六级英语作文批改范文

1. 求英语六级作文批改

你写的是一篇文章的全部，还是一部分？
总觉得开头的很突然，结尾的也很版突然。
开头权一般总得有点“引入”
结尾，总得有个结论，你写这篇文章的结论要明确的写出来，老师改卷子忙，没空细看。
英文作文就是开门见山，每段开头或结尾就要有句明显的总结该段的话，别和中文一样绕来绕去。有了中心句，再展开论述（理由），字数不够了再添点例子。。。。。

2. 英语作文批改

新东方批改网就是可以告诉你哪里写错了，哪里用别的方法写会更好啊。
你看看他首页那批改报告。在线面批就是和老外在线交流的，
我以前用过，还不错。
其他的你就找找相关的论坛吧

3. 批改英语作文，，说明一下。

这次作文大有进步，语法错误大大减少了。

4. 求修改英语6级作文，谢谢！！！

蛮好的嘛 就是长了点 自己看看有什么地方要简略的说说就行了 不错，希望你英语越来越好哦 呵呵

5. 求批改 英语作文

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Should college ecation focus.....

At first,one’s imagination dominates one’s creativity
改成：At first, imagination nurtures one’s creativity

Where you can stay depends on where you think you can
改成：your mind decides where you are

Imagination is a ladder which leads us to the peak of our life.
改成：imagination is THE ladder that leads us to the pinnacle of life
如果你使用which，前面要用逗号隔开

In China, many colleges just focus on the basic facts and knowledge, neglecting what the society really needs, which is a critical reason that Chinese always lack masters and world-famous scientists while in China there are numerous talented teenagers.
改成：In China, many colleges just (focus on the basic facts and knowledge and neglect what the society really needs), which is a critical reason why Chinese still lack masters and world-famous scientists while talented teenagers are not in shortage.
( )内的句子，让后面的which修饰

Therefore, I made the conclusion that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward the hot issues for students and leave everything else for college students to investigate and create. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should take their charge in valuing students’ work and giving constructive advice to students.
改成：Therefore, I conclude that college ecation should focus on cultivating the imagination of students. For instance, professors can just put forward hot issues to students, and let students improvise their own conclusions. Instead of setting up standard answers, professors should only asses students’ work and provide constructive advice to students.

6. 帮我批改下英语作文，按六级的标准

Drink Driving has been one of the most risky factors to public safety. Every effort should be applied to bring such incidence to the end. We share the responsibility with the authority to fight it.

First, more rigorous law should be enacted to punish those offenders to the maximum. Drink driving brakes laws! Second, law enforcement should carry the most advanced equipment to promptly check the Blood Alcohol Content (BAC) in the suspects. Last but not the least, we, the average citizen, should keep safety in mind all the time. We should watch around and act out in case we catch someone is going to do this dangerous behavior.

In my opinion, it is everybody’ responsibility to promote traffic safety. Increased awareness of traffic safety issues will help to bring a more safe community.

7. 求比较好的英语作文打分和批改网站

您好，目前最大的英抄语作文打分和批改的免费网站是句酷批改网，收费的话最权威的是新东方批改网。句酷批改网是电脑自动批改，自动打分，里面收录了大学四级、六级和专业八级的很多题目，有一些题目也提供范文，写得还不错，您可以去看一下。新东方批改网是外教批改和打分的，但是要收费，个人认为应该是比句酷更加专业和详细，毕竟电脑本身会有偏差。请您自己权衡一下，看看要选哪一个。

8. 请求帮忙修改一篇6级考试英语作文

The way to success
There is a famous remark said by Abraham Lincoln,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the the first four sharpeing the axe."Simple it is,what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.All of us want to acheive success,but here comes a question, how to do it? The answer is different,Lincoln'words is helpful for us to have a deep thingking.
In china,the students must be studing ten years and we can take part in the final exam in this ten years we can have a good fundation,only in this way can we pass the eaxm.It's impossible for everybody to achieve success in an easier way,we must work harder and harder,improve our ability and skills,then we can beat others in competiton.Why Lincoln spend so many time to sharpeing the axe? Because the clearly md know the former preperation is the mostly important.

已经帮你修改了语法上的错误咯~望采纳

9. 自己写的英语六级作文，想得高分，求修改。

六级作文想来得高分其实挺容易：源

1. 背诵几个比较经典的句子，用在文章的1-2个段落的首句。

2. 多用几个课本后面学过的短语

3. 层次分明，最好用FISRTLY, SECONDLY等等词语，显得条理清晰。

4. 别出现简单的语法和单词的拼写错误。

5. 注意时态

不好意思，只能帮你到这儿了，毕竟几年没写过作文了，当时被的经典的句型都不记得了。

10. 6级英语作文求高手修改和大概分数

水平有限，只能改改病句，还没达到打分的水平，望理解。话说没看到你的作文啊~