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英语六级解决问题型英语作文

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1. 关于解决问题的英语作文

To solve the problem by regarding it as a challenge Many a time I often meet with diffcult problems from all kinds of courses. What should I do now? To quite or beat them totally? I'd rather to choose the last one--- to take them as challenges. In my mind, If you acculated so many questions and don't solve them, sooner or later you'll fail in tests because of your lack of knowlwdge. Futhermore, if you know how to deal with a typical problem, it will be very easy for you to gain the rules of solving problems of such a kind, and the more problems you've met and solved, the more experiences you'll get.

2. 六级英语作文问题

可以省略,更简洁,也可以带着。没有影响。whether (or not )这样懂吗?

3. 初二解决问题型英语作文

Mike是一位中学生,沉迷于电脑游戏,并因此耽误了学习.你是Mike的好朋友,你打算如何帮助他?用提示写短文(70字)
1,如果玩电脑多就浪费时间
2,Mike应该少用电脑,努力学习,提高成绩
3,多个朋友交流,并培养爱好如运动等.
文章开头已给出,不记入词数.
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter.I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.There are many exciting games and cartoons in the internet, however, we young people should pay much attention on our studies. Only by controlling ourselves can we achieve our aims and be successful. In the school we must follow our teachers’ advice and improve our subjects and get good marks. Our friends can also help us to warn us of the dangers of surfing the internet and play all kinds of games on the sports ground.

4. 急需英语六级作文分类、以及对应写作方法。

我已经过了六级啦~~就把我复习用的文档给你找来了,希望你能用得上哦,距离六级考试也不远了,背一背这些都是很有用的,加油哦~~

说明原因常用句型
n 1.There are many/plenty of/ a number of/ numerous reasons explaining/ for .
n 2. Thereasons of lie in several aspects .
n 3.Many factors contribute to .
n 4.There are many reasons that may account for .
n 5. Thereasons for/why are as follows: .
n 6.There are many factors that have stimulated this huge change.
n 7. The rapid growth of _____ owes muchto_____
图表作文篇章结构
1) We havewitnessed 总体现象.
2) According to 描述图表 , 具体表现一.
3) And 具体表现二 .
4) Many reasons contribute to 过渡句.
5)To begin with, 原因一.
6)Moreover, 原因二.
7) In addition, 原因三.
8) As a result, 导致结果.
9) As to me, 作者的看法.
10) First of all, 理由一.
11) Besides, 理由二.
12) To conclude, 总结.
连接词
n 1)表层次:
n first,firstly, in the first place, to begin with, to start with,
n second,secondly, further, next, still, furthermore
n third,thirdly, what’s more, last, last but not least, finally
n and,also, too, and then, next, besides, moreover , equally important, in addition,
n 2)表转折;
n by contrast, in contrast, on the contrary, onthe other hand, at the same time,
n despitethe fact that, regardless of, in spite of, but, however, nevertheless,otherwise, instead, still
n although,though, even though, yet, even so, it is true …but
n 3)表因果;
n 因:because of, as, for, for the reason, eto, owing to, since, thanks to, on account of, as a result of, result from
n 果:So, thus, hence,therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result, asa consequence, result in
n 4)表递近:
n furthermore,moreover, likewise, what is more, besides, also, not only...but also...
n too,in addition
n 5)表举例:
n forexample, for instance, a case in point is……,to take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is
n 6)表解释:
n as amatter of fact, frankly speaking, in this case, namely, in other words
n 7)表总结:
n insummary, to sum up, in a word, in short, in brief, in conclusion, to conclude, to summarize
n thus,as has been said, altogether, in fact, finally, in simpler terms, indeed, onthe whole, in all
开头常用句
n 名人名言开头
n A proverb says, “You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)
n It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)
n Aseveryoneknows,
n Noonecandenythat…
n 数据统计开头
n Accordingtoarecentsurvey, about78.9%.

n Arecentstatisticsshowsthat…
n (问题解决型作文)开头
n Man is now facing with a big problem— ________, which is becoming more and more serious.
n Along with the advance of the society moreand more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that…
n (观点对立型作文)开头
n People’s views/ideas/opinions on X vary from person to person
n (现象解释型作文)开头
n As society develops/ with the deepening ofChinese reform and opening up, peopleare attaching much importance to …

n Recently the phenomenon has aroused wideconcern, some people are in alarm that…

结尾常用句
n 深远意义型
n 1)Itis of vital importance to the progress of our whole human beings.

n 2)Thesignificance of X is far-reaching/ it might exert a profound influence on X.

n 3)Followingthese suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay-off might be worth the effort .It will not only benefit ... but also benefit ...
n 展望未来型
n 1)Consequently, Iam confident that a bright future is awaiting us because________.

n 2)All in all, thesolutions may not bring the perfect result, but as long as we do it with our brains and hands, we will one day resolve it.
n 号召建议型
n 1)urgentmeasures are needed to cure this problem
n 2)strictlaws and regulations should be issued (made) to
n 3)weshould seek for a balanced point between the advantages and disadvantages
n 4)weshould take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in
n 5)Wemight do more than identify the causes/factors; it is important to take actionto

写作模板——提纲式作文

模版1

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.

Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版2

People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.

For one thing, 论据1.

For another, 论据2.

Last but not the least, 论据3.

To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, 论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

插入语的使用
1.indeed的确 2.surely无疑3.however然而
4.obviously显然5.frankly坦率地说 6.luckily (或happily) for sb.算某人幸运 7.briefly简单地说
8.needless to say不用说,
9.most important of all最为重要是
10.worse still更糟糕的是
11.in other words换句话说
12.in a sense在某种意义上
13.in fact事实上
14.of course当然
15.as a matter offact事实上
16.judging from…根据……判断
17.Ibelieve/hope/suppose我相信/希望/认为
18.what isimportant (serious)重要(严重)的是
19. to myknowledge据我所知
20.on the contrary相反
开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-daylife. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems aswell.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believethat … 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为…
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to theconclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusionthat … 考虑所有这些因素, 我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to findout new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However,others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为...
People may have different opinions on…
人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to…
关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on theimprovement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If wewant to do something… , it is essential that… 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead usin danger. 很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent thatimmediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinionrather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言, 我站在…的一边.
I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三,…
Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is… 为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是…或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling…
这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is…
解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.
人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that…
可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that… 认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
文章结尾句型
1、“因此,不难得出结论...”
Accordingly/Consequently/As a result,it is notdifficult to draw the conclusion that...
2、“综上所述,我们能得出如下结论...”
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonablyarrive at the conclusion that...
3、“这一难题,是任何人都不可能避免的。但只要处理得当,我们就会...”
The dilemma is something no one can avoid. Properlyhandled, however, we will...
4、“总之,全社会都应该密切关注...,只有这样我们才能...”
All in all, the whole society should pay closeattention to the problem of .... Only in this way can we....
5、“考虑到所有的因素,我们意识到...”
Taking into account all of these factors, we havereached the realization that...

5. 以“解决英语学习问题”英语作文带翻译

Nowadays, English has become the international standard language. As China is stepping to the internationalization, learning English is more and more important. But many people find it hard to learn English well. According to my own learning experience, I think determination, read English materials and patience are the most significant.
First of all, doing everything needs determination. Determination is a prerequisite to do something. When facing difficulty, the people who have determination will insist, on contrary, the people who don’t have determinatin are easily give up. Thus, if people wants to do something well, the first thing they need to do is to make up their mind. Secondly, reading English materials is a great help for learning English. It can help people raise sense for English language, have interest and confidence in Engilsh. That will help people a lot in the process of learning. Last, patience is necessary in English learning. Most people will feel difficult to learn English at the beginning. The people without patience will often upset towards learning English. As a result, it will increase the difficulties of learning English and vice versa.In general, determination, reading English materials and patience are the effective ways to learn English. If people recognize those, they will learn it well sooner or later.

如今,英语已经成为国际标准语言。由于中国正在迈向国际化,学习英语变得越来越重要。但是许多人发现很难学好英语。根据我自己的学习经验,我觉得决心,阅读英语材料和耐心是最重要的。首先,做所有的事情都需要决心。决心是做一件事的一个先决条件。面对困难时,有决心的人会坚持下去,相反,那些没有决心的人则很容易放弃。因此,如果有人想完成一件事情,他们要做的第一件事是下定决心。其次,阅读英语材料对学习英语有很大的帮助。它可以帮助人们提高英语语感,对英语有兴趣和信心。这将在学习的过程中对人们的帮助很大。最后,耐心在英语学习中是必须的。刚开始学习英语的时候大多数人都会觉得很难。没有耐心的人对学习英语会经常感到心烦。结果就是增加了学习英语的困难,反之亦然。总之,决心,阅读英语材料和耐心是学习英语的有效途径。

6. 论解决问题的重要性英语作文

  • ved that the one who is with beautiful outlook will have more
    chances to be successful,everyone wants to have perfect
    outlook.Recently,the topic of only the good looking one has youth
    becomes popular,people satire this phenomenon.Actually,no one will deny
    the importance of outlook,the one who denies it may be he is
    jealous.Though outlook is important,it can’t decide everything,our
    effort is also important.If the one who is just caring about his
    face,ignoring other factors,he does not pay attention to the inside,the
    beautiful face will not help him go further.On the contrary,the outlook
    is a gift from the god,but only we work hard to improve ourselves,can we
    make this gift more precious.We must learn that beautiful outlook
    provides us an easy way to be successful,but if we don’t improve
    ourselves,we will be kicked out any time.
    人们相信长得好看的人会更容易成功,每个人都想要拥有完美
    的外表.最近,关于“长得好看的人才有青春”的话题变得流行,人们讽刺这样的现象.实际上,没有人会否认外表的重要性,谁否认就说明谁可能妒忌.虽然外表
    很重要,但是那不能决定一切,我们的努力也同样重要.如果一个人仅仅关注他的外表,忽视了其他的因素,对于内在置之不理,那么美丽的容颜也不能帮助他走得
    更远.相反的,外貌是上帝的礼物,但是我们只有努力提升自我,才能让这份礼物有价值.我们必须要知道美丽的外表给我们提供了一条更容易通往成功的道路,但
    是如果我们不提升自己,随时

7. 英语六级作文写作技巧有那些

1、中心句放开端

文章中心句是整个文章的主题和写作围绕的中心,通常应该放在段落的开端,这样一方面能够让阅卷老师一眼看出文章表达的主旨意思,起到开门见山的作用;另一方面可以使文章条理层次更加清晰,逻辑性强,文章的整体结构合理。

中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用,放在段尾也可以起到总结全文的作用。这一方法对于写作初学者来说还是有一定困难的,因此在六级考试中,为了减少不必要的错误和损失,尽量将中心句放到文章的开头以保万无一失。

2、关键词要具体

文章的中心句一般是通过关键词来表现和限制文章的主旨思想的,所以为了突出主题,关键词需要尽量写得具体些。

这里对“具体”的要求主要体现在两个方面:一方面是要具体到能限制和区分文章段落层次的发展;另一方面是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。精确仔细地突出关键词是清楚地表达文章主旨、写好段落中心句的重要前提之一,这对考生来说有一定难度。

3、设问扩充内容

中心句及关键词确定后,文章的大概框架已经清晰了,这时候就需要选择和主题有关的信息和素材来填充这个框架。实质上,针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。

有一种常用的行文方法就是句子展开前加以设问,然后解答,即设问-解答(why-because)的方法,利用问题引出自己需要的话题再加以解答表现自己的观点,同时紧紧围绕主题。

(7)英语六级解决问题型英语作文扩展阅读:

一、解释现象型

解释现象型作文一般要求考生根据考试提纲引出某种现象,然后分析现象产生的原因,阐述其影响,并给出合理的建议。此类作文在历年真题中所占比例较大,是练习的重点之一。

二、解决问题型

解决问题型作文,要求考生根据考试题目中所反映或提到的问题,提出解决问题的方案或应对措施。此类作文重在考查学生解决问题的能力,因此写作时一定要具体详细地说明解决问题的方法。

三、说明利弊型

说明利弊型作文的标志十分明显,非常容易识别,其要求比较明确,即要求考生比较某事物或现象的利弊,并表明自己的观点。

四、对比选择型

在六级作文中,对比选择型的题目要求非常明确且富有针对性。这类作文一般以问题的形式或两者选一的形式出现,要求考生对两种观点或做法进行比较,然后表明自己的看法,并且给出理由。写这类作文最关键的一点就是在表明个人观点的同时,还要给出支撑观点的充分理由。

8. 急求英语作文一篇.(四六级水平)

英语作文 英语作文的基本要求:
首先,一个段落必须有一个中心即主题思想,该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic),这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次,一个段落必须有若干推展句,使主题思想得到充分展开,从而给读者一个完整的感觉,这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者,一个段落不是杂乱无章的,而是有机的组合,句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑,从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅(smooth),这就是连贯性(coherence)。下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性
一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主题句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences,一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,这一段是讲的是Joe and I ,中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出,native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多了,造成偏题或离题,那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性
正象我们前面说得那样,一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实,就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样,虽然有推展句,但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待,给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如:
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you proce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是“a mind in turmoil”(心境不平静)Physical work又如何能改变这种情况?为什么它能起therapy的作用?读者得不到明确的答案。因此,要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。例如:
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法,必须有具体事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释,整个段落内容空洞,简而不明。如果用一两个具体的例子的话,就可以把主题解释清楚了。比如下段:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、连贯性(coherence)
连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面,前者指的是内在的逻辑性,后者指的是使用转换词语。当然这两者常常是不可分割的。只有形连而没有意连,句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系;反之,只有意连而没有形连,有时行文就不够流畅。
1)、意连
段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序,不能想到什么就写什么。如果在下笔之前没有构思,边写边想,写写停停,那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段从“rose”(起床)写起,然后是吃早餐(“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”),然后是“close to noon”,一直写到这一天结束(“By nine——”)。
B. 按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如:
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的写法是由远及近,从远处(“from a distance”)写起,然后“get closer”,再到(“ten feet away”),最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然,按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要,也可以由近及远,由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
a. 按重要性顺序排列(arrangement in order of importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达能力,它的重要性与职业,身份有关,从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”,最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness,先给出一个general statement作为主题句,然后通过5个 ”perhaps”加以例证。
c. 由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主题句是段首句,它仅提出一个问题:为什么两只猫会被搞混。然后对两者进行比较,末句才下结论。
2)、形连
行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语:
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上启下的词语有两种,一种是转换词语(transitional words or phrases),另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有:first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是:he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有词汇105个,所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词,约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。由此可见,掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流(smoothness)有益,而且对于学生在半个小时内写120个词也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的”it”之外,没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样,文中出现许多重复的词语,全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话,这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落:
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
4、有损连贯性的几种情况:
考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误:
1、不必要的改变时态,比如:
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改变单复数,比如:
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改变人称,比如:
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此写作中,一定要注意时态,人称以及数的变化是否正确,要注意保持一致。
英语作文的书写格式
英文书写应符合书写规范,英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观,字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮,通篇匀称和谐。
写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。如字母i,应该先写下面的部分,然后再打点。有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写,写快了,就会把点和下面的十笔连在量起,显得十分别扭。字形t应为两笔。不少人却将两笔合成一笔,看上去不像t,倒像l或是e,难以辨认。另外,把r写成v,把q写成把g,把k写成h等等,都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。
不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩,能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写,但在白纸或横线纸上书写,却显得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下,或一律写成同一高度,占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。这些现象都要防止。
另外,书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离,不能紧靠在一起。字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯,不能随意乱来。
在一篇字数有限的作文里,我们还要注意尽量不把一个单词拆开移行。万一要移行,则必须以音节为单位进行,如revolution这个词,依照音节移行的原则可以按re-,revo-, revolu-这几种方法移行。在移行时,我们还应特别注意以下几点:
1. 单音节词不能移行,即使是字母较多的单音节词,如through等也不能例外。
2.缩略词如Mr.,Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆开移行。
缩略的专用名词如U.K.,U.S.A等也不能拆开移行。
3.时间、量度及货币单位应视为一个整体;不能分开移行。如;
11:00P.M.应写在一行内,不能将11:00和P.M.分开移行;写38℃时,不能将38和℃分开移行。
4.由“年、月、日”表示的日期,如果必须分开移行只能将“月、日”与“年”分开。如January 6,1980不能将January和6分开移行,但可以把January 6,和1980分成两行。
5.含双写辅音字母的单词,在移行时要将辅音字母拆开。如better可拆成better,necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果双写辅音字母属于词根,后面又加了后缀,就不能将两个辅音字母拆开。如drill加上-ing后构成了drilling,就不可以将它拆成成dril-ling,而只能拆为drilling。
例文:
1.宠物:
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.”
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物:
Elizabeth Bennet (伊丽莎白)
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she graally comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy’s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二个女儿和最聪明和机智,伊丽莎白是自豪感和偏见的主演和其中一个在英国文学的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的质量是numerous—she是可爱的,聪明,并且,在对话定义的小说,她一样精采地交谈象任何人。 她的诚实、美德和活泼的机智使她在胡话之上起来,并且弥漫她的坏行为类跳起和经常恶意的社会。 然而,她的伶俐的口舌和倾向经常做仓促评断带领她迷路; 自豪感和偏见本质上是故事她(和她真实的爱, Darcy)怎样克服他们自己的个人failings—to发现浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊丽莎白必须不仅应付一个绝望的母亲,一个遥远的父亲,二非常表现的更加年轻的兄弟姐妹,并且几位势利,对抗的女性,她必须也克服Darcy她自己的错误印象,最初带领她拒绝他的求婚。 而她驾驶家族和社会动乱,她魅力是充足保持他感兴趣,幸运地。 当她逐渐来认可Darcy’s字符的贵族,她体会她对他的最初的偏见错误。

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