雅思英语作文范文合集

① 100分悬赏，求大家帮我看看两篇雅思英语作文，一篇修改前，一篇修改后

看了你的文章,我终于明白你为什么在分以下了.

分析一下你的优势和劣势:
你的优势:1, 能够清楚理解题目含义 ; 2, 有一定的逻辑性和良好的思维能力.
3,有一定单词量和英文基础.

你的不足: 1, 应该重点练习并熟悉英文的语句结构,和词汇用法.虽然你有一定的单词量,但是你对他们的用法还不够熟练. 例如:你首段的第一句,就是一个没有主语的重句.还有第二段第一句中的"reap",用在这里不太恰当,因为"reap"的获得是作为努力的成果而获得的,用在这里似乎词不达意.
2, 觉得你的写作方式很原创,一看就知道是你写的.呵呵.因为我个人觉得你的好多话都是你个人临场发挥的.我的建议是你平时能够多读一些文章,熟悉各种词汇和语句的用法,再把你认为经典的收藏为己用.这样久而久之,你的写作自然就有突破.
3, 论证段的语句不要太复杂,尽量简单清晰.如果太复会有很做作的感觉,反而会对论点起到反作用.我看了你的那篇被改过的文章,就好很多.看起来比较顺畅,可读性强,不蹩脚,得6分绰绰有余.你可以将其与你写的进行对比,然后用心去体会他们之间的差别和不同,逐渐改变你的写作习惯.

总之, 写作是练出来的,即使像楼上两位仁兄辛苦的替你改完,不知道对你写作的真正作用会有多大呢,至少我看不到它的效果,(声明:词话绝无冒犯他们的意思). 另外送你一句话,切忌繁冗复杂,崇尚简单明快.因为你想要的毕竟只是 6分而已 - 希望你能取得真经 :)

② 雅思介绍家乡的英语作文

已发到你的邮箱去了,大约800 至900词,希望会没有问题,若是满意的话,请不要忘了采纳和加悬赏哦? 祝你学业进步!

③ 帮忙写个雅思英语作文提纲

1.开头。space travel 的确给人类抄带来了很多好处。然而有些人觉得这种研究对我们的日常生活没啥影响。对于我而言，我倾向于同意这种观点。
2.的确是big step,因为有很多bonus——1.了解月球环境，探索未来居住可能 2.探索其他能源
3.However，space travel to the moon的许多发现还处于研究阶段——1.要有practical uses还需要很长的时间和很多的钱。2.现在的daily life其实有很多更现实的问题比如高犯罪率和低就业率，在这些方面，这种太空探索其实没什么用处。
4.的确space travel to the moon对整个人类文明史有很大作用，但是对daily life作用不大。政府需要做些太空探索以造福子孙后代，但也需要出台一些政策解决现有问题。

④ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文

可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇，以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升；
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作，有利于更好的发挥自己的特长，从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~

⑤ 英语作文，要求使用高级句式，高端词汇（雅思水平）不要高考范文那种低水平的，限时明天中午，感谢

我依然飞翔

即使翅膀断了，心也要飞翔。
——题记
无尽的黑夜侵蚀着我那无尽的愁思，周围是可怕的静寂，我起身来到窗前。
风很冷，绕过起伏的窗帘，刺透了我麻木的神经，我哆嗦了一下，缩了缩脖子。外面的灯光将整个院子充斥成白昼，半秃的树在瑟瑟秋风中颤抖，几片枯黄的树叶顽强地守着岗位，又终于坚持不住，一头栽下来，飘然落在冰冷的水泥板上。
我叹口气，为那片悄然消逝的生命，更为自己无地自容的成绩。我不明白为什么上帝给人们胜利和欢乐的礼物时，后面总要拴上失败和苦涩，我总是摆脱不了失败双手的侵噬，犹如风雨中哭泣的百合花，淡薄了对阳光的渴望和心中那份持久的傲世之气。多少次苦苦寻求，又多少次茫然失落，梦犹如雪片漂洒的精灵，心已冷，意迷茫……
深夜的风无力地掀动着俯卧在地面上的枯叶，翻动，再翻动，一直到大树的根下——那是生育树叶的一棵树。我忽然懂得：失去意味着新的获得，衰落意味着新的开始。一片黄叶枯了，烂了，受侵蚀，受寒冻，当春暖花开时，它将是层层浓荫中的一片。看到这里，我不觉释然了。
失败是成功的因素，没有它，不会使你耳边警钟长鸣，失败又是生命的重负，长久地背着它，跋涉的脚上会多磨出几个不应有的血泡。朦胧中我感悟到风雨之后的阳光。“人生自信二百年，会当击水三千年”！让洒脱与风雨同行吧。只要青春还在，我就不会悲哀，只要阳光还在，我就不会孤独，不会停歇，纵使陷身茫茫沙漠，希望的绿洲还在，我心依然飞翔。想到这里，我不禁笑了。
抬头，不知何时，天上多了几双眨动的眼睛，黑暗过后必是黎明，阴霾散尽，依然是彩虹，狂沙淘尽方得金，扬起自信的风帆，迎难而上吧！别因一时的荒芜而永别了心灵的田野。
带着微笑出发，即使翅膀断了，心也要飞翔。
放弃也是一种美丽
与其抱残守缺，不如选择果断放弃。——题记
当我仰望灿烂的星空，用冷静思索喧嚣的人生，用激动开启思想的大门，我不禁这样想：有时候，应该学会选择放弃，因为，放弃也是一种美丽。
抱残守缺是苛求者脸上丑陋的皱纹，而果断放弃是学者们脸上浅浅的酒窝。伴随着脸上甜甜的酒窝，我们应该学会选择放弃。
有这样一件事，一位老人在火车行驶的途中，不小心把鞋弄掉了一只，人们正在为他惋惜，而老人却果断地把第二只鞋从窗口扔了出去。人们在惊诧的同时更加赞赏老人选择的果断放弃。
学会选择放弃吧，不必用残碎的石头添补不尽完美的人生大厦。当你遇到一个毫无意义的问题，请选择放弃……
山之所以成为山,是因为选择放弃了平坦，水之所以成为水，是因为它选择了放弃停驻。只有懂得学会选择放弃的人才明白，山，如何站成一种尊严，水，如何淌成一脉智慧。
选择放弃吧，俄国诗人普希金曾经说过：“我们渴望成功，但在成功的同时，必须有所放弃，让失去变为可爱。”
有时失去并不是一种悲伤，而有可能就是幸运；有时失去，并不是一种忧愁，而恰恰就是一种欢乐。我们并不排斥执着，但同时也要学会放弃，让我们学会选择放弃吧，因为，放弃也是一种美丽。
只有学会选择放弃，你的前途才会更加光明！
战胜自己（4）
蓝色的蛹，束缚着青春，带来无限挣扎的伤痛；金色的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞，为您诉说破茧而出的新生的喜悦……
——题记
蓝色的蛹
人们说我是一个“不合群”的病孩子，我自己认为也是。我不喜欢嘈杂的人群，我不喜欢别人无意闯进我的生活，我只喜欢静静地看着人流，无风吹过的心畔，激不起阵阵的涟漪，惟独自己孤芳自赏。逐渐地，我为自己编织着蓝色的蛹，含泪诉说着青春的伤痛，把自己重重包围，只有蓝色的忧郁陪伴着我……
破茧的挣扎
在蓝色的蛹里，暗无天日，我见不着光明，看不到希望。我极力挣扎，孤独感笼罩着我。我的心蠢蠢欲动了，我渴望破茧后的新生，渴望去外面的世界再次见到新生的太阳。可是我又害怕着畏缩在角落里。我是如此矛盾，我渴望新生，却害怕破茧后阳光的刺痛。青春，就是如此的神秘，它引领着人们走向成熟。强烈的新生欲望，使我破茧而出，走向光明……
金色的蝴蝶
破茧新生的蝴蝶，翩翩起舞。我不再孤独，我的生命中再次点燃了爱和希望的灯盏，我勇敢地奔向蓝天，在花丛中飞越，享受着阳光的和煦。化作金色蝴蝶的我飞向青春的绚烂……
左手青春，右手年华！青春是破茧而出的新生。冲破青春束缚的我，也如此美丽迷人！

⑥ 雅思大作文范文：大城市生活是否对健康有害

题目：
Some people think that living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
一些人认为生活在大城市对人们的健康有害。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?
思路分析:
Key: words: living in big cities, health
社会背景： Living in big cities, health
论点： be bad for health
个人观点：Living in big cities is bad for health
第一段： 社会背景 正向/反向观点 自己观点 (1 客观因素/外因 2 主观因素/内因)
社会背景：在大城市学习工作 大部分人 处于亚健康状况
正向观点：一些人认为——大城市生活导致人们不良的身体状况。
自己观点： 我认为这种生活状态不利于人们的健康主要基于
1 城市的生活环境 2源于社会的各种压力
Nowadays, a majority of people who work and study in big cities tend to have a sub-health condition. Some people deem that living in metropolises can exert a negative impact on their physical fitness. After serious consideration, I approve that such lifestyle goes against people’s health, in view of urban surroundings and various social pressures.
第二段：论点 论据 例证 结论
论点： 大城市日益恶化的生存状况——造成——人们健康隐患。
论据： 严重的污染——导致——人们患有各种疾病。
例证： 在北京，汽车尾气排放产生的雾霾引发了人们的呼吸系统的疾病.此外，生活垃圾以及石化的污染物严重影响力，人们饮用水的质量，这也是人们产生重大疾病例如癌症的另一根源。
结论：在大城市生活对人们的健康造成的危害是凸显的.
First and foremost, deteriorating circumstances in conurbations have increased health risks. In other words, escalating environmental pollution has caused prevalent diseases. For instance, smog generated from car emissions has incurred sickness in people’s respiratory system. Besides, household garbage and pollutants from fossil fuels have seriously affected the quality of drinking water, which can lead to serious diseases including cancer. Hence, living in conurbations poses harm to people’s fitness.
第三段： 论点 论据 例证 结论
论点：激烈的竞争以及生存压力—造成——人们的身心健康的负担
论据: 现实生活的压力 ——使得人们—缺乏安全感，生活在危机中——导致人们身心疲惫
例证：在大城市中，很多人为了解决来自生存的压力，往往超负荷的工作和学习，由此而经常导致一种紧张而焦虑的状态，无法正常休息与放松,导致身体免疫功能下降容易生病。
结论：在大城市的生活状态——人们生活幸福指数和健康状况降低。
Secondly, fierce competition and survival pressures in conurbations exert burdens on people’s mental and psychological health. Conspicuously, real-life pressures can deprive them of a sense of security and stability, or even worse, break them down. For example, when living in metropolises, most people tend to work and study overtime, and consequently, to result in a nervous and anxious situation without enough rest and relaxation. Besides, such situation can weaken people’s immune system so that they will easily fall ill. From this point, living in big cities leads to a lower level of happiness and poorer health conditions.
第四段：
让步段：另一种观点合理性 however 对此观点反驳
另一种观点合理性：
在大城市生活也有利于人们健康，例如 各种娱乐设施以及娱乐场所，有利于人们放松身心缓解压力。
另一种观点(对此反驳)：
大部分人无法享受这些休闲活动.
原因：
1 由于忙于生计没有足够的时间
2 缺乏足够的金钱。
On the other hand, living in urban areas can contribute to people’s well-being with plenty of recreational facilities and entertainment venues: both are established to help people relax their mind and body and relieve pressures. However, most urban residents have failed to participate those leisure activities because they are financially strained and too occupied with their work.=
第五段：总结观点 提出建议
总结观点：日益恶化的生活环境 源于现实生活的各种压力——危害了人们的健康
In brief, sliding urban living environments and real life pressures have posed detriments to people’s well-being.

⑦ 大家帮忙写几篇英语作文（IELTS)

如果你作文都要别人帮你写的话你还考毛雅思...

直接在家里呆着就是了...

什么事情必须靠自己....

家里有几个钱算什么.....

有钱的人满街都是....

到国外去又去散材,给中国人丢脸...

⑧ 雅思大作文范文“青少年犯罪应不应该接受和成年人同样

Teenager delinquency is becoming an increasing concern. Some people claim that only lenient sentences can not curb the major crimes, therefore, their punishment should not be differentiated from the alts. However, I can not totally agree to this.

Those who support the same fixed sentence towards both youth and grown-ups argue that without harsh punishment, juveniles would not realize the serious after effect of their behaviour and leave the victims and their families suffering. Simply, the best solution is to treat them like the alt if the crimes they commit are every bit as heinous as alt.

However, adolescents do not have the same physical and mental condition as alt, so applying the same penalty is not reasonable for all situations. The causalities of high criminal rate of teenager rooted deeply in the social environment- family and media influences for example. As the young, some of them are naturally daring and knows no boundaries. If the media presents violent actions as cool, then young people may regard gangster as hero, gain sense of powerful and develop big ego by bullying others or commit severe crimes like robbery or a violent attacks as a result. To radically settle the problem, morals should be taught and the positive way to show off strength should be presented on TV more.

Another reason I think juvenile offenders should not be tried and punished as alt is that there is a chance for rehabilitation. However violent crimes they committed, with alternative ways of punishment or easier sentence, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gears to become leader of certain area. Compared with alt criminals, the young ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes. Once they understand the consequences of their behaviour and realize their desired goal of life, they rehabilitate much faster. Conversely, if they are punished the same way as alt, chances are that they become repeat criminals or serial offenders, since they are taught more criminal techniques and their identity of criminal is strengthened when captured in jail.

Although based on rule of justice, heinous acts should be punished regardless of the age, for sake of long term benefit, collaborative efforts of the whole society should be taken to save the juvenile offenders by every possible solution except for equivalent penalty as alt in many instances.

雅思备考

⑨ 求关于“正确的教育方式应该是中西结合，既要严厉又需要一定放纵”这个主题类似的雅思英语作文，越长越好

Western ecational concepts should be combined
"Tiger Mom " Amy Chua children also reflect , when she told the U.S. media that the limitations of oriental tutoring approach is likely to limit their children 's choices, not suited to the child's personality development. She regretted not attach importance to the indivial needs of her daughter , also regret sometimes too harsh. But she also said , do not agree with the Western ideal choice and freedom , she always believed that a better understanding of what the parents before the child is good , if the 10 -year-old children to make choices, they will always choose computer games.

Professor of Communication University of China Quan said , " Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother " caused controversy in Sino-US ecation , in the final analysis is to look at what the criteria to evaluate ecational outcomes . He said that no one is better Sino-US ecational model of the points, pressure -type ecation for Chinese middle class population could be significant social construct ; while shaping American ecation model may have some of the top creative and revolutionary talent.

Western ecation emphasizes "creative" , exclusion discipline, assiously and other things aims to develop perseverance , Chinese ecation has too much emphasis on the latter while ignoring the former. In reality, both parties regard this relationship put into " or " relationship. In fact , this is a " and " relationship the two ecation should achieve an ideal balance. And how to find a balance in Western ecation , and really need great wisdom .

Comparison between Chinese and American ecation has been more one-way from the past , the evolution of the current two-way comparison , the Sino-US ecational advantages and disadvantages , if we can complement each other , a solid foundation and the ability to combine innovation , after all, a more perfect ecation way . How to weigh the pros and cons of each other, will be the combination of Eastern and Western ecational methods , better used in their children's ecation process, which requires overseas Chinese parents thinking together .