雅思英语作文批改兼职

1. 日，我在新东方批改网人工改作文，我把慎小嶷在十天突破雅思上的范文给他改，居然只得了5分！！！新东方

这就对了，你把范文直接拷过去，在批改的人看来至少大部分是模板，就凭这一点就没有过5分的可能～

2. 求批改英语作文(IELTS)

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

Should men and women be equal? This is a much talked about question nowadays. In fact, sex is always a barrier for a woman to achieve their success in her career. I firmly believe that women should be given the same right as men, because they are equally important in all human activities.

First of all, with the rapidly development of society and economy, there have emerged many working opportunities and women are certainly as intelligent as men if they have a same ecation. Therefore, some high-level jobs are more occupied by women than the past. As this result, it proved that women have the same abilities as men. Personally, it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the abilities of men and women and it should be according to indivial abilities and not focus on the gender.

Secondly, the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Not all women are bad at business, just as not all men are poor interpersonal communicators. For example, if men are often calm and thoughtfully, but some men are more careless and hesitant than women? Beside, if women are always sensitive, then what would you say when they are insensitive in work or interpersonal. Obviously, there are no absolute advantages when considering their gender.

In conclusion, as a man, I would hopefully see that more outstanding women can be working their favourite jobs and can get their desirable position. Because a person’ indivial ability is far more important than their gender.

3. 有能批改英语作文的app吗雅思

同学你好！
你可以登录朗阁写作一对一批改页面进行作文提交批改，名师点评专会通过邮箱反馈给你哦。属
地址http://www.longre.com/topic_2013/zt/ysnh_1015/zuowen.aspx

4. 雅思作文批改

你好，很高兴能我解答：
你可以将你的作文发给我们，我们可以为你免费批改作文，还可以为你制定适合你的雅思学习计划！
在告诉你一个雅思写作应注意一下几点：
1、注重写好文章的框架
我曾经问过我们世纪雅思的外教老师， 外国人看文章最注重的是什么， 他告诉我说是文章的framework. 即一篇文章好不好， 首先看的不是他的句型， 词汇， 或是论点等。 而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老是采用大三段的形式-开头，经过， 结尾。我们可以多用用连接词， 例如：first of all, morever, secondly, lastly等，另外可以多分自然段， 给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章， 看看他们的写作模式， 我当初写文章的时候， 用的就是我看到一篇国外文章的模式，我觉得可以套用， 我最后介绍给大家。
2、句型的多样化
如果一篇文章， 从头到尾， 永远用的只有一种句型， 那么这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的改换一下句型， 我给大家一定建议，希望给大家有点帮助。
3、基本句型包括 Ⅰ．主谓句；Ⅱ. There be；Ⅲ. 主系表结构的句子；Ⅳ. 被动语态（我看到一张帖字说， 不要用被动， 我不这样认为， 国外的文章， 用被动的也比比皆是。）
4、复杂句型 包括 Ⅰ. 并列句；Ⅱ. 从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）
5．词汇的Variety
说实话做到这点真的很难， 首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。我自认做不到这点，所以我用的词汇有时候会重复。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争 fierce competition等
6、多举EXAMPLE（重要）
大家不要小看这点， 我认为对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说， 这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都在讲道理， 你有这么多话要说吗？而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候你就用例子来表明你的观点。我认识一个朋友， 可以说她的英语基础很差， 但她的文章也拿了6分， 我问她怎么写的， 她告诉我说就是拼命的举例子。就这点我也曾问过外教老师， 他曾是IELTS的考官， 他说考官欢迎考生多举例子。
7、建议：
1）、写文章最关键的就是审题千万不要出错误， 不然就前功尽弃了。
2）例如我积累的句子：
Cultivate independence
Develop a strong sense of responsibility
Enhance social awareness
Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value and capacity
Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character
这些句子比较常用， 而且在口语考试中也可以派上用处。最后给大家介绍一种写作模式，我觉得很不错：
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die. On one side of the debate are those who say that...... On the other side is the view that...... In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later .
There is no denying that ......has many positive effects. To begin with,......Secondly, ...... Finally, ......
However, every coin has its two sides. ......is no exception. Many opponents say that ......
To conclude, .....

祝你取得理想雅思成绩！！！
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5. 雅思作文批改（希望是专业人士批改，狠狠批改）

我又无聊来帮别个改雅思了。。。。

1. in present-day big cities..好别扭的用法啊。。。。我不太习惯哈。。貌似没错就是了。。

2. daily life就已经有everyday的意思了，所以楼主不用再加个everyday。建议这句用一般进行时，再把daily换成routine。其他可以不变。

3. be allocated to 后面直接加地方，去掉move to。不过我觉得用reallocted好点吧。毕竟这个貌似再说已经存在于市区的工厂。

4. however 有开头就OK了，不用后面加个though感觉好口语，而且意思重复。

5. have difficulty in doing sth。

6. where=in which place 建议去掉in

7. great though the number 我读不懂呢。。

8. consist of 貌似是个动词短语吧。。。

9. citizens of the firms and schools? 额 citizen 是市民啊。后面怎么所属于firm 和school了啊，拿workers，teachers，students呢。。。。不要在雅思作文用so on。。好点的用so and the forth。。高级点的etc. 或者to name a few

10. countryside和uptown是指的一个意思么，楼主check下。。我有点怀疑。

11. it does not

12. allow 谁 去修更多路呀？

大概就这些。。不过感觉楼主貌似对好多词、句的用法都不是很了解，可能是最近才学到的，觉得很不错，就想在雅思作文里用用。。。所以读起来有点别扭。。。然后整体上，楼主你偏题了。。。。你完全没有说companies和factories，就仅仅重点在人身上。。。如：工厂和公司有没有因为占地面积过大的问题，而导致了城区给予市民的活动空间和居住空间减少；或者是因为它们的选址，造成了大量雇员不得不在上下班时间大量的涌入这些地区，从而造成交通堵塞呢？然后不要忽略了housing的问题啊。。题目也问题了的。。。

然后楼主你用来支持你观点的理论好少，而且薄弱。。。希望加强。。

最后祝你考雅思顺利。。

6. 求雅思作文批改（小作文而已，100悬赏，跪求老师改作文）

以下希望能帮到你：

The table (or "graph") shows the data about the breakdown of different kinds of Australian people in 1999.

It indicates obviously that the aged took up the least proportion in comparison to all the other types of people. Among them, the single aged people's proportion was 6%, while the couples was about 4%. Thereafter, the single aged had made a dramatic cause in bringing about the impoverishment. The Australian people who remained single, no matter they had child or not, occupies the biggest number in the table (or "graph") , which is about double of the people who were married. What is more ,as it can be told by the table (or "graph"), most of the Australian people were tended to form populous families —— getting marriage, having children, or living together with all the members of the whole family. In conclusion, there was only a few people lived in poverty in that time.

7. 一直说新奇雅思有写作批改的 具体怎么弄啊

就是你写作文，他们那请专业的老师给你改。我弄过一张，感觉还行。老师专改的挺负责挺属仔细的，逻辑啊，语法啊，内容结构布置啊，连拼写错误都给改出来了。。额。我错了好多。。丢人。。 从我个人的感觉来说，如果你这4篇都是认真写的话，收获还挺大的。

8. 求助~~雅思作文批改

Hardly can the public reach a consensus on the question whether authorities should be economically responsible for the prevention of diseases or the treatment of patients in current society. I would like to compare these two opinions from the following aspects. (第一段你是套模板的，我就不改了，不过以后还是记得要自己写，因为太容易看出来了）

Recently, huge amount of money has been invested in public health and medical research departments to ensure the delivery of advanced treating techniques and the availability of free medical services. Evidently, this measure has been approved by a large number of people in that they regard it as a kind of resident allowance donated by the governments and a bridge connecting them with authorities. Furthermore, with the prevalence of free medical services and the application of latest medical technologies, an increasing number of citizens are safe from the serious consequences or side effects triggered by some harmful dieases.

However, many clinical experts, sociologists and economists advise the government should concentrate more on the precaution of diseases and strengthening public health. For instance, stopping environment from being contaminated is a good way to rece the insidence of certain diseases. Moreover, the governments should advocate healthy diet and lifestyles , which are much better than the delivery of post-disease medicares

In conclusion, the government should focus more on disease prevension becuase it not only keeps people healthy, but also releases the pressure of medical institutions.

帮你重写了后面几段，提几点意见吧
1 注意选词和搭配的得体。你最好多看一些通俗的英文材料，学习一下人家的表达。
2 注意语言的简洁，
3 不要套模板。

9. 雅思作文批改的老师哪里可以找

我试过环球青藤雅思的写作批改，是专门的雅思写作老师来改，可以帮忙回查看写作情况答，这样你就可以了解自己在语言表达方面的薄弱处并加以改正。?
另外如果你在学校里有熟识的英语老师，也可以请求他/她的帮忙，吃吃饭聊聊天也是不错的指导方式。