雅思英语作文写作模板
① 英语作文《我的母亲》
自己改动一下就行了
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② 雅思大作文范文：大城市生活是否对健康有害
题目：
Some people think that living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
一些人认为生活在大城市对人们的健康有害。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?
思路分析:
Key: words: living in big cities, health
社会背景： Living in big cities, health
论点： be bad for health
个人观点：Living in big cities is bad for health
第一段： 社会背景 正向/反向观点 自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因)
社会背景：在大城市学习工作 大部分人 处于亚健康状况
正向观点：一些人认为——大城市生活导致人们不良的身体状况。
自己观点： 我认为这种生活状态不利于人们的健康主要基于
1 城市的生活环境 2源于社会的各种压力
Nowadays, a majority of people who work and study in big cities tend to have a sub-health condition. Some people deem that living in metropolises can exert a negative impact on their physical fitness. After serious consideration, I approve that such lifestyle goes against people’s health, in view of urban surroundings and various social pressures.
第二段：论点 论据 例证 结论
论点： 大城市日益恶化的生存状况——造成——人们健康隐患。
论据： 严重的污染——导致——人们患有各种疾病。
例证： 在北京，汽车尾气排放产生的雾霾引发了人们的呼吸系统的疾病.此外，生活垃圾以及石化的污染物严重影响力，人们饮用水的质量，这也是人们产生重大疾病例如癌症的另一根源。
结论：在大城市生活对人们的健康造成的危害是凸显的.
First and foremost, deteriorating circumstances in conurbations have increased health risks. In other words, escalating environmental pollution has caused prevalent diseases. For instance, smog generated from car emissions has incurred sickness in people’s respiratory system. Besides, household garbage and pollutants from fossil fuels have seriously affected the quality of drinking water, which can lead to serious diseases including cancer. Hence, living in conurbations poses harm to people’s fitness.
第三段： 论点 论据 例证 结论
论点：激烈的竞争以及生存压力—造成——人们的身心健康的负担
论据: 现实生活的压力 ——使得人们—缺乏安全感，生活在危机中——导致人们身心疲惫
例证：在大城市中，很多人为了解决来自生存的压力，往往超负荷的工作和学习，由此而经常导致一种紧张而焦虑的状态，无法正常休息与放松,导致身体免疫功能下降容易生病。
结论：在大城市的生活状态——人们生活幸福指数和健康状况降低。
Secondly, fierce competition and survival pressures in conurbations exert burdens on people’s mental and psychological health. Conspicuously, real-life pressures can deprive them of a sense of security and stability, or even worse, break them down. For example, when living in metropolises, most people tend to work and study overtime, and consequently, to result in a nervous and anxious situation without enough rest and relaxation. Besides, such situation can weaken people’s immune system so that they will easily fall ill. From this point, living in big cities leads to a lower level of happiness and poorer health conditions.
第四段：
让步段：另一种观点合理性 however 对此观点反驳
另一种观点合理性：
在大城市生活也有利于人们健康，例如 各种娱乐设施以及娱乐场所，有利于人们放松身心缓解压力。
另一种观点(对此反驳)：
大部分人无法享受这些休闲活动.
原因：
1 由于忙于生计没有足够的时间
2 缺乏足够的金钱。
On the other hand, living in urban areas can contribute to people’s well-being with plenty of recreational facilities and entertainment venues: both are established to help people relax their mind and body and relieve pressures. However, most urban residents have failed to participate those leisure activities because they are financially strained and too occupied with their work.=
第五段：总结观点 提出建议
总结观点：日益恶化的生活环境 源于现实生活的各种压力——危害了人们的健康
In brief, sliding urban living environments and real life pressures have posed detriments to people’s well-being.
③ 求一篇英语作文，关于教育是为国家培养人才还是为了培养个人，据说是雅思或者托福过去的考试作文，找不到
Higher ecation will not bring out high quality cultured people given the paper chase environment in this society. Everybody thinks in term of getting the paper and never bother to do the study in the proper way. Students only use yixia and to do homework and from each other. Even after they got the paper qualification, they do not know what the fuck they have learned. This is no different from a student who came from a prestigous higher ecation body. I believe in whacking malpracticing student who copies. Corrective punishment but not vindictive punishment must be meted to get student to the right path.
④ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文
可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇，以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升；
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作，有利于更好的发挥自己的特长，从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~
⑤ 雅思写作，男女共校的好处。在小学或者中学学习外语的好处。都是三点用中文表达，给我个idea就好
共校：
加强社交能力，沟通技巧
增加学校多元性，利于青少年身心健康
减少性别歧视，树立正确观念
⑥ 从个人和社会两个角度论述的雅思英语作文
虽然雅思写作Task 2考查的题型分为两类，但是其解题思路和写作结构是基本相似回的。考生在写作答之前，需仔细审题，确定题目属于哪一种题型，并对写作内容进行相应的构思。一般来说，针对不同的题型，具体的写作技巧会有所不同，但结构大体上是一致的。具体来说，Task 2的写作结构可以分为三大部分：首先是开头段，主要交代话题背景或引出自己的观点；其次是主体段，一般用2~3段文字分析某种问题出现的原因(或带来的影响)，提供解决问题的建议或是论证自己支持的观点；最后是结尾段，主要用来总结文章内容或是重申自己所支持的观点。下面笔者以2010年9月25日的雅思写作真题为例，为大家具体讲解雅思写作Task 2的写作思路、注意事项和高分策略。
实例剖析
⑦ 改英语作文(IELTS)
Most of Child-hood dreams are creative or crazy. I’d love to listen to everyone’s childhood dreams. lots of people never done their childhood dreams, but chasing the dream is great propulsion to change their lives, sometimes, unexpected things would happen. During my curiosity personality, I heard a strong fireman who wanted to be a Disneyland toy maker, and I would like to share my child-hood today.
My child-hood dream was created by my dad indirectly, and that was to build a school for some children who could not pay their school fee in China. Certainly, my school also provides food, a place to live and ecation of high quality, it would need a lot of money to build a school, but nothing could stop me from pursuing the goals. On the other hand, I unearth some ways to run this school. For our students , I would require them to sign a contract, the terms of the agreement are: Firstly, they needn’t to contribute 5% of the salary for the school until they have helped three children like them in China. There are two advantages of this contract. It would be a large income from them, thus, it would cover lots of expenditure. Secondly , the number of the beneficiary could have a rapid increase.
Therefore , maybe I can not complete this dream , I would suggest my son to do it. I hope you would hear about The School of XXX in China. When you hear anything about this name of school, it means I have succeed. 我能看到的，应该还有错啊