长春高老师雅思英语作文
A. 雅思英语作文问题
故事是这样的
以前在各大学校里都流传着这么一个恐怖故事
说是A校有不干净的东西 每当十五的时候 学校门口的鲁迅像的眼睛就会动
所有教学楼都会停电
楼梯会从原来的13阶变成14阶
实验室的水龙头放出来的水会变成红色
还有1楼尽头的那个厕所只要有人进去了就再也出不来了
于是 一群不信邪的孩子们约好15那天去探险
晚上12点 他们准时来到了那所学校的门口
鲁迅像的眼睛望着左边 他们记下了 生怕出来的时候记不得有没有动过
他们来到了教室 打开开关 咦 不是亮着的么？
“骗人。”一个男孩发出抱怨
“再看看吧。”
来到了楼梯口 “1 2 3...13没错阿 是13阶阿？”
孩子们有点怀疑传说的真实性了
于是他们又来到了实验室 水龙头打开了 白花花的水流了出来
“真没劲阿 我们白来了！”
刚开始的刺激感都消去了一半。
最后 他们来到了那个厕所
女孩子虽然口上说不相信 可是还是不敢进去
于是让刚刚很拽地说不怕的小C进去
看了表 1点整
2分钟后 男生出来了
“切 都是骗人的”
孩子们不欢而散。
出门时 一个看门人发现了他们 喝斥他们怎么可以那么晚还在学校逗留。孩子们撒腿就跑
小B特地注意了一下门口的石像 没错 眼睛还是朝左看得
“骗人的”他嘀咕了一声
“喂 小B么？小C昨天晚上和你们一起出去玩 怎么还没回来？”第二天早上 小C的妈妈打电话过来询问。
小C也没有去学校上课
孩子们隐约感到不对了
于是 他们将晚上的探险之事告诉了老师和家长
大家在大人的陪同下回到了那个学校。
“什么？ 我们的鲁迅像的眼睛一直是朝右看的阿。”校长听了孩子们的叙述 不可思议的说。
“可是我们昨天来的时候是朝左看的阿”
出门一看 果然 是朝右看得...
“可是昨天的确有电阿”
“昨天我们这里全区停电...你们怎么开得灯？”
“还有楼梯！”孩子们迅速跑到楼梯口
“1 2 3...12？”
“我们的楼梯一直是12阶的。”
“不可能！！！”
“还有实验室”一个孩子提醒道
“对 实验室”
一行人来到实验室 就在昨天他们开过的那个水龙头下 有一摊暗红色的痕迹。
“是血迹。”
“那...小C昨天还去过那个厕所...”大家都感到了一阵莫名的恐惧
“走 我们去看看”校长也意识到了事情的严重性
...
推开门...
小C的尸体赫然出现在大家的眼前
因为惊恐而睁大的双眼
被割断的喉管血淋淋的
内脏散落在已经干掉的水池里...
“阿...”小C的妈妈当场昏了过去
几个老师马上冲出去呕吐...
小B也被吓得目瞪口呆
在他晕过去的前一秒钟
他瞥见小C的手表
指针停在了1点...
就是小C进去的那个时候...
顺便说一下 他们去探险的那天晚上 并没有门卫...
将此贴转向5个以上的论坛不会魔鬼缠身且能实现一个愿望 。
不回帖者晚上凌晨过后往往......
对不起，我很不情愿，但是......请各位原谅！
B. 雅思英语作文
建议抄首先可以参加袭北外雅思培训班，上完课后要整理笔记，总结开头-主体段落-结论的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。
考前50~60天，练习句子翻译考前40天，练习观点和词汇：挑选各个专题的话题若干，每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作；
考前30天：以熟练为主，完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作（每两天一篇）。
考前20天：挑选三种文体的代表作，请老师批改并面授点评，看看问题所在，有针对性提高和改正。
考前15天：限时写作，每天一到两篇，提高写作的感觉和速度。
C. 雅思中介绍好朋友的英语作文
A good friend is one who can help you when you are in trouble. A good friend is one who can laugh with you and cry with you together. A good friends is one who can say no when you do wrong. A good friend is one who can help you in many ways, such as working, studying, life and so on. Everyone needs good friends. With good friends, our life becomes happier and we can live longer.
D. 请英语高手改一篇雅思英语作文谢谢啦
找专业的吧~ 新奇雅思有写作批改卡，我买了两张，我觉得还不错。老师改的都很认真很负责，我觉得很有用处，我写作考了7的，加油！
E. 求雅思英语作文
If you wanna talk about playground legends, the conversation begins right there. Demetrius "Hook" Mitchell is the legend. You can hear all the stories in the world, but you'll never believe it until you see it. He's done inhuman stuff, unreal stuff.
was by far the best player to come out of Oakland. Demetrius Hook Mitchell is the Bay's most notorious legend. Every cat with at least minimal knowledge of playground ball has a Hook Mitchell story. The tales of his leaping ability are common place. Jumping over cars, bikes and people wasn't no thing to Hook. Before his descent into narcotics hell, Hook was nothing but heavenly. If he'd just kept his head straight, he'd be in the league right now, dominating.
Unfortunately, Hook lives in a prison cell now and in other folks' memories.
Several NBA stars who also grew up in Oakland, including Gary Payton, Jason Kidd, Antonio Davis, Drew Gooden, and Brian Shaw, all of whom played with Mitchell on the streets, and were astonished by his skills, but were unable to help him avoid his sorry fate. They describe his unstable home life and the longing for community that drove him to the streets. Mitchell himself is shown playing prison league games, and is surprisingly still able to play above the rim.
His story, like others, was written on courts between the West and East Bay.
F. 请英文老师看雅思的作文，thanks
1 I personally think that having a break between university graation and working life is better as the indivial is more mature.
2 Anyway, you get all your points in pros and cons addressed. However, the points should be organised in such a way it is more coherence and easier to read and understood by the reader/marker.
3 One point, I do not understand is, are you asking the student to co-habitate ring the one year break to become housewife?
4 stimulated to work or travel, may be motivated to work or travel is better
5 you had use words like stimulated, subsequently, meanwhile, consequently. I think you used for the sake of using and end up they just do not fit into the sentences.
6 adopt themselvies, write, for personal maintenance
7 you tried to write as much as possible, but your sentence structure is 'broken'. You must write in such a way that when the reader reads it, it is 'smooth' and coherent. This is especially in paragraph, ' In other hand,......‘ I find this paragraph very messy.
Final coment； I am not sure what level you are writing at? CET8? or English teacher standard? If yes, your standard is below par.
G. 求一篇雅思的英语作文
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.
这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文，相信对你有用，你也可以去看看其它的范文。
H. 长春市教英语作文最好的老师哪有
1.当老师不一定要读类学校.
2.如果是应届毕
业生,最好先当老师.如果先去做回别的再去当老师就成了答往届毕业生,这在教育部门的政策上是有局限性的.
3.不一定要一样,但是最好要一样.因为以后评职称的时候你所教专业和
你的文凭上的专业要对口.举个例子:比如某教师读大学读的是中文,后来他做了历史老师,
那么,他就要再修一个历史文凭才可以具备教历史的资格这在评职称的时候很重要.
你说的工理专业去教数学应该
是可以的.只要你
能胜任教学,学校会聘你的.
以上是我做教师的一点经验之谈,希望能给你以启示!
I. 100分悬赏，求大家帮我看看两篇雅思英语作文，一篇修改前，一篇修改后
看了你的文章,我终于明白你为什么在分以下了.
分析一下你的优势和劣势:
你的优势:1, 能够清楚理解题目含义 ; 2, 有一定的逻辑性和良好的思维能力.
3,有一定单词量和英文基础.
你的不足: 1, 应该重点练习并熟悉英文的语句结构,和词汇用法.虽然你有一定的单词量,但是你对他们的用法还不够熟练. 例如:你首段的第一句,就是一个没有主语的重句.还有第二段第一句中的"reap",用在这里不太恰当,因为"reap"的获得是作为努力的成果而获得的,用在这里似乎词不达意.
2, 觉得你的写作方式很原创,一看就知道是你写的.呵呵.因为我个人觉得你的好多话都是你个人临场发挥的.我的建议是你平时能够多读一些文章,熟悉各种词汇和语句的用法,再把你认为经典的收藏为己用.这样久而久之,你的写作自然就有突破.
3, 论证段的语句不要太复杂,尽量简单清晰.如果太复会有很做作的感觉,反而会对论点起到反作用.我看了你的那篇被改过的文章,就好很多.看起来比较顺畅,可读性强,不蹩脚,得6分绰绰有余.你可以将其与你写的进行对比,然后用心去体会他们之间的差别和不同,逐渐改变你的写作习惯.
总之, 写作是练出来的,即使像楼上两位仁兄辛苦的替你改完,不知道对你写作的真正作用会有多大呢,至少我看不到它的效果,(声明:词话绝无冒犯他们的意思). 另外送你一句话,切忌繁冗复杂,崇尚简单明快.因为你想要的毕竟只是 6分而已 - 希望你能取得真经 :)