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高考英語閱讀理解中寫作方法

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1. 高考英語寫作中怎樣使用復雜結構

但如何幫助學生真正理解復雜結構,並從整篇作文的角度來定位好的句子呢?我們很難給復雜結構下個確切的定義,但可從以下幾個方面探討對「復雜結構」的理解。
1. 簡單句也可能成為好句子
(1)恰當的形容詞、副詞——表達意見,情感流露的載體。例如:
It turned into a quarrel. → It turned into a horrible/terrible/fierce quarrel.
雖然只是添加了一個形容詞,但quarrel 的程度、作者的態度和場景的再現更好地表現了出來。又如:
They began to quarrel. → They began to quarrel with each other blindly/furiously.
(2)同位語——精巧完善欲達之意。例如:
Li Jiang, who is Su Hua's classmate, is also to blame. → Li Jiang, Su Hua's classmate, is also to blame.
定語從句固然帶來了復雜結構,但簡潔明了是行文的基本要求,該惜墨處勿潑墨。又如:
The boy went back home and was full of fear. → The boy went back home, full of fear.
形容詞短語full of fear作狀語的表達既簡潔明了,又生動形象。
(3)評注性狀語——娓娓道來,突出了寫作的交際性。例如:
It was Su's fault but Li was also to blame. → To be honest/To be frank, it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame.
評注性狀語是插入語的一種,它與狀語很接近,但它並不修飾謂語或其他詞,而是對整個句子進行解釋或說明,表明說話人的看法或態度,給讀者以娓娓道來之感。又如:
To be short, it is everyone's responsibility to keep the world clean.
(4)非謂語結構——簡潔生動之美。例如:
Sandy struck the USA and caused great damage to the infrastructure. → Sandy struck the USA, causing great damage to the infrastructure.
非謂語結構是豐富句子的有效結構,書面性強,表達更為生動。又如:
After I finished my homework, I often relaxed myself by playing computer games. → Having finished my homework, I often relaxed myself by playing computer games.
(5)被動語態——地道之美。例如:
Some people say this kind of milk contains different levels of nutrients. → This kind of milk is said to contain different levels of nutrients. → It is said that this kind of milk contains different levels of nutrients.
受母語負遷移的影響,學生在表達動作發出者不明確時常用主動語態表達,有中式英語之嫌;而使用被動結構卻能給句子帶來地道英語之美。又如:
People believe that mutual understanding contributes to a permanent friendship. → It is generally believed that mutual understanding contributes to a permanent friendship.
2. 復雜自有其道
(1)復合句——長短之變,節奏之美。例如:
Su Hua and Li Jiang played basketball on the playground. They both jumped up to catch the flying ball. → Su Hua and Li Jiang were playing basketball on the playground when they both jumped up to catch the flying ball.
復合句使用了定語從句、狀語從句,明確了概念的外延,增大了概念的內涵,邏輯性強。再有,長短句結構交替使用後,語句內部抑揚頓挫的節奏感就出來了,從而使文章流暢自然,生動活潑。
(2)倒裝句——強化情感,讓句子結構趨於平衡。例如:
Su said many mean words to Li and shouted at the top of his voice as well. → Not only did Su say many mean words to Li but also shouted at the top of his voice.
倒裝句常帶來承上啟下、平衡結構、強化情感之效。又如:
A man, who is in all black, is standing with a gun in hand in front of her. → Standing in front of her is a man, who is in all black, with a gun in hand.
(3)強調句——為了突出句子中的某一部分常使用強調句,以便能引起他人的注意,更明確地表達自己的意願和情感。例如:
He didn't come back until the clock struck twelve. → It was not until the clock struck twelve that he came back.
(4)省略句——干練,無冗長之嫌。例如:
While they were catching the flying ball, they bumped into each other. → While catching the flying ball, they bumped into each other.
(5)虛擬語氣——極盡感激、遺憾或悔恨之情。例如:
No one put himself in the other's place. They found no fun in the game. → If one of them had put himself in the other's place, they could have found more fun in the game.
另外,虛擬語氣還可以表示說話人的一種願望、假設、懷疑、猜測、建議等含意。書面表達題中常用「假如你是……,你會如何……?」來考查考生的個人認識或解決問題的能力。
前文提到的那位高三學生是一名英語基礎很好的學生,向其呈現了以上探討後,心領神會,修改習作如下:
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. These conflicts can turn out to be serious problems if we don't deal with them properly.
Last week, Su Hua and Li Jiang were playing basketball on the playground when they both jumped up to catch the flying ball. Unfortunately, they bumped into each other. Su began to say mean words and Li shouted back in response. A terrible quarrel occurred all of a sudden.
How to avoid these quarrels effectively? First, we should often stand in others' shoes when faced with conflicts. Second, stay as cool as a cucumber. Think twice and you may find that things are not so bad as you thought first. What's more, we should be good sports. Competitive sports involve unavoidable bumps or even injuries, which should be taken into consideration when you participate in a game.
三、「復雜結構」的再思量
在高三上學期基本語法學完之後,許多老師會讓學生在寫作中嘗試運用各種復合句或特殊結構。陳幸佩(2011)在《高三英語寫作復習課的有效性——以寧波市第六屆課例評析為例》一文中描述了一位授課教師在寫作技能環節總結的四句口訣:①肯定不如雙否好;②陳述不如倒裝巧;③單句不如復句妙;④從句不如短句傲。但該作者也鮮明地指出此舉容易造成學生刻意或生搬硬套地運用這些復雜句的可能。
那麼,到底應該如何理解復雜語法結構?
在「要點完整,語言無誤,行文連貫,表達清楚」的評分標准指導下,考生往往在書面表達中只用五種基本簡單句來表達,以防出錯,從而導致中學生寫作的層次不高,略顯乏味。「應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙;語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致」的新評分標准有其深刻的背景,它雖能引領師生重視並提升寫作的品質,但卻沒有或不便明確說明內容決定形式、簡單與復雜並存等要素。由此,部分師生誤以為多用結構復雜的句子就會有層次,可以得到高分。事實上,簡單句本身同樣可以發揮其精妙的表情達意之功。有時一個簡單的介詞短語也能增添情感的魅力或激發讀者的共鳴。例如,一位學生習作(談雙休日的利與弊)中有這樣的句子:
With the two-day weekends, we can have more time to chat with our parents. → With the two-day weekends, we can have more time to chat with our parents around the table.
句中的around the table能讓讀者頭腦中浮現出生活的場景,喚起了家庭的溫馨之感。
可見,復雜結構並不僅是復雜的句子結構,它應是根據內容和行文需要,巧妙使用高中所學的詞彙和各種語法知識,長短句結合,恰當、連貫地傳遞信息和表達自己的思想,充分體現寫作的交際本質。

2. 高考英語寫作中如何把要點寫全 且有細節支撐有什麼技巧嗎可以按題型題材分類回答

高考英語作文主要得分點有三個:1、書寫;2、內容扣題;3、段亂分布與銜接。
根據你的回問題,我就講一下第答二點吧。要想把要點寫全其實很簡單,一般高考作文的題目中都會給你用1234分條的線索,比如某某某來信,你要給他回信,然後題目會說你1、要告訴他什麼什麼;2、要安慰她之類;3、告訴他如果你是他你怎麼辦……之類你就可以按順序,把提示的話翻譯成英語(注意套幾個老師給的經典的句型,別一味的用簡單句,顯得很沒水平,定語從句是最屢試不爽的句型),按照題目給的順序給出來列出來就好了,這樣這篇文章就差不多有了四分之一到三分之一的字數,而且絕對扣題,這樣的文章十三分保底。然後在每一條的後面,再添幾句自己的話,這個也是很容易的,頓時就有了細節,這樣就拿到大約十五到十七分了。然後只要書寫和段落分布不出問題,二十分到二十三分應該不是問題。

3. 高考英語作文技巧(本人英語詞彙量小,語法也總用不對,用什麼方法才能快速提升寫作能力求大師詳解)

空閑時間多提筆寫作,也可以備一本日記本,每天進行寫作操回練;平時還要多看別人的答文章,反復高聲朗讀那些優秀的文章和句子,做到脫口而出,這樣自己寫文章時,好的詞句就會信手拈來。
而且背誦經典範文還可以幫助你形成良好的語感,寫起文章來語言也更通順、地道、恰到好處。閱讀時同時要注意積累寫作素材。同時積累寫作模版。

4. 高考英語作文應控制在多少分鍾內

樓主您好!

我個人認為,英語答卷時間應如下控制

高考英語(不含聽力卷)考場參考時回間:

1、語音+單選答題 12分鍾

2、完形填空 15-20分鍾

3、閱讀理解+補全對話 40-45分鍾

4、寫作 20分鍾

5、改錯+單詞拼寫 13分鍾

在高考考場上盡量不要安排在最後寫作文,因為最後幾分鍾寫作極易緊張,而且書寫易出問題。應把其適當提前,比如放在單詞拼寫之前。最後幾分鍾單詞拼寫能看得下去,而寫作文就十分困難了。

希望你能考個好成績!祝你在考前保持好心態!

5. 高考英語寫作技巧

1.盡量用短句,避免長句。
2.多用高級詞彙,避免誤用。
3.字跡清晰,尤其注意要工整,不能塗改,有時間最好打草稿。
4.多留意範文的開頭與結尾。注意借鑒
5.注意總結,對各種類型的文章最好能背上一二篇範文。
(這是我的親身經驗!)
(我今年高考英語作文應該只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功)

6. 高考英語作文技巧

一、名人名言必背部分。
在英語作文中,我們經常會引用一些名人名言。這里就向大家介紹一些,務必要全部脫口而出,
Culture 文化篇
1.A great poem is a fountain forever overflowing with the waters of wisdom and delight.(P. B. Shelley , British poet )偉大的詩篇即是永遠噴出智慧和歡欣之水的噴泉。(英國詩人 雪萊. P. B)
2.Art is a lie that tells the truth .( Picasso , Spanish painter )美術是揭示真理的謊言。 (西班牙畫家 畢加索)3.Humor has been well defined as thinking in fun while feeling in earnest. (Mark Twain , American novelist )幽默被人正確地解釋為"以誠摯表達感受,寓深思於嬉笑"。(美國小說家 馬克吐溫)4.The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation; the two keep in their downward tendency.( Johan Wolfgang von Goethe , German poet )文學的衰落表明一個民族的衰落。這兩者走下坡路的時間是齊頭並進的。(德國詩人 歌德 . J . W .)5.When one loves one's art no service seems too hard .(O. Henry, American novelist)一旦熱愛藝術,什麼奉獻也不難。 (美國小說家 歐亨利)Ecation 教育篇6.And gladly would learn , and gladly teach .( Chaucer , British poet)勤於學習的人才能樂意施教。(英國詩人, 喬叟)7.Better be unborn than untaught , for ignorance is the root of misfortune.(Plato , Ancient Greek philosopher)與其不受教育,不如不生,因為無知是不幸的根源.(古希臘哲學家 柏拉圖)Friendship 友誼篇8. Some friends come and go like a season. Others are arranged in our lives for good reason.(Sharita Gadison)一些朋友隨季節離去,而另外一些則伴我們度過美好的季節。9.A true friend is someone you can disagree with and still remain friends. For if not, they weren't true friends in the first place.(Sandy Ratliff)真朋友是可以與你有不同見解的,如果不是,首先就不是真朋友。10.True friendship is felt, not said.(Mariecris Madayag)朋友是說不出的感覺。11.Friends are like stars,you don't always see them, but you know they're always there.(Hulali Luta)朋友是感覺不到的存在。12.Memories last forever, never do they die. Friends stay together, never say goodbye.(Melina Campos)記憶永不死,朋友永不說再見。

Health 健康篇
13.light heart lives long.( William Shakespeare , British dramatist )豁達者長壽(英國劇作家 莎士比亞. W.)
14.Early to bed and early to rise , makes a man healthy , wealthy and wise.(Benjamin Franklin , American president )早睡早起會使人健康、富有和聰明。 (美國總統 富蘭克林. B.)
15.The first wealth is health .( Ralph Waldo Emerson , American thinker )健康是人生第一財富。 (美國思想家 愛默生. R. W.)Happiness 幸福篇
16.A lifetime of happiness, No man alive could bear it; it would be hell on earth. (G. Bernard Shaw, British dramatist)終身幸福,這是任何活著的人都無法忍受的,那將是人間地獄。(英國劇作家肖伯納. G.)
17.Happiness is form courage .(H. Jackson, British writer)幸福是勇氣的一種形式。 (英國作家 傑克遜. H.)
18.Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money ; it lies in the joy of achievement , in the thrill of creative effort .(Franklin Roosevelt ,American president )幸福不在於擁有金錢,而在於獲得成就時的喜悅以及產生創造力的激情。(美國總統 羅斯福. F.)
19.Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be .(Abraham Lincoln ,American president )對於大多數人來說,他們認定自己有多幸福,就有多幸福。(美國總統 林肯. A.)
20.The supreme happiness of life is the conviction that we are loved .(Victor Hugo , French novelist )生活中最大的幸福是堅信有人愛我們。( 法國小說家 雨果. V .)
21.We have no more right to consume happiness without procing it than to consume wealth without procing it . (George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)正像我們無權只享受財富而不創造財富一樣,我們也無權只享受幸福而不創造幸福.(英國劇作家 肖伯納. G. )

Ideal 理想篇
22.Do not, for one repulse, give up the purpose that you resolved to effect. (William Shakespeare , British dramatist)不要只因一次失敗,就放棄你原來決心想達到的目的。(英國劇作家莎士比亞.W.)
23.Don't part with your illusions . When they are gone you may still exist,but you have ceased to live. (Mark Twain , American writer)不要放棄你的幻想。當幻想沒有了以後,你還可以生存,但是你雖生猶死.(美國作家 馬克吐溫)
24.Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal, there is no secure direction;without direction, there is no life. ( Leo Tolstoy , Russian writer)理想是指路明燈。沒有理想,就沒有堅定的方向;沒有方向,就沒有生活。(俄國作家 托爾斯泰. L .)
25.If winter comes , can spring be far behind ?(P. B. Shelley, British poet)冬天來了,春天還會遠嗎? ( 英國詩人, 雪萊. P. B.)
26.Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.Alexander Dumas (Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer)生活沒有目標就像航海沒有指南針。 (法國作家 大仲馬. A.)
27.The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.(Franklin Roosevelt , American president)實現明天理想的唯一障礙是今天的疑慮。 (美國總統 羅斯福. F .)

Knowledge 知識篇

28.Activity is the only road to knowledge.(George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)行動是通往知識的唯一道路 。 (英國劇作家 肖伯納. G.)
29.Imagination is more important than knowledge .(Albert Einstein , American scientist )想像力比知識更為重要。 (美國科學家 愛因斯坦. A. )
30.Knowledge is power . (Francis Bacon , British philosopher )知識就是力量。 (英國哲學家 培根. F.)

Knowledge 知識篇

28.Activity is the only road to knowledge.(George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)行動是通往知識的唯一道路 。 (英國劇作家 肖伯納. G.)
29.Imagination is more important than knowledge .(Albert Einstein , American scientist )想像力比知識更為重要。 (美國科學家 愛因斯坦. A. )
30.Knowledge is power . (Francis Bacon , British philosopher )知識就是力量。 (英國哲學家 培根. F.)

Knowledge 知識篇

28.Activity is the only road to knowledge.(George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)行動是通往知識的唯一道路 。 (英國劇作家 肖伯納. G.)
29.Imagination is more important than knowledge .(Albert Einstein , American scientist )想像力比知識更為重要。 (美國科學家 愛因斯坦. A. )
30.Knowledge is power . (Francis Bacon , British philosopher )知識就是力量。 (英國哲學家 培根. F.)

Struggle 奮斗篇

31.Genius only means hard-working all one's life. ( Mendeleyev , Russian Chemist)天才只意味著終身不懈的努力。 (俄國化學家門捷列耶夫)32.I have nothing to offer but blood , toil tears and sweat . (Winston Churchill, British Politician)我所能奉獻的沒有其它,只有熱血、辛勞、眼淚與汗水。(英國政治家 丘吉爾 . W.)
33.Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet . (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker)忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果實是甜蜜的。 (法國思想家 盧梭. J. J.)
34.There is no royal road to science ,and only those who do not dread the fatiguing climb of gaining its numinous summits . (Karl Marx, German revolutionary )在科學上沒有平坦的大道,只有不畏勞苦沿著其崎嶇之路攀登的人,才有希望達到它光輝的頂點。( 德國革命家馬克思. K .)
35.Where there is a will , there is a way .( Thomas Edison , American inventor )有志者,事竟成。 (美國發明家 愛迪生. T.)

二、精彩必背部分。

在作文中經常有一些好句子可以借鑒,為此,特總結如下,務必全部脫口而出。
1.According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一項調查,每年有4,000,000人死於與吸煙有關的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的調查顯示相當多的孩子對家庭作業沒什麼好感。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet. 沒有一項發明像互聯網一樣同時受到如此多的贊揚和批評。
4. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness. 許多專家指出體育鍛煉直接有助於身體健康。
5.寫信的開頭:Very glad to receive your letter of July 13.
6.One day after school,XiaoMing passed a Caf on his way home.
7.The boss had no choice but to let him in.
8.How he enjoyed himself on the computer,
9.Walking home full of fear,he was sure that he would be scolded.
10.However,other students are against the idea.
11.Sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.
12.todays activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of LeiFeng:sharing with others what you have—you time,energy,or knowledge—makes you fell warm in you heart.It has truly a difference in how I feel about myself.
13.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.
14.No matter what he says,I wont believe.
15. Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.
16. At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.

三、寫作指導

多使用過渡性詞語。這樣使文章更加連貫、更具有邏輯性。
(1)表示增加的過渡詞:also,and,and then,too,in addition,furthermore,moreover,again,on top ofthat,another,first second third等。
(2)表示時間順序的過渡詞:now,then,before,after,afterwards,earlier,lat er,immediately,soon,next,in afew days,graally,suddenly,finally等。(3)表示空間順序的過渡詞:near(to),far(from),in frontof,behind,beside,beyond,above,below,tothe right left,around,outside等。
(4)表示比較的過渡詞:in thesameway,justlike,justas等。
(5)表示對照的過渡詞:but,still,yet,however,on theotherhand,onthecon trary,in spite of,even though等。
(6)表示結 果 和 原 因 的 過 渡 詞:because,since,so,as a result,therefore,then,thus,otherwise等。
(7)表示目的的過渡詞:forthisreason,forthispurpose,so that等。
(8)表示強調的過渡詞:in fact,indeed,surely,necessarily,certainly,withoutanydoubt,truly,torepeat,aboveall,mostimportant等。
(9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞:forexample,in fact,in thiscase,foractually等。
(10)表示總結的過渡詞:finally,atlast,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,inoth erword,in brief,in short,in general,on the whole,ashasbeen stated等。

四、寫作步驟

每次寫作前問自己四個問題:這篇文章的體裁格式是怎樣的?主體時態用什麼時態?人稱用第幾人稱?可以分幾段,之間用什麼過渡詞、連接詞?帶著這四個問題去審題,搞清楚文章的主要內容,然後列出提綱。最後豐富自己的提綱就可以了。
這是高考英語作文得高分的秘訣。

7. 中考高考英語寫作、閱讀分數個是多少分,占的比例有多大

關鍵詞:高中一對一

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做閱讀理解說到底就是一個習慣和方法的問題,如果你不會做閱讀理解的話,那完全是你沒背住單詞,並且方法習慣有問題。那麼如何改善自己的習慣和做題方法呢?高中一對一補習英語來幫助你做好閱讀理解。

不懂就問

為了快速掌握文章的中心,文本的第一段和最後一段都是最好的入手的點,因此學生應特別注意它們。

高中一對一的補習對於理解閱讀的答題技巧上邊已經介紹完畢,你做到這些,做閱讀理解的能力也就大大的提升了一大截了,這對於同學們提高分數是很有幫助的。

8. 在高考英語寫作中使用如隱喻的修辭手法進行寫作會出問題嗎

你好,我是英語專業的學生,建議你在高考寫作中不要用隱喻。首先,在專高考中寫作盡量屬用自己有把握的,其次,隱喻手法如果改卷老師看得不仔細的話很容易判錯的,還是最好用明喻吧像like,as,這樣很容易辨別,就不會出現老師看不懂或誤判的情況,因為高考改卷是大量的短時間內的,所以很多改卷老師是在幾秒種判斷這篇文章的分數的。最好別用哈。

9. 高考英語概要寫作該如何下手

1.題型介紹
◆選材特點
(1)所需閱讀的短文詞數在350以內;
(2)所選材料體裁沒有限制,以說明文、議論文和記敘文為主。
◆評分參考
閱卷時主要考慮以下內容:
(1)對原文要點的理解和呈現情況;
(2)應用語法結構和詞彙的准確性;
(3)上下文的連貫性;
(4)對各要點表達的獨立性情況。
注意:理解准確,涵蓋全部要求,完全使用自己的語言,准確使用相應的語法結構和詞彙,得分相應比較高。相反,如果概要寫作部分出現兩句以上整句抄自原文現象,得分檔次將會大大降低;所寫內容與所提供內容無關不得分。
2考查能力
概要寫作,簡言之就是對所讀過的文章簡要概括,寫出文章的中心大意,也可稱之為摘要。寫概要時,讀者要是把文章的具體信息用一些具有概括功能的詞和句表述出來,而不是抄襲文章的原句,更不是把細節性信息作為中心,而是要通過對文章中的單詞、片語和句子進行合理轉換,對文章的具體信息進行概括,再用合適的語言表述出來。這一題型主要考查學生對文章主旨大意的概括和准確獲取關鍵詞的能力,同時考查學生用簡潔的語言概括文章重要信息的能力以及對文章整體結構的把握能力。因此,概要寫作是基於閱讀理解和書面表達,是二者的有機結合體,是閱讀理解和書面表達的溝通橋梁。
3寫作步驟
1)細讀原文。首先要仔細閱讀短文,掌握文章主旨和結構,明確各段的大意。
2)弄清要求。新高考的概要寫作是寫全文概要,不是寫某一部分的概要,或者就某些問題寫出要點。
3)列出原文要點。分析原文的內容和結構,將內容分項扼要表述並注意在結構上的順序。在此基礎上選出與文章主題密切相關的部分。
4)在寫作時要特別注意下面幾點:
(1)概要應包括原文中的主要事實,略去不必要的細節。
(2)安排好篇幅的比例,概要應同原文保持協調,即用較多的文字寫重要內容,用較少的文字寫次要內容。
(3)注意要點之間的銜接,要用適當的關聯詞語貫通全文,切忌只簡單地寫出一些互不相乾的句子,但也不要每兩句之間都加關聯詞語,以免顯得生硬。
(4)不排斥用原文的某些詞句,但不要照搬原文的句子,如果不能完全用自己的話語表達,至少對原文句子做一些同義詞替換,如果結構上也能有一些轉換會更好。
(5)計算詞數,看是否符合規定的詞數要求。

10. 高考英語寫作技巧是什麼

1
改變句子開頭方式
在通常情況下,英語句子的排列方式為「主語+謂語+賓語」,即主語位於句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式,比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等,會使文章增強表現力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有這樣我們才能保護好環境。

· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。

2
用詞要豐富
為了使表達更生動,更富表現力,同學們在寫作時應盡量避免重復使用同一詞語來表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到「喜歡」二字,就會立刻想起like,事實上,英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜歡看書,而我的兄弟卻喜歡看電視。

·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你幫助我。

3
合理使用省略句
恰當地使用省略句,不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔,而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。
· He may be busy. If he』s busy, I』ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I』ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是這樣,我以後再來拜訪。要是不忙,我現在可以見他嗎?

· She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t.
她本可申請這份工作的,但她沒有。

4
運用非謂語結構
非謂語結構通常被認為是一種高級結構,適當運用非謂語結構,會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。

· As I didn』t know her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
由於不知道她的地址,我沒法和她聯系。

·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有媽媽的陪伴,寶寶很快

5
結合使用長、短句
在英語寫作中,過多地使用長句或過多地使用短句都不好。正確的做法是,根據實際情況在文章中交替使用長句與短語,使文章顯得錯落有致,這樣不僅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章讀起來鏗鏘有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒後,我們唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,還有的講笑話、下棋,大家玩得很開心。

6
使用短語代替單詞
一味使用單詞也會讓閱卷老師產生審美疲勞,適當地用一些常見的的片語和短語,也能讓文章閃亮起來。

· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已決定長大了當老師。

· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜歡音樂。

· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聰明,他總是能想出新的點子。

· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
學生們認為應該省出一些零花錢來買書。

7
套用某些固定表達
好的固定表達能讓你的文章顯得不那麼生硬。

· He was very tired. He couldn』t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。

· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
這電影很有趣,學生和老師都很喜歡。

· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的兒子已經長大,可以自己照顧自己了。

8
使用地道英語。我們只能寫地道的英語。

· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
別擔心,大膽試一試,你很快就會學會的。

· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
謝謝你陪我玩。

9
合理使用「高級」結構
使用一兩句定語從句,名詞性從句或狀語從句等高級的句型,能給文章增色不少。

· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
這就是我們上周參觀的工廠。

· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我們努力工作,我們就會進步的。

10
引用名言警句點綴

在寫作時根據實際情況恰當地用上一兩句名言警句來點綴文章,不僅使文章顯得有深度、有智慧,而且會讓文章在評分中上一個「得分檔次」。
· As the proverb says, 「Where there is a will, there is a way.」 Though you fail this time, you needn』t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗語所說:「有志者,事竟成。」 雖然這次你失敗了,但你沒必要灰心。只要你努力工作。堅持夢想,總有一天你會成功的。

· There is a proverb going like this, 「Life isn』t a bed of roses.」 It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗語是這樣說的:「生活不是玫瑰花床。」每個人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到問題和困難,這是真的。

· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, 「A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.」
在當代世界,越來越多的人獨自生活,這對我們的生命是不太好的。我們最好多交朋友,享受友誼。正如俗話所說:「遠親不如近鄰。」
怎麼樣,你學會了嗎?祝你英語寫作得高分!
英語學習的供重豪:Emily0英語(不要0)

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