雅思高分英语作文模板
㈠ 雅思英语作文
建议首先可以参加北外雅思培训班,上完课后要整理笔记,总结开版头-主体段落-结论权的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。
考前50~60天,练习句子翻译考前40天,练习观点和词汇:挑选各个专题的话题若干,每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作;
考前30天:以熟练为主,完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作(每两天一篇)。
考前20天:挑选三种文体的代表作,请老师批改并面授点评,看看问题所在,有针对性提高和改正。
考前15天:限时写作,每天一到两篇,提高写作的感觉和速度。
㈡ 雅思考试英语作文
[雅思考试英语作文]The ideal central bank would combine ultimate government responsibility with a high degree of day-to-day independence for view of policy. John Mcijnard Keynes 约翰·梅那德·凯恩斯早在几十年前就强调了中央银行独立性的重要,雅思考试英语作文。而在雅思写作当中我们强调的却不是“独立性”,而是相关性。更确切一点说,是强调写作和阅读同为一体。实际上,阅读与写作紧密相关,口语与听力密切联系。这里所提到的阅读与写作密不可分,不是简单的从英语学习角度出发,而是在雅思考试中深藏的一条突破途径。阅读与写作都遵循一条核心原则,就是“一心一意”。更具体地说,英文写作的思路比较“死板”,写作一定要按照一个中心思想贯穿到底,不要加入任何与中心无关的内容,更不能为凑字数而随便添加内容,小学生作文《雅思考试英语作文》。通过在随后的内容里详细的示范讲解大家会有更多的体会。相信经过一段时间的训练,聪明的中国考生一定可以把握写雅思作文的套路层次。 实际上中国学生、考生之所以伟大,就是因为我们有强大的“应付”考试的能力。们并不把这里的“应付”看作贬义词语,因为我们有切身的体会,在我们把问题分析清楚,把目标(有些同学喜欢称之为“靶子”)锁定好了以后,大家就会把握要领,举一反三。而且,雅思8分和满分的成绩都是我们中国考生创造的奇迹!所以我们很有理由相信,在大家读完本册之后,在彻底全面地剖析完雅思作文之后,亲爱的雅思“战友”,会给我们以7分以上的回馈,这也是我们期待的从大家那里得到的最好的回报!〔雅思考试英语作文〕随文赠言:【失败是什么?没有什么,只是更走近成功一步;成功是什么?就是走过了所有通向失败的路,只剩下一条路,那就是成功的路。】
㈢ 求雅思英语作文
If you wanna talk about playground legends, the conversation begins right there. Demetrius "Hook" Mitchell is the legend. You can hear all the stories in the world, but you'll never believe it until you see it. He's done inhuman stuff, unreal stuff.
was by far the best player to come out of Oakland. Demetrius Hook Mitchell is the Bay's most notorious legend. Every cat with at least minimal knowledge of playground ball has a Hook Mitchell story. The tales of his leaping ability are common place. Jumping over cars, bikes and people wasn't no thing to Hook. Before his descent into narcotics hell, Hook was nothing but heavenly. If he'd just kept his head straight, he'd be in the league right now, dominating.
Unfortunately, Hook lives in a prison cell now and in other folks' memories.
Several NBA stars who also grew up in Oakland, including Gary Payton, Jason Kidd, Antonio Davis, Drew Gooden, and Brian Shaw, all of whom played with Mitchell on the streets, and were astonished by his skills, but were unable to help him avoid his sorry fate. They describe his unstable home life and the longing for community that drove him to the streets. Mitchell himself is shown playing prison league games, and is surprisingly still able to play above the rim.
His story, like others, was written on courts between the West and East Bay.
㈣ 雅思类英语作文怎样写长要300字。。。平时写惯都是150字的。。。
雅思写的是议论文,议论文得有起承转合,你把你的观点放上去,写写就有300字了。我开始版也没写过这权么长的,你可以找几个典型的作文类型和话题练一练,我写写就发现够字数了(雅思大作文要求250字)。简单的方法就是看写作模板,然后自己找题目练习练习,你可以看一些论坛大家分享的详细的写作方法,很有帮助的,还可以和大家讨论,定时还会有大家一起写作文的活动~
㈤ 剑7雅思英语作文,高分求修改意见,不剩感激。
请问下你这篇文章准备拿多少分,现在这个答案从任何角度来看都足够8分水平,应该已经足够了吧
简单提些小意见,仅供参考,有些纯粹是个人说话习惯,人跟人也有分别,大可看看而已
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优点
1.辞藻丰富,用词准确
2.开场白,两方论点,总结,条理清晰明了
3.句法严禁,语法普遍准确
缺点
1.某些地方仍然有中式思维的残留,只挑一个例子来说
We, human beings, have mercy on these kinds of crimes and everyone could understand and allow certain variations existing.
allow certain variations existing明显是“允许一些变通存在”的直翻,(个人认为)更通顺的写法应为
We, human beings, SHOULD have mercy on these kinds of crimes. We SHOULD show our understanding(s) and allow the existence(s) of certain variations.
2.语法错误
The ultimate objective that making the society better off as a whole, should be reminded all the time.
The ultimate objective that makes (aims to make) the society better as a whole, should be reminded at all time.
better of个人觉得不应该用在这种语境里吧,只是个感觉,请查有关文章对比用法
3.显示出一些小小的文章个性
遵守文章结构当然会为考官带来不少的方便,但以你的水平来看,足以在此基础上显示一些个人的才华,你的能力应该绰绰有余,充分的表现下自己么,呵呵
开场白,放松一些,不需要完全转换原题,显得会有些生硬,自然点就好
两方论点比重,既然反方有两个例子,正方(fairness方)不能什么都没有。这个题当然有自己的倾向,但文章要自己掌握住
有自己的想法,完全可以在总结里面提出,In my own opinion, 两句话,之后结尾
4.正反都有自己的优缺点,要支持的同时简单提一句反驳,但不要和另一方论点雷同
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最后祝考试顺利,个人认为完全不必要把精力放在写作上了,把其他部分拉倒8分水平就好了
㈥ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文
可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇,以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升;
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作,有利于更好的发挥自己的特长,从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~
㈦ 英语作文,要求使用高级句式,高端词汇(雅思水平)不要高考范文那种低水平的,限时明天中午,感谢
我依然飞翔
即使翅膀断了,心也要飞翔。
——题记
无尽的黑夜侵蚀着我那无尽的愁思,周围是可怕的静寂,我起身来到窗前。
风很冷,绕过起伏的窗帘,刺透了我麻木的神经,我哆嗦了一下,缩了缩脖子。外面的灯光将整个院子充斥成白昼,半秃的树在瑟瑟秋风中颤抖,几片枯黄的树叶顽强地守着岗位,又终于坚持不住,一头栽下来,飘然落在冰冷的水泥板上。
我叹口气,为那片悄然消逝的生命,更为自己无地自容的成绩。我不明白为什么上帝给人们胜利和欢乐的礼物时,后面总要拴上失败和苦涩,我总是摆脱不了失败双手的侵噬,犹如风雨中哭泣的百合花,淡薄了对阳光的渴望和心中那份持久的傲世之气。多少次苦苦寻求,又多少次茫然失落,梦犹如雪片漂洒的精灵,心已冷,意迷茫……
深夜的风无力地掀动着俯卧在地面上的枯叶,翻动,再翻动,一直到大树的根下——那是生育树叶的一棵树。我忽然懂得:失去意味着新的获得,衰落意味着新的开始。一片黄叶枯了,烂了,受侵蚀,受寒冻,当春暖花开时,它将是层层浓荫中的一片。看到这里,我不觉释然了。
失败是成功的因素,没有它,不会使你耳边警钟长鸣,失败又是生命的重负,长久地背着它,跋涉的脚上会多磨出几个不应有的血泡。朦胧中我感悟到风雨之后的阳光。“人生自信二百年,会当击水三千年”!让洒脱与风雨同行吧。只要青春还在,我就不会悲哀,只要阳光还在,我就不会孤独,不会停歇,纵使陷身茫茫沙漠,希望的绿洲还在,我心依然飞翔。想到这里,我不禁笑了。
抬头,不知何时,天上多了几双眨动的眼睛,黑暗过后必是黎明,阴霾散尽,依然是彩虹,狂沙淘尽方得金,扬起自信的风帆,迎难而上吧!别因一时的荒芜而永别了心灵的田野。
带着微笑出发,即使翅膀断了,心也要飞翔。
放弃也是一种美丽
与其抱残守缺,不如选择果断放弃。——题记
当我仰望灿烂的星空,用冷静思索喧嚣的人生,用激动开启思想的大门,我不禁这样想:有时候,应该学会选择放弃,因为,放弃也是一种美丽。
抱残守缺是苛求者脸上丑陋的皱纹,而果断放弃是学者们脸上浅浅的酒窝。伴随着脸上甜甜的酒窝,我们应该学会选择放弃。
有这样一件事,一位老人在火车行驶的途中,不小心把鞋弄掉了一只,人们正在为他惋惜,而老人却果断地把第二只鞋从窗口扔了出去。人们在惊诧的同时更加赞赏老人选择的果断放弃。
学会选择放弃吧,不必用残碎的石头添补不尽完美的人生大厦。当你遇到一个毫无意义的问题,请选择放弃……
山之所以成为山,是因为选择放弃了平坦,水之所以成为水,是因为它选择了放弃停驻。只有懂得学会选择放弃的人才明白,山,如何站成一种尊严,水,如何淌成一脉智慧。
选择放弃吧,俄国诗人普希金曾经说过:“我们渴望成功,但在成功的同时,必须有所放弃,让失去变为可爱。”
有时失去并不是一种悲伤,而有可能就是幸运;有时失去,并不是一种忧愁,而恰恰就是一种欢乐。我们并不排斥执着,但同时也要学会放弃,让我们学会选择放弃吧,因为,放弃也是一种美丽。
只有学会选择放弃,你的前途才会更加光明!
战胜自己(4)
蓝色的蛹,束缚着青春,带来无限挣扎的伤痛;金色的蝴蝶,翩翩起舞,为您诉说破茧而出的新生的喜悦……
——题记
蓝色的蛹
人们说我是一个“不合群”的病孩子,我自己认为也是。我不喜欢嘈杂的人群,我不喜欢别人无意闯进我的生活,我只喜欢静静地看着人流,无风吹过的心畔,激不起阵阵的涟漪,惟独自己孤芳自赏。逐渐地,我为自己编织着蓝色的蛹,含泪诉说着青春的伤痛,把自己重重包围,只有蓝色的忧郁陪伴着我……
破茧的挣扎
在蓝色的蛹里,暗无天日,我见不着光明,看不到希望。我极力挣扎,孤独感笼罩着我。我的心蠢蠢欲动了,我渴望破茧后的新生,渴望去外面的世界再次见到新生的太阳。可是我又害怕着畏缩在角落里。我是如此矛盾,我渴望新生,却害怕破茧后阳光的刺痛。青春,就是如此的神秘,它引领着人们走向成熟。强烈的新生欲望,使我破茧而出,走向光明……
金色的蝴蝶
破茧新生的蝴蝶,翩翩起舞。我不再孤独,我的生命中再次点燃了爱和希望的灯盏,我勇敢地奔向蓝天,在花丛中飞越,享受着阳光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飞向青春的绚烂……
左手青春,右手年华!青春是破茧而出的新生。冲破青春束缚的我,也如此美丽迷人!
㈧ 帮忙写个雅思英语作文提纲
1.开头。space travel 的确给人类抄带来了很多好处。然而有些人觉得这种研究对我们的日常生活没啥影响。对于我而言,我倾向于同意这种观点。
2.的确是big step,因为有很多bonus——1.了解月球环境,探索未来居住可能 2.探索其他能源
3.However,space travel to the moon的许多发现还处于研究阶段——1.要有practical uses还需要很长的时间和很多的钱。2.现在的daily life其实有很多更现实的问题比如高犯罪率和低就业率,在这些方面,这种太空探索其实没什么用处。
4.的确space travel to the moon对整个人类文明史有很大作用,但是对daily life作用不大。政府需要做些太空探索以造福子孙后代,但也需要出台一些政策解决现有问题。
㈨ 谁有雅思英语作文的资料或者自己写的范文或者模板
[原创]郑老师作文范文Paying taxes
Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people may feel it is their rights to retain their money without paying taxes. However, I believe paying a certain portion of their income to the governments is eventually beneficial to all.
Rather than a deprivation of people’s rights to their earnings, taxation is a way to ensure that such rights do exist. At first glance, it seems unreasonable that people should be compelled to give up part of their money, because people earn their money through their own work and they should have the rights to the fruit of their work. However, such rights can hardly exist if they are not protected by the governments. For example, when crimes are rampant and the country is conquered and enslaved by a foreign foe, people’s lives will be endangered, not to mention their rights to their earnings. To protect such rights, the country needs efficient legal institutions and strong armed forces, which involve a cost. This cost need to be shared by people in the form of taxation.
In addition, taxation can also help to amplify people’s enjoyment of their earnings. It is true that paying taxes leads to people’s income being reced. However, even without paying the taxes, ordinary indivials would not be so rich as to afford a private park or a large library. Through government spending, which is made possible by taxes from a huge number of people, they can access and enjoy some large-scale facilities, such as hospitals, parks, libraries and highways. In this way, people can enjoy more than what they can indivially afford.
Understandably, there may be concerns that some people are too poor to pay taxes, or that governments may not use the taxes effectively for common good causes. But these questions are related to how taxes should be collected and how they should be managed. For the sake of protecting people’s rights to their earnings and making the best use of the earnings, I therefore argue that people should contribute part of their income to the state revenue.
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