人物写作大学英语作文及点评

① 求一篇描写人物的大学英语作文.

Wang Nan－World Champion in Ping pong
Nan， a world champion in Ping Pong， is 1.62 meter tall with the weight of 54 kilograms. She was born in Loaning Province in October 1978. She began to play ping pong at the age of seven. She worked in Loaning Team for three years before she came to the national team in 1993. She trained hard and got along well with her teammates. Wang Nan has won scores of gold medals in international table-tennis games and won great honor for our motherland. She likes going on the net and she enjoys chatting with friends through the Internet. You can find more information about her at Wangnan@wang-nan net.

② 关于大卫的人物评价的英语作文

大卫科波菲尔：善良,正直,勇敢,真诚,经历了种种艰辛与磨难终得到幸 福大卫的母亲：善良,胆.小懦.弱,对于丈夫的虐.待毫无反抗,死.于虐.待辟果提：忠诚,善良,把大卫看做亲人,与巴吉斯结为夫妇巴吉斯：老实 厚道,有着对辟果提羞涩而浪漫的 爱,最后却与辟果提阴.阳相隔斯提夫兹：英俊 ,花.花.公子,颇有正义感,在任何地方都有威信,为大卫带来一些纠纷特拉德尔：贫苦却乐观向上,正义,善良摩德斯通姐弟：阴.险,可.恨,恶.毒.无.比大卫的姨婆贝西：善良,慈爱,明事理,富有,爱她的侄子和侄孙狄克：姨婆的顾问,正直威克菲尔：姨婆的法律顾问,大卫第二次就学就住在他家,深爱.着女儿艾妮斯,后被阴.险的小人欺.骗艾妮斯：威克菲尔最爱的女儿,温柔,娴淑,聪慧,一直深.爱着大卫希普尤利亚：阴.险,狡.诈,骨子里透着一股阴.气,总把卑.贱挂在自己身上,后欺骗了威克菲尔,受到应有的惩.罚辟果提大伯：孤独而善良的老人,在自己的船上收留了很多人,对艾米丽疼爱,在艾离开后,四处寻找她艾米丽：聪明,可爱,美丽,后与斯提夫兹私.奔海穆：憨厚的渔夫,深.爱着艾米丽,后艾离开了他古治米太太：慈爱,开始对生活不.自信,和艾米丽、海穆一样住在辟果提大伯船上斯本罗教授：大卫做学徒时的“师傅”,“斩钉截铁” 朵拉：斯本罗的女儿,天真烂漫,孩子气,父亲.死.后,和大卫结婚,不久,她也.死.了小说的主要人物的性格和故事大概是这样,没法把每个人都写上,敬请原谅.

③ 大学英语作文简爱人物赏析

Jane Eyre — A Beautiful Soul
Jane Eyre, is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul, obscure but self-respecting girl. After we close the covers of the book, after having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure, has left us so much to recall and to think:
We remember her goodness: for someone who lost arms and blinded in eyes, for someone who despised her for her ordinariness, and even for someone who had hurt her deeply in the past.
We remember her pursuit of justice. It’ like a companion with the goodness. But still, a virtuous person should promote the goodness on one side and must check the badness on the other side.

④ 英语作文评语大全

依式制行文,文笔素朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful

⑤ 写一篇关于人物的用英文写的作文老师评语是太过于中文化了是什么意思

就是你的表达方式不像英语，是中国式的思维习惯。比如你见到美国人说吃过了吗？就是中式思维习惯，他们不会这样问。

⑥ 介绍你最喜欢的文学作品人物&英语作文

Today I want to talk about my favorite book—‘Harry Potter’. The book ‘Harry Potter’ talks about a magic world that quite different with our real world. I like Harry very much because he is very brave and kindhearted. I learn a lot of thing from the story of Harry such as how to be brave and face the challenge in our daily lives. Thank you.

⑦ 评论一个人(人物简介+个人评论)英语作文

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⑧ 英语作文：（高中水平）描写一个书中的人物，对你生活的影响和你从他身上学到了什么。 非常感谢！

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我的是网络上偷来的
也查了半天的 求分啊啊。

Jane Eyre — A Beautiful Soul（简爱）
Jane Eyre, is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul, obscure but self-respecting girl. After we close the covers of the book, after having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure, has left us so much to recall and to think:

We remember her goodness: for someone who lost arms and blinded in eyes, for someone who despised her for her ordinariness, and even for someone who had hurt her deeply in the past.

We remember her pursuit of justice. It’s like a companion with the goodness. But still, a virtuous person should promote the goodness on one side and must check the badness on the other side.

We remember her self-respect and the clear situation on equality. In her opinion, everyone is the same at the God’s feet. Though there are differences in status、in property and also in appearance, but all the human being are equal in personality.

We also remember her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence…

When we think of this girl, what she gave us was not a pretty face or a transcendent temperament that make us admire deeply, but a huge charm of her personality.

Her story makes us thinking about life and we learn much from her experience, at least, that is a fresh new recognition of the real beauty.

Learn to love and care（雾都孤儿）
Here I am sitting on a couch alone, thinking about what I have just finished reading with tears of sadness filling my eyes and fire of indignation filling my heart, which revived my exhausted soul that has already been covered by the cruelty and the selfishness of the secular world for a long time. It is truly what I felt after reading Oliver Twist, written by the prominent British author Charles Dickens.

《简爱》——一个美丽的灵魂(简爱)。
《简爱》,是一个贫穷而有抱负的、小的体魄,而且大的灵魂,晦涩但自尊的女孩。我们关闭后,这本书的封面上有一段漫长的旅程后,简·爱,一个奇妙的形象,给我们留下了如此多的回忆和思考。

我们记得她的善良:某人失去手臂和瞎了眼,给那些鄙视她,她的平凡,甚至有人伤害了她深深地在过去。

我们记得她正义追击。它就像一个同伴和善良。但是,有一颗善良的人应该促进美善的一面,要检查的不良的另一边。

我们记得她的自尊心和清晰的情况在平等。在她看来,每个人都是同样的在上帝脚下。尽管存在着不同的状态,在性质和外观,但是所有的人都有同样的人格。

我们还记得她的努力,她的韧性和她生活信心…

当我们想到这个女孩,她给了我们并不是一个美丽的脸庞,或一个超然的气质,让我们欣赏深,但一个巨大的人格魅力。

她的故事让我们思考人生和我们学到很多东西,从她的经验,至少,这是一种新的识别真正的美丽。

学会去爱和关心(雾都孤儿)。
在这里,我坐在沙发上,想着我刚刚读完与悲伤的眼泪来充实我的眼睛和火的愤慨,重新填满我的心,我疲惫的灵魂都已经被遮盖的残忍自私的世俗的世界很长一段时间。它确实是我感到读完《雾都孤儿》,由著名的英国作家查尔斯·狄更斯)

⑨ 20篇英语作文加意思评语

英语一的小作文考了一篇告示，Directions表示假设，Suppose表示假设。后面这个词表示图书馆的一个馆员。假设你是一个图书馆的馆员，在你们大学，写一个notice告示，大约一百个词，提供给这些新晋被录取的留学生，enrolled表示录取的意思。这个词2006年MBA作文就出现过。工程硕士招收录取情况，新晋被录取的留学生提供一些关于图书馆相关的信息，你应该整洁的写在答题卡上，不要签你的名字，在结尾使用李明代替，不用写地址。
这道题目考的是告示，很多同学可能写成了书信，还有同学反应上了考场，一看李明就写成书信了。很多人在微博上问我，说写成书信会不会不给分?这点大家放心，不会的。书信和告示只是格式有些区别，老师主要还是看的你语言和内容，即使你完全写成书信的方式，最多扣一两分，甚至不一定会扣，还是关键看你的语言写的怎么样，所以大家不过太用担心。
告示题型考过两次了，研究生考试从2005年开始考小作文，其中十年都是书信，2010年英语一考的是告示，招募志愿者。英语二2015年考的是告示，招募志愿者。所以小作文英语一、英语二加起来，一共考了17次，其中15次是书信，两次是告示。这种题型大家应该不陌生，比方在新东方面授班、强化班我们讲过2010年那篇告示，在精讲精炼班，我们讲过2015年英语二那篇告示，在最后的冲刺班、点题班我都提供告示的范文，大家如果认真听过课，不管是面授班还是网络课程，应该觉得不难写。
这篇文章我们知道告示的格式，首先第一行应该写一个Notice，放在第一行正中央，第一个字母大写，不要点点，因为这不是一个句子。下面应该写日期，像今天是12月26号，如果基础不太好的话，你可以使用缩写，12月可以使用Dec.，第一个字母D大写，后面来一个点表示缩写，26逗号2015，2015不要点点，中间正文，正文写一段到三段都可以。但是建议大家最好还是写成三段，最后来一个落款，题目要求落款写李明，就写李明就可以，不能出现自己的真实姓名。
告示的格式包括四个部分，就是标题、日期、正文、落款，上文说过，即使你格式写错了也没关系，最多扣一到两分，关键还是看你的语言，你的内容和题目是不是沾边。这道题目首先write之后是提纲。第一点提纲，就是提供一些关于图书馆相关的的信息，关于图书馆，考研作文考过。2007年考研作文，考的就是给图书馆写一封信，关于改进服务，提出你的建议，很多同学背了那篇作文，这篇文章其实可以使用，不是很难。
这个题目表面上看只有部分提纲，但你应该展开，首先第一段可以做一个声明，说我是一个图书馆的管理员。下面说明自己的写作目的，其实还是可以按照书信的那种方式去写，后面写这个告示就是为了告诉大家我们图书馆的一些相关信息。

⑩ 求大学英语作文描述一个人物！！！！ 谢谢啦！！！！

Who is your favourite person? I like Zhang Yining best. She is a famous ping-pong player. Now I will tell you something about her.
Zhang Yining was born on October 5, 1982 in Beijing. When she was 6, she began to play ping-pong. In 1991, she joined the provincial table-tennis team. In 1993, she entered the national team. She always worked hard, and she never gave up. So at the 2004 Olympic Games in Athens, she won the gold medal of Women's Singles. It was the hundredth gold medal that China got at the Olympic Games. Before this, she and Wang Nan won a gold medal together. She was the third player who obtained two gold medals at the same Olympics in ping-pong. Before her, only Deng Yaping and Wang Nan could do that.
So I think she is very great. We are all proud of her. We should learn from her. Don't you think so?