英语写作亮点的表现方法

A. 高考英语写作，如何提升文章亮点

要想把一篇文章写好，不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，以增加文章的亮点，给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧设开头和结尾

1．开头

常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。虽然开头有着各式各样的风格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各异，但又有其共同遵循的原则：

开头多是通篇文章内容的摘要

开头常能展示文章的主题

开头应能抓住读者的注意力，引导读者读下去。

用于文章开头的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．结尾

结尾的方法有很多，如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。

结尾一般是文章的升华或对文章主题的归纳，也是写好文章的关键。好的结尾能唤起读者共鸣，深化主题，给人回味，引人深思。

用于文章结尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准确地道的英美式表达

1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异

a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)

a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)

2．恰当使用限定词

用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意词语的习惯搭配

用词准确不仅要求考生掌握具体单词的含义，还要熟悉词语的习惯搭配，一定要避免受汉语影响而出现错误。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口语化

高考作文一般应该使用较正式的书面文体，因此在写作时要避免使用口语化的词汇。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免赘言啰嗦

赘句是指用词不简练。表达某一思想，本来只需要一两个词，却用了冗长的词组或者从句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表达结构

1．变简单句为并列句或复合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．语态互换

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．语序调整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．强调句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感叹及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．语气虚拟

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非谓语动词的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入语

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好坏。

(3)No pains，no gains.不劳无获。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老学到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.学无止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。

11．句式调换

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

B. 英语写作方法

英语写作方法六大原则：
1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)
2. adverbial advanceed (状语提前原则)
3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)
4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)
5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)
6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)
高分作文的五大特性
1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整，层次分明）
2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确，用词精当）
3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰，行文连贯）
4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁，不重复）
5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高，表达个人观点内容积极向上）

过渡词的使用
过渡词是一种关系指引词，一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外，代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”，在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用，学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑，启、承、转、合，过渡自然，融会贯通，连成一体。
1、根据意思和作用的不同，过渡词可以分为以下十六类：
（1）表并列关系的过渡词：
and, also， as well, as well as， or, too, not only…but also, both … and, either … or, neither…nor等。
（2）表递进关系的过渡词：
besides, in addition（加之，除……之外）, moreover(此外，而且), what’s more， what’s worse等。
（3）表转折对比的过渡词：
but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first… whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand … on the other hand, some…others等。
（4）表原因的过渡词：
because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, e to（由于）, for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。
（5）表结果的过渡词：
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so…that, such…that?, accordingly等。??
（6）表条件的过渡词：
if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。
（7）表时间的过渡词：
when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。
（8）表特定的顺序关系的过渡词：
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)（后来）, meanwhile（几乎同时）, thereafter（在那以后）, last, finally, eventually（终于）等。
（9）表换一种方式表达的过渡词：
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。
（10）表进行举例说明的过渡词：
for instance, for example, take … as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。
（11）表陈述事实的过渡词：
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。
（12）表强调的过渡词：
certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。
（13）表比较、对比的过渡词：
like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand…, on the other hand, otherwise 等。
（14）表目的的过渡词：
for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。
（15）表总结的过渡词：
in a word(总之，简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。
（16）表增补的过渡词：in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what’s more, similarly, next, finally 等。
2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成，在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接，“转”是转折，“合”是综合或总结。
（1） “启”。
用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头：
过渡词： first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently,
过渡句：It is often said that…,
As the proverb says…,
It goes without saying that…,
It is clear/obvious that…,
Many people often ask …
（2） “承”。
表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中：
过渡词： second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what
is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt，
过渡句：It is true that…,
Everybody knows that…,
It can be easily proved that…,
No one can deny that…
The reason why …is that …,
There is no doubt that…,
To take…for an example (instance) …,
We know that…,
What is more serious is that…
（3）“转”。
用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中：
过渡词：but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead,
过渡句：I do not believe that…,
Perhaps you’ll ask why…
This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to…,
Though we are in basic agreement with …, yet differences will be found,
That’s why i feel that…
（4） “合”。
用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中：
过渡词： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking，to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus，after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up
过渡句：From this point of view …
On account of this we can find that …
The result is dependent on …
Thus, this is the reason why we must…

长短句结合
（1）句子既要生动，又要简明扼要。
（2）在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、复杂句和复合句并用，还可以使用简化句等，一些较复杂的结构如独立结构，分词结构等也可以使用。
（3）可以使用一些特殊句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力，以增加文章“亮点”。强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。(这是我上初中时英语老师给我的，帮助了我，希望也能帮助你。。)

C. 英语写作技巧的定义，特点，功能各是什么急用，谢谢

定义；一）掌握技巧：
（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。
结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。
要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。
前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。
（2）确定主题句
主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。
写主题句应注意以下几点：
①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话。
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。
（二）巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词。
表示罗列增加
First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand,Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as ring,

表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in fact, actually

表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,

表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or,neither …nor

表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, e to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系
as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系
though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when, whom)

表示举例
for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较
be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,

表示目的
for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示强调
in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,

表示概括归纳
in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion

特点：

D. 怎么写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

字迹，短语，词汇，从句，句式。
短语词汇背点逼格高的，虚拟语气最好用用一句，定语从句基本每句话都可以用适当用两句就行了，句式去网上扒然后背，最后就是字迹流畅，整体美观。

E. 怎样使英语作文有亮点

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。

F. 英语中有表达方式、表现手法（写作手法）和修辞吗

1、表达方式：
诗词中来主自要运用叙述、描述、议论、
抒情四种表达方式，这其中描写、抒情是考查的重点。描写方式有动静结合、虚实结合等的不同；抒情方式有（抒情方式
主要有直接抒情和间接抒情两种方式。）直抒胸臆、借景抒情、寓情于景、情景交融情景相生
情因景生
以景衬情
融情入景
一切景语皆情语等。
2、结构形式：
诗歌的结构形式，常见的首尾照应，开门见山、层层深入，先总后分，先景后情、卒章显志，过渡、铺垫、伏笔等。
3、修辞手法：
主要的修辞手法有：\"对偶\"\"比喻\"\"拟人\"\"借代\"\"夸张\"\"排比\"\"反复\"\"象征\"寄寓
寄托等，
4、写作技巧：
写作技巧包括：赋比兴、衬托、对比、渲染、卒章显志、画龙点睛、以小见大、欲扬先抑、联想想象、语序倒置等。
5、艺术风格：
包括雄浑、旷达、豪放、俊爽、冲淡、沉郁、悲慨、婉约

G. 如何增加英语作文亮点

加入经典语句，好词好句

H. 语言表达方式有哪些写作表现方法有哪些

叙述，描述，议论，抒情，说明
写作方法有欲扬先抑，以小见大，虚实结合，借物抒情，托物言志，象征，对比等等

I. 如何让学生在初中英语作文写作中闪出“亮点”

亲情是什么？爸爸告诉我亲情就是他对我的管教。亲情是什么？妈妈告诉我亲情就是她对我的关心和体贴。亲情是什么？我认为亲情就是我们子女对爸爸妈妈的理解和报答。

六年级时，我的期末考试成绩不理想。拿素质报告书的那一天，天气和我的心情一样由晴转阴，下起了滂沱大雨。我快速跑回家，躺在床上。爸爸喊我出来，他问我考了多少。知道我考的分数时，他打了我一巴掌，我脸上火辣辣地疼，心里十分悲伤、愤怒。我冲进雨中，仿佛只有这滂沱大雨才可以平息我心中的悲愤。我站在雨中，任雨水无情地滴落在身上。清凉的雨水缓解了我脸上的疼痛，但不能减轻我内心的痛楚。

那天，我淋了太多的雨，当晚便发起了高烧。妈妈连忙把我送到医院，医生说还好送得及时，如果再晚会儿，脑子就会被烧坏了。晚上，我醒了以后，看见爸爸在偷偷流泪。我本想恨他一辈子的，现在我又情不自禁地要原谅他，我心里乱极了，迷迷糊糊地进入了梦乡。

早晨醒来，我看见爸爸趴在我的床边睡着了。我的鼻子酸酸的，心里很难过。我把外套盖在爸爸身上，爸爸被惊醒了，只见他的双眼布满了血丝。爸爸露出一丝微笑，帮我把被子盖好，小声地问我道：“感觉怎么样？头还疼吗？”我轻轻地摇摇头。爸爸又说：“都是我不好，请你原谅爸爸，好吗？”此时，我悲喜交集，闭紧双眼，两行热泪流了出来。爸爸轻轻地拭了拭我的眼泪，我沉默不语。爸爸慢腾腾地走出房间，然后一声长叹，我的心几乎被砸碎了。

空荡荡的房间里，只有我一个人。我的目光停在一只棕色的玩具小熊身上，它勾起了我美好的回忆：在我九岁生日时，爸爸从远方回家，为我买了这个玩具小熊，当时我幸福地抱住了爸爸……

我明白，爸爸打我是因为爱我，他是望女成凤太心急了。作为子女，我应该努力学习，不辜负爸爸对我的期望。亲情永不下岗，我应该好好学习，做一个有出息的人。

J. 英语中有表达方式，表现手法（写作手法）和修辞吗

写作方法属于来艺术表现方法（即：艺术自手法和表现手法，也含表达手法（技巧）），常见的
有：悬念，照应，联想，想象，抑扬结合、点面结合、动静结合、叙议结合、情景交融、首尾呼应（也叫前后呼应）、衬托对比、伏笔照应、托物言志、白描细描、
铺垫悬念、正面侧面比喻象征、借古讽今、卒章显志、承上启下、开门见山，烘托、渲染、动静相衬、虚实相生，实写与虚写，托物寓意、咏物抒情等。表达方式就
是常见的叙述、描写、抒情、议论和说明。（其实也属于艺术表现手法）