So your main topic is WATER POLLUTION ?
I think this essay can help you ..
肯定没有 放心吧 图形数据题 还有20%流程图的可能
The graph （Can you be more specific?)illustrates the number of people at a London railway station from 6am to 10pm. As we can see(删掉因为重复显得啰嗦）, the number of people fluctuates over the 16 hours (given period). To be more specific, at 6am the number stands at only 100. (The period 删掉，重复，多余)between the 6am to 8am the number experiences the（用a) rapid rise to about 400. But there is a drop in the following (in the next) two hours, reaching the peak at around 180. The number in the following(in the next,其实最好用个别的，重复了) two hour increases fairly constantly from about 180 to around 280. The next two hours（同样问题） ,the number level off at under 300. From the（this） point forwards,the number experiences a sharp drop ,bottoming out at about 90 at 4 pm. After 4pm,the number rises again ,with the number reaching 370. After that ,there is (a) decrease to about 130 at 8pm. The period between the 8pm to 10pm the(....?) sees the slight increase, but finally the number of people decline(s) from 180 at 9pm to 130 at 10pm.
大部分问题不大，主要是很多话一直重复用 （the number,rises,drop,after that等等)。一直重复用语法上并没有错误，但是会给考官留下你词汇量不多的印象，而且重复的词多了考官容易失去兴趣。
另外注意你的The和A优点混淆不清。还有The following和the next。
㈤ 英语作文 假如你是李平请给你的朋友christina写封祝贺信 祝贺他在雅思考试中
Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.
Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.
Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.
Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.
Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.
To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.