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In some (nations), people are more (obese) than usual. Their average weight is (raising) up and life quality (lowing) down. Obesity (can) bring about a series of (sickness). This (situation) (has gotten) attention in recent years. Here are some causes that I believe.
The first reason that I (would) like to (suggest) is unhealthy food and (drinks). (不要And) they (are) usually (不要were) made (in) KFC or some other junk food (restaurants). Although (不要the) fast food is (cheaper, more delicious) and (more) convenient. (However,) fast food (includes) too much oil and sugar which (不要is) (outstrip) human body (needs). The excess parts (are stored) (不要up) in (the) body (as) fat (不要meat). After (the fat has been accumulating for a long time), the weight (of the human body will rise) up.
To be more precise, (the) lack of (不要body) exercise is another cause. (It is a common sense that doing sports can help people keep fit.) (However,) along with (the progress of the society), (the lives of modern people has become) more convenient than (that in) earlier times. So some people (choose) to (不要take) drive instead of walk, and (不要they) play video games instead of physical games. Comfortable lives give people (a) chance to (become) lazy. Besides, (in the society nowadays), more and more people sit (inside their) office all day long even (if) they don’t want (to). All these (behaviors) (cause) people (to become) over weight.
(In conclusion), these are (some) reasons (that lead) to (the) increasing (weights) of people. I suggest (the) local government (to) encourage people (to do sports). For example(,) build more playgrounds. I also suggest (the) local government (to introce higher taxes to the fast food companies so as to limit the import and consumption of fast food) and this method may lead people to (healthier lives). Even if all these (tries) fail, we still have a (final) bad option which is medicine.
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