改革开放英语雅思作文

⑴ 谁能帮我改下英语雅思作文啊

第一篇大作文漏来洞比较源多。中式英语太多，表达的意思非常含糊。
虽然我不是考官，但是就我来看，这样的文章可能达不到5分的要求。
词汇比较单一，作者对长句的把握还有待考量。
你的第一句话就让人比较失望。As you know这类的词句出现在议论文里是大忌。
词性的把握也不是很到位。还望继续练习。
这只是个人观点，若有失水准，还望见谅。

⑵ 求一篇英语雅思作文

一、雅思大作文开头：
开头要短小;要有立场和观点;避免模板。
如： the amount of advertising on TV be increased or decreased?
Nowadays many people discuss whether we need …or not.
Now whether…. has become a very hot debate in society.
As far as this topic is concerned, different people have different opinions. Some people think that ……Others believe that …... I think both views have their reasons.
Recently the ... has been brought into focus ... Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.
二、雅思大作文结构：
一个paragraph一个idea;避免过多examples, esp personal examples.;段落间的平衡
三、雅思大作文语言：
避免idioms, famous sayings
避免poetic language
Explain your point…then explain it again in a different way
Use “a mix of longer and short sentences”
以上从开头、结构、语言等三个方面对雅思大作文的写作技巧进行了简单的总结，建议考生们可以根据以上建议，并通过针对性的练习来逐步掌握雅思大作文的写作技巧，从而在雅思作文考试中取得更好的成绩。

⑶ 雅思英语作文2篇，要求每篇250字左右。

作文需要好好练习的

⑷ 雅思英语作文

建议抄首先可以参加袭北外雅思培训班，上完课后要整理笔记，总结开头-主体段落-结论的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。

考前50~60天，练习句子翻译考前40天，练习观点和词汇：挑选各个专题的话题若干，每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作；

考前30天：以熟练为主，完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作（每两天一篇）。

考前20天：挑选三种文体的代表作，请老师批改并面授点评，看看问题所在，有针对性提高和改正。

考前15天：限时写作，每天一到两篇，提高写作的感觉和速度。

⑸ 急求一篇大学（雅思）英语作文！280字左右的！

Technology emerged as soon as human race came into this world and began to fight for surviving. In the early stage, technology served as the implements for human beings to conquer the nature. In the process of struggling against all the menaces of the nature, our ancestors have generalized and accumulated all sorts of experience, and also created a series of technology in order to help the descendents to adapt the environment. This circumstance has been continued until the technology that accumulated by human race are powerful enough to overcome most of the threats of the nature. Then the twofold use of technology began to appear. On the one hand, the technology has made the dominators possible to strive for convenient and luxurious life. On the other hand, the governors also use it to quash the rebellions and exploit their people, even sometime, to fight with other nations. With the advent of the Instrial Revolution, technology began to contribute to the majority of human beings. The great improvement of modern technology has eventually increased the efficiency of people’ life, and also makes it possible for most indivials to possess a large amount of leisure time.
In today's rapid changing society, it is hard to allege that the increasing of people's efficiency and hence enable most of people have more leisure time are the primary goal of technological advancement. As is so often pointed out, modern technology make the relationship between people become more impersonal and aloof. The early initiative handicraft has been replaced by assembly line of machinery, and the works' jobs are always unutterably boring. The bargaining between people also gives its ways to the high efficient trade in the supermarket. So, spectacles above are the primary goal of the modern technology, it bound to raise many persons' unsatisfactory.

⑹ 改雅思英文作文

The graph （Can you be more specific?)illustrates the number of people at a London railway station from 6am to 10pm. As we can see(删掉因为重复显得啰嗦）, the number of people fluctuates over the 16 hours (given period). To be more specific, at 6am the number stands at only 100. (The period 删掉，重复，多余)between the 6am to 8am the number experiences the（用a) rapid rise to about 400. But there is a drop in the following (in the next) two hours, reaching the peak at around 180. The number in the following(in the next,其实最好用个别的，重复了) two hour increases fairly constantly from about 180 to around 280. The next two hours（同样问题） ,the number level off at under 300. From the（this） point forwards,the number experiences a sharp drop ,bottoming out at about 90 at 4 pm. After 4pm,the number rises again ,with the number reaching 370. After that ,there is (a) decrease to about 130 at 8pm. The period between the 8pm to 10pm the(....?) sees the slight increase, but finally the number of people decline(s) from 180 at 9pm to 130 at 10pm.

大部分问题不大，主要是很多话一直重复用 （the number,rises,drop,after that等等)。一直重复用语法上并没有错误，但是会给考官留下你词汇量不多的印象，而且重复的词多了考官容易失去兴趣。

另外注意你的The和A优点混淆不清。还有The following和the next。
基本上都是习惯上的小问题，注意点就好啦。

希望对你有帮助！加油啊=）

⑺ 求一篇雅思的英语作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文，相信对你有用，你也可以去看看其它的范文。

⑻ 高中英语作文关于改革开放的变化

自己改动一下就行了
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⑼ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文

可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇，以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升；
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作，有利于更好的发挥自己的特长，从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~