高考英语写作范文6篇
1. 高考英语模范作文 (5-10篇)
给你一篇接近满分的作文
要求:120字左右
1.谈论看电视的好处与弊端
2.谈谈你自己的观点
Currently,there is no denying that television,to a certain extent, has played a significant part in our life. As is shown according to the reserach,a quantity of people regard it as amusement,most of whom are children.Nevertheless,beyond doubt,not only does watching TV have pros but cons as well.
For one thing, a mount of people can learn a lot from television which, to a certain degree,has a significant impact on our life.In addition,not merely can we get some information ,but also we can enrich our spare time.More importantly,we could also
bring us imagination as well as know the social condition by means of watching TV .
For another,It is universally acknowledged that every coin has two sides and watching TV is no exception ,for the reason that certain people ,exspecially children,are fond of watching TV day and night,which is bad for their eyes seriously.Besides,those who watch TV frequently may become near-sighted.Last but not the least,if you watch TV frequently,it will stop us from
building up.
As far as I am concerned,I am exceeding for the opinion that watching TV is a good way to have fun e to the reason that it could brings us some amusement and information.But for it,we couldn't have got such a good many of knowledge as well as have a good time.
2. 谁有高考英语作文六大类型的范文!(带翻译)
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信,我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街,不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达,前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间,其中一个是卧室,其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床,一个沙发和一个办公桌,25平方米小公寓里有椅子,租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望,但我会尽我所能,满足您的需求。如果还不够,给我写信,我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里!
就到这里啦!
此致,
李华
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘,谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
11.More hasty,less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun,half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.Out of sight,out of mind. 眼不见,心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat,but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭,吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.East or west,home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth,a needy age. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
35.As the tree,so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn,to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习,学习为了更好的活着
3. 谁能帮我找10篇高中英语作文范文
1.Facts About Ingredients List
The ingredient list is like a recipe - it tells you what is in the food. You can tell a lot about a food just by looking at the ingredients. Ingredients must be listed in descending order by weight. So, the first ingredient in the list is present in the highest amount, followed by the second, then the third and so on.
Let’s look at the ingredient list on a loaf of bread as as example. Ingredients : High protein flour, water, granulated cane sugar, vegetable shortening, baker’s yeast, salt, soy flour, dough conditioners, vitamin C, calcium, iron, calcium propionate.
High protein flour is the first ingredient listed so it is present in the greatest amount, followed by water, sugar, and vegetable shortening. Vitamin C, calcium and iron have also been added. Quite often, sugar, fat and sodium can appear in different forms e.g. sugar may appear as dextrose, maltose, and sucrose; fat may appear as ghee, lard, vegetable oil, and shortening; while salt may appear as sodium bicarbonate, baking powder and MSG.
2.如何交朋友(How to Make Friends)
Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends?
First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.
Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don’t agree someone, please discuss with him.
Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend’s interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.
3.你相信有人有特异功能吗?(Do You Believe There Are Persons with Supernatural Power?)
It is said that there are persons who have supernatural power, such as someone who can see things next door through the wall, see gas pipes underground and the organs in a human body, someone who is able to get things out of a covered bottle by his will, and someone who is capable of reading with his palm.
Although there are quite a lot of phenomena in the world which seem inexplicable and quite a number of things which we don't under stand, I don't think there are persons with supernatural power. Those so-called supermen may be only persons who wish themselves to be supermen and therefore become supermen in their own imagination. Then they will show wonders through magic tricks. I don't believe it because no scientific experiments have proved its truthfulness yet, and I have never seen any person who has supernatural power. As the proverh goes, seeing is believing. Perhaps I'll believe it when I meet someone who will show me his supernatural power. With the development of science, the question whether there are persons with real supernatural power will become clear.
4.A Meaningful Activity
In order to improve the quality of the students, our school has now started an activity called"Build Civilised Classes and a Harmonious Campus".The topic is to get rid of bad habits and meet civilization.
Bad habits do exist. Some students throw rabbish and plastic bags everywhere or spit in public. Some boy students wear long hair. Others are even addicted to smoking and drinking. We require that students break away from these bad habits .We urge the students to wear their school uniforms and be polite to others.
During the activity, we'll have picture shows, competitions of classrooms and dormitories decoration.
5.
依靠自己(Depend on Yourself)
Depend on yourself" is what nature says to every man. Parents can help you. Teachers can help you. Others still can help you. But all these people only help you to help yourself.
There have been many great men in history. Many of them were very poor in childhood, and had no uncles, aunts or friends to help them. Schools were few and not very good. They could not depend on them for ecation. They saw how it was, and set to work with their strength to know something. They worked their own way till they became well-known. One of the most famous teachers in England used to tell his pupils, "1 cannot make worthy men of you, but I can help you make men of yourselves."
Some young men don’t try their best to make themselves valuable to human beings. They can not gain achievements unless they see their weakness and change their course. They are nothing now, and will be nothing as long as they live, unless they accept the advice of their parents and teachers, and depend on their own efforts.
6. the selection of universities
Nowdays many students send up thier minds about going into which college for diffent aids.
In my minds, we should select college according to both of intresting and the needs of social life.And thus they will have a righter choice about going into which college.
When we talk the selection of universities , the first thing we always think about is what can your parents do for you after you graate from the university you chose , so this kind of question usually boring us a lot , and the more earthy question is the school we chose will not be we preferred . in my opinion , chosing a favorite is more important than one you dislike . what your goal is makes you will be in the future . what is a university for ? a job ? or a dream you want to fulfil . there were so many people they lost their dreams when they gave up the things they were chasing ! do not make yourself repentent.
7.
Chinese New Year or Spring Festival is the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is sometimes called the "Lunar New Year" by English speakers. The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first month (Chinese: 正月; pinyin: zhēng yuè) in the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th; this day is called Lantern Festival. Chinese New Year's Eve is known as chú xī. It literally means "Year-pass Eve".
Chinese New Year is the longest and most important festivity in the Lunar Calendar. The origin of Chinese New Year is itself centuries old and gains significance because of several myths and traditions. Ancient Chinese New Year is a reflection on how the people behaved and what they believed in the most.
8.
Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends? joozone.com
First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.
Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.
When you don’t agree someone, please discuss with him.
Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend’s interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.
9.学校组织体育活动的好处坏处
Apparently, most schools often organize sports activities, such as football games, races and etc. However, people have different views about these sports activities.
Most teachers hold the opinion that sports activities are good to the health of the students and can rece the possibility of illness. There's a saying which can express their reason-life lies in motion. And they also believe that ring those activities, the students can develop the spirit of hard work and cooperation, and as a result, they will be more active in their lessons.
On the contrary, most students argue that these games are completely a waste of time. If they can use the time learning their subjects instead of playing football, they'll make great progress in their lessons. What's more, they feel very tired after these activities, which has a bad effect on their learning efficiency.
From my perspective, sports activities should be supported. We can shorten the time of these activities so that they may not affect our lessons. Although we may feel tired after these games, we can learn to relax ourselves by listening to music or something else. And then we'll surely become energetic again. In conclusion, health is our foundation to work. And the only way to keep fit is to take exercise.
10.How to Rece Stress
Directions: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Rece Stress.to-day basis, stress may result from the small things: taking an exam, waiting in line, and having too many things to do in a limited time.
We all need stress to add flavor, challenge, and opportunity to life, but too much stress can seriously affect our physical and mental well-being, It reces the body’s immunity and harms the brain, If the stress lasts a long time, it may cause physical illness, insomnia, headaches, backaches, ulcers, high blood pressure-even heart disease.
When stress does occur, it’s important to recognize and deal with it. There ore some methods we can try. A large number of physical activities can rece onxiety. Shoring our stress with others can be enormously helpful. Making time for fun such os listening to music may be good medicine. Sometimes even crying is on efficient way to releose stress.
4. 高考英语作文模板常考范文
(1)
2005年10月12日,举世瞩目的神舟六号载人飞船成功发射;10月18日,飞船顺利返航,举国上下为之欢呼雀跃,世界各国媒体给予了极大的关注。请就此事写一篇英语短文,表达自己的高兴和骄傲之情。
1. 字数100左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,使内容连贯。
3. 生词提示:
载人的adj. manned发射 v. / n. launch
神舟六号 Shenzhou VI航空 n. aviation
(2)
某英文报社正在举办有关“英雄”问题的讨论话题,请你根据以下提示用英文写一篇100词左右的文章以便寄到该报社参加讨论。
1. 英雄(见义勇为的人)具有什么样的品质?
2. 为什么现在英雄越来越少?
如果让你选择,你愿意做英雄还是普通人?
(3)
假如你叫李华,你和笔友Jane互寄了全家的合影。Jane看了合影后来信问为什么你没有兄弟姐妹。请用英语写封100字左右的回信说明情况。内容包括以下几点:
原因
1.中国人口增长过快;
2.二十世纪八十年代开始实行计划生育;
3.大部分中国家庭是独生子女。
看法
1.能受到好的教育;父母关爱更多;
2.孤独、自私,生活能力差;建议多交朋友。
注意:1.可适当增加细节使行文连贯;
2.字数100左右;
3.开头已给出,不计人总字数;
4.参考词汇;计划生育family program独生子女the only child
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请以“Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit” 为题写一篇80—100单词的短文。提示如下:
1.报纸是重要传媒。看报能获得国内外最新消息……
2.报纸能丰富我们的生活,上面有……
3.对我们学英语的人来说,看类似《中国日报》这样的英文报纸,……
(5)
目前,越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。对于这一现象,存在两种不同观点。请你根据下表提示,以Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?为题,写一篇短文,反映表中内容,并简要阐述自己的观点。
有些人认为有必要
另一些人认为没有必要
跟老师学比自己学好
可以巩固课堂所学内容
可以学到更多的东西
容易养成依赖习惯
学生需要时间休息
许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的
要求:(1)层次清晰,连贯流畅;表达灵活,但不要逐字逐句翻译;
(2)词数:120 词左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数);
(3)参考词汇:巩固strengthen vt.
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“神六”返回以后,人们就“普通人去太空旅游”的话题展开了热烈讨论。请你根据下列提示以 “The advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel”为题写一片英语短文,简要地谈谈你的观点。
太空旅游的利
太空旅游的弊
1、提供人类居住的新场所。
2、给人类提供新能源。
3、帮助人们更好地了解宇宙。
4、太空研究对其他领域有好处。
1、花费太大。
2、人类住在其它行星上的想法不切实际。
3、太空旅游有危险。
注意事项:1、短文必须包括所列内容。
2、不要逐字逐句翻译。
3、词数110 左右。
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周笔畅宣布退出“超女”演唱会的巡演,重返校园。对此你和同学们展开了激烈的讨论。一部分同学不赞成“超女”重返学校。认为这是对她的一次锻炼,可以获得更多的演出机会,而且可以更早地实现当歌星的梦想。但也有一部分同学赞同“超女”的做法。认为学校的学习比演出更重要,这样可以使声乐基础更加牢固,而且,频繁的演出也是一件很劳累的事情。如果你是她,你会选择退出还是留下?说明你的理由。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;
2. 参考词汇:过多的excessive;
3. 内容要点可用不同方式表达;
4. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
(8)
2004年雅典奥运会使中国令世人瞩目,中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌记录。获金牌的运动员除了得到政府奖金20万元以外,还会从地方得到更多的奖励。对此,社会各界反响不一。
赞 成
不 赞 成
1.运动员为国争了光
2.运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水
3.奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养
1.运动员是国家培养出来的,为国争光理所当然
2.得到大量奖金后,有些队员就会退役
3.一些企业趁机炒作,从中获取广告效应
请你就此现象进行简单阐述,并提出自己的一些看法或建议。(120词左右)
提示词汇:奖金bonus
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你班同学参加了“二十一世纪中学生英文报”组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:城市宁日是否可以豢养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社投稿,介绍讨论情况,并说明自己的观点和建议。
反对饲养宠物的同学认为
支持饲养宠物的同学认为
1、造成环境污染
2、吵闹声,甚至伤人
1、安慰孤寡老师
2、人与动物和谐相处,增添生活乐趣
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好
2、词数100左右
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近期,中学聘请外教之风愈演愈烈,请你结合下表对其利弊发表自己的观点。
好处
1. 提高学校的知名度。
2. 提高学习英语的兴趣,口语表达能力增强。
3. 更好地了解外国文化。
弊端
1. 花费高。
2. 一些外国人难以适应我国的生活方式,甚至担心自己的安全。
3. 外国人不了解中国学生的特点。
自己的观点
一切需要靠自己
注意:1. 词数:100左右2. 短文应包括表中所有要点
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯4. 开头及结尾已给出
参考范文
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China’s second manned spaceship Shenzhou VI was launched success fully on October 12, 2005 and returned to the earth on October 18. The six-day space trip is a great success to China and draws (to itself) the attention of the media from all over the world. The Chinese people feel very pleased and cheer for that. As a student as well as a Chinese, I feel not only happy but also proud of this great achievement made in aviation. I strongly believe that the development of China’s aviation and future will be better and better. As far as I am concerned, now I must work hard so that I can make a contribution to our great nation.
(2)
Society Calls for Heroes
In my opinion, it is not so easy to be a hero. First, a hero must be brave. When he sees someone do a bad deed, he must be brave enough to catch him or to stop him. Secondly, he must be strong enough; otherwise instead of catching the criminal, he himself will be beaten to death. There are fewer heroes now for several reasons. I think the most important reason is that people don’t want to mind other people’s business because they think it will do them no good. But I think it will do them no good. But I think society calls for heroes. Fighting against crimes is not just the job of the police. It’s the ty of every citizen.
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Dear Jane,
Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.
As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family programme---- one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better ecation. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every the only child like me should learn to make more friends.
Hope that we write more often.
Best wishes!
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Reading Newspapers Is A Good Habit
Newspapers are important media. They can provide all kinds of latest news from both at home and abroad, which can help us understand the world better.
Newspapers can also make our life rich. In newspapers, we can read stories about a variety of people, find weather reports, introctions to new books, advertisements on traveling, and so on.
As English learners, reading newspapers in English, such as “China Daily”, is one of the best ways to improve our English. There are many words, phrases and structures for us to learn, and what’s more, we can acquire abundant knowledge of history, culture and society.
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Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more, Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. What’s more, the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.
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The Advantages and disadvantages of Space Travel
There are several advantages of space travel. First of all, it could provide man with new places to live in and new sources of energy. In addition, space travel helps people understand the universe better. Also space travel research does good to other research fields.
However, space travel also has some disadvantages. It uses up too much money which could be spent in other ways. What’s more, the idea of man living on other planets is unrealistic. Space travel could be dangerous, too.
In a word, though there are the disadvantages, I think space travel is a good thing. It is important for man to explore and learn about the universe.
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My Choice
If I were a "Super girl", I would go on with my studies rather than touring performance. Anyway, learning at school is more important to one’s life experience. We all know that knowledge is power, so with more knowledge, I shall surely become more successful, which means a brighter future for me. At the same time the excessive amount of work ring the tour is hard. My company doesn’t seem to care about my future development. All of this made me feel terrible, physically and mentally. Nevertheless, I’d rather return for further studies and obtain a sound foundation for my future. I think I shall become a singer — a real singer.
(8)
China has become a shock to the world in Olympic Games 2004, so the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of ¥200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. Some say the players have own the honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. What’s more, it will benefit the training of future players. Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. Besides, it’s said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their procts. I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not money but the spirits of the Olympic Games.
(9)
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.
Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comforts from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary the other students are against the idea. In their opinion if too many people keep pets at home, it's bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
I like animals, so I don't think it's bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment.
(10)
Several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in China, many people would gather around and stared at him or her as if they were watching a rare animal.
However, it’s not uncommon to meet some foreigners even in middle schools now. There’s no doubt that schools will be better known. What’s more, it’s good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures. Meanwhile, their oral English will be improved a lot. On the other hand, some foreigners, though well paid, find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry about their safety. The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students. As a result, many students can’t benefit from them.
5. 谁给我提供几篇高考英语作文范文
英语作文的基本要求:
首先,一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想,该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic),这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次,一个段落必须有若干推展句,使主题思想得到充分展开,从而给读者一个完整的感觉,这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一个段落不是杂乱无章的,而是有机的组合,句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑,从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth),这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences,一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,这一段是讲的是Joe and I ,中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出,native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了,造成偏题或离题,那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样,一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实,就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样,虽然有推展句,但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待,给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如:
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”(心境不平静)Physical work又如何能改变这种情况?为什么它能起therapy的作用?读者得不到明确的答案。因此,要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如:
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法,必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释,整个段落内容空洞,简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话,就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、连贯性(coherence)
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。
1)、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段从“rose”(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐(“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”),然后是“close to noon”,一直写到这一天结束(“By nine——”)。
B. 按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处(“from a distance”)写起,然后“get closer”,再到(“ten feet away”),最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a. 按重要性顺序排列(arrangement in order of importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”,最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个 ”perhaps”加以例证。
c. 由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。
2)、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在半个小时内写120个词也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的”it”之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
4、有损连贯性的几种情况:
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:
1、不必要的改变时态,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改变单复数,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改变人称,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。
英语作文的书写格式
英文书写应符合书写规范,英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮,通篇匀称和谐。
写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。如字母i,应该先写下面的部分,然后再打点。有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写,写快了,就会把点和下面的十笔连在量起,显得十分别扭。字形t应为两笔。不少人却将两笔合成一笔,看上去不像t,倒像l或是e,难以辨认。另外,把r写成v,把q写成把g,把k写成h等等,都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。
不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩,能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写,但在白纸或横线纸上书写,却显得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下,或一律写成同一高度,占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。这些现象都要防止。
另外,书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离,不能紧靠在一起。字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯,不能随意乱来。
在一篇字数有限的作文里,我们还要注意尽量不把一个单词拆开移行。万一要移行,则必须以音节为单位进行,如revolution这个词,依照音节移行的原则可以按re-,revo-, revolu-这几种方法移行。在移行时,我们还应特别注意以下几点:
1. 单音节词不能移行,即使是字母较多的单音节词,如through等也不能例外。
2.缩略词如Mr.,Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆开移行。
缩略的专用名词如U.K.,U.S.A等也不能拆开移行。
3.时间、量度及货币单位应视为一个整体;不能分开移行。如;
11:00P.M.应写在一行内,不能将11:00和P.M.分开移行;写38℃时,不能将38和℃分开移行。
4.由“年、月、日”表示的日期,如果必须分开移行只能将“月、日”与“年”分开。如January 6,1980不能将January和6分开移行,但可以把January 6,和1980分成两行。
5.含双写辅音字母的单词,在移行时要将辅音字母拆开。如better可拆成better,necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果双写辅音字母属于词根,后面又加了后缀,就不能将两个辅音字母拆开。如drill加上-ing后构成了drilling,就不可以将它拆成成dril-ling,而只能拆为drilling。
例文:
1.宠物:
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.”
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物:
Elizabeth Bennet (伊丽莎白)
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she graally comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy’s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二个女儿和最聪明和机智,伊丽莎白是自豪感和偏见的主演和其中一个在英国文学的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的质量是numerous—she是可爱的,聪明,并且,在对话定义的小说,她一样精采地交谈象任何人。 她的诚实、美德和活泼的机智使她在胡话之上起来,并且弥漫她的坏行为类跳起和经常恶意的社会。 然而,她的伶俐的口舌和倾向经常做仓促评断带领她迷路; 自豪感和偏见本质上是故事她(和她真实的爱, Darcy)怎样克服他们自己的个人failings—to发现浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊丽莎白必须不仅应付一个绝望的母亲,一个遥远的父亲,二非常表现的更加年轻的兄弟姐妹,并且几位势利,对抗的女性,她必须也克服Darcy她自己的错误印象,最初带领她拒绝他的求婚。 而她驾驶家族和社会动乱,她魅力是充足保持他感兴趣,幸运地。 当她逐渐来认可Darcy’s字符的贵族,她体会她对他的最初的偏见错误。
6. 高考英语作文
2010年高考英语作文万能模板系列
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help ring my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
演讲及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). /It is high time that we (发出倡议).
五、图画类写作模板:1.开头
Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...
2.衔接句
As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3.结尾句
In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...
一,英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
如何高兴收到你的来信了。
让我告诉你一些有关活动。
我很高兴收到你的4月9日的信。
我很高兴地听到你要来中国进行访问。
我写信来感谢你的帮助我在美国逗留期间,你。
结尾部分:
有了良好的祝愿。
我期待着您的答复。
我很感激,如果你能回答刚才。
二,口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
女士们,先生们,我把你的注意力,好吗?我有一个要发布的消息。
正文部分:
所有的老师和学生都必须参加的。
请把你的笔记本电脑和做笔记。
请仔细听,我们将有一个小组的讨论。
请准时,不迟到。
结束语部分:
请大家踊跃参加它。
大家都在欢迎出席。
我希望你有一个很好的时间在这里。
这样就好了。谢谢。
三,议论文模板
1。正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:最近我们已经讨论了关于是否应... (导入话题)
我们的意见分歧就这一议题。(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:大部分学生都予以支持。(正方观点)
在这里,其中的原因。第一...第二...最后...(列出2〜3个赞成的理由)
第3段:但是,其他人则强烈反对。 (反方观点)
他们的理由如下。在第一个地方...更重要的是...此外...(列出2〜3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:个人而言,超重的优点的缺点,因为我们会做弊大于利,所以我支持它。(个人观点)
2。“甲或者乙”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:有些人的看法,一个是优于B在许多方面。另一些人则认为,B是好多了。就个人而言,我宁愿A,因为我觉得有更多的优势。
正文:
第2段:有,为什么我喜欢甲的原因很多,最主要的原因是...另一个原因是,...(赞同甲的原因)
第3段:当然,B也有一定程度的优势... (列出1〜2个乙的优势)
结论:
第4段:但如果所有这些因素考虑,甲比乙更从什么上面的讨论,我们可以得出这样的结论...(得出结论)
3。观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
作为一名学生,我强烈赞成这一决定。 (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
这可能会列出的理由如下。 (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:首先...其次...除了...(列出2〜3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:最后,我相信... (照应第1段,构成“总 - 分 - 总”结构)
4。“如何”类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:许多方法可以帮助解决这一严重问题,但下面可能是最有效的。首先...另一种方法来解决问题是...最后...(列出2〜3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:这是不是最好的,但只有2 / 3,我们可以采取的措施。但是,应该指出,我们应采取行动,...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四,图表作文写作模板
图表给了我们一个整体的图表主题图片。首先我们看到的是,图表最大特点。这意味着,作为(进一步说明)。
我们可以看到从给定的统计数据,图表细节一。动词后,安泰细节一中的第一个变化,是动词- ED镜头+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化)。这些数字也告诉我们,图表细节二。在专栏中,我们可以看到,占(进一步描述)。
从这些数字来看,我们可以得出这样的结论(结论)。这样做的原因,据我所知是(给出原因)。 /现在是时候,我们(发出倡议)。
五,图画类写作模板:1。开头
看看这个picture. /图为/从这张图片,我们可以see... /由于在picture...显示/正如图片中看到that... ...
2。衔接句
提醒大家都知道,... /由于众所周知,.../众所周知that... /在我看来,.../据我所知,.../这景象我的东西在我的日常生活。
3。结尾句
在conclusion... /在brief... /在whole... /在short... /在word... /一般speaking... /正如已经指出...
7. 求高考英语作文范文10篇!
Passage 1
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8. 求15篇高考英语作文
范文:Mrs Wilson ,
I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change.
LI Hua
10)全国卷 (2)
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近大学的外籍教师Smith 女生来做评委。请参照以下通知给她写一封信。
英语演讲比赛
主题:人与自然
时间:6月15日下午2:---5:
地点:501教室
参赛选手:10名
联系人:李华(电话44876655)
范文: Dear Ms. Smith ,
I’m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students’ Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university . I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes
Li Hua
11) 全国卷 (3)
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需要书面预约,请按下列的要求写一封信:1.本人简介 2.求助内容 3.约定时间 4.你的联系方式(Email: [email protected] ; Phone:12345678)
范文: Dear Sir ,
I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university . I’m writing to ask for help . I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library . I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons . Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me . Here are my email address and phone number :[email protected] ; 1234567.
Look forward to your reply .
Yours ,
Li Hua
09)安徽卷 (4)
假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。 内容包括:1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通
范文: Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble . They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
10)安徽卷 (5)
假设你将参加某英文杂志开展的一次征文活动,内容要求你在电视,手机和网络三者中,放弃其中的一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?” 为题,写一篇短文。
范文: Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?
We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used . It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .
However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet . I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there’re too many commercials . Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .
As for cells and the web , they are more necessary to me . I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .
11)安徽卷 (6)
某校英文报社开设了一个专栏:experience . 本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己的一些做法。
范文: My approach to difficulties in learning
As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning . Everyone has their own ways to deal with them . Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages . In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .
However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my classmates or teachers for help . Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice . As a result , I have made steady progress in my studies .
11)湖南卷 (7)
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文:
A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea
A tree +two trees +many trees = forest
One person +two persons +many persons =society
范文: The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea. Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society . It conveys a message to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .
The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters . If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others . On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it possible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .
10)湖南卷 (8)
假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期2个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动 2. 谈谈你们开展活动的收获。
范文:
Boys and girls ,
Today I’ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have concted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many such activities can be held .
That’s all. Thank you.
11) 陕西卷 (9)
假定你是李华,在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法 2. 陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。
范文: Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
09)湖南卷 (10)
假设你是某中学新老师李红,请给你的朋友张华写封信,告诉他你第一天上课的情景,主要内容如下:1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介绍你处理该事的方式 3.谈谈你的感想
范文:
Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
10)陕西卷 (11)
假定你是李华,你们学校和一所美国学校签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里,你们的英语老师是来自这所学校的Sue Wood 。 不久前她返回美国任教。请根据要求写封电子邮件。1.对她表达感谢之意 2.介绍她离开后自己和班级发生的事情 3.希望了解她的近况
范文:
Dear Sue ,
I’m LiHua ,one of your students in China .It’s almost a month since you left us . We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together .
We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday we went there and watered them. The three you planted yourself is growing well ,and the whole class decided to name it Sue wood . Will you come back to see Sue wood ?
How is everything with you lately ? We hope to know more about you and your American students . Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
Liu Hua
09)陕西卷 (12)
假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助。请根据以下内容,写作要点和要求回帖。
Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08
Hi, everyone , I’m 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn .But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year-old . What should I do ?
写作要点:1.告诉Grown-up 要理解母亲 2.给Grown-up 提出解决问题的具体建议
范文: Hi, Grown-up ,
As a student of your age , I understand your situation . The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers . However , it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings . Here are a few suggestions . First , it’s advisable to talk more with your mom . I am sure that talks must help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things . Second , you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”, it’s even better to share more of the housework , such as cleaning ,washing and cooking .
Hope my idea will work out .
11)江西卷 (13)
假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s ride bicycles”的英语演讲比赛活动。请撰写一份演讲稿,主要内容:1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞问题 2.骑自行车的益处,如节能环保,有利健康等 3. 参考词汇 low-carbon life energy saving
范文:
Good morning , everyone ,
I’m Li Hua from Xing Guang Middle school . The topic of my speech is “Let’s ride bicycle” .
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards , cars have become a popular means of transport ,bringing great convenience to our life .However , they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams .
How can we solve the problems then ? As far as I am concerned , riding bicycles is a good solution .For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy –saving . For another , bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas .What’s more , riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health .
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles . Come on and join us !
Thank you!
11)天津卷 (14)
假设你程光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示,给美国的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动安排并简要说明理由,最后征求对方的意见。 1.上午与我校学生座谈(如校园文化,文化差异)2.中午与我校同学共进午餐(饺子,面条等) 3.下午和我校学生游览海河。
范文: Dear Mr. Smith ,
I am Lihua ,chairman of the student union , from chenguang high schoo. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.
In the morning , there will be a forum in the school auditorium , where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other ,talking about school life and cultural differences . At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste mplings ,noodles and other Chinese foods .In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the HaiHe river .
How do you like the arrangements ? I hope you will have a nice time in Tian jing
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
10)天津卷 (15)
假设你晨光高中的李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑假到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据提示写给校评选组一封申请信:1.对此活动的认识(如对本人,学生和社会的益处)2.个人优势(如性格,独立生活能力,语言能力等) 3.你的计划(如怎样辅导等)
范文: Dear Sir/Madam ,
I’m lihua from class one ,senior two . I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English ring the summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests . So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need . Besides ,I ‘ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on .
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
9. 高中寒假英语作文6篇字数120
1.Pollution:
With the development of economy,especially the development od the auto instry,we have more and more pollutions of different kinds. Air pollution,water pollution,soil pollution and noise pollution are all destroying our human life,although modern instry has brought us the comfortable life that we all want.It is really difficult for us to choose whether we need modern life or pollution.It depends on everybody in the world.
2.Mr.Smith is our English teacher who is very strict with us and strict in his teaching as well.But he is really so famous in our school that nearly everybody konws him and loves him.It seems that he is superior to the other teachers in teaching,and everybody enjoys attending his lectures.Also,he always appears in different social activities and plays an important role in it.Meanwhile,he cares more about his students than about himself.He shows great concern to the kids,no matter the kids are in his class or not.It is said that he seldom goes back to his hometown to visit his parents,although it is only 30 minutes' drive.If you have some troubles in your mind or in your study, just go up to him,you will be satisfied with his help.And sometimes,he would lend or give some money to the students who are poor.And for that,he has given up smoking for a long time.We are all moved when we heard that someone had put some cigarettes secretly in his drawer.Now you can see,how famous and great Mr.Smith is!
3.I enjoyed my winter holiday very much,for it was a happy,but busy one. During the winter holiday,we all celebrated the China Spring Festival.It was the tradition that we spent much time visiting friends and relatives with lots of daily-used gifts.Most of the children,perhaps were the most enjoyable, eating mplings,playing fire-works,watching TV programmes specially made for the Spring Festival's Eve and getting Yearly-Best-Wishing money from the old generation and so on. I was so happy that I never got sleepy ring the peak moment.And I went to a traditional fair(gathering) to watch the shows with my best friends.We had a good time there.Now,the winter holiday is coming to its end.I have to take time to do my homework.But,I also look forward the next Spring Festival's coming.
4.WINTER VACATION 计划
The winter vacation of this year is coming.Certainly enough,we are going to have a happy,but busy holiday of 25 days.In the winter vacation,first of all,I want to have a gathering with my classmates and friends to relax ourselves. and Secondly,I am going to read several books that I am very interested in.Thirdly, I have to follow my parents to visit some of my relatives ring the Spring Festival.That's the tradition of China.You cannot avoid it.Finally,I decide to download some pieces of music into my MP3 so that I can appreciate it in my spare time later.I think I will have a very rich winter vacation.Really enjoy it!
5.Because I have realized that friendship can play an important part in our life and work,I have made lots of friends with my classmats and teachers.We help each other and love each other. And I think I can get enjoyment, comfort and support from them,especially when I have some difficult problems.I treasure the friendship very much,and I regard the friendship as one part of my life.I wish I will never forget this social relation with my classmates and teachers.Perhaps,it is the start of my social life.Everybody knows,a far relative is nothing more than a close neighbour.I think my friends are my intimate neighbours both in the society and in my heart as well
6.ON THE WAY TO SCHOOL:
My school is quite close to my house.So I always walk to school by myself.I don't need anybody's care,for I think I have already grown up.During my walk,I can appreciate the street scenery,such as flowers,grasses,modern buildings and all kinds of people as well.I am very proud that I am watching the city 's growing and developing.Sometimes,I can give some help to those who are old and poor,even I can give some help to those who are strange in this city. ,when I am walking in the street,You know, I take the time to recite some articles.So,when I get home,I almost finish my oral homework.I should say I enjoy walking.