上海初中英语记叙文写作

『壹』 初中英文写作，写一篇短小精悍的记叙文，使用现在完成时记叙一次你在全班面前的演讲的经历，，求帮忙写，

As to take part in the speech competition, I prepared much for a month. Firstly, I asked my English teacher about her advice to my topic. Then, I searched the Internet for the material. Also, I asked for help to perfect my speech after I have finished it. At last, I recited and practised my performance before my classmates again and again.
With the competition day coming. I got more and more nervous. And myparents kept encouraging me. When I stepped on the stage. I was frightened at first. Then I saw my parents and other helping people, and then I became confident. Finally, I have got the champion. I was so happy and so gateful for the ones who had helped me
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『贰』 如何写好初中英语记叙文作文论文

如何写好一篇英语论文

You need some help? Some people say essays are tricky. Here are some helpful hints to make them less difficult。

你需要帮助吗？有人说，论文很难写。这里有一些有用的提示，可帮助你克服写作中的困难。

1. Take your prompt and pick it apart! Understand exactly what it is asking you to do. If it says 执行uate, then you conclude, if it says to compare or contrast then do that. Take notes!

1. 抓住主题，深刻领会！准确理解它要求你做什么。如果说是写评价，那么你就得出结论，如果说是比较或对比，那么就照此去做。务必要作好笔记！

2. Look over whatever the prompt addresses and begin to pick that apart based on what your prompt is asking for, and do not discriminate yet, take all of it. Take notes on ideas for the prompt, and mark pages in any literature you may be using。

2. 认真审核主题到底要说明什么，然后根据你的主题要求开始提炼选材，但选材不拘一格，多多益善。为主题观点做好笔记，并标记出你可能使用的任何文献的章页。

3. Look at the prompt and the information you've gathered and begin to group ideas together so you can create a working thesis. The working thesis will give your essay a focus so you don't digress in the middle of your writing。

3. 根据主题和你收集的信息，开始将观点组合在一起，这样你就可以创建一个写作大纲。写作大纲将突出你的重点，以便你在写作中不会偏离主题。

4. Continue your brain-storming and write the topic sentence for your first body paragraph. Make sure it provides a focus for your paragraph and it isn't general. Find examples from life (direct quotes, paraphrasing, etc。) or from the topic literature that you can use in your first body paragraph. Make sure it follows your working thesis, but don't actually write the paragraph yet。

4. 开动脑筋精益求精，写出第一个主体段的总起句。确保它成为你第一个主体段的重点，而不是泛泛而论。从生活中(直接引用，转述等)或同一主题文献中找到可以用在你第一个主体段的的范例。确保它与你的写作大纲一致，但先不要正式写这个段落。

5. Do the same for the other body paragraphs.

5. 依次处理其他主体段落。

6. Write your concluding statements for each paragraph. Please note that it is a CONCLUDING statement, meaning you need to bluntly say what point you are trying to make and lead it into your next body paragraph。

6. 写出每个段落的总结性语句。请注意，这是总结语句，也就是说你要直截了当地说明你想阐述的观点，并将其引入下一个主体段。

7. Brain-storm for your introctory paragraph. Start by either addressing a theme or a topic you've researched that is relevant to your essay. Now look at your working thesis. What parts of it look like a summary? Take those out and put them into your intro. Look at your working thesis again. You need a fact or some sort of event which is relevant to your topic, to put into that thesis. Paraphrase it, and add in whatever point you are trying to make to it。

7. 仔细斟酌你的引言段落。开始可先确定一个与论文相关的研究主题或标题。现在看看你的写作大纲。它的哪些部分看起来像总结？把这些部分提出放入你的引言。再看你的写作大纲。你需要找到与你主题相关需加入论文的某个事实或事件。加以解述，并添加你想证明的观点。

8. Read whatever notes you took for your body paragraphs and look at your thesis for your concluding paragraph. You need to reiterate all the points you make in your body paragraph and relate them briefly to your thesis to show how they are all connected。

8. 读一读你为主体段落所做的笔记，并审看一下你总结性段落的主旨。你需要重申在你在主体段中提出的所有观点，将其与你的论文简洁联系起来，以说明它们之间是何种关系。

9. Write. This is the easiest part after you've outlined it all already。

9. 写下来。当你列出所有这些主线，写作就是轻而易举的事情。

10. Look for grammatical mistakes. Look it over today, and see if you can pick anything out that is really obvious。

10. 寻找语法错误。当天过一遍目，看看你是否能挑出什么特别明显的错误。

11. Look at your essay once again on the next day and fix it. Redact it. Make sure it is grammatically perfect. Read it out loud to see if anything sounds awkward, and fix it。

11. 第二天再看一遍论文，并作修改。校订论文。确保它在语法上无懈可击。大声地朗读，看看有没有什么听起来格外别扭的地方，并加以修改。

tips:提示：

Make sure your writing is logical. Don't just throw ideas together and hope they make sense。确保你的写作合乎逻辑。不能只是将观点罗列在一起，指望他们自行说明意义。

Don't worry too much about grammatical mistakes, or synonyms for words you have just used in the sentence before. Just underline or highlight it and then go over it in your second draft. The important thing is to get it all down in the first place。

不必过于担心语法错误，或担心你刚用在前句中的同义词。只要用下划线或高亮将其突出显示出来，然后在第二稿中仔细推敲。最重要的是先把写作完成。

If you don't need the internet, disconnect! Nothing is more distracting than the internet when you're typing up your essay and are feeling extremely bored。

如果你不需要互联网，那就断开！当你正在键入文章并倍感无聊时，没有什么比互联网更让人分心的啦。

Have a thesaurus

and a dictionary handy at all times, especially if you have the habit of using words whose meanings you are not completely sure of。

手头要始终有一个同义词词典和一本字典，尤其是如果你习惯于使用你不能完全确定含义的字词。

『叁』 初中生记叙文写作素材

你要几个，我那儿有四十多个，先给你两个吧。
1、 相信
两位情同手足的好朋友。有一次，他们在阳光下各持一把剑练习着。这时，其中一个人开玩笑说：“我要把你一刀砍成两半！”另一个很有信心且毫不在意地说：“好呀！试试看。”结果，血溅一地。阳光下，一对好友，瞬间成为仇敌。原来的好朋友，在友谊的阳光下，一个深信对方不会下手，另一个则确信他会避开……可最后，他们都错了。相信他人，可是该信什么呢？怀疑一切，同样是可怕的。
2、 祷告的手
大约1940年，丢勒和奈斯丁是一对好朋友，都是在奋斗中的画家。由于贫穷，他们必须半工半读才能够继续学业。可因为工作占去他们许多时间，两人的画艺进步很慢。困惑了良久，两个人想出一个办法，决定，一个人工作来支持彼此的生活费，另一个人则全心学习艺术。丢勒赢了，得以继续学习。而奈斯丁则辛勤工作，供应两个人的生活所需。几年后，丢勒成功了，他按照两人当初的约定找到奈斯丁，履行支持奈斯丁学习的协议。可他发现，为了支持自己而辛勤工作，奈斯丁那双原本优美敏感的双手的手指已经僵硬扭曲，遭到终生的损坏，不能灵敏地操作画笔了。丢勒心痛如绞。这天，丢勒去拜访奈斯丁，发现奈斯丁正合着双手，跪在地上，安静而诚挚地为他的成功祷告。艺术家双眼潮湿，将朋友那双祷告的手画了下来。这幅画成为举世闻名的《祷告的手》。其实，在我们每一个人的背后，其实都有着一双，或者更多双这样的手，值得我们铭记。比如：慈母渐渐霜白的头发，父亲渐渐佝偻的躯干，爱人日渐增皱纹的面颊。