英语高考短文写作
⑴ 跪求高考英语范文5篇……(基础写作)最好是100字左右啦!!!
【基础写作范文 1 选登 基础写作范文 选登】 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late th 19 century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were co ntested ring the 1904 and the 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympics in shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 【基础写作范文 2 选登 基础写作范文 选登】 It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896’s three events to today’s seventeen. 【基础写作范文 3 赏析 Shooting was originally a tool of people’s survival, which 基础写作范文 赏析】 developed into a sports event at the end of nineteenth century (定语从句). In 1896, it became one of the Olympic events for the first time(简单句). In 1904 and 1928 Olympics, it was stopped, after which it returned in 1932(定语从句). It was in 1968 that women were allowed to join in the shooting competition for the first time (强调 句) . From then on, the event is developing steadily and smoothly with the shooting competition number increasing from 3 in 1896 Olympics to17 by now ④Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to It
Long long ago, several people had a jar of wine among them and all of them wanted to drink it by himself. So they set a rule that every one would draw a snake on the ground and the man who finished first would have the wine. One man finished his snake very soon and he was about to drink the wine when he saw the others were still busy drawing, so he decided to draw the feet to the snake. However, before he could finish the feet, another man finished and grabbed the jar from him, saying,"Who has ever seen a snake with feet?” The story of"Drawing a Snake and Adding Feet to It.” tells us going too far is as bad as not going far enough.⑤Making His Mark
A man from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isn’t this a very foolish way to look for a sword?
⑵ 高考英语作文字数
高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得-5分。高考英语作文,不管是全国卷,还是地方卷,都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。一、一般一篇25分,字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.概要部分少于20词或多于40词;全文少于130词或多于180词的,从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5.拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如字迹难以辨认,以致影响表达,将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档:(21—25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。l覆盖所有内容要点。l语法结构和词汇有个别小错误,但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。l有效地使用了衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档:(16—20分)完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一、二个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。l应用简单的语句间的衔接手段,全文结构紧凑,内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档:(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。l虽漏掉一些内容,但基本覆盖主要内容。l应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。l应用简单的衔接手段,内容基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。l漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇有限。l有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对所写内容的理解。l较少使用衔接手段,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1—5分)未完成试题规定的任务。l明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容。l语法结构单一,所用词汇不当。l有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响内容理解。l缺乏语句间的衔接手段,内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分:未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。
⑶ 五篇高考万能英语作文
高考英语作文万能模板
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) オ
2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段: Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ
3.观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)
4."How to"类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段: Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、图画类写作模板:
1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
⑷ 高考英语作文写作技巧
1.尽量用短句,避抄免长句。
2.多用高级词汇,避免误用。
3.字迹清晰,尤其注意要工整,不能涂改,有时间最好打草稿。
4.多留意范文的开头与结尾。注意借鉴
5.注意总结,对各种类型的文章最好能背上一二篇范文。
(这是我的亲身经验!)
(我今年高考英语作文应该只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功)
⑸ 求高考英语作文写作技巧
一、作文得分标准分成四个部分~
1、【内容分】(7分),内容分也叫要点分,也就是题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点,没有反社会言论,就可以拿7分了。【想拿高分和优秀的孩子千万不要漏点!!!一定要检查再检查,内容分扣分是很夸张的,漏一个大要点直接扣10分,也就是降两档处理(阅卷老师会怀疑我们提前背了与考试无关的作文去考场写),漏一个小要点也要扣2分了】
2、【结构分】(6分),结构分包括(1)段落分配和(2)连词的运用。我们平时背的那些模板,其实就是在帮我们梳理结构,背下模板,拿到结构分满6分是非常非常正常的~~所以,我非常鼓励大家背模板~~(结构写的灰常棒,比模板还好的娃请折叠我)后面结构分我会重点说。
3、【词句分】(6分),词句分,顾名思义,是指运用‘’准确的单词+优秀多变的句型‘’得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分,考察的是学生的基本功,6分满分非常难得,但是拿2~4分还是相当容易的。优秀和高分的分水岭就在词句分上~
4、【卷面分】(6分),卷面一是字迹工整美观,二是不能涂改(所以一定要打草稿啊)。这两个都达到了,卷面满分6分妥妥拿到~ [我对大家的要求就是,想拿高分,卷面请不要扣分!!!在这里扣分非常不划算,要用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。]
二、【结构分】提分方法(一)完美的段落分配
前文已经说过,全国卷是提纲类作文,当拿到一个提纲作文时,我们首先要干嘛呢?对咯,就是要根据背景和提示内容分段。我和其他老师一致认为,高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间,我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。三段式作文请按照下图结构来写~
⑹ 各类型高考英语作文经典范文
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信,我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街,不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达,前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间,其中一个是卧室,其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床,一个沙发和一个办公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望,但我会尽我所能,满足您的需求。如果还不够,给我写信,我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里!
就到这里啦!
此致,
李华
⑺ 英语短文写作万能句子,高考用
朋友,找到了记着给我发一份啊,我英语也不行,[email protected]发我邮箱就行了,谢谢你。
⑻ 关于高考英语作文
英语的连词也有很多,在选取了一些适合高中生学习和掌握的连词和连接语后,也大致的归结为以下三类:
一. 表明事件发生的时间顺序:
这一类连词不多,大致有以下这些,也是最为我们学生所熟悉的,主要适用于第一类叙述类题型:
then, first, at once, next, after that, previously, while, when, the following day, etc.
二. 表明文章的组织结构:
这一类的连词和连接语最多,也最为实用,适用的范围也广,能够灵活广泛的应用后四类题型。
1)渐进类(Listing): firstly, in the first place, secondly, thirdly, my next point is, last/finally, etc.
2)举例类(Illustrating): for example/ for instance, to illustrate, an example/ instance of this is, let’s take….., take…. for example, etc.
3)重申类(Re-stating): in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, let me put it this way, or rather, namely, etc.
4)旁引类(Referring): in this respect, in that connection, as we said, apart from this, etc.
5)重述类(Resuming): to resume, to return to the previous point, getting back to the argument, etc.
6)总结类(Summarizing): to sum up, in short, it amounts to this, what I have been saying is this, etc.
7)强调类(Emphasizing): it is worth noting, I would like to direct your attention to, let us consider, we must now turn to, I shall begin by, etc.
三. 表明作者的观点、态度
这一类连词和连接语对于表达主观观点用极大的促进作用,适用于后三类题型。
1)看法类 (opinion expressing): in my opinion, I think/believe/suppose, I agree with…, as I think, it is said, people think, etc.
2)补充类(Introcing): further evidence: moreover, furthermore, in addition, what’s more, as well, etc.
3)原因类(Cause): because (of), since, owing to, on account of, e to, as a result of, etc.
4)结果类(Effect): as a result, hence, therefore, consequently, thus, so, etc.
5)对比类(Contrasting): in / by contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, whereas, while, yet, however, but, etc.
6)比较类(Comparison): in like manner, likewise, in the same way, similarly, in comparison with, etc.
7)目的类(Purpose): to this end, for this purpose, with this in mind, in order to, so that, etc.
8)递进类(Intensification): indeed, in fact, in any event / case, at no time, to tell the truth, etc. (上述连词分类参考自“PETS阅读中需熟练掌握的连接词”一文)
熟练的掌握上述有限的单词对于高中阶段的学生来说要求并不高,相反其中很多单词和短语都是学生的课本和练习中经常出现的,学生虽然经常读到看到,但真正能在自己的写作中运用的却少之又少。现在按照上面的分类重新梳理上述连接语的作用和分类,把它们记住,就完成了我们高考作文进步的第一步。
高考作文评分的特点和应对方法
首先让我们来看看高考对考生写作能力的要求:
1) 灵活运用语法与词汇、组句成文,正确表达的能力;
2) 审题准确、组织语言材料有序的能力;
3) 能使用好适当的过渡性词语使上下文承接有序,自然通顺的能力。其实以上三点合到一起就是检测学生的英语综合能力。上文已经说过,英语综合能力的提高还是需要学生靠平时脚踏实地的积累。本文所要提出的,是在有限的迎考时间内有效的提高英语写作得分的学习方法和迎考策略。因此,上面的第三点才是本文所要对症下药的症状。接着我们来看看高考阅卷的评分标准。
自从2001年开始,高考书面表达启用了新的评分标准,规定书面表达按5个档次给分。主要的评分原则有:评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分;词数少于80和多于120的从总分中减去2分。评分中应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性;如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。上面这一段话中的黑体字部分明确的表明连接语的运用得当对作文分值的影响。另外从高考阅卷的老师处也了解到:行文连贯是阅卷教师比较看重的一个方面。最后我们再来看看每一档次的作文分值中对连接语的要求:
第五档(很好):(21~25分):有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(好):(16~20分):应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第三档(适当):(11~15分):应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
第二档(较差):(6~10分):较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
第一档(差):(1~5分):缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
从上面的评分标准可以看出,无论是英语水平处于哪一个档次的学生,在写作的过程中,如果想要交出令自己满意的答卷,要想为自己的作文加分,都不能忽视下面这一条:要有适当的连接成分,即连接词和连接语的使用。为了使文章在整体上结构严密,浑然一体,增强文章的说服力和感染力,考生应该在句子与句子之间,甚至段落与段落之间,恰当地使用一些过渡性词语。
另外,考生很容易犯的一个错误是,在写出若干个句子以后不使用连接词或连词,出现“run-on sentence”(连续句)现象,这是英语写作的大忌。考生一定要牢记,在英语书面表达中一定要用一个连词或连接词连接两个句子(当然,有时用一个分号要连接两个句子),两个连词连接三个句子,三个连词连接四个句子,依次类推。
要想让学生最后能有针对性地应付高考中的作文题,一定先要熟识上述所有的连接语及其使用的语境,教师在平时可以多采用联句成段的教学方式来培养学生使用连接语的习惯和语感,再加上平时的写作练习,使学生能充分重视和体验到连接语对于写作的重要性。在进行写作练习的过程中,可以给学生看一些经典范文,指出其中连接语对于文章结构的妙用,然后让学生进行模拟练习,最后还要及时批改,对使用了连接语的作文进行表扬和点评以起到鼓励学生的作用。
最后在考试时,学生在拿到作文题目后首先要明确写作要求,即我们常说的审题,判断题目到底属于哪一类文体,然后在脑海中搜索适用的连接语,对于该用到哪些连接语一定要有一个清醒的思路,然后挑出有用的记录在旁。从阅卷的情况来看,很多考生没有认真思考,动笔就写,之后在写作的过程不断出现一些错误,这是严重影响实际成绩的鲁莽的做法。
实例论证
我们首先看一看高考中的一篇满分作文。
Sample Writing I (2001)
I'm very pleased to(强调类) tell you the changes of my life since(原因类) rection of learning load was brought in. But before that(比较类),I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening(时间顺序类),I was often forced to do my boring homework and(结果类) I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since(原因类) the program of recing learning load was introced,my life,however(对比类),has been much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and(时间顺序) draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time. After lunch(时间顺序),I watch TV,read stories and(时间顺序) look through newspapers to enrich my horizon. No longer do I stay up;on the contrary(对比类),I go to bed at about 10p.m. In short(总结类),I am quite satisfied with my life now.
上面这一篇作文,是一篇叙事性的文章,因此其时间顺序类连接语也用得最多,在总共用到的13个连接语中,就有4个,但是每一个都不相同,因此通读整篇文章,不仅不让人觉得累赘,反而使文章结构合理,行文流畅。另外类型连接语的合理运用,就更使得整篇文章语言灵活,材料组织有序。相反,如果去掉文章中的所有连接词,那么这篇文章的分值就要掉两个档次。
再来看一篇高考范文:
Sample Writing II(2006)
Film or book, which do you prefer?
Some of us think(看法类) that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that(原因类) it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides(补充类), the film is usually more interesting, and(递进类) it is easier to follow.
Some others have just the opposite opinion(对比类). They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile(对比类), the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
Personally, I agree with(看法类) the second view. Actually (递进类)I have more reasons for it. I think(看法类) I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more(补充类), I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word(总结类), to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. (2006浙江省高考参考范文)
这篇文章属于议论文,因此,在其中用于表达主管看法类的连接语最多,其它的连接语也多是第三大类中适用于议论文的词组。一篇范文是老师阅卷的标准,范文既然如此,可见连接语的熟练使用对一篇作文有多么的重要了。
综上所述,希望可以通过本文的叙述,使学生认识到连接语在英语写作中的重要性,并通过学习和掌握连接语的使用使学生的英语作文写作水平能够得到一定的提高。
⑼ 求高考英语作文范文10篇!
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