雅思教师的英语作文

❶ 雅思介绍家乡的英语作文

已发到你的邮箱去了,大约800 至900词,希望会没有问题,若是满意的话,请不要忘了采纳和加悬赏哦? 祝你学业进步!

❷ 雅思英语作文2篇，要求每篇250字左右。

作文需要好好练习的

❸ 雅思英语作文

建议首先可以参加培训班，上完课后要整理笔记，总结开头-主体段落-结论的具回体写法以及常用答的语言结构。

考前50~60天，练习句子翻译考前40天，练习观点和词汇：挑选各个专题的话题若干，每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作；

考前30天：以熟练为主，完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作（每两天一篇）。

考前20天：挑选三种文体的代表作，请老师批改并面授点评，看看问题所在，有针对性提高和改正。

考前15天：限时写作，每天一到两篇，提高写作的感觉和速度。

❹ 雅思英语作文

建议抄首先可以参加袭北外雅思培训班，上完课后要整理笔记，总结开头-主体段落-结论的具体写法以及常用的语言结构。

考前50~60天，练习句子翻译考前40天，练习观点和词汇：挑选各个专题的话题若干，每天训练观点和词汇构思+段落写作；

考前30天：以熟练为主，完成写作训练。结合上课教授的写作方法和思路+每天构思得来的观点——不限时写作（每两天一篇）。

考前20天：挑选三种文体的代表作，请老师批改并面授点评，看看问题所在，有针对性提高和改正。

考前15天：限时写作，每天一到两篇，提高写作的感觉和速度。

❺ 一个英语作文雅思的求一篇范文

可以从个人发展和社会发展角度去探讨。
个人有权利追求更好的工作环境和待遇，以及在此专过程中自己水平的更属大提升；
这些有技术的高层次人才在发达国家工作，有利于更好的发挥自己的特长，从而带动全社会乃至全人类的发展和进步。
雅思还是要自己多写多练啦~~

❻ 修改英语作文！ielts

我考过两次雅思，作文第一次7.5，第二次7。你这个作文问题挺多的，语法就有不少毛病，软件翻译的？结构也不合理，还跑题，题目是是否应该按照传统模式建房子，你写的更多是古代建筑的好处和缺点。

先说结构吧。你赞成传统建筑模式的观点，就应该用大量篇幅写你为什么赞成。中间三段应该是前两段写传统建筑模式的优点，第三段写传统建筑模式的一些不足。

开头写得不好。我觉得还是应套用模板开头。
The issue whether we should build our buildings in traditional styles is a complex and controversial one. Some people believe that..., while other people assert that.... As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. （两个省略号处分别写两种观点）

这段内容还行，但语法太差了。你说了埃及古金字塔的好处，最后还要拐到要求的话题上，说出按古建筑模式建房子对现代经济的影响，即括号中这句。
It is indisputable that the traditional architecture style and ancient buildings are a civilized symbol for the country .Take Egypt for example,the pyramid is a mystery and precious treasure, symbolizing the witness of ancient Egyptians. In addition ,traditional building structure is not only a symbol but also a platform , on which tourists and local people can communicate with each other. (So, if we build our buidings in traditional styles, more tourists will be attracted to our country, which will greatly increase foreign currency and improve local economy. )

接下来一段应继续写传统建筑模式的好处，但可以不用像上面一段那么多。可以写很多人喜欢传统建筑的风格，那些建筑看起来赏心悦目，建造更多传统建筑物能提高居民的满意度什么的。楼主自己写写这段吧，当然也可以写传统建筑其他方面的好处。

这一段该写缺点了。缺点不宜写太多，不然岂不是否定自己的观点了？
On the other hand ,however, some traditional buildings are not tall enough to accommodate many residents as modern skyscrapers are. some people believe that if residents live in morden tall buildings , they can breath fresh air as well as enjoy the comfortable atmosphere .Moreover, it is better to select steel rather than stone to build our buildings for the reason that steel materials can bear a heavier weight of floors and walls.

总算到结尾了。。。。
In conclusion, though traditionally-built architecture has some disadvantages, it plays a great role to reveal local culture and ancient civilization. And I believe that the advantage is well worth the shortage. So we should build our buildings in traditional styles.

楼主这篇作文啊。。。除了字数多，其他真是乱七八糟啊。。。当然我写的也不完美，大家批判着看。

❼ 求一篇雅思的英语作文

Should ecation and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

The improvement of the life level e to the economic development has led people to focus more on their spiritual life, with their ecation and healthcare inclusive, but who has to be responsible for the cost of ecation and healthcare has been raised onto heated discussion.

Health care and ecation, two of the basic elements in social life, are always in the concern of the public. Some people suggest that the service in these two fields should be paid by the government and be free to the public; while others believe it to be the ty of the people to pay on themselves. As to me, the coverage on ecation and healthcare should be made the ty of the government while leaving some special demands to be burdened by indivials.

Government free provision of ecation and healthcare can demonstrate their responsibility in serving the people. Having fulfilled their obligations to the country in the form of taxes, citizens have the right to enjoy the service in return from the government, with ecation and health care being the two basic ones. Also, as the ty carrier in promoting social development, by guaranteeing the right of ecation and health care, the government are enabled to encourage citizens to make more contributions to the society.

Government’s investment on these two fields is beneficial to ensure social equality. Being free of charge, every citizen can take advantage of these social services, without the worries about being treated unfairly e to their lack of social resources, such as their social status and human network. Besides, this will be helpful to rece the difference between the rich and the poor, at least in these two basic rights, creating a more harmonious social atmosphere.

Admittedly, if the citizens are wealthy enough, or when they demand some special service, or when the government is too limited in its budget, indivials’ sharing some of the cost may also seem to be reasonable. However, rare cases of particular requirements do not represent the general pursuits of the public, and limitation in budget does not free the government of its accountability.

To sum up, government should provide free ecation and healthcare to the public and pay the cost. Only when people are better ecated and healthier in physiques, can the society be more harmonious in atmosphere and dynamic in development.

这是我在雅思救星上看到的一篇雅思作文范文，相信对你有用，你也可以去看看其它的范文。

❽ 如果雅思老师帮忙改英语作文语法错误算老师帮我完成的作业嘛

不算的。这种情况下，老师只是起到一个帮你纠正错误、改正作文的作用，但作文本身还是你自己独立完成的，老师并没有参与到写作文的过程中，所以不能说是“老师帮你完成的作业”。