雅思英语作文我的老师

1. 老师帮我改下雅思作文~~~

1 some people think schools should only teach students academic knowledge. Others think they should also teach students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sending children to school is a common phenomenon for parents, especially /for those in /a competed/competitive society. Ecation, the main aim of schools, is necessary for students because it allows you to get/get access to high degrees and /well-paid jobs. Some indivials think/maintain that schooling only refers to academic knowledge. By contrast, others maintain/insist that书面语加上that ecation in school is not only /to teach knowledge but also /to teach/develop judgment. I would like/口语化 to support the latter view. I am supportive of the latter point of view.

2 Environmental problems should be solved with international efforts instead of the effort of one or a few countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Various kinds of pollution are raising countless environmental problems. Since the 20th century, there has been much dispute/debate over which is a better solution for the environmental issues, a worldwide cooperation or some independent endeavors to cope with the problems (government should resolve problems with international effort) 不要用原文，换句话说用自己的话 rather than the awareness of few indivials and the helps of few countries. I totally disagree /with 哪个？this point of view.

3 The life expectancy is longer in many countries. However, there is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
With the sustainable development advancing at a staggering rate, people’s life qualities /has improve/d a lot/substantially. Young people always meet??? their long life expectancy but ignore those elderly people who /are lack of /public concerns. In this essay, I will discuss this situation and find solutions to cornbat???.

有进步。第一段尽量写得丰满点，结构可以是背景+双方观点转述（你的话）+你的立场观点。注意用词，最好要少用口语化词汇，多用书面语。尽量在第一段就展现你的长句和较高级词汇。

还有不懂，hi我，继续加油!

2. 雅思作文(我可爱的老师)

我“可爱”的老师
我们学校里有一群“可爱”的老师，现在我们就去看看吧！
（1）考试瞎扣分。
真可谓：考考考，老师的法宝，分分分，学生的命根！你瞧，这道题是这样的：请将每节车厢里所装的货物按从重到轻的顺序排列（其实就是比大小）（12分，整道题就只有12分！！！~）我就错了后面两道题又不是错在中间，按道理来说应该只扣后面两道题的分，可老师却把整道题的12分都扣光了，你们说说看，现在的老师真是越来越不懂扣分的“艺术”了！
（2）严厉
现在的老师真是老虎的屁股----摸不得！稍有不慎，就会被罚“三篇作文”“抄课文五篇”“数学题100道”“跑操场10圈”……。老师为了教好学生真是不择手段，什么事做得出来，对学生们“狠下毒手”搞的学生们个个叫苦连天，连大气都不敢出，只要考试分数没到老师心中的分数线，老师就一个电话打到家长手里，这样学生就免不了一阵“暴风雨”的考验啦！~真是“严师出高徒”呀！
（3）拖堂
“丁零零……”只听见一阵清脆的下课铃，把我们这些摇摇欲睡的学生都打兴奋了，可老师却视而不见，还在黑板上奋笔疾书，急的我们团团转眼看就要熬到下课了，“丁零零……一阵上课铃又犹如晴天霹雳，把我们给打晕了，连厕所都不能上，水都不能喝，况且这也不科学呀！
看！现在的老师多“可爱”！

3. 考雅思我们考场那个监考老师全讲英语的,怎么回事

我考了4次雅思了，其中三次都是中国老师监考，只有一次是外国考官监考。
但是有一点可以肯定的是，不管是什么国家的，在考试过程中只说英文，是不允许说中文的。
所以亲~这是正常的！

4. 求求求求懂雅思的好心的老师帮我细批一下这篇小作文 100分悬赏 加100分附加

The table illustrates the figure on how much consumer spend on different aspects in five SEPARATED countries in 2002.

The expenditure on food/drink/tobacco takes up 32.14% of total (expenditure) in TURKEY. But,while that makes up about 15.77%. As for the other four countries ,all of their figure IS between rough 30% to 15%.

9% of total expenditure is distributed into clothing/footwear in Italy . However, that OCCUPIES only 5.4% in Span. The figure for the rest three countries ,similarly,STANDS at around 6%.

Turkish spend 4.35% of their total expenditure on leisure/ecation ,which is followed by that of Sweden (3.22%) , Italy(3.20%) and Ireland (2.21%). The figure for Span only REPRESENTS 1.98%
此文已拜读，总体不错，细节略有不足。大写之处已经改过，仅供参考！

5. 老师这是我的雅思大作文 刚才那个地方打不了这么多字 求指点！多谢老师

有些语法错误，比如第二段serve应为serving；第三段倒数第二段course应加复数而最后一行内not only后面要倒容装，but后就不必倒装；第四段there are 应另起一句；最后一段第一行much应该为many.
整体论述与用词都比较平稳，算不得出彩，得分应在5.5-6之间，算是中等分数，雅思写作与口语两项一向不易得高分
仅供参考~

6. 我在环球上雅思的时候老师总会说大作文利弊类要写essay map，可是什么是essay map啊。

essay map的意思是指作文提纲吧，至于小作文大约多久没考过流程图，这个就不知道了

7. “我的英文名字是奥斯卡，是我初中的雅思老师起的”如何翻译急！！！

My name is Oscar, which is given by my ielts teacher in my junior high.

8. 求解雅思考试为什么平时我的英语能力很强作文在班里当范文念口语都是被老师表扬，结果考出来的分数及其的

你是哪几个部分极其的低，如果听力阅读写作口语都低那肯定是你自己英语实力的问题。
你平时作文肯定没有时间限制，还可以查词查句子，写出来再好碰上考雅思也没用。
口语。。你是被外教夸奖么？不是的话，中国老师夸你口语好有什么用。
作文口语都是很主观的，不是实力很强的话是不能肯定拿到高分的。
有疑问给我留言。

请采纳，谢谢

9. 老师帮我改下雅思作文，谢谢~~

6 All the new buildings in cities and towns should be built in the traditional style. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countless buildings are built in modern society with the/a significant progress of architecture. A host of traditional buildings are razed focally/with force ?? by government. Some people maintain that modern buildings should be constructed in style like those demolished buildings. (While new buildings replace old buildings. )??I oppose this point of view.

7 The proction and transportation of food has been greatly changed by modern technology. To what extent do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today, food instry has /been totally transformed by technological innovations. Mass proction and flexible transportation depend on those new technolog/ies. I hold the opinion that it has both advantages and disadvantages in these/this process.

8 The government should stop putting money in self-defense and use the money to improve public facilities and help the poor people instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Crimes /rates are take up frequently/soaring recently. (Criminals search holes/leaks of public facilities in order to commit crimes for profits.)/chinglish Some people think government should not spending/spend heavily on self-defense but /should focus on facilities which are not improved/underdeveloped and /help those people who live in poverty. I agree with this point of view.

有很大进步，但用大词一定要有十足把握再用，多看看这个词在字典上是怎么用的，多准备些常用的形容词和副词，了解清楚其具体用法，在不同场合下都可以用，还是要注意小细节啊。