing as a white lie. You don’ want to insult someone by saying that their new dress doesn’t fit properly or that you wouldn’t live in their new house if they paid you. You must be sensitive to when it is necessary to tell the truth and when it is better to tell a white lie.
Intelligence is a wonderful thing to have, but not all intelligent people use their intelligence sensitively. You don’t want to show off and make others feel stupid. You must be sensitive to the reactions of the people around you. It might be appropriate for you to admit that you have the right answer, but in some cases, you might have to say, “I think this is the answer, but we might want to check it.” A sensitive person would not make someone else look mb.
A sense of humor is always valued. Different people, however, laugh at different things. You don’t want to make someone feel uncomfortable by laughing at his /her mistakes. A sensitive person would understand whether a person could be teased or whether a person would appreciate a certain joke.
A sensitive person would make everyone feel comfortable. A sensitive person understands that people are different and that the values of honesty, intelligence and humor can be applied differently.